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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Komali14

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Pehle nahi ab soch ne lage hai hum,

Zindgi ke har lamhe main teri zarurat si lagti hai...!!!

Wow dear this is just beautiful...

Again thanks to ridz...๐Ÿ˜ณ

Raghu pareshan tha antu ke baato se aur usske change in behaviour se...

He realised she don't like his presence around her n thought to keep distance from her bechara usse toh pata bhi nai antu pe kya guzar thi hai jab woh usse dekhti hai toh...

Haan yaar.. Raghu ko pata hii nahin kii Antu kee dil mein kya hain... Kaise anjane mein uss nee antu ko chot pauchaya hain..... Jab pata chalega tab too..abhi too main woo baat soch bhi nahin pati..๐Ÿคข

Raghu ko antu ke book mili aur woh english main tha aur raghu irritate ho gaye that lines were great angrez chale gaye piche angrezi chor gaye...

Raghu ki batein humsha anokha hii hota hain..๐Ÿ˜†

Raghu wants to check her diary to get answers to his question nice...

Raghu's line to aaji n ruku was nice...

Raghu dentist hi hai na... actually woh daant tood ne main expert jo hai...

Yee too ekdum sahi kahan aap nee.. bas woo ek dant nahin 32 kee 32 dant ek sath tor deta hain.. lekin repair karna nahin jaan ta...๐Ÿคฃ

Aaji ne raghu ko dekh liya jab woh antu ko ghoor raha tha...

Raghu toh aaji ke sawal se bach gaye chiller party ke wajase...

Chiller party zindabad...๐Ÿฅณ

Raghu diary parne hi wala tha tab buntiya ne entry maari ye buntiya bhi na...

Bantiyan humesha galat time pe entriyan leta hain.๐Ÿคฃ

Rhea ne jhut kaha ki usse stomach pain hai to stay with antu...

Rhea ne diary parle n she want to know the truth...

Rhea n antu convo was really good mujhe mere behen ki yaad aagaye ...

True sharing pain with someone makes you feel lighter...you write antu situation so beautifully yaar great job...

thx... this sisters relationship is going to be another essential part of this story...hope u will like their bond in future...๐Ÿ˜ณ

Offo raghu bhi na pehle nai soch sakta tha puri diary english main hogi...

Diary dekh kee excited joo hoo gaya๐Ÿ˜†

Ab kya karega ... He found his name in diary aur usska dil garden garden hoke uchal raha tha... raghu bhi na generator ki tarah chalu hojata hai uska dil...

Raghu kee paan kaa patta generator ki tarah uchal raha hain.๐Ÿ˜†

Raghu aur bhi confuse hogaye uske naam dekh ke aur socha galiya di hai...

Ab aur kya sochega raghu... Humesha too antu uspe sutli bomb barasata raheta hain..๐Ÿคฃ

Raghu ne firse antu ko imagine kiya hayeee...raghu ko sach main kuch kuch ho raha hai...

Kuch kuch nahin bahut kuch hoo gay hain...๐Ÿ˜†

Antu ke smile ne raghu ke dil aur dimaag chura liya hayeee...

Wow riu I don't have words about raghu's dream... it was really beautiful...

Raghu ke pareshani aur usske sawal ka jawab kitne khubsurati se likh hai aapne...

Just loved it dear... dimaag ko nai dil se pucho usse sab yaad hoga hopefully he ll find it out soon...

Thnk you jii...๐Ÿ˜ณ

Raghu neend se bahar aaya aur bechara apne mixed feeling kho samjh nahi paraha hai...

Lekin usse samjh aagaya hai antu khass hai uske liye...aur usse uske bare main sab kuch jana hai...

Aur raghu jaan kee rahega..๐Ÿ˜Ž

Precap is interesting antu jarahi hai apne diary wapas lane ...

Riu this story is really awesome dear please continue... sad track bhi ab kitne sundar tarike se likh the ho ji hum toh uspe bhi fida hai...we know this track is important to proceed this story n you write every situation beautifully dear...

Sowie ji late hogaya unres karne...

koi baat nahin..๐Ÿ˜ณ

Please cont asap...

Thank u ๐Ÿ˜Š

hugss ๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Ajju15s

Pehle nahi ab soch ne lage hai hum,
Zindgi ke har lamhe main teri zarurat si lagti hai...!!
Aww..so beautiful lines..dear..

Thanks to ridz... all sayariss are actually written by her...๐Ÿ˜Š
Now coming to the update..
Fantastic update riu..
Loved it as usual..๐Ÿ‘

Thank u๐Ÿ˜ณ

Antu ne phir apni baaton se raghu ko hurt kar diya..
Jabtak MU khatam nahin hota yee too thora bahut chalta hii rahega!!
Antu dropped her diary..jo raghu ko milgai..yuppie...๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Uske read karne se pahele hi ruku aur aajii aagayi...Raghu was hiding the diary..jaise ki uski koi bahot precious cheez ho..oyee hoyee...๐Ÿ˜‰
Hain too precious hii naa.. akhir apne jaan ki diary hain..๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ณ
Raghu-aajii n ruku's convo was superb...so funny...i loved it..๐Ÿ˜†
Thank you๐Ÿ˜Š
Aajii ne raghu ko antu ko ghoortey hue dekh liya..aww..lekin pooch ne par humara smart raghu kaise bachkey nikal gaya..hehehe..
Woo too hain.. Apna chintua is very smart...๐Ÿ˜†
Rhea knows everything...๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Haan ussey too jaan na hi tha... first chapter mein hi mention kiya huya tha ki sirf rhea koo pata tha antu ki maksad kya hain..
Antu n rhea's convo was so heart touching...mujhe rona aa gaya yaar..๐Ÿ˜ญ
I really like rhea..naughty girl ne itni sensitive baat pe kitni maturity dikhyi...
She is naughty but not immatured re... u will come to know more about that
Yahan mr.raghu English ki wajah se pareshaan hai...angrez gaye angrezi chor gaye hahaha
Raghu finds his name in the diary so many times...hayee..
Raghu kee dialouges...๐Ÿคฃ
Last part...raghu's dream...oh God...๐Ÿ˜ณ
I wish ke yeh dream true hota..
You described raghu's dream so beautifully..i loved it...
Poor raghu..use har jagah..antu hi nazar aa rahi hai...
Jii haan... ussey charon taraf sirf antu dikh raha hain..๐Ÿคฃ
Mera raghu to gaya kaam se use to pyaar ho gaya..
yeda gaya kaam se...๐Ÿ˜†
Interesting precap...
Sorry for late comments...
I really love this story...please continue it dear...vo kyaa hai na ab humaari lyf mein aap aur aap ki rantara stories ki zarurat si lagti hai..๐Ÿ˜ณ
Love yaa...*hugss* dear...

HUgss!!๐Ÿค—

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sanjinimala

Loved the banner as usual ๐Ÿ˜›
Pehle nahi ab soch ne lage hai hum,
Zindgi ke har lamhe main teri zarurat si lagti hai...!!!
Wow! Beautiful saying. Ye line ne merey dil ko chu liya!

Yee meri friend ridz nee likh hain.. she always posted bang on killer sayaris.
Raghu's dialogue were superb โญ๏ธ
Angrez chaley Gay,angrezi chor Gaya...hehe I loved this
Its true in some fact... English man moved out from our country long time ago but still we are holding onto their language.. even most of us fluent in english rather than our own dialect.. But still.. fir bhi dil hain hindusthani...๐Ÿ˜†
Raghu scratching his head all the time...so cute Raghu,tum sar khujatey raho I'll drool over you
even me 2...chal sanju sath mein droll karte hain..
Yeda hai tu Raghu! Pagal kahi ka..tumey nai patah tumey pyaar ho raha dheerey dheerey.
Haan yee too sahi kahan aap nee...๐Ÿ˜ณ
Ria you described yeda's dream perfectly yaar,very nice
Seeing his name in the diary he was surprised.
Gaali di hongee hehe I loved it
Thx๐Ÿ˜ณ
Conversation of the trio was fabulous! Raghu hiding the diary inside his shirt..hehe cute
Raghu maharaj go and find out uss diary me likha kiya hai...apney langotia yaar machmach ko dhoond budhu! Dil ko kaabu me kar aur patah lagau uss diary me kiya...silly billy!
MM koo bulayega too woo aur bhi confuse kar dega ussey...
Rhea knows everything I guess,and I'm sure she'll be a great help to Antara.
I'm wondering jab sach saamney aayega toh rantara kiya karengay fir?
I really wanna see Antara eloping with Raghu to an isolated place...can you imagine how romantic that can be? Oops...may aaj kal kuch zyada sochne lagi Hun,nai? Silly billy me!
@bold.. Main jyada too kuch nahin kahe sakti abhi... But for ur assurance... Aaap ki yee manokamna abasya poori hogi balike!!๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ณ
Ria,I enjoyed the update very much. Hats off darling,keep writing and continue to entertain.
Lots of love and hugs to you my chamkili!

Hugss...๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: RaNtara4vr

Wow wow wow...Ria...๐Ÿ‘...

Main kya kahoon...๐Ÿ˜Š...its awesome, outstanding n as i mentioned b4 a MASTER PIECE...๐Ÿ˜Ž...
d way u have described na...i was totally lost n in awe.....
Thank you ji..๐Ÿ˜†

Pheww Girl...u totally throw surprises...in d updates...d thing which doesnt cross our mind or thoughts easily...๐Ÿ˜Š...HATS OFF to u Yaar...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ...

Coming to d update...
Raghu is confused with his own thoughts...bechara...merry-go-round ki tarah gumme ja raha hai...aur gum-ghum-ke waapas same point pe aa raha hai...Koi solution nahi dikh raha hai use......hawww...Poor Raghu...Antu ka kaisa asar hai uspe...samaj nahi paa raha......
Bechara yede koo paheli baar aise feelings aa rahe hain naa.. iss liye thora confuse hain.. don't worry dhire dhire sab samajh aa jayega!!!๐Ÿ˜ณ
yay......Raghu found Antu's Dairy...but yeh kya.....yeh toh poori ki poori angrezi mein hai...๐Ÿ˜ฒ...bechara Raghu...๐Ÿ˜”...
...yaaar kam-se-kam kuch lines toh Hindi mein hoti...use kuch toh hindi padne ko toh milti...๐Ÿ˜†...๐Ÿ˜›...(.i remmembrd "Sajda..." here...in dat Antu had written d Diary both in English n Hindi...just a thought crossing my overthinking mind...๐Ÿ˜Š...)...
Sajda mein woo diary nahin tha... woo antu koo poem aur sayari kaa book tha... jahan pee woo poems aur sayaris likhta tha joo wo apne life kee special person koo dedicate karta tha.. iss liye woo english aur hindi dono mein tha.. aur raghu koo agar itni jaldi sab pata chal jata too story to khatam hoo jati naa..๐Ÿ˜†

itne mushkil k baad...toh use kholne ko mili...aftr chupaoing from Aaji-Rukku..๐Ÿ˜‰...n Niptafaoing dat Dayan's work...๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿผ...
...but stiil he flipped over d pages...to find something atleast... in vague hope......n He DID find his name...๐Ÿ˜Š...n e1 Dayan's...(n also d dried TULIP flower...)...๐Ÿ˜ณ...
Yup. he found his name but it anticipaated his mode much more than before.๐Ÿ˜›
Beautifully explained Riuu...๐Ÿ‘...i thought Antu had scribbled deir names in anger...but wen u mentioned d water droplets...i got dat it was her tears...๐Ÿ˜”......
YUP...

Raghu cud sense dat e1 in writing she might have most probably expressd only contempt...but still he cant find d reason.....
True
n d last part...wow yaar..๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ...truly-truly amazing...๐Ÿ‘...what an imagination...he is totally into Antu...๐Ÿ˜Š...
he can c only her n her...everywhere...at every instant...b it in d field scene..or d dream part...he just seeks her yaar...โค๏ธ...WOW...just par AWESOMENESS n EXCELLENCE....
d dialogues...d scenes...Totally Mind-blowing..๐Ÿ‘...u rock Girlie..๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ...wow... its just indescribable....Wow... Raghu pulling her close aftr d convo...๐Ÿ˜ณ...n waking up with jerk...๐Ÿ˜ฒ...after her haunting laughter...๐Ÿ˜•...God it was totally like he witnessed a Nightmare....๐Ÿค“...
Thank you ji... glad that u liked the scene๐Ÿ˜ณ

Ok Riuu...gtg nw...i think mujhe ab aise hi kistho mein review dene padega...no choice left now coz of d hectic schedule...๐Ÿ˜”......
Its okk๐Ÿ˜ณ
...isme sirf Raghu k views cover kiye...๐Ÿ˜Š...baaki logo k agle waale mein doongi...๐Ÿ˜ƒ.
Baap re aur bhi hain?!!๐Ÿ˜†
..bye tc...Yedi Behna....n Hugs...๐Ÿค—... n Lots of Love n Kisses...โค๏ธ...n dher saare RaNtara Thoughts...๐Ÿ˜ณ...muahhh...Luv ya...โค๏ธ..tc...n Keep Writing...๐Ÿ˜Š...๐Ÿ˜ƒ...โค๏ธ...

Bye and HUGSS!! ๐Ÿค—
and yup.. u still have three prev chapters to review i think๐Ÿ˜†
Edited by ifians - 10 years ago
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Chapter 25

Tujh sang bair lagaya aisa
Raha na main phir apne jaisa

Part One

Antara's POV...

Rhea's dumb wet eyes were fixed towards mine as I described her about the day, the darkest phase of my life, the pain the anger I went through and still bearing inside. For the first time after that incident I at last opened up to someone. Rhea didn't make a single conversation in the middle. She just continued to listen patiently, wisely which was totally unexpected from a chirpy 15 years old girl like her. Pappa used to tell me that rhea was not at all that childish I used to think of her, she was much more matured. I guess pappa's experienced eyes were right again. Some silent tears were flowing down her big round eyes. I gave a break to my words and wiped them off from her chicks. She shuddered for a while by my touch. as if like her trance broke for a while. As I held her shoulder and gave a concerned look to her she looked towards me with composed face. "Then..." she just asked me in her firm voice asking for me to continue.

"Just leave it rhea... There is nothing to know much more about the matter u go and take some rest..." I said to avoid her curiosity but I forgot that she was just stubborn like me. "Di..." the maturity in her voice stunned me again. "Please!!" She asked with such authority that I couldn't deny her anymore. I smiled a little and stroke her chicks lightly. Finally I spoke about the turbulent days I faced after that blast, "Cornel uncle and Mr pradhan knew how powerful DM's connections were. So they decided to keep everything confidential, as they kept my identity hidden from media. They knew that some powerful terrorist groups of kashmir were under DM's coverage. The terrorists groups which had huge connections all over the valley area and army men were searching for them for more than ten years. Still Cornel uncle and Mr Pradhan started their work. Somehow we had to prove that Daya Naik's assign Raghunath Naik was present at the shrinagar near the spot of blast at the accurate date. There was not any record in railways, bus or Air services about Raghu's migration to shrinagar. They assumed that they might have used some private plane or car. So we started to search at nearby air bases about the private planes and at the check posts about private cars. From a check post near shrinagar we get some information about a car which was from maharastra aka Mumbai. We got the number of that car and description from video security camera and send to the mumbai's branch of CBI for further investigation. Mr Pradhan searched at the hotels and lodges in shrinagar. He checked each and every hotels thoroughly, the register books, security camera, rooms, asked the stuffs but no clue about raghu being anywhere. Then mr pradhan spread their informers around the shrinagar area. After some days one informer brought us news about him. There was a particular area at the outskirt of city where a person identified raghu. MR Pradhan and cornel uncle immediately reached at the area. They meet the person who told the informer about raghu. They got the information about a house nearby. As soon as they reached there they found the house locked. They broke the lock but didn't find a single thing inside. There was nothing rather than empty rooms totally cleaned and wiped off. As if like no one lived there forever. Cornel uncle and Mr Pradhan searched each and every inch of that house but nothing could be found, a fingerprint or something else.. just nothing! " I stopped for a while to take some breath. How they were always one step forward from us. They wiped each and every single clue before we could reach there. "Di.. What happened to that car.. which you were talking about?!" rhea asked me. i couldn't afford the crocked smile of my face. "There was not a single record about that particular private car, neither in mumbai nor in delhi. As if the car doesn't even exist. CBIs were still in search for the car but they couldn't find even some parts in these three months." I informed her with a big sigh. "So that means, u didn't get any clue?!" Rhea asked. "Not like that... After searching in each and every possible way we just found a last hope. Actually the thought came into cornel uncle's mind.If Raghu was there he must have hired some shikara's for transportation on daal lake. The shikara owners of daal lake was quite known to him. He went and talked to the union of shikara owners and got the information from the union leader that whose shikaras were on the board on the day of blast. He talked to all except two as they were not present. Their names were Ansari and Hamid. They went to ansari's living place at first. He leaved all alone at a lonely place near gulmarg. The shikara owner union leader also said that Hamid and Ansari didn't come for quite few days. So cornel uncle thought there must be something wrong. When they went to Ansari's little cottage they discovered his 2 days old butchered dead body there. Someone killed him brutally cutting his throat. No murder weapon was found nearby. The place around the cottage was quite lonely so no one could detect the smell which was coming from the house. Our last hope was Hamid. But even mr pradhan was sure that they would also shove him away from the path. They had already cleared all the clue and witnesses. Hamid's wife said that he had gone to his village for some days. They reached their village and came to know that Hamid never reached there. They searched for hamid like crazy at the areas nearby shirnagar and his village. Just before I came to Mumbai I heard news from cornel uncle that they discovered Hamid's body from the forest near Pahelgam. Unfortunately might be they were the shikara owners who evicted raghu to the houseboat and fetched him back to the shore after finishing his work. They might identify raghu and their statement could prove that raghunath naik was present at the very spot when the blast occurred. So they already finished them off before our reaching." I stopped at last. I didn't know how I was able to describe everything. Rhea was listening to me all stunned. Again it took a huge moment for me to compose myself. "Only I knew he was there cause I saw him. But no one would believe me.. cause my lone witness wouldn't work over the several people of basti who stated at raghu and daya naik's favor. Cause according to them Raghu was allpresent at Mumbai during the time of blast." I stated as my voice hardened remembering about the day. That's how the evil people behaved always. Looking at him at that moment I couldn't really detect that he was actually some mercenary who was carrying bomb. "Now, u can understand rhea how dangerous they are?! That's why I didn't tell anyone about anything. I came here to get some clue which could expose DM's illegal work in front of the whole world. But I have to take every step carefully cause if that woman come to know even a bit about my intensions then she would destroy everything. I don't care about myself. But I couldn't afford to c u all in danger. I lost my whole family in that blast now I don't have powers to lose anyone else." I had to stop again as my voice chocked. I couldn't look towards rhea as my eyes were moist again. I was just staring blankly towards the wall while saying everything to rhea. Somehow I again succeeded to suck my overflowing tears and continue our conversation, "That's why I even have to hide the truth about momma, pappa and noor appa's deth. I told u all that they met a road accident and died. I didn't know rhea how I managed to tell that but the time I stepped inside the basti I kept my everything behind, my life, my dreams, my wish everything. I had only one wish now, to send all of them behind the bars and expose them in front of the whole world. I don't know how I will do this but I have to do that rhea. Cause momma pappa and appa could never get justice if I stay silent and back off now." My eyes went blur and weary as silent tears made their way out at last. Hiding my face between in palm I stated in chocked exhausted trembled voice. "I always pretended to be happy and normal in front of you people. But trust me rhea the pain was like eating me up and engulfing inside. Whenever I remember that how close I am to those murderers, breathing in the same air in which they were breathing I felt disgust towards myself. I felt helpless as I couldn't do anything till now. The fire was burning me everyday rhea. U didn't each and every night I cry out my heart in the lonely corner of this house when you people were in deep sleep. It hurts rhea.. it hurts really bad..." I couldn't say anything as the tears choked and suck up my voice. my palm felt hot in the overflowing tears. I knew that I couldn't control them when I would be opening up to someone from the very first time. That's why I kept everything locked inside me and didn't tell to anyone.

I felt rhea's hand touching my shoulder and squeezing them. slowly I removed my plam from my face and looked up to her. The shattered worried expression of her choco brown eyes made me feel bad. I quickly brushed away my tears and hugged her tight. She hugged me back. I was not crying anymore rather than I was feeling light after telling her everything. The suffocation was so hard to take. Di!!..." rhea uttered slowly from my shoulder. "I am sorry. We were not at that time in Basti. U know I was coming back from shrinagar on the very day and I was in train. Even mom and poppsy went to Kolkata at nani's place. U know di on the way an unknown eerie feeling was bothering me always. I didn't know why I felt like something bad was going to happen." She said in low voice still burring herself in my chest. "Now I really feel bad. I have to be at the basti at that time. If I was there I would surely tell the police that raghu was not present in basti." She said confidently. I smiled gently and lifted her up from my chest. Cupping her face I stated looking into her innocent eyes, "No rhea I am glad that you stayed outside of the matter. They were so dangerous people rhea, I want you all to keep far away from them..." I said worriedly. Lifting my face from my chest she looked to me, "Di u know I can never doubt that dayan is involved in the blast. We all know how mean she is actually. But that janglu?!!... u know di, I admit he is rude and a blind follower of Dayan but he is also so concerned about basti people though he doesn't show off and just do his work silently. It's true that he is accused of breaking so many people's joints and bones but it is also true that he didn't killed anyone among them. Raghu... he kept the bomb in houseboat which took away their life." rhea's eyes looked shocked and unbelievable. "U believe or not but that's the truth rhea. He was the one who put the bomb." I stated coldly. "Di..." rhea squeezed my hand. "Apart for mom and popssy you are the only person whom I believe most in the world. I believe in ur each and every word di." Her utter faith really gave me strength. "Rhea please only one req... whatever I told u..." she couldn't let me finish and smiled, "I get it di.. and don't worry I won't say anything to anyone!!" She assured. "Now tell me where did u kept my diary?!" I asked her with a smile. "I kept it in ur bag di." She informed. My bag?!! Suddenly a little alert tune echoed in my head I don't know why. I didn't noticed the diary because I only checked the bad properly before dance class in afternoon. I quickly moved towards the bag and opened the chain. I searched for the diary in my bag but I didn't get that. "Rhea u sure u kept that here?!" I asked her. "Yeah di..." She said. I again searched the bag inch by inch. "God where is it?!!" a worry started to rose in me as my instinct started to give alert signal. "What happened Di?!" Rhea rushed at my side as she sensed something wrong in my voice. "The diary.. it's not here!!" I said in chocked voice. "What?!!" Rhea looked towards me with shocked eyes. I felt my hands were getting cold. Loosing something like that wouldn't be good for me. "If it's not here.. then where it is?!!" Panick was clear in my voice. "Di but I kept it in your bag last night.. I swear!!" rhea said from my side. I somehow managed to get a hold on myself and think properly that what to do next. I and rhea started to search the room and explored each and every inch and corner of the but it seemed like vanished in thin air. Each and every moment my hands were becoming cold and fear was rising in my mind. The cold wave rushed down my spine as I understood that it was not anywhere in the house. Stooping our desperate mad search I thought harder and harder holding my head that where I could keep that diary. I was always so conscious about the thing I couldn't keep that at any random places. "Di..?!!" rhea's words broke my trail of thoughts. I hold my temple as it was paining so bad due to frustration and the panic. "I wander... Perhaps that diary fell down from your bag anyhow?!!" She probed. Her words sparked in my head. My eyes widened as I remembered the moment in Naik Sadan when I collided with Raghu. My bag fell down and all things were scattered outside. I put everything inside but the diary?? "Oh noo!!" a slow panic stricken whip came out my lips as I jumped up from the bed. "what happened?!" Rhea asked me with worried eyes. My head was almost about to spine. How could I be so careless?!! Just how?!! I stroke my own head in utter disbelief. "Di tell me naa.." rhea said with anticipated voice. "It was there!!..." I uttered in stumbled voice, "In Naik Sadan..." I managed to finish the sentence anyhow. "WHAT?!!... Naik Sadan?!!.. wait.. but how?!!" Rhea looked so frustrated. I briefly described the little accident. "Oh God... That means..." she hold her mouth with wide eyes. I shank on the bed feeling clueless devastated. "Di if they get that diary..." Rhea asked with worried eyes and voice from my side. "If they get that thing rhea then everything would be spoiled!! They will know everything just you came to know!!" I stated helplessly. Was it going to be end? My all efforts, all determination, and plans everything was going to be spoiled just for a silly mistake?

After a long period of time I started to gather my courage. I couldn't let it end so soon. I just couldn't!! For the whole three months I was building up the ground for Daya naik's destruction and how could I leave everything so easily?! I had to try at least before the matter got worse. If there was still a five percent chance I had to take up the chance. Only if god is a bit merciful and no one noticed the diary... then I still had some hopes left. My jaw hardened in determination as I sternly stood up from the bed holding my dupatta."Di!!" rhea called me from with surprise experiencing my sudden mode swing. As I arranged my dupatta rhea understood that something was cooking up in my brain. "Di.. what are you doin..." she asked with caution. Arranging my duppata properly I answered her with a stern determined voice, "I was going to bring back my diary before it could get into other's hand!".

Rhea observed me for some moment with a big O shaped mouth and wide eyes. "Di are u serious?!!" She asked me in unbelievable voice. "Yes I am damn serious rhea." I informed her. "Whaaa... I mean what?!! Are u mad?!!" Rhea quickly grabbed my hand. "Listen Rhea..." I hold onto her and said, "I know I looked like idiot... Going to trespass inside demon's den but trust me it's the only way left now." I informed her. "Di hold on a second... Just tell me how do u going to go inside Dayan's House?!!...Just... Okk come with me.." Rhea kept her words unfinished and grabbed my hand. He fetched me to the front balcony. It was almost 11:30 pm at night and the whole basti street was empty. Mammu and mami already informed a while ago that they wouldn't be able to come back at the night as they requested to spend the night with them. "Just take a look di..." she pointed towards the front gate of Naik sadan where two double sized guards were on duty with their heavy rifle in arms. Twisting there moustache, they were moving there alert eyes to the streets of basti. "Look at those two elephants Bhangu and Mangu and look at their arms. if they see you trespassing inside Naik Sadan they would just shot you at the spot!" Rhea said with anticipated voice. I observed them in the dim halogen light of the corridor and my eyes moved to the main door of building. "And there might be a security camera at the doorstep. There are millions of treasures inside the building they couldn't be so light about the security." I murmured. "So what now?!!" Rhea asked me expectantly. My eyes moved towards the stairs at the front which was connected to balcony. If I somehow managed up to the balcony there must be a door through the balcony through which I could go inside. That's how I could even avoid the security camera. "Rhea there must be a way through that balcony naa.." I asked her looking towards the spot hopefully. She looked confused again. I told her about my plan. "Yeah you are right. But the problem is that the Janglu stays over there. How can u trespass inside avoiding him?! Basti people used to say that no one can move inside the Naik Sadan if Raghu is there. Security camera can be failed but not Raghunath Naik!" Rhea informed. I looked at the side of balcony where raghu was supposed to live. I observed for a while and didn't notice any movement out there. "I think he is sleeping by now... May be I can take the opportunity." I said. "Di it doesn't matter if he is sleeping or wide awake. We heard that he can even sense in drowsy state!!" Rhea said in thoughtful face. "I know rhea!!.." I sighed heavily. "But I have to take the risk and the balcony is only option for me now. But first of all.. I have to take care of those guards at the gate." I said looking towards the heavyweight guards. I saw bhangu and magu looked everywhere around. Before their eyes could get to out balcony me and rhea sat down hiding our selves behind the railing. It wouldn't be good for us if they caught us watching over them at that odd time pf night. Through the holes of railing, I watched over them. They brought out two bottles of alcohols from their pocket. After some moment, I saw them sipping from the bottle watching cautiously everywhere. "Now they started having their daily doze..." rhea said from side. I prayed hard to god so that they consumed that much alcohol which could make them unconscious for a while. The alcohol had already got into their head and they were stumbling and laughing around. "Eee Bhangu... Jyada mat pii aaj fir se... Lurak jayega... Hicupp!!!" Mangu said with his stumbled voice blended with sarcastic smile. "Arey chor na mangu... Waisey bhi Daya Mai kee ghar mein too makhiyan bhi nahin ghus pati hain. Chor kya ghusengey?!... AUr upar see raghubhai too hain..." Bhangu said and sipped another doze. Just after some moment with a stumbled laugh, both of them crashed on the stairs of front gate and soon dozed off. I breathed in anticipation as o understood that I got an golden opportunity. We both stood up slowly. "Listen rhea... I am going now.. If I won't come back by tomorrow morning call the police. Ok?!" I informed her and rushed downstairs without wasting a moment. "But di... Hey.." Rhea's voice faded as I came outside the empty road. wrapping my duppata around my face I looked around to see of the road is clear. Then I slowly approached towards Naik Sadan bare footed. I kept off my shoes so that it couldn't make sound. As I came near Naik sadan I saw bhangu and mangu sleeping unconsciously on the stairs snoring like trumpets. My heart was pounding like hell. I never do such kinds of thing in my whole life and never imagined to do. But it was so late to back off. I tiptoed on the step. Bhangu hovered a bit in sleep with groan. I stood there frozen holding my breath. Bhangu just tossed at other side but didn't wake up. I noticed the key peeping out from his pocket which I grabbed promptly but cautiously. Avoiding them I reached at the last step and opened the lock cautiously without making a sound. As I pushed the gate slowly I waited for long. Each and every moment my breath felt heavier and my heartbeat was going faster in anticipation. I was afraid that the sound of my heartbeat could wake up those two elephants but they seemed in deep sleep. I slowly closed the gate but didn't lock. I looked arround the dark premises. There was only a dim light near the main door. Avoiding the main door I reached for the stairs and tiptoed up. My each and every stps seemed heavier than before. Holding my breath I was watching towards the dark side of balcony where raghu suppose to live. If he woke up anyhow.. I don't know how I will manage. Sometimes I was looking around cautiously and keeping tab on unconscious bhangu and mangu. It was the longest time I ever took to just cross some mere step of a stairs. But seriously, each and every step seemed full of obstacle. At last I moved up at the dark balcony. I looked cautiously and observed Raghu's side which I once observed from the side balcony of my room. Every belonging to him seemed still and motionless in drkness. I observed the abstract fig in darkness lying above the cot. For some five munities I waited there but there was no movement. Convincing myself finally that Raghu was sleeping soundly I moved at the other side of balcony slowly. I didn't take much time to find the door. Slowly, opening the door I peeped inside. Looking here and there I slowly made my way inside. with measured steps I went downstairs along the dark stairs looking everywhere to c if the path was clear. Honestly I was really tensed up to some extent. I felt my throat dried and the cold wave running down my spine time to time was making my worry rise. The house seemed silent. As I slowly moved down, I saw some very dim lights from 1st floor passage were lighting up the darkness a bit. The collision happened on the ground passage somewhere near the front door. As I at last stepped at the ground floor I took some quick but light steps towards the spot and started to search for the diary in the dim light. With the help of my hands and little visible eyesight cause of the dim light I searched the area allover but I didn't get the diary anywhere. My worry rose again. If it was not anywhere near did that mean someone get the diary?! I sucked my another anticipated breath and thought to give a last try.

Part two at below... Please scroll down to read.

Edited by ifians - 10 years ago
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Part Two

Raghu's POV...

As i saw the blur figure going inside the balcony door, I smirked in the darkness. Sleep seemed far on that night after I had that weird dream about antara. Closing my eyes, I was thinking about the dream and a little drowsiness caught me. At that moment I heard a very low footstep on the stairs. I quickly snapped open my eyes. I heard the light footstep coming up. The low sound was almost invisible but I could get some unknown mysterious vibe. Who was approaching up at that time of night?! Some trespasser and that's also in our house?!! Hmmm... The person didn't seem known to this house otherwise no one dared to move inside the house like that. And what that idiot bhangu and mangu doing at the gate must be crashed due to alcohol. I stood motionlessly on the cot and waited for the trespasser to move up. I saw a fig standing at the corner of stairs with the veil wrapped around her face. That veil covered her face but looking at the height and posture it seemed like... I almost stopped a huge gasp as I recognized the fig instantly. She was the trespasser?!! Damn it I could never imagine that. as she twitched her face backward a bit, the dim light of face fell straight on her worried frowned face clearing my view. I didn't have any doubt that the idiot girl was none other than but the great miss antara kaul!! What the heck she was doing in Naik Sadan at that time at night. Why was she invoking like a thief?!! Did she even know that what would be her condition if someone watched her moving around. Antara's eyes moved towards my direction. I knew she couldn't watch me clearly due to the darkness. I didn't moved as single inch of my fiber and stuck my eyes to her. keeping her hand over her chest she looked towards me with an anticipated frown might me trying to detect that I was awake or not. As her anticipated hazel moved to my every inch I again felt my heart thumping in my cage and breath choking again. I remembered about the dream some moment ago and the moment seriously gave me several goose bumps. Whenever she checked me out, even with her angry gaze it felt so different.

After some moment when she looked quite satisfied antara hesitantly turned back and slowly moved to the other way. I didn't know whenever I saw her going away from me it pinched inside. But at that moment I was more curious that what she was going to do. Strange, she trespassed inside our house like a thief and I was not doing anything rather than watching over her silently.

When she was not in balcony anymore I let out the diary from the underneath of our pillow. Somehow, I deep inside me I assumed that she came to take that diary. I didn't know why it was hard for me to imagine that she had any wrong intensions. I didn't know where I developed the feeling even after out 24 hours fire cracker encounter.. but there was something about her which always made me feel that she might had attitude but she was not wrong person. I sighed and grabbed my shirt nearby. Putting that up pushing the diary inside I moved down the stairs. She might have come inside the house securely but I had to keep my eyes on her. She might have get caught by others and if kaka got her then no one could save her. I stood silently at the above step seeing her going the stairs slowly. I waited for her to reach at the ground floor. as she reached there and moved towards the passage I came down swiftly without making a sound. I saw her looking for something desperately on the floor. It cleared my doubt that she was there for that diary. Cause she collided with me at the spot around where she was moving in vague hope in her face. I observed her mad search silently from the dark corner of stairs. I chuckled silently and tried to think why she was being so reckless about just a diary. She could just ask for it when she would come next time. Why she was taking such risks?!!Then I remembered the photo and dried tulip flower, my wiped out names on the pages. There was something about that diary... the way she was searching for the little thing it showed her possessiveness over the thing. She didn't want that to get into others hand. I saw the disappointment in her gloomy face when she couldn't find her precious thing. I didn't know why I felt bad seeing her sad face in that dim light of passage. After some moment I saw again a little hope flashed in her eyes and she started to search through the passage. Nodding my head and letting out a big sigh I moved towards her. She was busy in checking the ground seating down and didn't notice me approaching. I pocked on her shoulder gently bending down. Her feature jerked uo suddenly and froze at the spot. I could feel the cold wave ran through her under my fingertips. She stood there idolized for almost 5 mins. I curiously observed her every postures still keeping my hand gently on her shoulder. I heard the sound of her deep gasp and she snapped back to me quickly as the cover fell down from her face. she looked up to me with her wide hazels. So big it was that her eyelashes were almost about to touch the skin. She seemed breathless as she found me there. Her parted lips looked pale as well as her face lost the blood. There was fear; anticipation in her eyes as well as it looked so innocent and somehow childish that it melted something inside me. I thought to counterattack her with some of my obvious questions but I really forgot that observing her round eyes. Seriously, I never saw such an innocent cute thief in my entire life. I felt warm inside so sudden that a light chuckle came out my lips as I observed her face in the dim light. She was still in state of shock. I bend down and sat cross-legged at her front keeping glued my eyes to her big round shocked hazels. Her eyes automatically followed mine as her lips already made a big round O. I didn't know why I couldn't move away my eyes from hers. We were watching over us for a really long moment without saying anything. a slow breath came out from her chest s her pale lips trembled a bit. I twitched my head a bit curiously and snapped my fingers in front of her eyes. Her feature got jerked up and her eyeballs quickly moved to my fingers closed to her eyes. at the next moment it again moved back to my face while I threw her a questioning frown. She seemed out of shock as her face hardened again. she quickly jumped up from the ground arranging her dupatta and threw that hard disgusted look towards my face. I sighed heavily looking away. Jhansi ki rani was back in action again. I stood up from the ground while she avoided to look towards me anymore. Her hardened face was looking here and there to avoid me. Scratching my head I stated, "Waisey... Tu kya chorni ban nee ki training lee rahi hain?!.. Kya hain kii first try mein apun logon kaa ghar mein ghusneka nahin tha!!" I chuckled at my foolish statement. She threw her fiery full of anger gaze to mine and I gulped. Again she moved her gaze from my face and stood silently thinking something hard. I heard a disappointed sigh from her as she closed her eyes and it felt like she was trying hard to compose herself. As she lifted her lids again I saw the sadness covering the warm hazels. She looked around the ground for a last time and then finally moved her step forward to go. "Oye!!..." I caught her hand instantly idolizing her to the spot again. "Tere koo bhagne kii itni jaldi kyun raheta hain hunesha?! Train choot rahi hain kya?!" as I asked her in sarcastic voice she looked back throwing her amused and as well as angry looks to me. with her neck's jerk, the parts of her thick long hair scattered over her one shoulder. Seeing that, a slow but deep sigh escaped from my chest. with full on anger she tried to get her palm out from mine. I just chuckled seeing her vain effort and tightened my grip dragging her hand more towards me. She looked towards me with unbelievable eyes and I continued to observe her state with a hidden smirk. Somehow her angered gaze didn't affect me anymore. I had to admit that I never imagined that someone could express anger even so mesmerizingly like her! I was irritated with those abrupt thought before, but they didn't affect me anymore. Her hard gaze continued to observe my face. I was trying to detect that what was cooking on her brain. The girl was not someone who would leave the matter so easily. I still remembered, hoe in kashmir she managed to escape from my grip. I was a bit confused by her long silence when suddenly she let out her hairpin with her free hand and before I could understand anything she quickly pocked that on my hand which was holding hers. The pinch was really harsh. "ouch!!" I winced and jerked my hand. She got out of my hand and rushed through the passage. I immediately followed her with my quick steps and soon she was at my reach. I caught her hand and pulled her with my all force. She couldn't resist my heavy pool and her back bumped on me. Before she could escape again I locked my hand around her tightly. She wiggled madly to get herself free from my clutch. I just stood steal with a light smirk seeing her vein efforts. She knew she couldn't get herself free but as she was always, wouldn't leave it so easily. As she wiggled more her body contracted with mine and didn't know why the strange feeling arose inside me. I never knew that she would feel so soft and delicate to my strength. When her back skin brushed along my chest through my unbuttoned shirt my breath almost stopped. My fingers seemed to be grooving on her arms. as she try harder and harder in vague hope my hands automatically got tighter and tighter on her crashing her delicacy. The feeling was actually damn good!! I was enjoying captivating her in my possession just like the moment I captured her forcefully in kashmir. I still didn't know that why it was always so fun to posses her under my force. Slowly my face was moving closer to her long silk hair which was jerking due to her movements and scattering its unique aromatic smell. Her swan like curved neck got into my eyes, so tender the skin seemed. Some hidden instinct in me pushed me hard towards that delicate skinned curve. She was a bit saturated at last and taking heavy breaths. Might be she was exhausted. My lips were just inches apart from me and they were moving uncontrollably to reduce the distance. I didn't know what was happening but I couldn't even stop myself from doing that. Just I was about to touch her skin with my lips antara snapped back to me throwing her hard look. I stopped abruptly at the middle. Her angry eyes changed a bit startled for a while, perhaps cause of our closeness. She was panting heavily and her heavy breaths were directly hitting my face. Her breath was giving some kind of chills in my nerve causing me to breathe simultaneously. Both of our heartbeat was so loud that they seemed reflecting along the silent room. There was something very strange between us, some unknown kind of pull which was overpowering all those bitterness, conflicts, confusion and conflicts between us. A very dangerous pull which was calling me! My eyes were moving all over to her face so close to mine. Her gentle waves of breath through her chest reflecting the trembling flares of her tender lips, my eyes stuck for a while to that. Damn!! They were beautiful in one word. I never noticed that thoroughly. Slightly pinkish color with natural gloss curved so tenderly and perfectly over her pitch milk baby skin. I found it difficult to breath. With a lot more effort at last I moved my gaze to her eyes. They were not startled and confused anymore like before. The sheer hardness was back again masking all the tenderness. But even that hardness had some attraction which could stick your eyes to her. I silently continued to observe the reflecting emotions of her mirror like eyes, from hardness to flickering fiery anger which soon turned into pure rage. I never saw someone to define rage so beautifully; generously through eyes. My breath was already stopped. Her eyes had such captivating power over anyone. Before the fire of her eyes could burn me the rage turned into deep sadness. Her eyes shattered like some helpless feeble dear who was chosen to suicide on her own will. Pain which always masked the glow of her eyes, which made me confused, curtained her heart from me, and engulfed her round orbs, pain which always pinched bad inside me and remind me that I failed to find the reason behind that. Something glowed at the corner of her eyes, over the canvass of her shattered dark eyeballs. Unknowingly, a deep breath escaped my chest also a slight confusion occurred in my mind. My hands were moving up abruptly to touch the glowing spot at her eyes corner. Just my fingers reached up to her chin she squeezed her eyes tightly breaking the connection and snapped back her face looking away from me. Confused, started for a while I continued to observe her hardened jaw and felt her feature stiffening in my hold, again going back to her protective shell of anger. I looked away from her face and sighed in disappointment. Again those unknown emotions of her eyes caught me into trap, leaving me empty. God knows when it would end. I still didn't lose my grip on her. As I concentrated back on her she was still fuming on my hold. Tough thing she was, never going to give up. With a smirk I leaned near her ear. As my breath hit her skin I felt her cringing in my hold with a hateful sound of hissing. I ignored that however and started to say, "Teri kushti khatam hoo gayi hoo too ab apun ki baat sunegi?!" I asked with slight playful voice. My words did strange effect in her. again she started to push me away with her whole strength and she seemed mad at that moment. When she couldn't set herself free her sharp nail dug and scratched over my arms. "Ouch!!.." I groaned for the 2nd time in that night. I couldn't hold myself anymore and ended up pinning antara to the wall behind with my full force. Imprisoning her wrist in my hold and pressing them hard on the wall. I was literally mad and ferocious at that moment as my head was boiled up by her action. I pinned her so hard with the wall that my chest almost crushed hers. I could again feel that how delicate her frame was compared to my strength. I was gazing towards her with my boiled up head. I was sure my eyes were mad at that moment. But Antara didn't seem a bit bothered. With her full on attitude angry gaze she gazed back to me. We both were panting heavily throwing angry gaze to each other. I could feel her chests violent ups and downs under my and again it was again rising the strange urge in me, to shink myself more and more into her tenderness and feel her heartbeat against me. Before it could go out of control I shoved away those stupid thoughts and concentrated on her.

"Kya bey... Kabhi pani marta hain.. Too kabhi kharochti hain... Mere koo samjh kya rakha hain tu haan?!" I fumed to her. Her hard expression didn't change a bit. "choroo mujhe..." she at last said something, through her hard yet soft fuming voice. "Nahin chortaa kya kar lega?!!" I pressed her hands more tightly. "Dekho tum..." She was about to burst on me but I stopped her. "Eee awaz niche kar samjhi... Log jaag jayengey... Tere dimag ka screw dhila hain kya?!.. Choron kee tarah ghus rahi hain ghar mein.. Koi pakar leta too?!" I burst on her keeping my voice as low as possible. "Naa too main chor hoon aur naa hii kuch chori karne ayi hoon.." she answered back with same attitude. "Acha?!!" I rolled my eyes in disbelief, "Raat koo aise bin bole chupke see kissi kee ghar mein koi ghus taa hain too ussey kya kahete hain?!... Tere dictionary mein koi aur naam hain kya?!!" I asked her again. "Dekho.. Tum mujhe kya samjhte hoo .. chor yaa fir joo bhi I don't care.. Main yahan apni cheez wapas le ne ayi hoon.. Naa kii tum logon kaa kuch churane.. Tumhare chezon koo too main choona bhi nahin chahti hoon.. Mere hath gandhe ho jayengey!" She said in low harsh tone. Her words were enough to boil my head. "Antara!!" my voice turned harsher unintentionally. "Zor dikha ne see sach nahin badal jata... Galat tarike see kaamaya paisa humesha galat hii hota hain!!!" she said without missing a bit. "CHUP KAR WARNA..." I hissed to shut her down. "Kyun chup rahoon main?!! Aur nahin rahe sakti chup.. Thak gayi hoon.. Dam ghoot ta hain mera!!" her voice suddenly broke up surprising me. I again saw those shiny drops at the corner of her eyes. "Joo karna hain karlo.. Bula loo sab koo yahan pee... Range hatho pakra hain naa tumhe mujhe?! Too ruke kyun hoo?! Saup do mujhe Daya Naik kee hathon... Tum too unke saab khass admi hoo naa... Jao bulaon unhe.. Main nahin darti.. Kyun kii mujhe pata hain main kuch galat nahin kar raahi thi.. Too kyun dar jaon main?!" her firm words dumb me for a while. "Mooh kya dekh rahe hoo mere?! Bulaoo unhe?!" She again said with a slight mocking glint in her voice. I continued to look at her face sternly. Did she even know that what she was saying and what would mai do if she got her?!!

My trance broke as we heard a harsh sound of door. I got the alert signal and quickly looked towards the door. I saw the door of Manohar kaka's room was opening. "Abey kaun hain?!! kaisi awaz aa rahi hain?!!" As I heard manohar kaka's voice i froze at the spot. I quickly glanced towards antara who was gazing towards the door with wide fearful eyes. Turning back she looked towards me and tried to push me hard so that she could run away. Holding onto her tight I again look back to the manohar kaka's room's door. The light was falling out through the dark corridor and I saw manohar kaka's big rpund stomach and parrot nose peeping put from the window. Before his full feature appeared outside, I pressed antara's mouth tightly with my one hand and dragged her quickly to the dark corner on the coverage of wall. Antara fumed and wiggled madly all the way pressing her hard to my chest I hid both of us in the dark. Antara was still fuming on my hold. I tightened my hand around her. "Abey kaun hain vey?!!" I heard kaka's voice and she saturated at last. She twitched her neck towards the back and I saw fear and helplessness in her eyes. Abruptly her eyes met mine. "Shhh..." I hissed to her, "Chatfatana bandh kar... Agar kakka koo pata chal gaya naa too samajhle baj gaayo teri!" I warned her. Her eyes widened in amusement and as well as confusion. She threw me a glance as if I shocked her by my words, she didn't expected me to hide her. I knew she was sure that I would hand over her to manohar kaka. I felt a bit comical looking towards her widened shocked eyes. I blinked towards her gently to give her assurance. I didn't know she was convinced or not but finally she saturated a bit. I heard the sound of another door. "Manohar.. kya huya?!!" a cold wave rushed down my spine. Mai!! Holding onto antara I peeped out the wall. I saw manohar chacha standing just at some distant on the passage keeping his hand on his waist. He was looking towards the 2nd floor passage from where Mai was peeping down. Thank god she was standing at the other side of passage so couldn't see us there. Although the place was dark but the dim light was enough to detect two abstract fig standing on the wall. "Arey bahini niche see awazein aa rahi thi... Maine kissi koo bata karte huye suna." Kaka said. My eyes were fixed on mai and kakka and my hands wrapped around her tighter in repulse. The hold became so tight that my forearm almost shank into her softness. My palm was clasped firmly over her lips. "Awaz aa rahi thi... itne raat koo kaun awaz karega..." Mai said with thoughtful tone. "Arey koi more or less nahin hain mai..." rasika chachi came out from the room and said, "Old age kaa asar hain yee sab. Bure hoo gaye hain naa kaan bajte rahete hain inka.. Koi nahin tha.. arey chalo jii sone.. meri sleeping beauty kharap kar di more or less..." rasika chachi said in irritation scratching her hair. "Arey Tu chup kar naa rasika.." chacha said in irritation. "awaz maine suna tha... koi too hain yahan.." Chacha moved his narrowed eyes all over the hall. "Arey sapna dekha hoga aap ne.,, woo kya kahete hain.. more or less.. haan dreams.. dreams hain sab.. chaliye chaliye.. bahut sleeping aa rahi hain jii!!" chachi pouted. "Tujhe nind aa rahi hain naa too tu jaa andar jaa kee soo jaa... main ek baar tahal kee atta hoon..." Chacha said as he started to move through the passage and on our bad luck he was straightly coming towards us. I felt antara's heart pounding loudly under my arm as well as my. Hiding inside the dark passage we both heard chacha's steps approaching towards us.

Thanks ton for the overwhelming responses and msgs i get from u people.. i am really touched to c the love and appreciation u are giving for this twisting concept.. love u people a lot and without your supposrt i couldn't do anything... sorry... i am a bit busy so couldn't reply to all of ur precious msg.. But read all of them.. thank u love u and muahh...

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Yayy u finally updated yaar
it took ages didnt it??
seriously mereko samj nai araha ke mei kya kahu tujhe..
i am running out of flipping words urghh
the starting made me cry so much.. i look like a pink zombie right now aahh๐Ÿ˜ญ mereko rona agaya.
rhea is so understanding yaar
she was shocked to hear raghu done this๐Ÿ˜ฒ mei bhi shocked hogai yaar
chalo koi to hope mila mujhee
i think in future when antu knows raghu a bit more.. she will rethink about this like you said to me oncee hehe
but antu is going thru so much
thank god she finally opened upto someone.. that too her sis rhea
i just dont know what to say yaar.. completely out of words for this
itna lamba update tha yaar.. hand massage du kya?๐Ÿ˜ณ
diary nai mila๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
abhi firse antu ka tension shuru hoagya yaar..
naik sadan mei drop kardia...
abhi to party shuru huyi hai..๐Ÿ˜‰
the guards. shukar hai tali hoke sogaye
raghu ka itna tareef kiya is update mei yaar.!!๐Ÿ˜ณ
uske hote huye koi bhi andar nahi ghusse ga lolzz
machar ko bhi special mention diya.. wah bhai kya baat hai..
hayee i would seriosuly have been shocked if she climbed the balcony and fell on raghu hahah.. my brain is working over time right now sowie๐Ÿ˜†
hayla chorni bane anadar chali gaye
wont the cc cam catch her.. ?? agar kajal ke dukaan ne dekh liya to kya hoga
raghu ko stare kiya wo bhi 5 mins๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
mera doubt ajj sach hogaya.. antu jungli billi hai yaar.
kitna smartly anadar chali gaye
raghu wo to neend he nai ayi yaar..
wo dream bhaut powerful tha kya๐Ÿ˜ณ uska after affect raghu ke sleep chori kar liya
antu bani sleep chorni.. ๐Ÿ˜†
chalo ji raghu ko dekhte he pata chal gaya ke lady bheem aye hai darshaan karwane..haha bad joke na?
han yaar even i was wondering why he was just lying there doing nothing but staring at her
raghu to kuch kuch huwa when antu stared at his handsome body haha
raghu ka Loveria worse horaha hai ise doctor antu ke zarurat hai hehe
he was right behind her and she didnt notice anything.. lagta hai antu ko loveria abhi tak nahi huwa but symptoms ajagye๐Ÿ˜ณ
and finally usne poke kiya..
mereko pata tha antu ka reaction.. i am not surprised.. stiff and cold is normal now..
abhi mere 3ps ka entry hogai..
pulling se start huwa hayla...
raghu ka feelings are getting on his head aww..
even her anger and hard gaze made him mesmerized yaar.. kya loveria hai yaar
ye sab sirf teri updates mei hota hai yaar๐Ÿ‘
antu ne use pin mara๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ญ hayla
raghu ko kashmir wala escape yaad aygaya or mujhe bhi hehe
push bhi aya.. yayyy๐Ÿฅณ
raghu ko sab kuch acha lagta hai..
the feel of her soft and delicate body against his rough tough and strong hayla mei to red hogai yaarโ˜บ๏ธ
for raghu it was a damn good feeling uff.. mere liye bhi
and finally
pinning.. my favvv... haylaa
usne raghu ko nail mara๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜ณ mixed feelings
raghu ko aya gussa and pinned.. mei to dreamy hogai yaar
tune mera red red murder karida is update ke sath paroo ab mera kya hoga๐Ÿ˜ฒ
tashan bhi shuru hogaya in dono mei
kaka ne maari entriyaan ke rantara ke baji ghantiyaan re taan
antu to bari ban rahi thi ab kya huwa darling๐Ÿคฃ heart pounding hoagya
raghu jo bindass hota hai worried and alert hogaya antu ke liye.. hayee loveria ka affect
kajal ke dukan urghh wo kaha se tapki
upar ke
asmaan se tapki khghoor mei atki gandi aurat๐Ÿคข๐Ÿคข๐Ÿคข
more or less bhi ayagai.. kya yaar ye 2 idiots kaha se ayega
raghu to antu ko leke wooshh thin air mei gayabb haha ab kon doondega
antu thought he would hand her over haww.. but he didnt feelings change karlo antu darling hehe
she actually calmed down.. raghu assured her aww
kaka ke ears ke to mei..๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก
unki taraf jaraha hai.. hope he doesnt see them
waiting to find out how antu gets her diary from our raghu๐Ÿ˜ณ
pls cont asap
Edited by honeybees22 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ok ji...๐Ÿ˜Š... so here r my thoughts continued...๐Ÿ˜ƒ...
Ohh ji...it ws a total shocker for me...i got stunned...๐Ÿ˜ฒ...Rhea came to kno d truth...dint expect dat...totally stumped...dat too in dis way...๐Ÿ˜ฒ...
so casually she lied to stay back wid Antu...
...n Riuu ji ne Dhamaka kar diya...๐Ÿค“......๐Ÿ˜†...

...actually dimaag se nikal gaya...k 1st chappy mein aapne mention kia tha...๐Ÿ˜ƒ...but e1 den i dint think she wud come to kno like dis...n comparitively early...i mean abhi Antu ko Mumbai aaye huwe 1 month bhi nahi hua na...๐Ÿค”...

Hats Off to u Riuu ji...hw maturely u hav etched Rhea's reaction n Antu-Rhea's convo...just wonderfully superb...๐Ÿ‘...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ...
Totally loved it...โค๏ธ...

Ok...so in d coming parts...face-off k chakkar mein... koi bhaari gadbad kar na de Rhea..๐Ÿ˜•..Bechari Antu...kya-kya sambhalegi...aur kaise...๐Ÿค”...
Lekin aapki baaton se toh lagta hai...k Rhea will b a great support to Antu aftr dis Sach ka Khulasa on her......

am waiting for d upcoming parts......eagerly...๐Ÿ˜ƒ...n aapne aapka siggie change kar diya...plz iska matlab bhi bata dijiye...๐Ÿ˜ณ...

gtg nw..agli baar continue karoongi...๐Ÿค—...๐Ÿ˜ณ...๐Ÿ˜ƒ...

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Posted: 10 years ago
Ok am gonna review frm chprt 20...๐Ÿ˜Š...and m nt sure if may mix up othr chaptrs scene..๐Ÿค“..๐Ÿ˜•..pehle hi warning de doon...๐Ÿ˜†...shayad chota sa ho kahi pe...๐Ÿ˜Š...
Raghu still heraaan-pareshaan of Antu's ignorance.....Aftr Antu-Rukku reachd Basti safely...bechaari Antu...๐Ÿ˜”...kitna sambhalegi n chupayegi......Raghu was expecting an Outburst kind of reaction...๐Ÿ˜ก...but she walked away quitely...๐Ÿ˜•...with all d pain n hurt...(...Ohh...shes so draind out ...yaar......)...n Raghu notices everything...he is aware of each n evry minute emos shes going thru...but only problem...cant find d root cause......n wen he wud cum to kno...dat he too is involved......Bagwaan jaane kaise sambhalega...n kya-kya hoga...(...n Aap bhi jaane...kyunki pehle likhna toh aapko hi hai...๐Ÿ˜†...๐Ÿ˜ƒ...)...

Yeh kya kar dia Rukku ne......Pehle toh Sandal-pahunchao Mission mein atka tha...aur ab Paise pahunchao...๐Ÿ˜ฒ...๐Ÿ˜†...Raghu kahi yeh na soch raha ho..AATAH MAAHJI SATAKLI......(...Ok...kind a bad joke...๐Ÿคข...)...Pehle haath mein Sandal...aur ab chutte Paise lekar Dimaag ki baji hui hai...Raghu Bhai ki......lekin pahunchaye bina chain bhi toh nahi milega...Jiski chiz hai...us tak pahunchane mein...Ya jab tak use woh na mile...Raghu bhai try karthe hi raheinge...Haar nahi maanege...Golden Hearted Gangster aftr all......Apne taraf se har mumkin khoshish karte hi rahenge...

Antu a Selfless Soul...๐Ÿ˜Š...n dis revenge-justice seeking mission is taking a toll on her...n spending time with her family n friends eases her pain...atleast to a little extent...๐Ÿค”...
may it b wid Rukku, Mayank , Rhea. Maama-maami, or humara Ishuu...
Wow yaar..kya parallel draw kia aapne...Rapunzel ka...Antus situation resembles it...n hw innocently yet deeply u explained it thru Ishu...๐Ÿ˜Š...Hats off Riuu...๐Ÿ‘...Awesome...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ...
(...yea i came to kno k Flynn Rider(FR) pe aapka dil aa gaya...โค๏ธ...๐Ÿ˜ƒ...Lekin uska asli naam toh Eugene hai na...jo baad mein reveal hota hai...kahin aap bhull toh nahi gayi..ya phir aapko FR hi jyaada pasand hai...๐Ÿ˜†...๐Ÿ˜‰..)...

Aur yeh aaya Apna HERO...jab Ishu ne Antu ko apne HERO ko imagine karne ko kaha...ise kehthe hai..Kismat...lekin yeh ishaare samajne ko na jaane aur kitna waqt lagega in dono ko...actually sab ko...

Ok gtg nw..will b back to continue my pending reviews...tc..Yedi Behna...๐Ÿค—..โค๏ธ...n Happy RaNtara thoughts n dreams..๐Ÿ˜Š......
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fabulous job as usual! ๐Ÿ‘
Wonderfully written,first part was emotional,and you nicely penned it down
I loved rantara encounter ๐Ÿ˜ณ
You described everything beautifully โญ๏ธ
Things said and done between rantara were just superb ๐Ÿ˜ณ
I loved Raghu's ouch! Woh bhi twice ๐Ÿ˜‰
Hehe..hats off yaar! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
One word for this update, BRAVO!!!! ๐Ÿ‘
Thanks heaps for updating
Please soon continue karneka ๐Ÿ˜‰

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