Originally posted by: Komali14
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Pehle nahi ab soch ne lage hai hum,
Zindgi ke har lamhe main teri zarurat si lagti hai...!!!
Wow dear this is just beautiful...
Again thanks to ridz...๐ณ
Raghu pareshan tha antu ke baato se aur usske change in behaviour se...
He realised she don't like his presence around her n thought to keep distance from her bechara usse toh pata bhi nai antu pe kya guzar thi hai jab woh usse dekhti hai toh...
Haan yaar.. Raghu ko pata hii nahin kii Antu kee dil mein kya hain... Kaise anjane mein uss nee antu ko chot pauchaya hain..... Jab pata chalega tab too..abhi too main woo baat soch bhi nahin pati..๐คข
Raghu ko antu ke book mili aur woh english main tha aur raghu irritate ho gaye that lines were great angrez chale gaye piche angrezi chor gaye...
Raghu ki batein humsha anokha hii hota hain..๐
Raghu wants to check her diary to get answers to his question nice...
Raghu's line to aaji n ruku was nice...
Raghu dentist hi hai na... actually woh daant tood ne main expert jo hai...
Yee too ekdum sahi kahan aap nee.. bas woo ek dant nahin 32 kee 32 dant ek sath tor deta hain.. lekin repair karna nahin jaan ta...๐คฃ
Aaji ne raghu ko dekh liya jab woh antu ko ghoor raha tha...
Raghu toh aaji ke sawal se bach gaye chiller party ke wajase...
Chiller party zindabad...๐ฅณ
Raghu diary parne hi wala tha tab buntiya ne entry maari ye buntiya bhi na...
Bantiyan humesha galat time pe entriyan leta hain.๐คฃ
Rhea ne jhut kaha ki usse stomach pain hai to stay with antu...
Rhea ne diary parle n she want to know the truth...
Rhea n antu convo was really good mujhe mere behen ki yaad aagaye ...
True sharing pain with someone makes you feel lighter...you write antu situation so beautifully yaar great job...
thx... this sisters relationship is going to be another essential part of this story...hope u will like their bond in future...๐ณ
Offo raghu bhi na pehle nai soch sakta tha puri diary english main hogi...
Diary dekh kee excited joo hoo gaya๐
Ab kya karega ... He found his name in diary aur usska dil garden garden hoke uchal raha tha... raghu bhi na generator ki tarah chalu hojata hai uska dil...
Raghu kee paan kaa patta generator ki tarah uchal raha hain.๐
Raghu aur bhi confuse hogaye uske naam dekh ke aur socha galiya di hai...
Ab aur kya sochega raghu... Humesha too antu uspe sutli bomb barasata raheta hain..๐คฃ
Raghu ne firse antu ko imagine kiya hayeee...raghu ko sach main kuch kuch ho raha hai...
Kuch kuch nahin bahut kuch hoo gay hain...๐
Antu ke smile ne raghu ke dil aur dimaag chura liya hayeee...
Wow riu I don't have words about raghu's dream... it was really beautiful...
Raghu ke pareshani aur usske sawal ka jawab kitne khubsurati se likh hai aapne...
Just loved it dear... dimaag ko nai dil se pucho usse sab yaad hoga hopefully he ll find it out soon...
Thnk you jii...๐ณ
Raghu neend se bahar aaya aur bechara apne mixed feeling kho samjh nahi paraha hai...
Lekin usse samjh aagaya hai antu khass hai uske liye...aur usse uske bare main sab kuch jana hai...
Aur raghu jaan kee rahega..๐
Precap is interesting antu jarahi hai apne diary wapas lane ...
Riu this story is really awesome dear please continue... sad track bhi ab kitne sundar tarike se likh the ho ji hum toh uspe bhi fida hai...we know this track is important to proceed this story n you write every situation beautifully dear...
Sowie ji late hogaya unres karne...
koi baat nahin..๐ณ
Please cont asap...
Thank u ๐