RANTARA FF - Difficulties Faced in love ch-1 part-12 pg 12 - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
nice update shivi...😃
raghu ke saath to sach mein bhut bada locha hogaya hai...šŸ˜†
he is very interesting personšŸ˜Ž
update soon dear😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
Awesome update shivika 😃
I love Raghu's talking to himself yeda šŸ˜†
I must say good selection on song šŸ˜†
Continuee soon šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
wow shivika
this was amazing
cont asap
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
Hey Hi guys , wat's going on , i'm back wid an exciting update (I hope sošŸ˜‰) of my FF , sorry 4 d delay
So why wait , let's begin Get Set Go -
Wish u a very happy and enjoyable reading šŸ˜›
Chapter - Love Express (Varanasi To Delhi)
Part - 7

"I think I have told u my brother lives in delhi and I visit him every month", Antara replied in her soothing voice.

"That I know but where in delhi? I mean d location..." Raghu said

"Oh I'm sorry. Defence colony." Raghu tried 2 figure out if he had ever heard of this place before; d answer was no. He was still very much an alien in d city. He barely knew it well.

"Helowww." She shook him out of his gloom. "Raghu, is ur world more beautiful dan dis?" He was confused at wat Antara had asked him.

"Wat?" He said quite baffled.

"Why? Don't u hve a world of ur own?" she asked

"wat world?" he stuttered

"Do u remember our English teacher Mrs. Hussain who had once remarked dat u hve a world of ur own and u remain In dat world quite a lot?" Antara said wid a smile.

"Yes," he replied in shock . Raghu remembered quite well and so did she . but was it such a common possibility dat she remembered it? And did she remember more of such remarks about him? Why did she hear all those remarks about him so attentively dat she remembered it even after years?

"I know I'm boring u ." Raghu admitted shyly

"Till now, definitely yes," Antara said and laughed . but now I felt a sudden impulse, a strong desire 2 overcome his uncommunicativeness and talk 2 her d way he had wanted 2. Raghu glanced at his watch and it was already eight. Time was passing faster dan ever and he badly wanted 2 live in d eccentricity of dat moment. Everything was just so perfect, beyond words , beyond any description. Generally, these trains r buzzing wid people but miraculously not many eyes disturbed them ; dere were very few passengers around, there privacy was undisturbed . He had no idea of a perfect date, If he envisaged one, a date in a train was d most unique, Dates in restaurant and parks were all very common. But who wud call it a date; Raghu was barely speaking . Anyone else in my shoes cud hve done better. The train shoved as his heart functioned faster; they had cme 2 a halt at Kanpur station. The platform looking appallingly squalid wid passengers lying like corpes on d floor.

"Hey , I'm bored of sitting 4 hours. Let's just straighten our legs by taking a quick walk. How does it sound?" Antara asked but too keen in hearing a yes. Raghu blinked at his watch , five minutes had elapsed and he still had five minutes 2 go for a memorable walk wid Antara. They jumped down, walked d length of d train as we caught d attention of almost everyone on d platform . He was sure they were trying 2 figure out if they were love birds and honestly he had not felt bad guessing wat they felt. Raghu walked wid gallons of pride, feeling she was all his. He looked at her face over and over, He wished dat their walk wud never end . But it's a basic truth date vet good thing comes 2 an end. While they rushed back 2 d train, her cell phone rang. Antara picked and Raghu cud not hear a word despite his best efforts, as she spoke too softly. His heartbeats fastened.

Ok , so this is all 4 today , I just hope and wish u all enjoyed it 😃

Waiting 4 ur valuable comments , it encourages me a lot 😊

Tata !! Phir milenge chalte chalte šŸ˜ƒšŸ¤—

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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
wow amazing update shivika
rantara are becoming good friends
pls cont asap
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
awww raghu Feelings pride having a walk with antara 😳...
as if shes all his šŸ˜‰... yes one day surely . šŸ˜†...
cute bt small update plz give a bigfer update if psbl 😊...
thanks dear fr d update
take care
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57

loved it shivi..😳

antara notice him n said he has his own world..hehe...šŸ˜†

the walk scene was really sweet raghu was on cloud nine...šŸ˜Ž

bt what a cliffhanger...raghu ki dil ki dhadkan badh gayi..šŸ˜²šŸ˜†

waiting fr next update..

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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
Lovely updates 😊
d book scene was hillarious
raghu got caught locha-e-ulfat
Raghu in his own world šŸ˜†
their walk 😳 loved it
raghu thinking antu is all his šŸ˜† whn people luking at thm walking wit pride hehe
continue soon
thnx for pm 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
Hello everyone , i'm back wid d next part of my FF after delay , actually i'm d master in delaying isn't it as I am always late šŸ˜† thank u 2 those who replied me , but d response was not 2 much good so guys if i'm lacking behind in smething , do tell me it will help me improve 😊
Criticism is also welcome 😊 So here I get started -
Wish u a enjoyable reading šŸ˜›
Chapter - Love Express (Varanasi To Delhi )
Part - 8
Was dat supposed 2 be Antara's boyfriend's call? Was she already engaged ? Raghu examined her face meticulously and attempted 2 figure out if she was really talking 2 her boyfriend. He cud not succeed in his endeavor as she spoke in a very low voice. It created fear in Raghu dat he was falling 4 a girl who already had a boyfriend and he wud end up getting beaten up by him. Her phone buzzed again , she said it was her mom again and she needed 2 go. She said she wud cme back . One thing was clear , d previous call was frm her mother; Raghu felt relieved. He realized he needed 2 pee after she was gone. Beautiful girls have this unique prowess, "I tell u; wid dem u barely pay attention 2 any other thing in d world, not even 2 d need of going 2 washroom " Raghu thought in his mind . In a flash , he was back on his seat. He looked at d vacant seat infront of him and imagined her 2 be still there. Some of the passengers hve started their dinner. it's always an early dinner on a train. Although there was nothing visible through d dark window glass, he still tried 2 look out. in his mind he had just though about antara , d time dat he had just spent wid her in d train and d time dat he was going 2 get wid her. He did not hve 2 wait long as she got back shortly. As soon as she sa down, she offered Raghu some chocolates. . Her father had brought dem from Chicago, she told him He thought it was quite ironical, usually a boy gives chocolates 2 a girl and here he was taking them, so he was d girl. He had 2 accept this and he did wid slight reluctance.
"Wat ... u don't like chocolates ?" she asked surprised
"I do like but it's quite unusual... a guy taking chocolates frm a girl. usually , it's d other way round."I didn't know how he managed 2 speak up wat he felt inside . This time she smiled pressing her lips harder. She looked at Raghu wid a lot of intensity and made him think about wat he had said.
"Raghu that's a girlfriend boyfriend thing...," she said and smiled
"But anyway , do u have a girlfriend ?" she asked , Raghu was like baffled by her question. he cud'nt believe his ears at wat she had asked her. he was going 2 have a take it as one level passed. anyway, he did not want 2 make an eager announcement 2 her, nor did he hve d intention 2 tell her his status. But somewhere in his heart there was a strong desire 2 convey dat he was very much single. He never bought chocolates 4 anyone, never felt d need of buying something like rose or a greeting card. instead of giving her d answer right away, I preferred 2 talk more as he was trying 2 work on hos communication skills.
"Wat do u think?" Raghu questioned 2 know wat was on her mind.
"Well, u live in a city full of hustle and bustle... u hve spent 2 years in college already. moreover these day s girl r so crazy, I feel yes," she replied wid a twisted epression
"Oh , crazy," he said and laughed, she waited 4 d answer, "sorry , no crazy girls met me till date," he said as he laughed more.
"Why?" Antara asked in a soft voice and wid beautiful expression. She looked highly interested. he thought 4 a minute , looked at d floor of d train and then answered. "Perhaps b'coz I hve a world of my own and I mostly remain in it." Raghu said and their eyes remained fixed at each other.
Ok my dear friends , this is d end of dis part , hope u enjoyed reading it !! 😊
sorry everyone 4 d short update , will try 2 write a bigger one next time šŸ˜›
Waiting 4 ur reviews eagerly , they encourage me a lot 😃
Thanks and Tata , Phir Milenge !! šŸ˜‰šŸ¤—
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60

wonderful story Shivika ...ur writing style is so different ...very much captivating ...hv fallen for this story ...loved it ...i hv read all the parts all in one go ...

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