RANTARA FF - Difficulties Faced in love ch-1 part-12 pg 12 - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
oye hoye!!..kamaal ki update shivi..👏
raghu ke dil aur dimag mein to ab antara..bas chuki hai..❤️."tere chere se nazar nhi hatti..nazare hum kya dekhen.."...bechara bhook se bechain ho rha tha🤣..i enjoyed that part.😆...aww last scene was so special fr him...😳she was sleeping n he was admiring her beauty...😳but beech mein would be MIL ne disturb kr diya..😆aur ye kya Police uncle aagaye...fir kya?..😲
waiting fr next part eagerly!..😃
thanks fr updating
😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was so lovely ...i am loving this train journey a lot ...its so beautiful ...and raghu's bechaini for Antara ...looking at her face hiding her mom ...that was tooo good ...i anjoyed it thoroughly...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: honeybees22

wow amaziing

i just loved it too much
pls cont asap

Thanks a lot 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tsuchi

oye hoye!!..kamaal ki update shivi..👏
raghu ke dil aur dimag mein to ab antara..bas chuki hai..❤️."tere chere se nazar nhi hatti..nazare hum kya dekhen.."...bechara bhook se bechain ho rha tha🤣..i enjoyed that part.😆...aww last scene was so special fr him...😳she was sleeping n he was admiring her beauty...😳but beech mein would be MIL ne disturb kr diya..😆aur ye kya Police uncle aagaye...fir kya?..😲
waiting fr next part eagerly!..😃
thanks fr updating
😛

Thank u very very much Tongue
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: pampz

it was so lovely ...i am loving this train journey a lot ...its so beautiful ...and raghu's bechaini for Antara ...looking at her face hiding her mom ...that was tooo good ...i anjoyed it thoroughly...

Awww , thanks a lot 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: ankusanu

👏 👏 👏...
I JST LOVED DIS UPDATE ALOT...
RAGHUS DESPERATION TO SEE HIS ANTARA 😳...
AWWW...SO CUTE...
N DAT DINNER PART 🤣 🤣
BHOOK LAGI H ...PAR DRAME BH KRNE H..
GRT WORK SHIVI...
UPDATE SOOON

Thanks a ton yaar 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello everyone , i'm here wid next part of my FF , hope u guys like it 😊here I get started -
Wish u a enjoyable reading 😃
Chapter - 1 Love Express (Varanasi To Delhi)
Part - 10
Raghu found policemen quite scary . thanks 2 our Indian cinema dat projects policemen as monsters. while they continued 2 look at him, he entered d toilet and breathed as if I hve just saved my life. after spending 5 min inside he finally came out and policemen were not there. he felt like taking some fresh air so he landed on d coach entrance. Now, he cud see d sky and it was amazingly decorated wid stars . d air smelled fresh and its force was highly enjoyable. Raghu closed his eyes while d strong wind embraced him. that white face partly covered wid a few long strands of hair still shone beautifully in his closed eyes. he was loosing his inner peace ; Antara had ruined it all in a few hours. the night got lovelier every time his eyes imagined her face. Raghu's mind was soaked in thought of Antara, thinking of time dat he had spent wid her, thinking wat life cud be wid a girl like her. Antara had been asleep which meant , he was not going to get any more time wid her. minutes passed in a unique feeling, and he felt like seeing her face again. but he knew d risk involved. Raghu reached his seat wid d feeling of a little cold, he lay down wid a blanket covering him. it was so late in night; still, he was far being knocked out by sleep. the thought of Antara was disturbing him. Raghu was getting deeper into her thoughts. An hour passed, unconsciousness caused by a little sleep cud not keep Antara away frm his heart and head. it was like he had been on a ride of love which was flipping him out badly. it continued 4 another 1 hour and slowly he dozed off 2 sleep. suddenly there was a whispering sound which he heard only when it got a little louder. his unconscious brain turned active, the first thought it produced was about those 2 policemen who had threatened him wid their hostile eyes. In reflex he lifeted his upper body on his hands and d woeds dat came out of his mouth were ,"look, I hve done nothing." his eyes still got no clear picture and he repeated hus words.
"hey, it's me ... r u ok? wat happened?" now dat was a pure female voice . it had 2 be Antara. Raghu was stunned; Antara looked frightened.
"i'm ok..but wat r u doing here?" Raghu said , pleasantly surprised , though still in mild shock.
"I woke up 4 a few gulps of water and thought of checking if u were asleep. I a, sorry 2 hve disturbed u"
"no , u did not," he said quickly , lest she decided 2 turn around and walk away.
"u scared d hell out of me. wat was dat? nightmares?" she questioned, after spending a few seconds in silence , he accepted it was nightmare. the same minute it struck him, d whole world wud call him a fool if he wasted all his time. she sat wid her legs on d floor and he remained fully on her seat. but before he cud say anything , she told him she needed 2 go. she was right. in case her mother woke up and found her daughter missing, it cud get both of us killed. she stood up 2 go.
"see u in d morning." she said and he repeated d same, ther was nothing he cud do; she began 2 walk away. Raghu was moaning frm inside, it was painful. now hw just wanted a couple of hours 2 pass and sun 2 show up again, 4 I wud meet her in d morning. Raghu tossed on his seat 4 d next few minutes before he drifted into sleep. Antara was no doubt awake in Raghu.
ok guys , i'm done !! 😃 hope u had fun reading it
waiting 4 ur comments eagerly , they encourage me a lot😛
Tata !! Phir Milenge !! 😃😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
Vry nice update shivi...
Raghu Ko toh ab antara hi
Chahiye Har waqt apne pass 😉...
cnt even sleep...n is only thinking
Bout Her... hmmm bt antu bh
Aayi Itni raat m.raghu ko milne 😲...
What Cooking 😆...
waiting To see k mrng m kya hota h
Updte Sooon girl..
Take Care...n yes jldi milte hai 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
it was lovely but very short ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey very nice update shivi.😃
aakhir raghu bach gaya police uncle se...🤣
he is in her thoughts..bas antu hi antu..😳
raghu is thinking about her only..aur ye kya phirs e police ka dar..pr raghu itna kyun dar rha hai...usne kuch kiya hai kya/?🤣

but what about antu?..she isn't feeling anything or as a friend for him?😊
thanks fr pm n updating!🤗

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