RANTARA FF - Difficulties Faced in love ch-1 part-12 pg 12 - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing update.. loved it soo much..
pls cont asap
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Hi guys ,I'm back wid next part of my FF ,sorry 4 delay reason behind it u all already know ,so I will not waste ,more time and get started 😛

Wish u all a happy and enjoyable reading 😃

Chapter - 1 Love Express (Varanasi To Delhi)

Part- 11

Chai,chai , chai, chai. Chaiwalas woke Raghu up this time. He checked his watch ;it was already 7:30 . most of d passengers around him were sipping their tea and eating sandwiches. When travelling by train , 7:30 am seems like too late. Delhi was just a few stations away but, there was hardly any sign of Antara. Maybe she was still sleeping. He left his seat in a hurry to go to d wash basin to splash water on his face and a quick hair styling wid his hands. Within no time he was back on his seat. Time was running out ,needless to say he had been feeling something 4 her since d moment they began talking in d train. Raghu was craving 2 talk 2 her. His desperation had started to freak him out again .sitting and waiting 4 Antara was becoming an impossible task. Had Raghu shown some courage,he wud have reached her seat; but call it shyness or cowardice, he was frozen on his seat. But if one avoids doing exercise or labor, one can't achieve success in love in d modern day world. An idea just popped up in his mind. It was a freaky idea but wen u r in love, u become a freak. A chai wala just passed by , Raghu bent right and d moment he reached closer 2 Antara's seat, he screamed chai, raghu's voive echoed. Everyone around me, even those seated quite far, stared at him angrily. Raghu had just banged on their eardrums terribly. He had to apologize softly saying "morning tea is so important," followed by soory and the looking up and down,left and right and then up and down. Now he prayed he was loud enough to be heard by Antara; his seeing on depended on that. The suspense of dat moment cud easily be related to an India- Pakistan cricket match, particularly d last over situation when d game is so well- balanced dat any team can win. Of course, India winning d match wud tantamount to Antara coming to him. A few minutes passed and now he was full of cynicism. Raghu told himself," in d worst case, I wud go to her". The case was indeed worst, he concluded dat d effort went down d pan and he got up. Th distance between us was as short as a ten second long walk. After taking a few nervous steps towards her seat, he suddenly stopped as he saw Antara. She had walked wid her head down so he took an about turn and raced back to his seat . now was d time his happiness returned to him , he clenched his fist and punched d air for his victory , A fat women, who had earlier thrown an angry look at him 4 his mad act, saw him doing dat and her expressions suggested she was sure dat he suffered from some mental disorder. He was a psychopath for her.

"so u got ur cup of tea?" the moent she stopped at his seat, she asked this question . she looked really fresh like a flower wid her open hair which fell beautifully on Antara's shoulder. Raghu was so mesmerized dat he even forgot d trick which he had used a short while ago to bring her to me.

"Wat tea? I don't hve a taste 4 tea," raghu said mindlessly

"but I guess it was ur voice calling d pantry guy 4 tea," she said

Raghu heard a loud ring and regained his mind.

"oh ya ya, that was me. Actually my throat is terribly ruled by cough at the moment , so I thought tea wud help," he fabricated

"oh, I hve got cough tablets in my purse,I will just get it," Antara offered , raghu waved his hand to stop her but she was gone. Of course ,Raghu needed no cough tablets, he was fit and fine physically. Raghu regretted and hit his fist on his forehead. Then he thought wat a caring girlfriend she wud make, actually caring life partner. Thankfully she was back wid Raghu in a snap wid some cough tablets.

Phew! Done 😊

Hope u guys like it , waiting 4 ur valuale comments eagerly they encourage me a lot 😃

Tata phir milenge !! 🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
amazing update shivi..
I am enjoying RAghu's character...soo much..😆
bhut kuch kehna chata hai..bhut kuch krna chata hai...pr kr nhi paa rha...😳
that tea incident was superb!!..😆
i was laughing at his antiques...hehe😆
aww caring antu..he always want a person like this...😳
but Delhi is not so far now?..aage kya?..will raghu tell his feelings to her?😊
waiting fr next update..😳
thanks fr updating dear..love u!🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow really nice update shivi
loved the way raghu shouted CHAI!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
grt update shivi..
raghu full to gone..
subah subah bh antu ko dhoond rh h..
lovely update..
update soon n thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
Wonderful update Shivi 😛
Loved it very much
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
Wow Shivika,
i loved this update of urs..
He he .. I just love Raghu !!!
Update soon.
-Prerna
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice update dear 😊
loved raghu he is becoming so crazy 😆
hope inki love stry jaldi strt ho waiting fr tht
continue soon
thnx for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Helooo all !! seeing u all after a long time and guess wat i'm here wid my next update 😃 Once again sorry 4 delay but wat to do ,still going through fever 🥱
so let's not waste time and get on the train baby 😉sorry actually i'm a Bollywood lover toh kahi na kahi movies ke dialogue ghus hi jaate hain 😆
Wish u a Happy and Enjoyable reading😛
Chapter - 1 Love Express (Varanasi To Delhi)
Part - 12

"So u had a good sleep?" Antara asked

"oh yes, quite good," Raghu said ,but this was not an honest answer

"hope there were no nightmares later," she laughed and he smiled 4 d incident last night. Soon they realized delhi was just minutes away. This beautiful journey has come to its end . she wud be gone soon, wen wud he see her beautiful face again, wud it again happen dat they wud share a laugh together? He had no answers 4 any of these questions. Raghu had grown sentimental. While he contemplated he noticed she was looking at him. And now they both looked at each other in silence. That silence was quite meaningful; something was happening in that silence but it was beyond words.

"I will always remember this journey," Raghu spoke in a low voice. Antara just half- smiled at that and said nothing. So far she had been talkative and all of sudden she was silent. They spent some time gazing at each other.

"u don't wish to take my number?" she asked . Raghu's reaction on this was a mixture of embarrassment and anger on himself.

Without wasting second ,he gave her his number. It was a gr8 devastation to see his own phone dead wid empty battery. Quite hastily he reached 4 his bag 2 find a charger. He searched 4 it madly but failed. He had forgotten to keep it in his bag. When he raised his head after giving up, he was taken by enormous surprise. Antara held a tissue and a pencil which was actually the kajal dat she had used. She wrote down her number using dat kajal on the tissue and gave it to him. He took it , too numb to say anything. They heard some passenger's voice announcing dat delhi was the next station. People around them had begun arranging their luggage. They bith got up; Raghu felt the pain of that moment, the pain of parting. He tried to make sure that his face remained widout a sign of pain. Her face was totally unfathomable. He offered his right hand she hers, they, shook hands.

"ok see u," Raghu said , his eyes turning serious.

"see u soon," Antara replied as she began to step back. That was the bye- bye moment, they both waved at each other. She was walking away from him and he was not ready to take his eyes off her. Before getting out og his sight, she looked back at him. He had already fixed his gaze on her, their eyes met and that happened widout any expectation from his side. In dat moment Raghu felt like Shahrukh Khan of DDLJ; surely dat was a positive indication. If u have seen DDLJ even a single time then u r mad to believe that if a girl turns back to look at u , that's an indication that she feels 4 u. thanks to the makers of DDLJ , Raghu felt jubilant now.

The train arrived at the New delhi railway station . on the other platform they both waved at each other ,ignoring her mother. Antara was going away and Raghu badly wanted 2 stop her from going. He looked ta her till she was finally out of his sight. The time spent in the auto rickshaw was not easy ; he was sort of unconscious in her thoughts.

Raghu had been in a different world altogether ,just needed a friend's reassurance that wud tell him, tujhe pyaar hogaya hai saaley. Behavioral changes in him were very much clear; hours passed thinking about her in silence, and enough of silence wud further result in willingness to talk about her. Love is a strange phenomenon; it makes u both silent and talkative . One feels like getting the attention of the whole world ,giving hundred of interviews the way celebrities do, and hitting the headlines. And the one does not feel like being disturbed by anyone. Raghu phoned Mac (Short form of Machmach) and told him wat had happened ; it took him nearly an hour to do dat. Mac got delirious when Raghu told him dat the girl was Antara.

"Dude, Antara? that glam girl from our class! U got to be kidding me brother? U r so lucky, dude. Anyway... did u guys kiss each other? Of course, u had so much time, dat is obvious. Did u ...?"

"Shut up," he prevented him from saying a word more."I love her...," Raghu said quite seriously .

So wid this this update and this chapter ends here ,hope u liked it 😊

Don't forget to leave ur valuable comments ,they encourage me a lot 😃 Till then ,Tata Phir Milenge Chalte Chalte 😃see here also maine gaana ghusa he diya😆 Bye !!!! Keep smiling always 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
Awesome update Shivi 😳
Raghu in love 😃
Mac 😆 interesting very interesting
Loved d update very much
Continue soon 😊

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