RANTARA FF - Difficulties Faced in love ch-1 part-12 pg 12 - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
hey wonderful update shivi..👏
haash!!!..raghu ki jaan mein jaan aayi😆..ki antu ji apni maa se baat kr rhi hai.😎..just incase..agr sach mein antu ka bf hota...to kya sachmuch raghu usse pit jata.😲😆.jo usne aisa socha..😆aww that chocolate scene was so nice😳..actually raghu is right..uske saath kuch ulta ho rha hai...hehehe.😆.aur lo antu ne bhi kya pocha ki gf hai ki nhi..😉poor raghu ..bt he answered in different way..😊n i like it.
loved ur update dear...n u r no more late😆
tfpm

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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
lovely update shivika..
poor raghu ws scared if antu is hving bf 😆
N He needs to go to pee too 🤣...
loved d update dear...update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63

this was amazing shivika i loved it soo much

pls cont asap
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
Thanks a ton everyone 4 appreciating my work , it means a lot 2 me will try 2 update next part in weekends 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
Beautiful update Shivika😃
Continue soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
Lovely update 😊
Raghu was worried if antu hve a bf
lol raghu said what bf 😆 😆
Raghu forgot everythng 😆 evn to go to washroom 🤣
continue soon 😊 thnx for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
Yup...first sorry fo i reply now ..but relly yore all update was so lovely
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
Hey hello Everyone , i'm back wid an another part of my FF , sorry was unable 2 update earlier, actually I had 2 go out of station 4 some urgent work 😊 ok so let's not waste time and get started 😉
Wish u all a Happy and enjoyable reading 😛
Chapter - 1 Love Express (Varanasi To Delhi )
Part - 9
Raghu felt happier after he told Antara dat he was very much single and available. now was d chance 2 ask about her . she had already asked him so he cud easily ask her, but he chickened out again . His heart was ready but mouth was not ready 2 utter d words asking her if she was single . He looked around and most of d people slid down 2 lie on their seats 4 d night. Night was falling but he just wanted 2 sit like dat facing her. the eccentricity of d night was easily felt by his heart and soul. All corners of his heart were occupied by thoughts about Antara. He looked at her and cud not stop himself from thinking if dis serendipitous journey, by any chance, cud be meaningful. Antara realized it was time 4 dinner and she forced Raghu 2 join them. he refused, though it was a good offer as he wasn't carrying his dinner. But her mom, wen he wud be wid her , I get conscious of d fact dart he liked her daughter and dat wud make him nervous. she asked him if he wud sleep late. Raghu told her he wasn't at all sleepy, not even a bit sleepy . though he wanted 2 say he wud not sleep 4 d whole night, rather see her and be wid her. now she wud come after dinner. Raghu realized he was starving wen she was not around. he caught hold of a pantry guy and asked him like a hero 2 bring a plate of food 4 him. he snapped him saying it was pretty late 2 place an order. Suddenly dat hero felt like a beggar, as it was d time 2 beg. Raghu told him he was going 2 die in case he didn't get anything 2 eat; he made his face like a roasted brinjal. thankfully d man was convinced and he had his food 4 d night. he even ate like a beggar in d end. After dinner , he waited 4 Antara wid mixed feelings of desperation and curiosity. An hour passed and then d second, he sat in darkness, almost all d light were off by now. Raghu cudn't control himself frm going 2 see her at her seat. as soon as he reached there, he became little nervous and then his eyes fall on her mother who slpet on d lower berth. Raghu had looked out 4 d daughters and d sight of d mother was fearful. she was asleep but d fear in Raghu made her face appear quite sinister. he took his eyes off her, raised his head and now d sight was beautiful. Antara had been sleeping on d top berth, thankfully in a position dat allowed Raghu 2 see her face quite easily. in all darkness , a beam of light reached her face and made it look like an angel's. Her hair was scattered all over her fair face, even her lips were not free room. Raghu wanted 2 clear her face off wid his fingers. he cud hve happily accepted any punishment by any court if it was a crime. his eyes went back 2 Antara's mother on noticing her move slightly, and wen her movement stopped her concentrated on Antara again. wat happen next was horrifying. her mother was slowly getting herself in a sitting position , and he noticed it quite late too. for a second he thought he had landed himself into a big trouble. but he sighed wen he learnt dat she had still not seen him which was surely a matter of luck. her eyes were on d brink of opening and he vanished like a fart in d wind. Raghu walked hastily and stopped near d toilet area near two policemen who were on their routine checks. They looked at him wid sharp eyes, suspecting him of being a thief, and using his eyes Raghu made a desperate attempt 2 convince them dat he wasn't . Shockingly , their eyes hardened on Raghu and now his heart became a warehouse of fear. Raghu wud not hide his feeling, he find policemen quite scary.
Phew !! Done 😃
Ok Guys, this part ends here hope u had gr8 fun reading it , waiting 4 ur reviews eagerly 😛
They encourage and support me 2 write more , Thanks 😃
Tata , Phir Milenge !! 😊😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
👏 👏 👏...
I JST LOVED DIS UPDATE ALOT...
RAGHUS DESPERATION TO SEE HIS ANTARA 😳...
AWWW...SO CUTE...
N DAT DINNER PART 🤣 🤣
BHOOK LAGI H ...PAR DRAME BH KRNE H..
GRT WORK SHIVI...
UPDATE SOOON
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
wow amaziing
i just loved it too much
pls cont asap

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