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Posted: 11 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: ankusanu

omggg dis was d most beautiful update so far of dis ff for me 😊

I jst loved d way raghu answered n esp his last answer dat antaar is "sabkuch" fr him 😳 hayeee n dere cute fight n raghu trying to make antu jealous 😆 most hilarious part was antaars biology class 🤣 what was she doing sab ek saans mein bol diya 🤣 poor raghu...
lovely update...❤️ keep writing n update sooon prerna thanks fr d update 🤗hugsss ;)))))

Thank you so much,
Antu toh hai hi hamari nerdy biology student,
Even in the jungle scene of the show Raghu is like "Tum Doctor ho kya?" and she's like "Nahi, doctor ki beti hoon". Toh Biology uske khoon mein hain..
Lots of love 🤗
-Prerna
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: niki28

OMG hw do u manage 2 write such amazing stuff???
It's awsum! Jst mind blowing!😃
Rantara fights r jst too cute n d kiss...😳 Maar dala Antu ne! 😆
N d dhaba scene jst luvd it!😳 😃
Plz continue ASAP!😊
n thanx 4 d pm 😃

Hey niki,
Rantara ko yaad karke I think of their intensity and put it in my updates. I actually am my biggest critic. I am not that fond of my writing yet.. I have a long way to go.
Glad you liked the Rantara scenes
I'll continue asap
Love ya 🤗
-Prerna
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
woww!!! prerna its sooo lovely update..😳
they are so adorable as always...
antu is very smart girl...perfect fr raghu n raghu perfect match for antu..
the last scene was so good dear...rantara played so beautiful game raghu ko antara mein rab dikhta hai.."tujhmein rab dikhta hai yaara main kya karun..?"..❤️thanks for updating dear,.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: Tsuchi

woww!!! prerna its sooo lovely update..😳

they are so adorable as always...
antu is very smart girl...perfect fr raghu n raghu perfect match for antu..
the last scene was so good dear...rantara played so beautiful game raghu ko antara mein rab dikhta hai.."tujhmein rab dikhta hai yaara main kya karun..?"..❤️thanks for updating dear,.😃

Hey Suchi,
Haan Raghu ko Antu mein rab dikhta hain
BTW I love the song and the movie..
Love ya
Prerna
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
Awww this was so cute
I love this story!!!
pls cont asap
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
PART 5 :
Antara was having mixed emotions now. She was a girl who was extremely shy , especially when it came to Raghu. But now she was hugging him right there in public. But she couldn't help it , the way he told her that she is everything to him , she saw herself at cloud nine. He gently caressed her back. "Tumhe pata hain ki hum dono ko sab dekh rahe hain"Raghu whispered with a smirk. "Dekhne do.. Main apne aap ko control nahi kar payi.."whispered Antara. When Raghu heard that, his emotions got dominating. He gently parted from the hug though not wanting people to stare at them.."Raghu, main tumhe batana bhool gayi. Kal Karvachauth hain.."said Antara. "Haan, toh...?"said Raghu. "Kal main vrat rakhoongi.."said Antara. "Miss Kaul, tujhe yeh sab karni ki zaroorat nahi hain. Tune pehle kabhi vrat nahi rakha hain aur iss baar teri maa bhi tere saath nahi hain. Tu akeli hain , koi aur aurat nahi hain tere saath . Tu bimaar padh jayegi"said Raghu. "Nahi Raghu, iss baar main vrat karoongi. Bhale hi humaari shaadi nahi huyi hain, phir bhi maine tumhe apna pati maan liya hain.."said Raghu.. "Antara, tune toh mujhe tension de di yaar"said Raghu. "Chinta mar karo Raghu, Main theek rahungi. Par iss baar main tumhaare liye vrat rakhoongi"said Antara. 'Baap re, kitni ziddi hain tu"said Raghu. "Ziddi nahi bas ek deewaani hu"said Antara . "Kuch dino se dekh raha hoon, tujhe mein himmar bahut aa gayi hain. Sabke saamne mujhe kiss karna ,phir gale lag jaana. Pehle toh bas sharmaati rehti thi.Ab meri Miss Kaul Silk Smitha se bahut kuch seekh rahi hain"said Raghu laughing. "KYAAA??? Silk Smitha. Tum mujhe kisse compare kar rahe ho? Heights of insults !! Unbelievable, who gave you the audacity to tell a girl who is madly in love with you , that she is inspired by Silk Smitha.. Just because I have started getting over my shyness doesn't mean that you compare me with Silk Smitha . It just doesn't make any sense!"said Antara angrily. Raghu started laughing even more... "Lagta hain ki jab bhi tujhe gussa aata hain, tu angrezi mein chapar chapar karti hain.. Kitna bole toh... funny lagta hain !!"said Raghu laughing. "Meri bezaati karke tumhe mazaak soojh raha hain. Lo main tumhaare liye vrat nahi rahoongi aur aaj ke baad tumhe kabhi pyaar nahi karoongi"said Antara in a miffed tone.. "Accha hain, tu vrat nahi rakhegi toh tere liye hi accha hain, tujhe koi bimaari nahi lagegi"said Raghu. "You are unbelievable !! Yeh joh khaana tumne order kiya hain na.. Woh tum hi khao .. Main bus mein jaake waapas beth rahi hoon.. Waise bhi 15 minute mein bus nikal padegi"said Antara. Saying this, she walked straight into the bus.. "Oye Miss Kaul ruk toh sahi.. Main bas mazaak kar raha tha"said Raghu. The waitor came and served the food .. "Oye boss !! Please iss khaane ko pack karva de. Hum bus mein khayenge"said Raghu. "Theek hain ..."said the waitor. He got the packed food and stepped inside the bus.. He sat beside Antara to find her looking away from him. "Accha sorry baba !! Maaf karde.. Main bas mazaak kar raha tha..."said Raghu. "Tum kahi aur baitho"said Antara. "Accha , pehle khaana kha le"said Raghu. "Mujhe nahi khaana . Tum khao.."said Antara. "Oye, maaphi maangi na maine. Itna toh mere liye kar sakti hain na..."said Raghu. "Nahi . Nahi doongi maaphi"said Raghu. "Theek hain, phir main waapas pehle jaise zeher pe loonga"said Raghu. Antara immediately placed her hand on his mouth. Her eyes became moist."Khabardaar. Tumhe pata hain na ki meri kya haalat ho gayi thi, jab tumne uss Dayamayi ke kehne par zeher pee liya tha... Kabhi vaapas aise mat kehna. Main tumhaare bina mar jaoongi"said Antara. He gently placed a kiss on her forehead. "Kabhi nahi jaoonga tujhe chod ke.. Uss waqt main itna zyaadha dukhi ho gaya tha jab mujhe pata chale ke mere haathon se tere papa ka khoon huya hain ki main mar jaana chahta tha..Aur phir Dayamayi aayi aur usne kaha ki main zeher waala doodh pee loon jisse mujhe shanti mil jayegi"said Raghu. "Woh tumhe apna beta maanti thi na ...Kaisi maa hain woh. Apne bete ko zeher de diya"Antara said out of disgust. "Abhi hum ek maksat se yaha aaye hain na ... Woh Satya aur uske aadmi humaara peecha kar rahe honge.. Hum jaldi se jaldi Kashmir pahuch jayenge taaki hum Dayamayi aur uske aadmiyon ke khilaaph saboot ikhatta kar sake"said Raghu. "Yaad hain mujhe Raghu, hamara maksat .. Unko main kadi se kadi sazaa dilwaana chahti hoon.."said Antara. "Haan , dilva denge unko sazaa, Aur ab khaana kha le, kal tera vrat bhi hain na..."said Raghu. Antara nodded. Both Antara and Raghu fed each other happilly . The bus the started moving driving its passengers to Kashmir.. Meanwhile Antara and Raghu slept on their seats ... Meanwhile Antara was having a nightmare... Her thought of Satya catching her was giving her horrible nightmares. She was dreaming of Satya coming , killing Raghu and torturing her. She woke up with a jerk.. Startled by her sudden movement, Raghu woke up too. "Kya huya Miss Kaul?"Raghu asked. "Woh.. Woh.. Satya.. Mujhe pakad lega"said Antara stammering. "Nahi .. Aisa nahi hoga Miss Kaul. Mere hote huye woh tere paas bhi nahi aa sakta"said Raghu firmly. He cupped her face and she rested her head on his chest and they both dozed off..

Precap : Karvachauth... Will try my best to make it a scene to remember

How did u like this update..Shoot in your comments 😊
-Prerna
Edited by abhiyaswaron - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
d story is goin real smooth...😊
luv deir interactions...❤️
continue soon.,..waiting......
Edited by RaNtara4vr - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: RaNtara4vr

d story is goin real smooth...😊

luv deir interactions...❤️
continue soon.,..waiting......

Thank you so much dear..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
loved it!!!
rantara ka hug.. aww😳
antu becoming bold...😉
rantara ka nok jhok😳
raghu ka care...
and now karvachauth...
beautiful, spelndid and mervellous..👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
wonderful superb excellent
i am short of words now
u r doing a fantastic job dear

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