Gun and Guitar-a RANTARA ff(3rd thread)(last chapter @pg66)

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.Suchi.

@.Suchi.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#121

hash!!!..atlast antu is in safe hands now..😛

wo kali kalavati se bachkr nikal to gayi...🤢

and the way mamaji was reacting is obvious..koi nhi chahega ki apni ghar ki beti ki shaadi kisi gunde se ho...Raghu is innocent and alag type ka gunda bt gunda to hai na.😊...its genuine case...n I didn't feel that mamaji is that much wrong.🤔..haan ye baat zaroor hai ki jab unhe reality mein sab pta chalega..tab unhe koi objection nhi hoga.👍🏼.he loves antara that's y he is so much concerned.😊...bt antara's determination is so strong...she is true lover!!..😳..and Raghu too..

hope rantara meet soon...shayad mamiji kuch help kar dein..😃

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Purple

@PurpleSunset

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Posted: 11 years ago

#122

*Sniff...

*sniff...

Ohh...Ria..yeh kya kar diya...😭...my heart is aching like anything.Its so heart wrenching to see Raghu seperated from Antara...omg! I can't bear it.😭😭

It was so painful to see Raghu in such a turmoil but at the end Antara became his strength rather than weakness.😊 Ria ...hats of to you...it was beautifully penned down...loved the flow of emotions coursing through him.

it was breathtakingly beautiful...loved it baby!...loved it so much that I can't express..Just listen to my heartbeats and you'll come to know, what I'm feeling today!

I'm a big fan of yours now...hats off to you baby...you definitely nailed it.

The major twist came when kids helped Antara from the clutches of that dangerous bi*** 😡

it was such a relieving moment..when mama and mamiji found Antara...just WOW!

felt bad when mamaji slapped Antara.😕

brilliantly written...👏

so, destiny is playing a major part in their lives...just waiting for their Re-union through DESTINY!

I'm so proud you today sweetheart...just keep going like this

waiting for the next part whole-heartedly dear

love ya...

hugs...mwah baby 🤗

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abhiyaswaron

@abhiyaswaron

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#123

Ria,

this update ached my heart !!

It was a ... ...

I don't how to describe it.

Speechless

I just want to request you to make Rantara meet again.

Painful to see both of them in this state..

That Mamaji 😡! Slapped Antara, and locked her !!😡

Those kids rock for helping Antu !!😊

Update soon !

-Prerna

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Liana

@liana2304

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#124

Aww .

Very nice update .

Loved it .

Thank you .

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pampz

@pampz

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#125

ohhh thank God uss kalavati se chut gayi hamari Antu ...thank God ...

i was thinking Antu kahin bhi bhag jaye par us kalavati se dur chali jaye ...

thank God it happened but OH my God Bappa ne sidha safe hand mein antara ko pocha diya ...mana ki mamane dikhayi sakti towards Antu par Raghu hai na ...sab sambhal lega ...

wonderfully written ria ... tension ke mare saans rok ke padh rahithi pura update ... i loved how raghu missed her like hell seeing her anklet...that was so touching ...

loved how ur story has a wonderful pace ...

enjoyed it thoroughly ...cherished every bit

cont soon as u know Vampu cant wait for GNG 😃

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BabyHimavari

@BabyHimavari

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Posted: 11 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: niki28
Amazing update Ria👏👏👏
Thank god antu is safe now n she escaped wid d help of d kids
Bechara Raghu..😭😭
N mamaji..😡😡😡
Continue soon dear
Thanx 4 d pm

thanks niki😳

i know yaar... kids are the best😆

yup poor raghu...😭

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BabyHimavari

@BabyHimavari

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Posted: 11 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: AnjaliRantara
Fantastic update Ria 👏👏👏
Antu escaped frm Kalavati with the help of kids
Raghu in so much pain 😭
Antu is safe now, but Mamaji 😡 he slapped her, hw rude
Hope Saroj help her n inform Raghu about Antu
Waiting eagerly fr next update
Continue soon
Love u❤️

thanks anji...

yes i know... it's so sad to see them apart... but i will try my best to complete this sad track soon..

and love yaa

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BabyHimavari

@BabyHimavari

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Posted: 11 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: Afy10
Amazing update 👏
raghu 😭 so sad
yay antu escaped thnx to her smartnes nd those kids 😛
She reachd at her mama mami's place
but her mamaji 😕 said bad things abt raghu
antu too got angry nd was about to leave 😡
but thn he locked her
but koi baat nhi raghu ayega antu ko le jane 😉
i hope rantara meet soon
continue soon
thnx for pm 😊

thx afy...

yup... sorry for making you cry...i will try to finish this sad track soon..

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Nikkisha Roy

@Roy.nikki143

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#129

Res 😆
Dekh ab res bhi kar liya 😉
Yar Thank God key Antara kaise bhi kar key kalavati se bach gaye 😉
So sweet of those kids chutki and raju 😃
Raghu kito halaat tight ho rehe hai Antara nahi mil rehe jo usko
Antara finally mama mamikey pas pooch gaye 😊
But yeh mama ko kya hogaya ab yeh kyun hitler ban rehe hai 😡
Pata nahi ab aage kya hone wala hai
Riyu please Rantara ko jaldi milwa deyna please 😭

Akhir mein doon sawal 😆
1. Kalavati naam tere dimag mein kaise aeye ek dum gunde type naam 😆
2. Antara ahmedabad poochi hai ya mumbai bus iss mein confusion hai baqi to sab set

Edited by Roy.nikki143 - 11 years ago

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BabyHimavari

@BabyHimavari

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Posted: 11 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: ankusanu
what a relief!!! Thank God antara is safe 😛...
thoughmamaji is overreacting 😡 ...n he slapped
antu 🤢 oh God!!..
happy dat antara escaped easily... n nw waiting
to see hw raghu vl figure out where is antara 😔
ps kahani m naya villian ...mamaji 😆
grt work ria .. nixe goibg..
uodate soonn... much love ❤️

thanks priyu...

yes mama ji- the new villain of the story...😆

thx for the reply😳