Originally posted by: rima4ever
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Originally posted by: rima4ever
happy diwali๐
Originally posted by: .Muskhaan.
Res... ๐
Unres... ๐
Hiii riu...*hugs*... Actually I was about to comment yesterday.. But achanak mere relatives ghar as Gaye... So was busy with them...Koi baat nahin mithu jii!!๐
Riaaa... Yeh POV wala concept na bahut accha yaar... I enjoy it alot... Please continue this itself...
Really?! Thank you!!๐
Chalo main shuru karu abh...
Haan jii suru karo๐
Part 1:
Socha aaj kuch uss ke siwa sochu,
Ab tak issi soch me hu ke or kya sochun...!!!
... Wow yaar yeh lines bahut accha hai.. Isse padkar main bhi yeh sochkar main bhi soch main pad gayi Ki main kya soch rahi hun... Chodo...
Ek gal dasso.. Raghu lab se ithna poetic ban Gaya haan??? That first para was too good
Aur Raghu Ki bhasha na.. Ek dum mast hai.. U ve written it perfectly...yaar... yee raghu poetic nahin hain... naa hii main honn... yee too bas meri ek friend ridz nee likha hain... mujeh acha laga aur chapter kee mode kee sath suit kar raha tha too de diya!!๐
Ruksana... I love u for giving that 10rs to Raghu... Tujhe pata nahi Ki tune kya kiya hai...
Aur Ishaan ka part was cute...
Thank you!!๐ณ
Ria what do you mean by "veil"????? ๐
Dupatte koo english mein veil hii too kahan jata hain!๐
Part 2:
In this part my most fav was that Rupanzel story... Wow yaar... So cute.. Antara thought of her prince charming.. And Raghu is here... Wow...Rupanzel AKA... tangled is my second fav disney movie after Beauty and the beast!๐ณ
I wish even hamare life main bhi aisa kucch hotha.. Par kya karein hamara naseeb likne wala Ria Ki take ah poetic toh nahi hai... ๐ญ ๐Yee ekdum sach kahan tune!!๐ญ
Aur phit se yeh par ek poetic Raghu dikhayi Diya... Poetic hamarein Raghu Mia nahi hai, poetic toh Ria hai... ๐ seriously Ria, the way Raghu describes the beauty of antara is fabulous... I was lost in that scene...Thanks again.๐...
And haan, how can antara bhi so rude tobraghu huh.. Joh Mann main aaye woh bolthi rahi... Samajh kya rakha hai hamarein Raghu ko huh??? Bechara Raghu...y daarling... ๐ญ uss lacks. Main Zara Sa bhi patience nahi hai.. Pah... Zyada hoshiyaar ban rahi hai... ๐ก
Kya karein yaar... Uss kee familly loss ki wajah see too uske dimag mein aag lagi huyi hain.. ๐ญ.. ussey too bas itna hii pata hain kii DM nee raghu kaa istemaal kiya hain... raghu koo bomb kee barein mein pata hii nahin thaa!!
Precap:lovely... Hayeee Raghu will come to rescue our beauty queen... How romantic and filmy...
Loved ur update riaaa... Plz antara ko bolna Ki Raghu pe chillana thoda kam kare... Bechara hai woh...
Yaar my mom na.. Padne hi nahi deti.. Baar baar pukaarke kaam sop dethi hai... Par main distracted nahi hun... Coz ua update is so strong... ๐ณ I was still in that mood itself...
Thanks again!!๐
Agli update jab hai????
mate mujhe likhne too doo!!๐
Mujhe na tre upat ek doubt as raha hai... Mujhe Teri love story Sunni hai yaar... Dekhna chahthi Hu Ki tu kithne romantic thi... ๐ณ
Meri koi love story nahin hain yaar...main real life mein ekdum bhi romantic nahin hoon...... haan tv pe serial pee love story dekhna.. yaa fir love story parna bahut acha lagta hain but jab mere life pee atta hain too... not possible yaar... main thori shy ty[e kii larki hoon... larko see batein bhi bahut kam karti hoon... bas formal batein... so no chance at all!!
Aur ek Baath...
Em sooo happy that em first to comment... Yipeee em dancing here...
And haan I know Yu will read the whole thing which I have written... Par so math jaana teek hai... Lol..
PART 19 REVIEW :
beyond any good adjective ...i was stunned reading this part ...what a hypnotising power u hv dear...am amazed overwhelmed and mesmerised.loved how Antu and Ruku gave a lesson to bhoja and kalua and loved more how u depicted a most sensitive issue in the story and shown us how to stand against a wrong deed and the best part is how things get just different whn aam janta takes charge in such situation ...kash real life mein bhi aisa hi ho har jaga ...๐OMG how minutely u expressed Raghu's worry and tension for Antara ...he wanted to curb it down but couldnt ...and omg omg omg Raghu loves Antara's hand made cookies ...and the precap ...its a total OMG precap ...waiting for itam sorry dear am late in reviewing as u know i hv crushed my hard disc ๐ญ...reviewing you from my sister-in-law's laptop ...and i know u must be angry that am not gioving u my updates but kya karen yaar ...i don hv my own pc now๐ ...trying to fix everything soon ...plzz mereko bhul mat jana yaar ...main wohi teri pyarisi Vampy hun ...๐ณ
part 20 review:
Haiii Riyu ...i just cant tell what impact ur story is creating on me ...soti hui Vampy jaag gayi ...now i want more and want dangerouslyno body else can create such an aura of Raghu nath Naik so magnificently ...Kudos to u guriye ...omg omg omg ๐โญ๏ธthe total update was a wonderful OMG update ...i hv stopped searching for any better adjective ...as i just cant find any word anough to praise ur story ...ur writing style ...the "itne se hi hawa nikal gayi ?? madam hnn ?? " was an epic moment.The Raghunath naik ...the terror of mumbai city ...he is trying to make his antara understand in his typical mad way that what might happen to her if she comes in the hand of Shetty. Shetty wd tear her apart ruthlessly for her deed. she therefore bhul kar bhi station ke aasn pas nahi janek abut AnTARA IS ANTARA wo to wohi karegi jo Raghu ne use mana kiya ho ...and darling am waiting for the next part like a...u know very well๐๐
Originally posted by: Komali14
res ๐
Finally maine padle pura aur comment bhi ready kardi...๐
yup, finally๐
Riu superb update ji...๐ณ
Part 1
Raghu khoya huwa tha antu ke soch may ruku brought him back to reality...๐
Raghu antu koo dekh kee humesha hii kho jata hain!!๐
Raghu n ruku convo was awesome...๐
Ruku bhi na drama queen...but very sweet...
So to hain...๐.. drama queen ruku...
Ruku SRK ki pose kar rahi thi...๐
Raghu came to know about Shetty brothers dhamki to antu... Raghu felt like throwing them from running train lol... sayad yehi kare...
Raghu kya karega yee too sirf raghu hii jaaane ๐
Raghu ko ek chess toh pata chala antu ke bare may that she cares about others...๐ณ
Yup!!๐ณ
Ruku Arshad ke behen hai...๐ฒ nice..๐ ruku ne kaam diya hai raghi bhai ko...๐
Bechara raghu antu aur ruku ke beach fass gaya...๐
Raghu bechara dono kee beach mein sandwich ban gaya๐
Antu pov was full of emotions n too touchy... bechari kitna kuch sehrahi hai...๐ญ
Antu pov was awesome n really heart wrenching...๐ญ
i know re.. likhte time main bhi kabhi kabhi emotional hoo jati hoon.๐ญ
Ishan ki re-entry awww...๐
Ishan koo main kaise bhool sakti hoon... after all ishan meri jaan hain,
Ishan ko antu ki awaz se pata chala ki woh sad hai ...so cute...๐ณ
Pyara bhai of pyari behen,๐ณ
Joh raghu haddiya todne se pehle nahi soch tha woh 10Rs dene ke liye itna soch raha tha...antu toh kamal hai ...๐
Haan..woo too dikh raha hain... antu kee jalwe see raghu hairan pareshan๐
Ye kya raghu ko pasina araha hai sirf antu ke door tak jake...๐
Raghu ne parchai dekh pehchan liya kon hai waha...๐
Jee haan!๐
Sirf antu ke duppata aur ussi parchai ne ye khasa jhadu kiya ki raghu sidhe pile chadke antu ke pas pauch gaya...๐
Haan..๐
Part 2
Hayy ishan is so sweet...๐
Ishan n antu convo was awesome...๐
Thx๐
Ishan ne kya baat kaha sadness n depression are most dangerous diseases true...
Thats true par woo baat ishan nee nahin Dr Kaul nee kahan tha antu koo..๐
Ishan ne tangled ke yaad dila diya ... Aur rider ki bhi...
Mera Rider
Ria apne kitni ache se story ko antu ke life se relate kiya...too good ji...๐
Thaank you jii๐
Antu's all worry n sorrow ll be healed by raghu the prince...๐ณ
Aww.. kya baat kahi aapne๐ณ
Tangled may rider ne hair to pakad ke princess tak poncho aur yaha raghu pipe pakad ke...๐
Kya karein... Antu kaa baal Rapunzel jaisi lambi too nahin hain.. too pipe see hii kaam chala loo๐
Antu ke dil ke dhadkane baad gaye raghu ko dekh ke hayyy...๐ณ
haan... Dil too dharkega hii.. connection joo ban raha hain dono mein. Anjane mein hii sahi๐
Raghu was lost in her n forgot to breath... Dheere dheere aap mere dil ke mehema hogaye...๐
Kya baat hain!๐
Raghu ne paise diya aur daanta usse...๐ก
Haan
Raghu ko usski parwa hai aur bahana bana raha hai basti ka...๐๐ณ
Woo too hain... actuallt raghu koo khud hii nahin pata that how much he had started to care for her. Jis din samajh ayega uss din too...๐
Ye kya antu guss se badak gaye dayan ๐ ki naam sunke aur chillaya...๐ก
Uss daayan kee naam pe kis koo gussa nahin ayega?๐ก
Raghu ne usse dard ponchaya to make her know that Shetty ll hurt her more then this...
Haan,
Antu kyun worry kare jab raghu hai usse bacchane ke liye...๐ณ
Antu koo too pata nahin naa kii raghu hain usey bacha nee ke liye. thats the problem
Raghu ne antu ko apne parents ki yaad dilaya ... Ye kya huwa antu toh pehle hi itni udass thi aur ab usska kya hoga... Ye raghu bhi na gusse may kuch bhi bolta hai...๐ญ
Gusse mein raghu bhai kaa dimag satak jata hain!๐ญ
He saw pain in her eyes n let her go... Hope he ll come to know about her parents or atleast apologies to her...๐ค
dekhti jaao...๐
Precap... hay humara hero ne heroine ko bacchaya... ๐ณnext update may action hoga aur saath may thoda sa romance bhi ...
Thank god ria you stopped writing PS n telling crap to you awesome update... mujhe bura lagta tha woh padke... Thanks to andy...๐
Yes, at last i quit giving PS๐
So here comes end of my stupid boring comment...
Waiting for next update...
Thank u ๐
Originally posted by: Komali14
unres ๐

Chapter 21
Laga kar aag seney me chale ho tum kaha,
Abhi to raakh udney do tamasha or bhi hoga!
Antara's POV...
I slowly squeezed and opened my heavy eyelids slowly. I saw the morning lights entering through the window and hitting my face.
My eyes felt so dry and swollen. My head was feeling so heavy and wobbled. I could feel the dried tears on the corner of my eyes.
I didn't know for how long I cried last night hiding my face in pillow. Thanks to rhea's deep sleep that she didn't listen to anything. I couldn't take the emotional hit which raghu's pinching words gave me. I wanted to reply him back firmly. I wanted to ask him that who was he to accuse me like that. it was none of his concern but nothing came out of my numb mind at that moment. I just wanted to run away from the world and cry out. I wanted to scream badly but I couldn't. I had to gulp the poison each and every day knowing that it would end me at the end.
My lie was ruined already, so why should I care?! Only one thing pinched and scratched very badly inside me. The person, who led the death to my parents, was accusing me with the name of my parents. A mocking painful small laugh escaped from my lips. One day I would surely answer him that who was actually the cause of crisis in my life, for my parents. Till then, I had to keep everything inside my bleeding heart and bear the burden. I badly prayed from god last night to take away all my humanly feelings and emotions away from me and make me hard like a stone who couldn't feel anything. Any bitter word from my enemies wouldn't be able to affect me then.
Just like a pig iron which was burned, melted, stroke mercilessly to turn into hard steal, I felt like my life was in process to transform me just like the hard steal etched out from a simple happy go lucky girl, making me go through all those turmoil, all those ordeals.
I slowly came down from the bed and my eyes fell on my impression on the wall mirror. For some moment, I couldn't recognize myself. I never looked so lean and pale with swollen chicks and dark circles around my eyes. I looked exactly like a century's old soul who was tired of living. It was not new to me. The stress, mental turmoil and horrible night dreams were altogether sucking my life every morning.
I went to washroom and as usual and weep out the signs of dried tears. I looked pretty normal, but I couldn't remove the deep pain from my eyes which was quite visible.
Pappa used to say that my eyes were like the mirror to him, they spoke most of the times before my words conveyed. He could read them so easily and that's why I couldn't hide a single thing from him.
As I came out from the washroom I heard the sound of wind chirm near the window and the known sound of buzzing hit my ears. My lips curled into automatic smile. My friends had approached for their early morning visit.
Just after some moments when I came out at the streets of basti the bunch of pigeons were as usual all over the streets flaring their white wings. The sweet sound of their buzzing winds and cooing were reflecting on the walls. They had become so familiar with me with time. As I came out they rushed towards me in bunch. Some of them sat on my hands and shoulder rubbing their tender feathery warm body against mine. it felt so heart touching. Smiling as I caressed them and spread the corns one by one in basti they rushed to grab them all together. I used to smile watching them having their meal. I bend down and caressed their feathery body and beaks and they didn't mind at all. I was so involved with those pigeons as usual that I didn't noticed that someone was standing at my side.I heard the sound of coughing from my side and my eyes turned to the sight. I saw ruksana standing there crossing her hands and letting out her chirpy huge grin. There are some people in the world whose smile makes u feel so good in your heart instantly. Ruksana's smile had that kind of charm. "Too chacha kee chahito koo nayi amma mil gayi?!" she said in her funny tone. "Good morning!" I smiled and greeted her. her smile widened more and she sat beside me on the road so casually as if she knew me for very long. But it was just one day before we met each other. "waisey, kyat um chacha kee tarah har roz inhe dana khilate hoo." Ruksana asked me caressing the feather of a pigeon. "haan!" I answered her. "Achi baat hain." she said nodding her head and a little irritation peeped in her eyes, "Pata hain bahut bura lagta tha jab har subha inn kabotaroon koo bhatak te huye dekhti thi. Chacha kee baad aur kissi koo inn ki parwaa nahin thi. Maine bhi socha tha kii inn kabutaron koo dana khilwayungi, par uss sey pahele mujhe lattaur jana para apni bimar khala kii dekhbhal karne kee liye." She probed and again turned towards me, "Mujhe bhi thora mill sakta hain kya?!" she said indicating towards the corn. "Off course!!" I said and handed over some corns to her. "Sukriya!" she said and we both started to feed those pigeons. "Abb tum jab subha aao gii naa inhe dana dalne... mujhe bhi bula lena, hum dono eksath dana dalengey inhe." She proposed and I nodded with a smile. we talked a lot after that while feeding those pigeons. She was overjoyed when she find that me too was also a diehard SRK fan like her. "Pata hain, meri ammi pagal hoo jati hain kabhi kabhi. Kaheti hain, nikah kee baad patah nahin mere mia kaise samhalengey mujhe aur meri SRK ke koo. Main kaheti hoon nikah bhi karungi too SRK fan se hi karungi, taa kii woo har SRK film kii first day first show mujhe dikhane lee jayein." As she talked about her mother I remembered some bitter moments of last night. "Ruksana!" my voice had suddenly become a bit serious and she caught that. "Haan bolo!" she seemed startled seeing my sudden mode change. "I am sorry. Meri wajah see tumhari ammi koo takleef jhelni pari." I said in apologetic tone. "Kya?!! Yee kya kahe rahi hoo tum?!" she looked quite shocked. "Mujhe pata hain, tumhari ammi kaa BP bar gayi thi jab unhone hum dono koo TV par dekha!" my eyes fixed towards the ground as I said those words. Without meeting her eyes I probed. "Seriously, main tumhari ammi koo takleef dena nahin chahti thi. Main bas kuch galat hote huye nahin dekh sakti. Lekin yee bhi nahin dekh sakti kii meri wjah se kissi kootkleef ho." I said as I met ruksana's startled eyes. "Ek baat batao antara, yee sab kisne kahan tumse?!" she asked rolling her eyes. "Ruksana jisne bhi kahan hoo, par baat too sach hain naa!" I said. "Hey allah! Yee raghu bhi naa. Zarror uss nee kahaan hoga naa. Mujhe uss kharood koo paise dena hii nahin chahiye tha tumhe wapas karne kee liye. Uss nee aur kuch kahan kya?!" she asked me. Someone laughed mockingly inside me. Should I tell her about the bitter words which he told me last night? "Nahin.." I said in low voice. "Pakk na?! kahan hain too bata doo. Fir uss gadhe kaa class lee lungi main." she said with a bit angry look which made me smile. how easily she could think about taking class of that dangerous man. She seemed totally unaware of raghu's actual face which I saw. "Meri ammi kii fikar tum mat karo antara. woo excitement mein kabhi kabhi unki BP bar jati hain. Lekin bahut jald maan bhi jate hain. Jab maine unhe poori baat batayi too unhe sab samajh aa gaya. Abb too woo tumse milna bhi chahte hain. kahe rahi thi kii do aur thappar lagana chahiye tha unn nalayakon koo." She giggled as she said those words, but then her face became serious again. "Antara, Raghu kee baaton koo dil mein mat lena. Gusse mein ussey idhar udhar kuch nahin dikhta. Joo man mein atta hain bas bol deta hain. Uss kee baton koo dil mein mat leta!" She prompted. That inner sound of mockery smile became louder as I couldn't stop myself to say, "Tum mujhe yee sab kyun kahe rahi hoo? Waisey bhi, I don't bother kii ajnabi anjaan log mere barein mein kya sochna hain aur kya nahin." I prompted with low voice. Ruku seemed didn't noticed the sadness in my voice. she continue to say, "Arey, aisi bata nahin hain. Asalmein jab kissi kee maa-baap pee koi takleef hota dekhta hain too bechare kii zehen mein lag jata hain. Bachpan mein apni maa-baap dono koo kho chukaa hain. Sarak mein bhatak raha tha bechara jab Daya Mai nee ussey apne ghar mein lee ayya." Ruku informed me. I froze for a while listening to her words. I couldn't know why I stop the question which abruptly came out of my mouth. "Too uss nee mere saath aisa kyun kiya?!" I could sense my voice was breaking. "Kisne kya kiya?!" ruksana's voice hit my ear. "Ussey too pata hona chahiye kii kitna daard hota hain jab..." I stopped myself to say further. If I uttered something wrong due to my emotions everything would be ruined. "Kya huya antara?! Kya kahena chahti hoo tum?!" she asked with a bit worried voice. Perhaps, she sensed something wrong in my voice. I secretly wiped of the tears from the corner of my eyes. I looked towards her and said, "Yahin kii SRK huesha apni sari films dewali pee hii kyun release karta hain. Pata hain kii dewali pee kitna kaam hota hain. Ab kaam karein kii film dekhne jayein?" I winked at her while saying those words. "What?!!" she looked startled as well as laughed. I joined her laugh. "Baap re, mujhe too luch der kee liye kuch aur hii laga." She said. Somehow, I managed the situation after feeding those pigeons we bid adieu each other. She warned me about shetty and told me to be aware on the roads. As I left for my room, the smile was back in my face. The life was not at all so bad!
Raghu's POV
I couldn't be able to sleep last night as two pairs of wide, painful broken hazel continued to disturb me in dream. When at 9 am in morning I opened my eyes my whole head was jumbled up.
Jumping up on the bed I sat their silently keeping my chin over my joined palm. I drove into deep thoughts. I was not able to forget the tore expression antara gave me before running down the stairs. I didn't want to admit but I was shaken all over by that gaze. Never in my life I saw that much pain in anyone's eyes. When I squeezed her hands she was all showing attitude and was not showing her pain but how some mere words of mine made her break till that point. As if like someone sucked out some amount of life from her at that point when her silent eyes looked towards me, like they were complaining me, accusing me for some wrong did. But what actually was that?!
I tried to remember what I blabbered out to her last night out of my frustration. After thinking hard for some moment I at last remembered about the particular thing. I was referring to her parents. Just at that moment her face suddenly turned pale.
"S**a, lagta hain kuch zyada hii kahe gaya apun. Nahin kahena chahiye tha." I told to myself scratching my head, "Yed ban gaya hain kya?! Uss kee maa baap koo beach mein kyun lane kaa tha?! Bura laga hoga ussey." I continued to talk to myself in silence aimlessly. "Par s**a! Bura laga too bolna chahiye tha, baat baat pein too madam, Jhansi kii rani ban jati hain. Fir kaal kya hoo gaya tha... ekdum see aise ghum hoo gayi... Pura chehera sujh gaya tha ekdum see jab apun nee woo sab kahan!" I threw questions after questions into thin air. Her reaction confused me so much again. Really, she was not the girl who would break down with some little word of accusation. Then what happened to her all of a sudden?!
My trail of thoughts was broken when buntinya brought tea for me. I sighed and jumped out from the bed to get freshen up. I had so many works to do and I couldn't spend the whole day thinking about that crazy girl's odd behavior and reactions. Although I didn't want to look but my eyes glanced towards the balcony door of the next building.
It was still closed. I sighed and moved to grab my towel.
After getting fresh I rushed downstairs and peeped inside ajji's room before going to meet mai. She was busy in her early morning yoga. It looked so weird to me. I couldn't understand how some man could stay at a place for so long closing eyes and inhaling in and out. Apart from the yoga thing ajji had another hobby, dancing.
Dancing was like ajji's passion. She created a small dancers' and singers' troupe with some young girls of basti. Ruksana, Rhea all were involved in them. In every occasion of our basti they performed programs dramas etc. I told her so many times not take such stress. She was getting old. But as if she would listen to me. Without disturbing ajji, I moved to mai's roo,.
Mai left for her work and ordered me to stay at basti. She was busy on upcoming elections. So I was loitering on MM's garage. I was checking on some part of the jeep where MM was busy to listen to his fav sheela and munni on FM. I was fixing the mirror to check out the handles which was slightly scratched when I suddenly saw her face reflecting on the glass. At the very instant her voice hit my ear. "Achha Mumi chalti hoon, Bye!" I quickly turned back and saw antara standing near her doorstep giving tight hug to saroj aunty ji as usual before leaving for office. Rhea was standing at her side wearing her school dress. Antara broke the hug and her face looked happy with that small smile attached to her lips. I couldn't even detect that if my words from last night still bothered her. She would never show that in front of saroj aunty and others. I came to know her that much on those days. I stood silent as my eyes moved from her top to bottom. She was wearing a simple white full sleeve salwar with light embroidery work on it. Her long hairs were as usual open casually spreading over her one shoulder. her small accessories were as usual two dangling earring and a simple watch on hand and nothing else. still in that simple appearance she looked so fresh. There was some kind of aura within that girl which made her look so different and somehow pretty all the time. she was not the face who would be easily mixed up with the crowd of Mumbai city. Her every inch depicted that she was different with her own gravity and persona.
I was having all abrupt thoughts looking towards her. I saw her leaving the doorstep and going forward with rhea. Chiku and other kids were playing at the street at that time and they waved their hands towards antara. Antara also smiled towards them and suddenly threw a flying kiss towards those kids.
My heart pounded against my cage just at that moment looking at her smiling tender lips. Shit!! What was happening to my heart?! why it was beating loudly now and then? I was sure that I had some rare kind of heart diseases.
As antara left the streets of basti I stood there silent for a while looking towards the street through which she went. So many thoughts were running on my head at that moment which I couldn't describe clearly. "Eee bhai, tu udhar road kii taraf kya dekh raha hain?! Road saaf karne kaa hain kya?!" I heard MM's voice and I threw the hanky in my hand and rushed towards the road. "Abey bhai, tu fir se rajdhani express kyun ban gaya?!" I heard mm's scream from behind but I didn't have time to answer him.
Antara's POV..
All the way towards my office an uncanny feeling bothered me. I felt like someone was keeping eye on me and following me. The invisible gaze seemed so piercing that I could feel that gaze like the touch of fingertips brushing upon me. the feeling sometime shook me to the core. I turned around several times to see if someone was really behind me but all the time I couldn't see anyone rather than crowded streets of Mumbai. All the way, the feeling bothered me, made me worry somehow. While I left rhea in front of her school she asked me if something was wrong with me. She observed the worry in my face. "Rhea I think someone was following us!" I told her. "What?!!" she was shocked. I told her to look at my back and see if someone was following us. She checked out and informed that there was no one. I sighed and bid her good bye going forward on the road. The feeling of being watched followed me till I moved inside the office building. I was not sure if it was just my imagination or something else. But steal my senses were giving loud indications to me that I was being watched.
However I forgot the matter as I got busy with parth and kirti on project work. even they both saw me in the news channel yesterday. "Seriously antu, we should be there. We would also be famous with you and kirti's dream to come on TV screen would be fulfilled." Parth teased. "Yeah yeah, now let me remind you something. You are the one right who auditioned for Dancing star last week." Kirti rolled her eyes. "Guys guys, can we concentrate on work now." I told before they started their bull fight. "Hey peeps what's going on?!" Myrah came and asked us. "Hey Myrah!!" we greeted. "Antara, I hope this two lazy heads are now moving a bit." Myrah teased. "Myrah!!" both of them prompted together. Suddenly I remembered about something and asked Myrah. "Myrah, tell me one thing, did Aman sir went outside of the office yesterday?" I asked. "Sir!! No I don't think so. He was all busy in meeting till afternoon. He was all tight scheduled. He didn't even had time for lunch. How could he go outside?" Myrah informed. "Myrah, are you sure? Were you with sir all the time?" I asked her. "Yup most of the time, during meeting and at the morning, but sometimes I had my own works so sometime I got busy." Myrah said. So even she couldn't answer me clearly, cause she was not with aman sir every time. "But tell me one thing girly, why are you asking if sir was present in office or not?!" Myrah asked. I thought for a moment. Should I tell them that I saw Aman sir yesterday in railway station in that weird attire? "Nope nothing, just... forget it." I decided not tell anything. after some quality chats, myrah left and we got involved in our work. "Hey antara, are you free at afternoon. Would u like to join us in Marriot?" Kirti asked me. "Yup I am free. But marriot... all of a sudden?" I asked kirti. She looked a bit shy all of a sudden. "Guess what?! Miss Kirti's engagement is fixed on next month and she is giving us treat." Parth informed. "Wow congrats!" I greeted her. "Thanks yaa.." she smiled.
We finished our remaining works as soon as possible and nearly around 4 pm we went out of the office to set our journey for Marriot hotel. As I moved out with Parth and kirti my eyes all of a sudden fell on the other side of road. The road was not full of crowd like morning and almost empty. Only trucks and taxis were hushing along the road. I clerly saw a shadow like fig quickly get on the other side of wall as if like hiding himself. A cold wave ran down from my top to bottom. I remembered about the eerie feeling at morning which I almost forgot. Was someone really keeping eye on me?! "hey antu!!..." Parth called me. "yeah coming!" I moved towards them. all the way towards hotel I kept on watching over my back to search for my unknown follower. But I never saw any further glimpse of him. but the sense of that piercing gaze keep glued to me. I was feeling restless, frustrated for not getting to know who the heck was that person?! I couldn't even tell anything to parth and kirti. As much as I knew them they would create chaos at the spot and the follower would surely escape. even when we were inside the bus I felt that I was still being followed but even in that close proximity of bus I couldn't found any doubtful person. Also the bus was really crowded and it was so difficult to stand. However we reached at marriot and had some good meals spending some quality times. but still the uncanny feeling didn't left me. I was looking towards the glass door for several times hoping that if I could see someone but no hope. "Antu, are u okk?! U seemed disturbed." Parth asked me. "I am fine! Just a bit tired." I assured him.
After finishing of our meal we got out from the hotel. Parth and Kirti would leave together but I had to go to other way. so they both came to drop me at bus stand. When we reached at depot we came to know that the last bus towards my locality was canceled due to some reason and there was not any bus available. "Ohh shit!" Kirti stroke her head. "Hey don't get upset. I will catch a taxy from here." I said. "Antu you won't get no taxi from here for that area in Mumbai. You had to go central and then you would get taxi for ur locality. And if I am not wrong, you won't be able to reach before 10 pm if you take that route." Parth informed. I understood the situation was quite complicated. "Hey parth why don't we drop her at station, she would easily reach through train." Kirti proposed. "Hey that's better, come on antu, we will drop you at the nearby railway station." Parth proposed. I didn't know why raghu's warning from the last night flashed in my mind. he forbid me to go near station. I stood silently there for a while thinking what to do. "Hey antara, what are you thinking now? Come on!" Kirti hurried. I thought for a while. But it was really a lame thought that someone could be able to affect me in broad daylight and also in crowded Mumbai local trains. And besides, they wouldn't dare to come near the station after the chaos created yesterday. So I followed parth and kirti. I felt like the gaze which was fixed upon me had suddenly turned hard. I could feel the invisible harshness brushing over my cells. I again looked around for the last time but no one was there as usual. "Just let it go antara. U are imagining things!" My mind told me. huffing and washing the sense away from me I moved forward.
Parth and Kirti left deperting me at train. Just like the before, the train was totally crowded. As they left the eerie feeling increased even more and it was really making me worried. I was sure that I was being watched. But who the heck was keeping eye on me all the time and for what reason?! I moved inside the body and stood at a quite place near door as the train moved out of the station. I stood there holding the iron hanger t head. The cold penetrating feeling of that unknown gaze continued to shiver down my spine. I greeted my teeth and my feature stiffened in determination. It was not the time to get hyper or afraid. It was not that my watcher was harming me anyhow, just following me since morning. Suddenly my nerve gave me some approaching danger's signal. I was surrounded by so many people. But even I could feel that someone was approaching to me. A cold wave ran down my spine as I waited for my unknown follower to reach me. I clenched my feast and was determined that even I wouldn't leave easily. What would he do in the mid of crowd?! I felt someone standing at my back and I was about to move back but before that two pairs of strong arms wrapped around me and dragged back. I almost hit a very strong, rough physique. My whole feature stiffened as I detected his touch. (God knows how?!) Opening my eyes I snapped back and threw angry glances on him.
"Tum!!!" My eyes widened as I faced raghu's irritating and alerted face on my shoulder. his hands tightened round my waist as he looked around the crowd with his scanning eyes. "Yahan kya kar rahe hoo?!" I tried to jerk myself out from his hold but the grip seemed like even stronger than iron bar. "Shhh!!" his husky voice probed and it was full of alert. His narrow eyes were still fixed on the crowd in anticipation as if like he was looking for someone desperately. "Too woo tum the joo mujhe subha see follow kar rahe the?!" I said in surprise and as well as irritation. I caught his tightly gripped hand on my tummy and tried to push them back. His lips twitched in irritation and he snapped towards me. "Abey chup!!!" he almost scold me looking straightly into my eyes. His eyes were as usual cold, harsh but also I saw some kind of worry on them. I breathed heavily as my head boiled up. "Mooh bandh kar apna, agar rakh sakti hain too?!" his angry eyes which was just some inches above mine flared utter irritation while almost scolding me harshly. Just at that moment I realized that how close he was to me. last night memories flashed into my mind and I moved my eyes away from him squeezing them shut. The feeling of disgust spread on my mind as I found myself standing at that proximity imprisoned in the hand of my family's killer. I asked my ill fate that how many cruel jokes were stored for me. my eyes opened wide when I felt raghu's hand forcefully dragging me inside. due to the process his rough stubble covered chin brushed on my neck and I cringed in the disgusting sensation of his touch. "Ouch!!" I winced in the pinching sensation. "Chorro mujhe.. Just leave me alone!" I said loudly but at the next moment his hand pressed over my face forcefully. As I looked towards him angrily I faced his angry mad eyes. "Eee kab se bake jaa rahe hain. Sunayi nahin det kya?! Kyun chilla rahi hain?!" he asked me ferociously as I wiggled in his hold. I heard the buzzes from everywhere. "Arey... yee too raghubhai hain naa? Woo uss larki kee stah kya kar rahe hain?!" someone told from side. "Arey mat dekh udhar ragubhai kee maam le see jitna door rahe utna hii acha hain!" another voice said. I understood that no one was going to say anything against him. Meanwhile raghu removed his firm grip from my face and looked everywhere again. "Tumne mujhe pakar kee kyun rakha hain?!" I said on low voice greeting my teeth. "Eee dimag kii dahi mat bana apun kaa. Aur hoo sake too mere see chipak kee rahe... yahin tere liye safe rahega!" he said in his usual harsh voice. "Kya?!! Tumse chipak kee..." I couldn't finish my word and a heard the sound of a bog hue and cry approaching towards us. "Aaa gaya s**a!" raghu said hissing and automatically his hold became tighter around me. His hold was so powerful that I felt like crushing and suffocating. I couldn't even wiggle or move a single inch. I looked towards raghu;s face which looked dangerously cold and concentrated, just like the hunter waiting for his pray. His expression gave me danger sign. As the hue and cry approached something happened. Raghu's hand moved up from my waist in a flash and drag out a man from the crowd holding his throat. My eyes widened looking at the condition of that man. Raghu was just grabbing that man's throat but I could feel the power and pressure of that single grip as his eyes pooped out from eyehole. His suffocation indicated that how much he was suffering for breathing. Mostly his wide fearful eyes indicated that he was caught badly. I looked at the guy and then moved my eyes towards raghu whose darkened crude eyes were fixed to that man. his hard faucets and clenched jaw indicated how mad he was. He was still holding me with his other hand and even that single hand's hold seemed unbreakable. Again a cold wave of fear rush down my spine as I remembered that I was facing the most dangerous man of Mumbai city. I could hear the panic stricken buzzes from people all around.
There was a little bottle in that man's hand which was full of some smoky condensed liquid. I could feel a known smell and my eyes started to burn slightly. I instantly understood that what the thing was! Our chemistry mam in collage always told us to be careful in lab while working with that particular thing. But what was that man doing with that thing?! Even raghu noticed that bottle. He just looked towards the bottle with disgusting eyes and threw that man near the door. People rushed put from the spot. the bottle fell out of the running train and the man crushed badly on the wall near the door. Without wasting a moment raghu threw me harshly at the side and I almost saved myself from falling holding the iron bar near the seat. All people were fearfully looking at the spot. Holding myself, as I looked back to the door, I found raghu already crashing that man to the wall holding his coller. His crude merciless eyes were enough to make anyone weak to his knees. I again remembered that whom I was going to confront. Literally I never saw him so mad! Not even at that time when he was biting those goons in basti. "Chal s**a abb mooh khol aur bata dee... Idhar kya kar raha tha tuu?! Aur woo acid ki bottle kya kar raha that ere hath mein." Raghu asked in his harsh tone. "Raghubhai mere koo jane doo. Kuch nahin pata apun koo?!" he said in his panic-stricken comical voice. "acha?!! kuch nahin pata?!" raghu chuckled as a mocking laugh escaped his lips. "haan raghubhai kuch nahin pata mujhe... jane doo..." he almost begged. "aise kaise jane dee beta?! Abhi too pahele tera yadast wapas lane kaa hain." he said and with a flash I found that man on the floor. aThe body part from his head to neck was totally hanging outside of the train dangerously. If he stayed in the position he would literally get hit by the posts or passing trains. I was literally frozen at the spot seeing all those things. Nothing came out of my mouth, not even a fear full gasp. "chal beta abb bata... Nahin to kuch der baad tere bheje kaa chithra urr jayega!! Fir yaad karne layak kuch nahin rahega!!" raghu said in his usual harsh ordering tone still holding the collar of that guy. "Raghubhai!!..." he said in barely audible voice. "Arey haan pata hain apun kaa naam raghu hain.. abb agey bhi bol..." raghu said pitching up his voice. "Bata taa hoon... Raghubhai, main too chot mota admee hoon.. Shetty bhai kaa hukum tha kii iss larki pee nazar rakhne kaa ur jab bhi mauka milee... iss kee mooh mein acid maar dene kaa.. taa kii yee larki kahin pee mooh dikhane kii layak naa rahe... Sab koo pata chal jayega kii shetty see panga lene kaa anjam kya hota hain..." I literally cringed as he uttered those words. So that acid was meant to be spread on my face. my brain couldn't think that what consequence it would be. "Fir?!!" raghu asked in his cold tone. "Apun login kaa adda raheta hainb station kee aas pass. Issey station mein dekh liya too laga yahin mauka hain... uth gaya train mein iss ke piche... par mere koo kya pata tha raghubhai kii aap bhi iss kee piche hoo." He somehow managed to say. I listened to everything dumbly. "raghubhai abb too mere koo jane doo... khamba aa re laa hain." he almost screamed with fearful eyes. Some people gasped s they saw the approaching electric pole at the side of train. I looked towards raghu who was steal at the place grabbing the collar of that guys fixing his crude merciless eyes to him. Not a single sign of mercy could be seen in his expression seeing the helplessness and fear in that man's face. my nerve froze at the spot. I knew he wouldn't leave that guy. His expression showed his determination. He would crash that guy to death. I wanted to go and stop him but I lose all my powers to react seeing that scene in front of my eyes. the pole was about to approach in five second and that man screamed. I covered my eyes with my arms and looked away squeezing my eyes shut. I literally couldn't see the bloody murder scene. I waited for the last scream of that guy. But strange, I didn't hear anything. after some moment as I looked at front I saw the man standing on his feet and looking towards raghu with fearful eyes. raghu pulled down his collar brushing the dust from his shirt. His eyes were still hard but that killer look was gone. It literally shocked me that he left that man in single piece. "Jaa kee tere shetty bhai see kahe dena kii iss larki kee upar see apna nazar hatha dene kaa. Humari basti mein raheti hain yee larki. Aur apun kee rahete basti mein rahenewale kisii koo kharoch bhi nahin aa sakta..." he said and pushed the man at front. "Chal foot yahan see." He said twitching his lips in disgust. I breathed heavily to find my nerves. After some moment as I found my normal sense I found raghu staring directly towards me. His expression was not hard anymore. But it was unreadable just like his eyes. Anger rose in my head again. Throwing a disgusted glance to him I moved behind and rushed to the opposite side of him. I just wanted to go as far as possible from that cold blooded mercenary. I just couldn't face him in front of my eyes anymore.
Precap: "Too kya karta uss kee sath haan?! Ussey gale laga leta khilata-pilta, kyun kii woo tere mooh pee acid maar ne ayi thi?! Arey tujhe andaza bhi hain kii kya hone wala tha?!" he asked loudly with his mad voice. "So what?! Woo muere face pe acid maar deta, mera chehera jala deta too iss sey tumhe kya farak parta hain?! " I snapped back on his face.
Finally unres... Shanti toh nahi mili usski behen aaye toh aapki update parli maine ...๐
First I like your shayari lines...๐
Antu was upset...kitna kuch saha rahi hain ... you describe her suitation, her feelings so well it was brilliant...๐
May bhi emotional hogaye...๐ญ.its hard to write this type emotions n make reader emotional...great job dear...๐
Raghu's words really effected her very badly...
Antu's papa use to tell her that her eyes are like mirror... aur raghu bhi usske ankhein parta hain...par bechara confuse ho jata hain hamesha...๐
Antu ki smile wapas aagaye pigeons ke saath...๐
I love how you describe bonding between antu n pigeon...๐ณ
Ruku also joined antu... True some peoples smile makes you feel good at heart n brings smile on your face aswelll...๐
Antu n ruku convo was good... Do pagal diehard fans of SRK ...๐
Antu ko raghu ke bare mein thoda information mila... usse jald pata chale woh dil ka bura nahi hain...๐ณ
Life is not at all so bad ...lovely line...๐
Raghu ki neend udd le gaye antu ki dard bari ankhein...๐ฅฑ๐ณ
raghu pareshan tha ki yesa kya huwa antu ko... Hope he finds out soon...๐ค
Bantiya ji ne subhe subhe drashan diya chai ke saath...๐
Raghu ko samaj nahi aaraha hai koi ek jaga pe bhet ke yoga kaise kar sakta hai janab toh ek minute ke liye ek jaga nahi bhet sakte...๐
Aaji dance bhi karti hain isska link toh antu se zaroor hain...๐
Ye mm bhi na hamesha sheela aur munni ke pichey para rehta hain...๐
Raghu ki nazar antu pe padi through mirror...kya scene tha...๐ณ
Raghu ko antu ke bare may pata hai that she wont show her pain infont of her mammi...
Raghu bhi na kitna ghoor tha hai antu ko...๐ณ
Antu ke flying kiss ko dekh ke raghu ke dil may ganti bhagi aur uss yede ko lag raha hai heart disease hain hai bhagwan kya hoga isska...๐
Mm bhi na road saaf karne ka irada aur ye kya raghu ban gaya rajdhani express...๐
Antu ko lag raha hai that someone is following her n gaze is piercing like touch of fingertips waah kya baat hai beautifully written... โญ๏ธwoh aur kaun ho sakta hai sirf aur sirf ek yeda...๐ณ
I love this name myrah...๐ณRaghu ne usse mohra samja...๐
So kirti ke treat ne antu ko musibat may fasa diya...
Train scene was just fabulous...โญ๏ธ
Antu recognised his touch oye hoye kya baat hai...๐ณ
Rantara convo n proximity reminded me garage scene...
Ye kya ek admi ke haathon may acid bottle...๐ฒ.
Raghu ne usski yese dulaye ki mujhe yesa lag raha tha ki may koi movie ki action sequence dekh rahi hun...it was awesome...
Aapne antu ke dar ko kitna ache se describe ki that she is fighting with most dangerous man in city...
Jise log itna darte hai...๐คข
Par antu ko kya pata jise log darte hai woh usspe marta hai...hayyy...๐ณ
Wow riu it was great update ...like watching movie jisme emotion , happy moment , action , little romance tha full to complete package tha...๐
Thank u ๐
Ps: next update ka comment bhi bahut jald prapth hoga...๐