Originally posted by: Niyaz_Lover
Thrilling Update...
Chah Giy...Every bit of this update had it's own emotion..your such an amazing writer..<3
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10 years of Phantom
Originally posted by: Niyaz_Lover
Thrilling Update...
Chah Giy...Every bit of this update had it's own emotion..your such an amazing writer..<3
hash!!!..atlast antu is in safe hands now..😛
wo kali kalavati se bachkr nikal to gayi...🤢and the way mamaji was reacting is obvious..koi nhi chahega ki apni ghar ki beti ki shaadi kisi gunde se ho...Raghu is innocent and alag type ka gunda bt gunda to hai na.😊...its genuine case...n I didn't feel that mamaji is that much wrong.🤔..haan ye baat zaroor hai ki jab unhe reality mein sab pta chalega..tab unhe koi objection nhi hoga.👍🏼.he loves antara that's y he is so much concerned.😊...bt antara's determination is so strong...she is true lover!!..😳..and Raghu too..hope rantara meet soon...shayad mamiji kuch help kar dein..😃
Originally posted by: abhiyaswaron
Ria,
this update ached my heart !!It was a ... ...I don't how to describe it.SpeechlessI just want to request you to make Rantara meet again.
Painful to see both of them in this state..That Mamaji 😡! Slapped Antara, and locked her !!😡Those kids rock for helping Antu !!😊Update soon !-Prerna
Originally posted by: PurpleSunset
*Sniff...*sniff...*sniff...i know purple... likhte time mera bhi same halat ho gayi thi...😭Ohh...Ria..yeh kya kar diya...😭...my heart is aching like anything.Its so heart wrenching to see Raghu seperated from Antara...omg! I can't bear it.😭😭even me 2 can't bear that. i don't know that how i managed to write that part...🤢It was so painful to see Raghu in such a turmoil but at the end Antara became his strength rather than weakness.😊 Ria ...hats of to you...it was beautifully penned down...loved the flow of emotions coursing through him.aww thanks yaar😳it was breathtakingly beautiful...loved it baby!...loved it so much that I can't express..Just listen to my heartbeats and you'll come to know, what I'm feeling today!okk okkk enough... i understand...😃aww u are making me blush😳I'm a big fan of yours now...hats off to you baby...you definitely nailed it.The major twist came when kids helped Antara from the clutches of that dangerous bi*** 😡yup i know... no one will think that way and it was really a surprise element😆it was such a relieving moment..when mama and mamiji found Antara...just WOW!yes that's true😊felt bad when mamaji slapped Antara.😕i know...brilliantly written...👏so, destiny is playing a major part in their lives...just waiting for their Re-union through DESTINY!YES... THAT'S THE THING... DESTINY;S GAME... FROM THE VERY FIRST TIME... WHEN THEY NET FIRST AND GET CLOSE TO EACH OTHER...THEN SEPERATION... AGAIN MEETING IN MUMBAI... AND THEN FALLING IN LOVE EVERYTHING WAS THE GAME OF THE SILENT PLAYER OF DESTINY... NOW LETS SEE WHAT HAPPENES NEXT...😉I'm so proud you today sweetheart...just keep going like thisawww seriously i am felling a bit ashamed now... it's not at all that much praise worthy😳waiting for the next part whole-heartedly dearlove ya...hugs...mwah baby 🤗
ohhh thank God uss kalavati se chut gayi hamari Antu ...thank God ...
i was thinking Antu kahin bhi bhag jaye par us kalavati se dur chali jaye ...thank God it happened but OH my God Bappa ne sidha safe hand mein antara ko pocha diya ...mana ki mamane dikhayi sakti towards Antu par Raghu hai na ...sab sambhal lega ...wonderfully written ria ... tension ke mare saans rok ke padh rahithi pura update ... i loved how raghu missed her like hell seeing her anklet...that was so touching ...loved how ur story has a wonderful pace ...enjoyed it thoroughly ...cherished every bitcont soon as u know Vampu cant wait for GNG 😃
Chapter 58
For some weeks, there was a disaster in the Mumbai city and surrounding area and as usual the ingle man was the reason, raghunath naik the most notorious gangster. Each and every roadside wall, lanes were filled with his posture and he was announced as most wanted all over. Govt. had proposed a numerous money to the person whoever would give single information about Raghunath Naik. Not just police, Daya mai had send her men in the area of village to search for raghu. but alas!! No one among them was successful to even catch a single strand of his hair. Neither him nor anyone from his men were found. Sometimes police and daya naik's men got random news about raghu and they rushed to the seclude spot but they didn't get anyone!! Seemed like they were vanished in thin air!
Raghu and his men were hiding at different places in the village nearby, sometimes in jungle or sometimes in ahmedabad abandoned places. Also they were also trying to get information about antara. At least one week had been passed but no one could get a single info regarding to her. Raghu was getting more and more frustrated each and every day. Just where the hell that witch hid her?!! Where was she?!! How was she?!! Did she... NOO!!! Those thoughts killed her badly. She was alive and he could feel that. but she was not well... and he knew that. he could feel that she was calling him. She needed him. He was getting mad for not able to reach him. He was breaking inside day by day but hahmedabading himself only for her, his life antara!.. he couldn't break down. She was waiting for him!! he had to reach to her.
The search party of polices had created a big issue. They couldn't move freely everywhere. Not only raghu but even his men and khabari's had also became wanted. Daya mai's men were also searching for them. that's why they were getting difficulties to search and get information about antara, otherwise they would surely get information about her till then.
Sleep had literally left raghu's eyes. Each and every night he just stay awake in anticipation, in worry for Antara. He hahmedabad his anklets on his hands and sometimes looked towards the starry sky. The sound of anklet reminds him about her tender feet, just felt like feather under his rough hahmedabad.
"Tu fikar mat kar misscall! Apun tere ko dhoond lega.. Uss dayan ne tujhe jahan bhi chupaya hain naa, apun wohi pauch jayega... Bas thira sa wait kar le antara!! apun aa re la hain..." he said in painfull yet hopeful voice.
"Tu apna khayal rakh rahi hain naa misscall?!! Dekh agar tune apna khayal nahin rakha naa... tab apun zoro ka dante gaa tujhe?!! samjhi?!! Tujhe apna khayal rakhna higa misscall... apun ke liye... tuu kaise bhool jati hain ki apun ko takleef hoti hain jab tu takleef mein hota hain..."
With this usual rants looking towards those anklets in his hands, he was spending each and every night from the very day they snatched his life from him, from the day antara was not there with him.
In Ahmedabad,
Antara opened her swollen eyes full with tears and looked towards the window. It's almost one and half week and she was literally imprisoned there, by her own mama ji!!
She still couldn't believe that her mama was being so cruel with her. Just because she was married to raghu and gave away her everything to him!! Why?!! She didn't do anything wrong. Then why she had to face such cruelity?!! For those days she was just begging mama ji to let her go and meet raghu. But it seemed like mama ji had became stone.
"Mama Ji...Please ekbaar raghu se baat kar lene dijiye na... please ekbaar... Yaa fir mujhe jane do...agar mere raghu ke sath rahene mein aap ko itni takleef hoti hain too bhool jaiyen ki aap ki antara naam ki koi bahnji thi... bhool jaiyen.. par mujhe jane dijiye..." She cried almost every day.
"tum iss ghar se niklogi too mera mara mooh dekh ke nikalna parega antara... kyun ki jab puri duniya mujhpe ungli utha ke kahegi ki meri bhanji ek gunde ke saath bhag gayi... wohi gunda jis see main itna nafrat karta hoon..." mama ji said in stern voice.
"mama ji!!! Ye kya kahe rahe hoo aap?!!" antara said in stumbled voice.
"sahi suna tumne antara... agar tum iss ghar se niklo gi too mujhe maar kar hi nikal naa..." govind just uttered the single sentence and which was enough to break antara. How could she do that?!! Though he was becoming ruthless to her but still he was her own mama ji. How could she think of his dead?
He was not even letting mummy to meet her. He really knew that saroj had soft corners for antara and she might help her to escape. so she never let saroj go to her room.
Antara didn't even take her foods properly for some days, she was feeling so weak. Every light of hope was faded away from her eyes. she didn't know that if she could ever met raghu. If she couldn't meet him again, then why should she live?!
Noo!! She had to live... not for her, but for him. she believed in him!! she knew that he would reach to her someday surely! She promised her that. She was not that weak, her love was not that weak!! She would wait for him... till her last breath.
Antara closed her gloomy eyes as the lone tears escaped from her eyes. His face flashed in her mind. His presence, his deep voice, his intense eyes, his huge innocent grin whenever she looked at him smiling, his strong, possessive yet love filled caresses, his sturdy lips touches on her mortal form and on her lips, his warm breath, everything was still attached to him, so alive and clear. As if she could touch him, feel him
just in her hands. A small yet painful smile crept on her face. she was just living on those beautiful memories on those days. But how long she would survive on that?
"Raghu!!! mujhe pata hain kit um aao gee... bas jaldi aa jaao raghu... baahut dard ho raha hain... tumhe bhi ho raha hain naa??!" she said softly. Tired and exhausted with her weakness and turmoil she continued to look towards the ceiling with empty eyes.
"Antara!!..." raghu snapped his eyes and jumped on the bed. He looked here and there in search of her. But she was nowhere to be seen in the abandoned ruined rooftop. He again scanned all over with his eyes but antara was really not there. But it seemed like he listened to her voice. That's also too clearly!! Antara was calling his name, so painfully that he ever imagined.
Raghu banged on the cot looking at the sky. They left their prev hideout spot at jungle and living at that abandoned ruined house for some days.
He closed his eyes. All the moment he passed with her flooded in his mind like it was never going to stop. He opened his shattered eyes. it was getting unbearable each and every day.
"bappa yee tune thik naii kiya..." he said in firm voice looking towards the sky.
"joo katna tha mere koo karna tha.,.. ussey kyun takleef di... mere kali zindagi ka saya uspe kyun parne diya?!! Apun ne humesha koshis ki misscall ko inn sab se door rakhne ke liye... uski kya galti hain?!! joo bhi galti ki apun nee ki... apun ki galti ki saza antara ko kyun mil raha hain?!!" he asked in frustration.
"agar tune hum dono ko alag kiya hain naa too tujhe hi mere ko uska pata bata naa parega... samjha tu?!! Nahin too apun samjhega ki sab jhoot kahete hain ... tu hain hi nahin..." his voice roamed in the air. He closed his eyes in frustration again. Machmach didn't come with any news. he was thinking to go outside and check on for a while when suddenly his phone rang.
Raghu quickly hahmedabad the mobile. His eyes got alerted when he saw guddu's name on screen. He got a new sim for him so that police couldn't trace his phone.
"haan guddu bol.. kuch khabar hain?" raghu asked.
"bhai... khabar too faddu hain... bas socch re la hain ki aap ko batayein kaise?!" guddu;s worried voice floated from other side.
"abey bata jaldi se kya hain?! idhar aise hi apun ka bheja sanka huya hain, abjyada raita mat faila !" Raghu said in irritation.
"Bhai, bhabi ke barein mein khabar mil gaya..." Guddu said with a gulp.
For a moment raghu just stood there frozen, hahmedabading the phone near his ear.
"KKK...KYA?!!! KYA KAHAN TUNE?!!!" his loud voice speak out with utter shock of joy and relief and also worried about thinking antara's condition.
"Haan bhai... aap ka doubt ekdum correct tha!!... uss daya mai ne hi uthaya tha antara ko... pata hain usne kya kiya bhabi ke sath... woo kalavati yaad hain aap ko?!! Ussi ko bech diya tha 2 lakh rupoyon ke badle..." guddu said.
Foir another moment raghu became frozen. Then he burst out! The anger flared his eyes into dangerous burning fire which was enough to destroy the whole world. His hand feasted in tight grip.
"S**I... KYA KAHAN TUNE??... USSS DAYA NAIK NEE... APUN KI ANTARA KO BECH DIYA.. AUR WOO BHI UNN DHANDEWlI O KE HATHON?" Raghu's voice was enough to shook everyone at that moment and gudde clearly understood that.
"haan bhai ekdum sahi... par khusi ki baat ye hain ki bhabi uss kalavati ke hathon se uran choo hoo gayi..." guddu informed.
"KYA?!!!" another shock he got.
"haan... kalavati aaj apna paisa wapas le ne aayi thi... ussi ne kahan... woo log bhabi ko le ke jaa rahe thepurane expressway se... lekin jab woo log kissi dhabe ke pass ruki thi tab bhabi jii unke ankhon mein dhool jhok ke bhag gayi..." guddu said.
Raghu huffed as antara was at least save from that nasty woman. But where was she?!! Ahmedabad express way and it's surrounding area was too lonely and there were only few villages. She must be there in one of those villages. Then why didnlt she tried to contact him. Might be she couldn't cause he changed the mobile sim. Damn it!!
"hmm.. purana expressway.. thik hain/..." raghu said and cut the phone.
On the other way gudde also cut the phone and looked behind. His face became pale all of a sudden when he faced jagga's nasty grin and DM's cold emotionless eyes.
"Mai, apun ne kahan tha naa yee guddu ka bartaw kuch alag hain aaj kaal..." jagga said to mai.
Dm just snatched away the phone from guddu's hand and checked the caller list.
"too yee hain raghunath kaa naya no... jaldi se issey police ko bhej de..." DM ordered to jagga with a victory smirk, "ab hum nahin... woo police unka ghanta bajayega... ek teer se doo sikhar.. police ka andesha bhi door ho jayega mere upar se.. aur raghunath bhi salakhon ke piche..." her eyes gleamed with darkness.
"Jee mai!!... par iss guddu ka kya karein?!" jagga asked.
"woo tu mujhpe chor de..." DM said giving her cold look to guddu.
Near the dhaba of ahmedabad expressway,
"Arey bhaiya... yee too wohi didi thi... Hain naa chuttki?!!" raju looked towards chutki's face when he saw the image of antara in raghu;s mobile.
"Haan bhaiya ye too wohin didi thi... antara didi.." chutki said with wode eyes.
Raghu;s eyes became hopeful with slight glint. At last!!! At last he got some clue regarding to antara.
He drove away in ahmedabad expressway just after guddu's news. After so long from his hideout place, he found the first dhaba on the road. He found those boy and girl playing near the dhabba and he asked them about antara. They both were shocked as they saw antara's photo.
"tujhe pata hain naa thik se... tune dekha hain issey?!!" raghu asked in frustration.
"haan bhaiya..." raju said, "humne hi too madad kit hi unke bhagne mein..: raju narrated the whole story to him.
"truck?!! Woo truck mein baithi thi?!! Kis taraf gayi wwoo truck?!!" raghu asked in frustration.
Chutki and Raju indicated towards the front. Raghu knew that the road directly ends in ahmedabad. And if that was a truck, it must had been gone there. just like the flash another thing came in his mind.
Antara's mama mummy were living in ahmedabad...
His hand feasted again. If antara was in ahmedabad, she would somehow reach to her mama mummy. As far raghu knew that govind uncle, he would never let her allow to contact with him after knowing everything.
"Unccle... agar tumhari wajah se antara koo kuch takleef huyi naa too apun bhool jayega ki tu uski mama hain!!" rraghu said with determined voice. he drive back to his hiding place to set his journey for ahmedabad.
ps: sorry guyss,, i know i was giving such craapy depressing update for now days... trust me even i was feeling low after penning down all these things... trying to short out everything soon... bare this for now on... i am really trying hard to short out everything oon.