Gun and Guitar-a RANTARA ff(3rd thread)(last chapter @pg66) - Page 16

Originally posted by: AnjaliRantara

Awesome update Ria 😃
Raghu got clue about Antara frm d kids
Antara in so much pain coz of her Mamaji
DM 😡
Hope Raghu finds Antu soon
Continue soon 😊

Originally posted by: rima4ever

splendid astonishing wonderful update

Originally posted by: honeybees22

OMG this was thrilling

urghh DM someone kick her

Poor antara

Kalavati urghhh DM part 2

He will find her no matter what

Pls cont asap nai to juta parega along with daanda

Originally posted by: honeybees22

This update was like a roller coaster for me

the kids, antu running, truck,mama ji, everything

hope Raghu finds her soon

pls cont asap

Originally posted by: Roy.nikki143

Unres at pg 18
Also res for the next update
2 in 1 😆

Beta mein tumse bohat naraz hoon ek to review ka reply nahi deyty or phir bolty hai unres jaldi maro thats not fair

Coming back to the update
It was mindbowling yar
Finally Raghu got some hint about Antara im so relieved 😃
Ab to dilwala apni dulhania leyne zaroor jayega 😆
But yeh hitler mama 😡 I wish woh tera sukoon wale jaisd hote 😃
Anyways brilliant update and it was not a crap one ok 🤢
Do continue soon ab Raja ko uski Rani se jaldi milwa deyna 😆
Kitna filmy reply hai 😆

Originally posted by: Tsuchi

this update made me feel good that atlast he got some clue regarding antara...so many days passed away still he was clueless about antara..that where she is?..how she is?...😔bt still he had faith that she is still alive...that anklet scene is very touching...antara ko to mamaji ne hi kaid krke rakh liya🤢..atleast she is safe...DM's new strategy she will again grow obstructions in his path😡...this lady is such a big ...@#$@#$+-*/@#+-$#*-+..😡...now raghu will be on way to Ahemdabad...hmm..interesting!update soon😊

Originally posted by: pampz

first of all Ria tere kaan ke niche na mein zorose bajaungi agar tune firse tere updates ko crap kaha toh ...😡😡😡

Yaar ab tu bhi mujhe raghu style mein dhamki deene laga...hmmm abhi mujhe darna cchahiye yaa drool karna chahiye.. i am confused😆.. yaar tu mere kaan ke niche baja yaa ankh ke niche.. u know i am adat se majboor.. kuch bhi ho jaye... crap bolne ki bimari hum writer logo ke sar se nahin jane wala...🤣

second of all am enjoying this track wih my evry bit of passion and restlessness ...ohh its wonderful seeing this seperation ...(don take it otherwise) mee to dukhi for Rantara but the story is so gripping and thrilling i just cant breath for once until i finish reading the update fully ...

oye pampu kabhi kabhi sans liya kar samjhi... breatjing problem ho jayega... BTW, i know yaar this track is dukhbhara but this dukhbhara track also had diff kind of intensity... naa?😊

wonderful Ria wonderful ...the most Captivating Story of this Forum👏

captivating story?😲.. no way pampu... tere rehete main yee title kabhi nahin le sakti... ye naa insaafi hain...😆... the most captivating story of ddej forum is vampu-pampu's JAAN.. and every 1 knew that..😎

u hv just made me a MAD VAMPU for ur story ...

yaar story parke koi vampu ban gaya yee paheli baar sun rahi hoon..😆.. akhir mere bekar story mein hain kya?... jo tuml vampu ban gaye...🤣

again the ball is now in DM's court ...kamini ko Raghu ka number pata chal gaya ...jane aage kya hoga aabh...

agey kya hogaa woo jan ne ke liye update parna parega...😆

and the bbestpart is Raghu ne andaza laga liya ki uski Antara kahan hai n mama ke hathon bandi hai ...oye hoye Ria ...am fascinated how u penned down the total emotional stuffs so excruciatingly ...lovely lovely ...

hayla yaar... itni tareef mat kar... emotion ko execute karna maine tujhise sikha hain yaar.,... u are my guru ji... prnam guru ji...🤣

waiting for the next part being a Mad Crazy Vampu ...jaldi update kar warna ...pata hai na apun kya kya kar sakti hai ????😉

nahin mele ko to naii pata ki pampu kya kal sakti hain.. tu hi bata de..😆

Originally posted by: RaNtara4vr

part 57:

Phewww...wat an update...👍🏼👏

Raghu so much tensed...😔

yup.. he had to be... uski jaan jo uske pass nahin hain...

Antu escapd wid d kids help...👍🏼

wohow...Antu reachd to saroj in ahmedabad...

kehete hain naa.. ache logo ke sath bhagwan raheta hain... woo koi na koi rasta zaroor khol deta hain...😊

arey yeh kya maamaji toh gusse mein hai...😲...he slappd Antu...😲😔...

can undrstnd maamaji's reaction but she's already goin thru so much...😔😭😔...

for maama ❤️Raghu❤️ is just a gunda...😭...

Haan yaar that's the tragedy of life... even if our raghu is a goon with golden heart... still he is a goon to the society,..😭... no one understand him rather than his jaan antara😳.. but this world is all set to snatch away his only ray of hope.. his misscall...

Antu defendin Raghu n deir relationship...👍🏼...She wont tolerate anything against her Raghu...😊...She'll alwaz support n b der for him no matter wat...😃😳...(n vice-versa from Raghu's side too...😳😊...)...

offcourse... they r do dil ek jaan naa...😳.. they will never tolerate anything against each other..😃

Maamaji lockin up Antara...😲...he thinkin Geetaji forcefully agreed......

Mama ji ka dimag kharap ho gaya...

waitin for Raghu to come soon...😊...n also for d whole family to whole-heartedly accept dem...😃...

update n banner awesome as alwayz...👍🏼❤️🤗...

my eyes got moist n i was about to cry...but controlld...coz Raghu will reach to Antara...😊...n thinkin dat thru dese kids Raghu wil get clue of Antu...(baaki toh writer saahiba ki marzi...)...😃😆...

lets see what happens...but rantara ko too milna hi hain... woo aaj ho ya kaal... just be oatience and keep faith on their love...😉

Part 58:

Ok...hide n seek goin on...😛😆😉...

yup😆

Raghu hidin around Ahmedabad area...😉...

though Antu is locked by maamaji...but atleast she's safe...

haan...Raghu ke bina Antara kaise thik ho sakti hai...????...

Both are yearning for one another...😔...😔...

true yaar... dono ek dusre ke bina ek min bhi nahin rahe sakte to thik kaise hongey😭

oye-hoye guddu gave d good news...😆...

Raghu ka tez dimag chalne laga...nahi daudne laga...aur...

Raghu ka dimag humesha tez hi daurta hain...dekha nahin kaise samajhgaya tha jalddi jaldi ki antu ke kidnaapping ke piche DM ka hath hain😆

Oh no...😲.. guddu pakda gaya.....aur daayan ke haath laga Raghu ka numbr......jo ab police ke haath lagegi...(*bangin head*)...(Guddu vry bad, not good at all...👎🏼...u had to b alert guddu...😒...)...(...lagta hai mujhe guddu naam kuch zyada hi pasand aa gaya...😆...)...

ohhh lol... too batayieen... main guddu se aap ki shadi karwa deti hoon story mein..😆

yay......Raghu pahunch gaya ahmedabad ki taraf...👍🏼..aur maama-maami ka connection bhi jhod liya......hamara ❤️Raghu❤️ toh superrr-se-bhi-uparrr intelligent hai...😎......😳...

Apna raghu super intelligent hero...😉

...Waitin for more...👍🏼...

update n banner awesome as alwayz...👍🏼❤️🤗...