RANTARA FF - Difficulties Faced in love ch-1 part-12 pg 12 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
hey shivi...very nice update dear👏
hahaha..poor raghu bura fas gaya...🤣
antara too cought him..😆
their journey is wonderfull
tfpm..update soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Nice update Shivi😛
Loved their train journey
Antu asked Raghu to tell the story n he trapped😆
Continue soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
english version of Sholay 🤣 🤣...
omggg what ws dat. . 😆...
grt work shivi.. update soon
😉...
tkcr dear 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
Nice update 😊
raghu 😆 🤣 bura fas gaya
omg sholay 😆 ka english version bana diya
antu caught him 😆
continue soon
thnx for pm 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Totally amazing update
pls cont asap
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Omg awesome update shivika 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
Sorry missed the new chapter
Amazing loved it
Remake of Sholay lol
pls cont asap
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
Hey , hello all Rantararians i'm back wid d next part of my FF 😉 Thank u all of u 4 ur valuable comments it encourages me helps me 2 write more a lot , so why waste time here I get started -
Happy reading 😛
Chapter - 1 Love Express (Varanasi To Delhi)
Part - 6
"James 4 Jai, Victor 4 Viru, Gabriel 4 Gabbar Singh and Taylor 4 Thakur very mart !" Antara said as she laughed hysterically . For Raghu now was d time 2 surrender. He cursed himself frm coming up wid such a stupid story and preferred 2 join her in d laughter. They both laughed looking at each other, dey laughed at regular intervals 4 an hour at his stupidity . He realized it was his most favorite sound in d whole world, d sound of her laughter. She told him she caught him flipping 3-4 pages together and then she had understood dat he was not reading. Raghu accepted it all in silence, though she did not pester him 2 know why he was pretending 2 read. Seldom had his flamboyance dumped him in dat fashion. But had he realized it was d day wen all peculiar things were occurring 2 him. In d train , during those moments , he cursed himself 4 his moronic appearance, Why on Earth did he hve 2 pretend 2 be an earnest reader !
As Raghu pondered over it , he risked another glance at Antara. Having stolen a few heart- stopping glimpses at her, he commanded his eyes 2 revert and not lose control, though in reluctance. Son he regained some composure dat made him realize . he definitely needed 2 get both hisnd and heart under control . D trach of time was lost, d clue whether it is day or night ad been missing, and wid dat unknown feeling was emerging and he was too lost 2 trace it's source. His breadth soon got converted into hyperventilation. Raghu felt something in his chest dat made him gulp time and again. Raghu was loosing his mind, never had he felt so uneasy before. His blood had begun 2 run a lot faster dan usual, his whole body vibrated. He slapped himself in his imagination, followed wid an acrimonious speech. Raghu will produce dat drastic speech before u.
"Dude... wat's wrong wid u ? wat on Earth makes u so damn nervous? Do u think dis girl is going 2 eat u up? no, do u think this very beautiful girl is going 2 eat u up ? Raghu rectified his question, Oh !hang on. r u diffident b'coz of her divine beauty?" He got no reply, no answer. There he was , wid his reason behind behaving like a traditional indian bride who hides her face behind a veil and weighs her word her words not less dan a hundred times before speaking; who often dreads of a scolding also. During all Raghu's lecturing 2 himself , Antara had talked 2 her brother over phone .He made himself understand dat he lacked nothing , be it looks or style; he had it in him. It seemed Antara was about 2 finish her telecom. Raghu needed 2 make an attempt 2 strike a conversation . As soon as she disconnected d call , she flashed a smile in his direction and he responded wid a smile dat looked like a smile this time. The glass if silence was broken as he asked her,"So , where r u going 2 put up in Delhi?" Raghu's tone was not d way he wanted it 2 be, he rued it as he not wanted 2 emerge wid a macho swagger , he simply wanted 2 scramble over his much pathetic condition .
Ok , So here it ends today , hope u liked it 😛
Locha- e-ulfat ho gaya , ta da da da ta da da, Locha-e-ulfat ho gaya , oh sorry sorry , main gaane mein hi magan ho gayi 😃back 2 d FF !!
I think dis song perfectly suits on Raghu's condition in today's part , right ??
Drop ur valuable comments in d comment boxes below , it helps me a lot 😊
Tata , phir milenge !! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
Wonderful update Shivi 😳
Raghu's new new feelings fr Antu
Locha -e -ulfat ho gaya perfect song fr Raghu's present condition😆
Continue soon😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
nice update 😊...
grt goin...raghu hs feelibg fr antu..
plz give a bigger update shivika 😛...
thanks n update sooon

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