**Tera Sukkon Ya Junnon Tera-Rantara FF**[Thread-1] - Page 79

Originally posted by: Komali14

res for next update comment...😆

Hum firse aagaye aur iss baar kuch zyada hi late sorry... woh aapke updates khass hai aur bahut lambe bhi toh time lag jata hai parte parte aur comment likhte...

Its okk i understand...😊

Again beautiful shayari loved it...

Thx to ridz..

Ruku ne antu the multitalented ko pari maa ke paas leke aaye... their convo was good... ruku aur usski baatein full on dramebazi hai...

She is drama queen after all...😆

Rasika aur aaji completition ke baat pe argue kar rahe hai... fir humari radha rani aur chatpati ne entry maari...

Aaji aur ruku antu se mile ye toh sach mein bahut lambi kahani hai...

Yup.. Antu se juri huyi sari kahani lambi hii hoti hain..😆

Antu mannao mission suru huwa... Bechari aapna halat bhi nai bata sakhti sabko...

Woo too hain..agar batayegu to sab kuch khatm hoo jayega!!

Rasika kaki also begged her bechari ko toote huwe payr ko aaji se bachana hai warna aur bhi bones crack hojaye ga...

Ajji ke dhai kilo kaa hath..😆

Finally antu ne maan liya she is sweet heart humesha dusro ki madat karti hai...

yehin too uss kii nature hain.. kitni bhi sad kyun naa hoo she will always help others😃

So now antu mission start hoga she ll visit naik sadan everyday n find out evidence against dayan...

yup..😉

Raghu lonavala mein hai uss dayan ke saath aur mosquito ne usske khoon chusne laga...aur woh pe bhi gussa karta hai...

Ek taraf machar aur dusrri taraf dayan.. beach mein fasa humara yeda!😭😆

Dayan went to meet some umknown people raghu ke maan mein sawal toh hai par usse zyada uss dayan ke liye respect hai jo usspe doubt nahi kar sakta hai...

True... yahin respect too ussey dayan pe doubt kar ne see rokta hain... kahete hain naa respect ussi koo doo joo laayak hain... joo layak nahin hain ussey kabhi respect mat laro kyun kii woo tumhare respect ka bas fayda uthana janta hain.😡

Raghu firse antu ke baato ke bare mein soch ke pareshan ho raha hai...

Wow riu I could see that pink flower waving...you describe it so well beautiful it was... raghu ko antu ki smile yaad aagaye usse dekh ke... woh smile raghu wapas layega...

Thank you ji...raghu koo too antu ka smile wapas lana hi parega.. par uss key liye bahut sare papar belne parengey..😆

Dayan ne raghu ko antu land se bahar nikhala churail...

Again another beautiful scene dear... raghu na badal raha hai...

Haa aur badlao bhi bahut tezi see hoo raha hain.. bas bechara confuse hain kii yee badlao kyun aa rahe hain uss mein..😆

He saw antu in between those little girl... hayee hum toh kho hi gaye ye parke you write it very beautifully loved the whole scene...

Thx ji.. achanak see uss scene kaa idea dimag mein aa gay... pahele cliche laga tha.. fir socha chalo.. likh hi dete hain😆..glad u all liked the bit..😳

When antu went back he was hurt because she was leaving him behind...

Raghu ko dhire dhire kuch kuch ho raha hai... hayeee

Bahut kuch ho raha hain...😆.. par ussey pata nahin kii kya hoo raha hain..🤣

It was awesome riu how you wrote whole scene just loved it...

Thx again..

Antara bonding with her dance was described beautiul riu...dubara jine ka mauka mila hai usse really nice...

thank you😳

Purani antu wapas aarahi tha...

Ji haan😉

Raghu toh full lattoo hogaya antu ke hidden talent ko dekh kar hayeee...

Chintu itna khogaya tha antu ke beauty aur dance pe ki usse ajji ke awaz bhi bahar nai la payi...chintu toh gaya kaam se...

Poor chintu...😆

Antu aapne hi duniya main ghumti aur raghu se takra gaye kya scene tha...

Raghu ne kya dialogue maara ddej ki yaad aagaye yaar...

Haan woo dialouge too DDEJ kaa hi hain...😆

Antu words were so meaningful and touching dear loved it...raghu ke saath hum bhi dumb hogaye...

Haan yaar.. woo too hain..

Great update riu ji...

Thank u😊

Originally posted by: .Muskhaan.

Res..

Unres...

Hello ji... Kaise jo aap..??? Achanak kya Hua tha aapko uhh.. Behki behki baatein karne lage aap uhh???
Aage se aap aise math socha karo... Hum sab aapse bahut bahut zyada pyaar karthein hai.. Teek hai...

HUGGSS🤗

Challo.. Main abh shuru karthi Hu apna OS..;)

As usual these lines are fantastic... Hatzz off ridz...

She always have fantastic collection of sayaris..... will post more on my upcoming chaps..😊

Aww my Raghu.. Bechara.. He his lost in that thoughts.. He is not able to remember what he did actually.. Wahi toh, Raghu ne kuch kiya hi nayi... Yaad kaha se aayega uhhh??!!
But Raghu ka dil bahut masum hai.. He will never harm someone purposefully...
Hez innocent from inside...

Thats very very true... He didn't even know what a mess he had done in someone's life.. Whoever meet him for the first time will think of him as rude, arogant, harsh... but deep inside he is just a lonely innocet soul and dead loyal for those people whom he considered as his own, for whom he cares.. he can go to any extent for them... kissi koo viswas karta hain too ankh bandh kar kee viswas karta hain... uss ki issi innocence aur blind faith ka fayda utha ta han DM..
Raghu really wants to help antara.. But hez not able to figure what's in her mind which has made her so cold from inside...
And this coldness of her could only be melt by the warmth of love..
Riu... This ajji- ruku- Raghu ka conversation ek Dum mast tha yaar.. I enjoyed it alot... Infact I was laughing when I was reading that... These kind of scenes are wonderful n v can enjoy it any time in any mood...

me 2😛
And I am learning new new Marathi words from u.. Hehe.. Thankyu ji...
Iss FF khatam hone ke baad please aap koi Punjabi OS/FF/SS likhna.. I wanna learn Punjabi.. That's my fav language.. :D
Muje punjabi nahin ati mithu jii...😆
Yeah.. One more thing.. Raghu uses that s**a na.. I love that infact.. Hehehe...

Jab raghu bolta hain tabhi acha lagta hain.. warna aur koi mere samne aa kee woo word bole uss kii too ...😡

Omg!!! Raghu.. Very bad.. Dusron ke dairy padna bahut galat baat hai...
Lol.. Abh yeh sab kucch English Mein hai.. Accha hi Hua.. Raghu usse pad nahi paya...
Raghu needs english tution asap...😆
In antara's pov, rhea's and antara's conversion was touching yaar... The relationship of two sisters is very special right, that to if our little ones try to cheer us up in a matured way, that feels really good... ;) I know that very well...
Vaise rhea ka age kya hai???
Yup even me two understand... There is always a chemistry between sisters which is always enjoyable..

She is in 15 i guess...
Raghu's POV-

That "double shit" word is awesome.. Even I will use it from now on..
Riu.. I have learnt many new words from you...
Thanks to ur school teacher, who has taught English to u amazingly...;)
Thank you..😆
Ria.. U have mentioned about the aroma, handwriting and that flower.. These are really different... Its nice... It brings a different picture in mind...
Awii thanks😳
Lol Raghu jab frustrate hotha hai, tho kithna cute lagtha hai.. *Blush*...<3
Haan yaar.. Raghu too hamesha hot and cute lagta hain..😉
Raghu.. Finally saw his name in her dairy... Hmmm... I wonder, if Raghu could understand English, what he would do after reading antara's dairy... Leave, I like this track itself...
If he really could understand wht was written... in one word i will say... Bawal Mach Jata!!
Ria this is my fav part-
"S**a is dil koo abb kya hoo gaya re... ee jyada uchalna bandh kar..." I almost scolded my poor heart bending down my head towards me chest. "huyaa kya hain issey yaar.. aaj kaal bas generator ki tarah chalu ho jata hain!!".. Its lovely... Hayee.. Raghu Mia.. So cute of him...<3
Our cute yeda!!
Its written that at a place raghu's name was badly splashed out.. If I am not wrong it will because of antara's tears right???!!
Yup... her tears splashed the ink on pages...
And that picture- I can still remember antara showing her family photo to Raghu in DDEJ... I miss my DDEJ.. :'(
Me 2!! specially rantara
And now this was my favourite...
Raghu imagining Antara...
From "a sound of bangles... To ...breaking of my sleep"
The way u have described antara.. My my.. Beautiful.. Lovely.. Ravishing.. Chic.. Superb.. I felt that even I am standing there somewhere and watching that lovely scenes with my own eyes...
Thx again.. i am overwhelmed😊
The words which u use to describe something... Mind-blowing yaar..
Ria.. U r my favourite writer...
Love u...<3

And the way how u ended the scene is perfect.. U have written no, there was watered stored in the bucket and I splashed them madly over my face, my entire body... - a round of applause for this...:)
Meri too hawa tight hoo gayi thi woo scene imagine karte waqt.. Wet nd drenched raghu.. Hayee...
Precap- I am sure... Again the same is going to happen.. Raghu to catch antara... Wow.. I am exited..

Ria- the story is progressing in a fantastic way. Aur meri interest bhi bhad raha hai iske saath... I really enjoy ur updates. I never get bored of them...

Love u yaar..
*hugs*