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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: RaNtara4vr


n ur reviews r not at all boring...๐Ÿ˜Š...
wipe away d notion frm ur Dilon-Dimaag...๐Ÿ˜ƒ

every forum mmbrs contributions r precious...๐Ÿ˜ณ...
coz all of it r genuine n direct frm d heart...

lol...lagta hai main kuch zyada hi philosopy jhaad rahi hoon...๐Ÿ˜†...
c ya...๐Ÿ˜Š...


Oh u r so sweet...๐Ÿ˜ณ

Aap bilkul philosopy nahi jhad rahi hoo...๐Ÿ˜›

I just loved ur review...โญ๏ธ ye destiny nahi ria ka dimaag hai...๐Ÿ˜‰

Aman ka judwa bhai tarique aur raahil...๐Ÿ˜†

Extra shots was too good...๐Ÿ‘

Raghu ki yaad aa gaye... Aaj tu mere haathon se karch ho gayegi hayyy...๐Ÿ˜ณ

Hum aapke feelings samaj gaye...๐Ÿ˜Ž

Aap ke nazar kitni tez hai u observe so minutely...๐Ÿค“

Kahi aap CID se toh nahi hai...๐Ÿค”

๐Ÿค—

Edited by Komali14 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
PART 19 REVIEW :
beyond any good adjective ...i was stunned reading this part ...what a hypnotising power u hv dear...am amazed overwhelmed and mesmerised.

loved how Antu and Ruku gave a lesson to bhoja and kalua and loved more how u depicted a most sensitive issue in the story and shown us how to stand against a wrong deed and the best part is how things get just different whn aam janta takes charge in such situation ...kash real life mein bhi aisa hi ho har jaga ...๐Ÿ˜ƒ

OMG how minutely u expressed Raghu's worry and tension for Antara ...he wanted to curb it down but couldnt ...and omg omg omg Raghu loves Antara's hand made cookies ...


and the precap ...its a total OMG precap ...waiting for it



am sorry dear am late in reviewing as u know i hv crushed my hard disc ๐Ÿ˜ญ...reviewing you from my sister-in-law's laptop ...and i know u must be angry that am not gioving u my updates but kya karen yaar ...i don hv my own pc now๐Ÿ˜• ...trying to fix everything soon ...plzz mereko bhul mat jana yaar ...main wohi teri pyarisi Vampy hun ...๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 14

Raghu n Antara's POV were too beautifully written. Tumne pigeons part bahut acche se likhe hain. Loved it

Cute chiku. Antara thought tht he was being misused by Raghu. Mami's explanation to the song was superb.

Raghu jaldi Antara ke mis-understanding clear kardo
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 20 review:
Haiii Riyu ...i just cant tell what impact ur story is creating on me ...soti hui Vampy jaag gayi ...now i want more and want dangerously

no body else can create such an aura of Raghu nath Naik so magnificently ...Kudos to u guriye ...omg omg omg ๐Ÿ‘โญ๏ธ


the total update was a wonderful OMG update ...i hv stopped searching for any better adjective ...as i just cant find any word anough to praise ur story ...ur writing style ...


the "itne se hi hawa nikal gayi ?? madam hnn ?? " was an epic moment.

The Raghunath naik ...the terror of mumbai city ...he is trying to make his antara understand in his typical mad way that what might happen to her if she comes in the hand of Shetty. Shetty wd tear her apart ruthlessly for her deed. she therefore bhul kar bhi station ke aasn pas nahi janek a

but AnTARA IS ANTARA wo to wohi karegi jo Raghu ne use mana kiya ho ...


and darling am waiting for the next part like a...u know very well๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Komali14

offo i m late res for previous chap๐Ÿ˜Š

sowie bahut late ho gaya...


Ria ji it was awesome , fabulous , hilarious etc ...๐Ÿ‘


Ruku ki kya entry thi bilkul ddlj style may...โญ๏ธ


Ruku aur usski bag... kitna anoka bag hai ... ๐Ÿ˜ณkabhi kisi ke murder karte karte rehe gaya aur murder case
se bach gaya aur kabhi doctor ki tara spondylosis si aunty ko chut kara dila
diya...๐Ÿ˜Š


Ruku aur bus ki purani dusmanni... ๐Ÿ˜กdrama queen kitna bolti
hai... just loved her...๐Ÿ˜›


Ruku aur antu ki hogaye friendship...๐Ÿ˜ƒ


Ye kya Shetty ke bhai...๐Ÿ˜ˆ ruku ko pareshan kar raha tha aur
antu ne usse bachaya... humari antu
gundi mode may aake tapad maar diya ...๐Ÿ˜ก


Antu train se girane wale the...๐Ÿ˜ฒ


Kaluya was about to grab antu when life saver military print
bag (one n only hero in train) saved
antu...๐Ÿ˜Žruku bhi gundi mode may aagaye... Ruku ke bag ne kaluya ko garden gumma

diya...๐Ÿ˜†


Ye kya sandal bhi hai bag ke saath saath as saver... sab aunties ne sandals utha ya aur
attack karna suru kar diya nalayakon ki ...๐Ÿ˜ก.naari shakti in action... It was too
good ria ji...๐Ÿ˜›


I just loved antu's boldness... Antu jhansi ki rani avatar ...Super
se upar tha...โญ๏ธ


Pata nahi woh dono kya karenge ab...๐Ÿ˜•


Ruku ke bag ke saath usski awaz bhi powerful hai...dhire
bolo accident ho jata...๐Ÿ˜†


Antu ki haathon se bana apple cookies ... raghu adhe se jyada
ka jata tha...๐Ÿ˜ณraghu toh pehle hi fida hai usske cookies ka ab antu pe fida ho
raha hai... ๐Ÿ˜ณkya connection hai ...ye toh cookies ne bana di Jodi hogaya...๐Ÿ˜ณ


Oh god ria raghu n mm convo was tooo good awesome... Dono
ko pata nahi kya baat karna hai...sirf haddi todna aatha hai...๐Ÿ˜†


Raghu ko entertainment chayiye... mm ko munni aur sheela ki
yaad aagaye entertain ke naam sunte hi...๐Ÿ˜‰


Mm ban gaya reporter mm aur apne kabaro ke saath raghu ko
paka ne laga...๐Ÿ˜†


Raghu ne news pe antu aur ruku ki karname dekhe heran ho
gaya...๐Ÿ˜ฒ


This incident n antu's words effected dayamai... She was
stranging at her ๐Ÿ˜กn raghu didn't like it...


Story is getting interesting ... โญ๏ธapke dimag may ye sab
story kaise aajate hai ji... ๐Ÿ˜ฒTussi great ho ji...โญ๏ธโญ๏ธ


Yaar ria aapko itni energy kaha se aati hai itna lamba
update lekhne ka...?.๐Ÿ˜•


Mujhe ye padne may do din lag gaya itna lamba tha... Lekin hume
lamba update manzoor hai apke update itne ache joh hote hai...๐Ÿ˜ƒi just love them...๐Ÿ˜ณ


Precap ne toh mujhe dreamland may puncha diya... hayyy prince
charming...


Omg ye kya likh diya may ne itna lamba aur boring comment ...
๐Ÿ˜ฒSo toh nahi gaye ?๐Ÿฅฑ


Plz cont asap waiting...๐Ÿ˜›


Thank u๐Ÿ˜Š




Niki ๐Ÿ˜† .. Mujhe bhi apni comment dekhkhe bilcul aisa hi lag raha hai..

Lag raha Ki Maine yeha koi OS likha hai... Lol...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: RaNtara4vr

Chptr 18:

Wow ria ji...another mindblowing update...๐Ÿ‘...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ...
Thanks jii๐Ÿ˜†
Antara is happy in her work environment...with her colleagues n boss...๐Ÿ˜Š...she loves her job...โค๏ธ...(..i kno...her only solace frm d basti envirnmnt......)...she e1 savd her partners...๐Ÿ‘...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ...Super-brilliant n intelligent Antu...๐Ÿ˜ƒ...aakhir "Student of d Year" bhi toh hai...๐Ÿ˜ƒ...
It's part of her nature dude. She always loves helping the people whom she cared for, whom she loved. For them she can go to any extent... chahe woo koi bhi hoo... her family or her friends.
Oye-hoye Raghu bhi pahunch gaya Office...DESTINY...hmmm...๐Ÿ˜Š...
yup...๐Ÿ˜Š
1 week has passed...n all d while Antu maintaining distance n Raghu getting attracted to her...Antu e1 keeping eye on dat Dayan...๐Ÿ˜”...๐Ÿค”...Bechaari Antu...kitna sehna padega use aur...๐Ÿฅบ...
what can i say yaar... All i can say that,.. it's not easy way to go in the path she choose.. she knew that she had to face thorns all the way.. she will bleed badly inside... but still she dared to go in that path to get justice for her loved once.. thats what i told you before.. she can go to any extent for the people whom she cares..
Raghu watching Antu from afar..while shes in jolly mood...depicts d chaptrs banner...rt Ria...???...
Yes!๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Ok...Raghu getting J...๐Ÿ˜‰......(...i love it...a bit tho... wen he goes JJJ......๐Ÿ˜ณ...)...jal-kukdu kahika...๐Ÿ˜†...jaluuu...๐Ÿ˜›...๐Ÿ˜ƒ...๐Ÿ˜†...๐Ÿคฃ......(..Dil dance maare...dance maare...Dil yeh Dance maare...jo Happy in d heart...Dil dance Maare re...(xN times)...lekin thoda sa hi...๐Ÿ˜†...๐Ÿ˜ƒ...
I know... Everyone loves to see raghu getting jealous๐Ÿ˜†... but yes, there is not much of jealousy track here. cause it won;t match up with the genre naa๐Ÿ˜Š
toh idhar Raghu ka dhyan hata...aur Antu gaayab...๐Ÿ˜ฒ...idhar bhi locha..๐Ÿคช...ya DESTINY...ya phir Ria ji ka tedha dimaag...๐Ÿ˜‰...๐Ÿ˜†...๐Ÿคฃ...
naa hii destiny naa hii teda dimag.๐Ÿ˜†.. it was just a random incident!! otr u can say that agar raghu antu koo uss larke kee sath office se bahar jate dekhta too saayad woo wohi pee tandav karne lagta ๐Ÿ˜†
Antu saw Aman look-alike in d station...๐Ÿ˜ฒ...hmmm...๐Ÿค”...mujhe lagta hai yeh Aman ka judwa bhai hoga..๐Ÿค“...Taarique ya phir Raahil...๐Ÿ˜Ž...yaad hai Ria...jab serial mein uske naam ka confusion tha...toh ATR naam diya tha...๐Ÿ˜‰...yaar kya din the woh.....humaare forum pe......

toh shayad yeh involve hoga...blast ya phir terrorist activities mein...photo mein bhi yehi do bhai hogein... jo Aman k cabin k table pe tha...
i will be tight leaped about this whole matter!!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰
DM n Aman r involvd in d business...๐Ÿค”...๐Ÿค“...kahi yeh kise common factor k taraf ishaara toh nahin...??...kyun Yedi Behna...โ“...๐Ÿ˜ˆ...
again tight leaped...๐Ÿ˜†
ok...toh chpter ka review ho gaya...ab thode extra shots...Mere next post par...๐Ÿ˜†...๐Ÿ˜›...(..aap bhi soch rahi hongi...ki Andy toh gayi kaam se...Dimaag stak gaya hoga...)...๐Ÿคช...
thik hain,...๐Ÿ˜†
ok nw my next post..

Thank you andy jii,...๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: RaNtara4vr

Extra Shots...๐Ÿ˜ƒ..๐Ÿ˜†...๐Ÿ˜‰...

i'll start frm Chptr 18:
PARTH...seriously Ria...PARTH...๐Ÿ˜ฒ...๐Ÿ˜ณ......โค๏ธ...OHHH MMM GGG...๐Ÿ˜ƒ......hmmm...๐Ÿค”..."Expect d Unexpected from Ria ji"...๐Ÿ˜‰...๐Ÿ˜ณ...
Tere iss line koo parke main too ekdum confuse hoo gayi kii yee larki kiss angle mein soch rahii hain!๐Ÿค“๐Ÿ˜†
just some time b4 (...may b a day or 2...)...(..nt sure..mmry thodi weak hai...๐Ÿ˜†...)...of reading dis chtpr i was humming a tune...it was giving a feeling of UNITY n of happy-happy goody-goody types...i was thinking of which show is it..??...n den aftr a liitle longer time ...๐Ÿ˜†...i rmmbrd dat it was frm MahaBharath(MB)...usd 4 Pandavas...๐Ÿ˜ณ...

n wen i read Parth..i instantly conncted to Arjun aka Shah......
n i kno as ur a fan too...u might hav includd it 4 d same...
nw u hav to clarify on dis...samaj gayi na YEdi..??...๐Ÿ˜Ž......on choosing D name...๐Ÿ˜Š...๐Ÿ˜ƒ...

i likd d name...but aftr it was on Arjun...Shah,,,i love it more...๐Ÿ˜ณ...โค๏ธ...
Well... truly saying... Parth's name was not at all inspired by MahaBharat's arjun!!... i just choose a random name yaar๐Ÿ˜†... nothing else... but tere idea sun nee kee baad i started to imagine shah in parth's character๐Ÿ˜‰... And OMG!!... shah and niki really looked good in one frame... i mean they will actually look like really good buddies if they were in same frame ๐Ÿ˜†... dekh tere ek soch nee kitna bara idea de diya๐Ÿ˜†
as i mentioned...i love d Jealosy Track...โค๏ธ...in a little dose...lest it shudnt b overdone...
I know ree๐Ÿ˜† and it won;t get overdone here surely..๐Ÿ˜Š
ok cant rmmbr more points on dis chptr nw...so moving 4 d next...
Okk jiii๐Ÿ˜†
Chptr 19:
Review toh de diya but i 4got 2 mntion some points...๐Ÿ˜’...

like d Apple Cookie one...Brilliantly included Ria..๐Ÿ‘...i mean kya idea hai...aur kya cookies hain...matlab scene hai...matlab "Cookie scene" hai,,,,
yaar main words pe confuse ho gayi..๐Ÿคช..."Lekin tu Apun ki Feelings Samji na...BaSSS...Khaafi Hai"...(...Raghu Style...๐Ÿ˜‰..)..."...abhi ispe dimaag ki dhahi nahi bananeka...aur na hi karch karneka..."...๐Ÿ˜‰...๐Ÿ˜†...
thank you jii...hum samajh gaye aap kee feelings!๐Ÿ˜†
n i also dint mention d last scene...๐Ÿ˜”...which u clarified as being d Banner-Scene...๐Ÿ˜ณ...(...Love ya Yedi...โค๏ธ...๐Ÿค—...4 all of these...n evrything u do......)...
thank u again jiii๐Ÿ˜ณ
Ok...๐Ÿค”...๐Ÿค“...tu aage se P.S.:.. nahin likhegi...๐Ÿ˜ฒ...
...Dekthe hai...๐Ÿ˜ˆ..๐Ÿ˜‰...
...Kyunki yeh toh aapka sigiie style ban gaya hai..iske bina adhura-adhura sa nahi lagega..???...bolo bolo...๐Ÿ˜†...๐Ÿ˜ƒ...

actually i wntd to say...is dat it dint hurt like past times...aftr reading dis chptr...may b bcoz i ignored it...or got used to it...(...i donno...๐Ÿ˜•...)...
ok ok... i think am being philosophical...... n moving along diffrnt tangent...๐Ÿ˜†...i'll stop dis here...
actually main confuse hoo gayi tere philosophical batein sun keee๐Ÿ˜†
d BANNER lines---if u cud clarify on it---i cudnt get it......๐Ÿ˜•...
Well... First flame on the cartridge... cartridge is a synonym to gun powder.. and when a first flame was applied to the heap of gun powder they started to explore... just like the situation here... all the time.. the tension and anticipation was being created... just like making a huge heap of gun powder.. and now the flame had started to touch the heap... u remember how DM was watching antara in TV while she was saying that she would always stand against wrong no matter what... from that point the allert signal in DM's mind had started to ring. the though had interupted in her mind that the girl who could stand against goons like bhoja and kaluya, her living in naik basti, near DM won't be healthy for a person like her who was totally involved in illegal work ... i will explore this part more again... ๐Ÿ˜Š
...tho i assumed it indicates d start of something...
...dat something...๐Ÿค”...may b ...being war...trap..or jealosy...or RaNtara's complicated relationship...n journey...
...๐Ÿ˜•...i dint understand...๐Ÿค”...m left clueless here...playing d guessing game...๐Ÿค“...
first flame on the cartridge signifies the starting of the destruction of DM's dark empire... the cartridge of her crimes which she stored all the time will started to explore with the power of truth...
hope i can make u understand!!๐Ÿ˜†
n as of minutely detailing...yeh toh meri adhat hai n fidrat bhi...๐Ÿ˜›...๐Ÿ˜†..u kno it right...๐Ÿ˜ณ...n aftr coming to d forum i learnt to relate d subtle hints n symbolisms.....so all d credit goes to FORUM...๐Ÿ˜†...๐Ÿ˜ƒ...(..proud feeling...)...๐Ÿ˜Ž...
Bilkul jii,.. and i really like that..๐Ÿ˜›
ok nw as i observed it...๐Ÿค“...in all d banners of chptr 18 , 19 n d upcoming 20...๐Ÿค”...
Raghu n Antara r wearing d same dress...๐Ÿ˜†...(...kahin aapne yeh toh nahi socha ki...???...๐Ÿ˜ฒ...ki something serious is coming up...๐Ÿ˜†...๐Ÿคฃ...)...๐Ÿ˜‰...๐Ÿ˜›...
...as it is d series of continuous events...๐Ÿ˜Š...from morning Office...to evening reaching d basti...
...n d upcoming Banner scene...in d next due chptr...obviously Night Scene hi hoga...๐Ÿ˜‰...๐Ÿ˜Ž...Hai na Ria ji...???......
Bilkul jii... sahi pakra app ne... ๐Ÿ˜†... yup its the series of continuous events so their attires were same in banners... but only u are the one to observe that as usual..๐Ÿ‘

ok dats all 4 nw...n i'll stop my rantings...shayad itne dino tak jo comments dena chahthi thi,,,,aur nahi de paayi...iska natija hai...
...aisa lagta hai saari dabi hui feelings n bhadhaas nikal rahi hoon...๐Ÿ˜”...๐Ÿ˜ฒ...๐Ÿ˜’...
koi baat nahin jii... i love ur detailing...๐Ÿค—
Sorry...aapka Bheja fry karne k liye...๐Ÿ˜”.....
n thanku...๐Ÿ˜Š...4 tolerating my ramblings...๐Ÿค—...
..ur like an Angel in d forum..keeping RaNtara alive thru stories...n drawing us more into dem...๐Ÿ˜ณ...๐Ÿ˜Š...โค๏ธ...

tc..gtg nw...n c ya...lots of love n kisses n hugs...โค๏ธ...๐Ÿค—...๐Ÿ˜ณ...


love you...๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Komali14

offo i m late res for previous chap ๐Ÿ˜Š

sowie bahut late ho gaya...
Koi baat nahin jii... reply kii size dekh kee samajh mein aa gaya kii yee type karne mein aap koo kitna time laga hoga!!๐Ÿ˜†
Ria ji it was awesome , fabulous , hilarious etc ...๐Ÿ‘
Thank you jiii๐Ÿ˜ณ
Ruku ki kya entry thi bilkul ddlj style may...โญ๏ธ
Haan jiii!!!... Bas yahan simran aur rj nahin... Antu aur ruku hain!!๐Ÿคฃ
Ruku aur usski bag... kitna anoka bag hai ... ๐Ÿ˜ณkabhi kisi ke murder karte karte rehe gaya aur murder case se bach gaya aur kabhi doctor ki tara spondylosis si aunty ko chut kara dila diya...๐Ÿ˜Š
Lagta hain RUKU KI BAG sab koo bahut pasand aa gaya... sab koi bas bag kee barein mein hii baat karte jaa rahe hain!!๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†
Ruku aur bus ki purani dusmanni... ๐Ÿ˜กdrama queen kitna bolti hai... just loved her...๐Ÿ˜›
Thank you!๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Ruku aur antu ki hogaye friendship...๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Yee too hona hii tha!!๐Ÿ˜†
Ye kya Shetty ke bhai...๐Ÿ˜ˆ ruku ko pareshan kar raha tha aur antu ne usse bachaya... humari antu gundi mode may aake tapad maar diya ...๐Ÿ˜ก
Jii haan.. our one nd only gundi antu!!๐Ÿ˜†
Antu train se girane wale the...๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Haan!!unn nalayakoo see aur kya expect kiya jaa sakta hain!
Kaluya was about to grab antu when life saver military print bag (one n only hero in train) saved antu...๐Ÿ˜Žruku bhi gundi mode may aagaye... Ruku ke bag ne kaluya ko garden gumma diya...๐Ÿ˜†
Bikul... akhir.. EVERY BAG HAS IT'S DAY!!! ๐Ÿคฃ
Ye kya sandal bhi hai bag ke saath saath as saver... sab aunties ne sandals utha ya aur attack karna suru kar diya nalayakon ki ...๐Ÿ˜ก.naari shakti in action... It was too good ria ji...๐Ÿ˜›
Ha haa thanks!!๐Ÿ˜†
I just loved antu's boldness... Antu jhansi ki rani avatar ...Super se upar tha...โญ๏ธ
thanks again!๐Ÿ˜ณ
Pata nahi woh dono kya karenge ab...๐Ÿ˜•
Kuch naa kuch too karengey hii woo dono... chup rahene waloo mein see too nahin hain!
Ruku ke bag ke saath usski awaz bhi powerful hai...dhire bolo accident ho jata...๐Ÿ˜†
Ruku kii super speech voice!!๐Ÿ˜†
Antu ki haathon se bana apple cookies ... raghu adhe se jyada ka jata tha...๐Ÿ˜ณraghu toh pehle hi fida hai usske cookies ka ab antu pe fida ho raha hai... ๐Ÿ˜ณkya connection hai ...ye toh cookies ne bana di Jodi hogaya...๐Ÿ˜ณ
Cookies nee bana di jodi!!... OMG!!๐Ÿคฃ
Oh god ria raghu n mm convo was tooo good awesome... Dono ko pata nahi kya baat karna hai...sirf haddi todna aatha hai...๐Ÿ˜†
Abhi too bas raghu miaa koo haddi hii torna atta hain... Bande koo bahut kuch sikhna hain๐Ÿ˜†
Raghu ko entertainment chayiye... mm ko munni aur sheela ki yaad aagaye entertain ke naam sunte hi...๐Ÿ˜‰
MM kee liye too wohi entertainment hain!!๐Ÿ˜†
Mm ban gaya reporter mm aur apne kabaro ke saath raghu ko paka ne laga...๐Ÿ˜†
Bhagwan kare aise news reporter kissi bhi channel mein naa hooo๐Ÿ˜†
Raghu ne news pe antu aur ruku ki karname dekhe heran ho gaya...๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Bechare kaa literally sar chakkar kha gaya.. antu aur ruku famous hoo gayi.. par wooTv pee nahin aa paya!๐Ÿคฃ
This incident n antu's words effected dayamai... She was stranging at her ๐Ÿ˜กn raghu didn't like it...
Bilkul..
Story is getting interesting ... โญ๏ธapke dimag may ye sab story kaise aajate hai ji... ๐Ÿ˜ฒTussi great ho ji...โญ๏ธโญ๏ธ
Mujhe khud hii nahin pata aise concept mere dimag mein kyun ate hain!! likhte time halat kharap hoo jati hain yaar!!๐Ÿ˜ญ
Yaar ria aapko itni energy kaha se aati hai itna lamba update lekhne ka...?.๐Ÿ˜•
Writer bhoot se joo kabhi kabhi mera sar char jata hain!
Mujhe ye padne may do din lag gaya itna lamba tha... Lekin hume lamba update manzoor hai apke update itne ache joh hote hai...๐Ÿ˜ƒ i just love them...๐Ÿ˜ณ
Thank u ๐Ÿ˜†
Precap ne toh mujhe dreamland may puncha diya... hayyy prince charming...

Omg ye kya likh diya may ne itna lamba aur boring comment ... ๐Ÿ˜ฒSo toh nahi gaye ?๐Ÿฅฑ bilkul nahin๐Ÿ˜‰

Plz cont asap waiting...๐Ÿ˜›

Thank u๐Ÿ˜Š

Love You!!๐Ÿ˜ณ

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: RaNtara4vr

OMG...Komaliii...๐Ÿ˜ฒ...๐Ÿ˜•...๐Ÿ˜ณ...๐Ÿ˜ƒ...

Main toh yaha Chptr 18 ka apna review dene aayi thi...
aur aapka comment dekhkar...aisa laga ki mera competition aaya...๐Ÿ˜ฒ...๐Ÿ˜‰...
padhkar bahut aacha laga...๐Ÿ˜ƒ...mujse jo points choote...woh sab milake apne style mein likh diya aapne...๐Ÿค—...

lagta hai...agar main na aaun...toh ria ji mujhe aur mere reviews...miss nahi kareingi...๐Ÿ˜”...

just kidding yaar...๐Ÿ˜‰...

ok nw 4 d formal intro...kabhi aapse baatein nahi huwi na komali ji ...isiliye...๐Ÿ˜†...

am Andy...n nice to c dat...mmbrs r still joining d forum n keeping it active...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ...

keep writing...๐Ÿค—...

andy jii... kuch bhi hoo... i aam always be chain for ur coment!!๐Ÿ˜ƒ... so i will be always waiting!! sirf niki kee coment see nahin chalega.. aap koo bhi coment karna parega in ur style!!๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Nethravathi

Chapter 14

Raghu n Antara's POV were too beautifully written. Tumne pigeons part bahut acche se likhe hain. Loved it

Cute chiku. Antara thought tht he was being misused by Raghu. Mami's explanation to the song was superb.

Raghu jaldi Antara ke mis-understanding clear kardo

thx for the reply nethu...๐Ÿ˜Š
love yaa..๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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