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Posted: 11 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Tsuchi

very sweet update dear!!..😳

u updated this after a long time...😊
rantara on way to Kashmir..
yeah they r blessed with good peoples..like mm,rukku,uncle😃
jai mata di..😛
tfpm..

Thank you Suchi,
Hope I can continue to make you all happy through my updates :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: rima4ever

outstanding excellent update

i wish they get married in a shiv parvati temple
then they can be more free with each other
i also need a kc sequence

Yes Rima, I will see to it that I will include this..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53

dat ws cute n sweet update...raghu cldnt help drooling on antu 😆 n finally rantara r going to kashmir... grttt ..
waiting fr nxt part ... n Jai Mata Di
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
aww raghu drolling on antu...😳..so cute...
lovly update,,, so they are heading towards kashmir... lovely...⭐️
cont asap
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
Fabulous update Prena!

Loved it!

Finally they're on their way to Kashmir!

Waiting for the next part!

Thanks for the pm and continue soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
Prerna 🤗
Finally you updated
Awww just love Rantara moments 😳😳
Loved that line, Mera saath nahi choreygi 😆
Aww Raghu drooling over her, ofcourse she is so pretty 😉
Finally they are heading towards Kashmir
Hope to see interesting scenes in Kashmir
But it was a short update
Continuee soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: Roy.nikki143

Prerna 🤗

Finally you updated
Awww just love Rantara moments 😳😳
Loved that line, Mera saath nahi choreygi 😆
Aww Raghu drooling over her, ofcourse she is so pretty 😉
Finally they are heading towards Kashmir
Hope to see interesting scenes in Kashmir
But it was a short update
Continuee soon

Hey Nikki,
Antu toh hamaari hain hi pretty
Ladke toh kya ladkiyan bhi uspar marengi..
Sorry for the short update, ill make it longer next time
Thanks !
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: Wahian4lyf

Fabulous update Prena!


Loved it!

Finally they're on their way to Kashmir!

Waiting for the next part!

Thanks for the pm and continue soon :)

Hey Kiret,
Glad you liked it !!
I'll update asap..
-Prerna
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
Hey , updating this one after a long time. But this time the update is also not short.. :D
PART 4 :

It had been a few hours since Antara and Raghu were travelling in the bus. They were trying to catch on some sleep as they had left early in the morning form the uncle's house .Antara and Raghu were both sound -asleep when suddenly the driver applies a break due to which Antara wakes up with a jerk "Chor aa gaya. Raghu chor !!"Antara says screaming. Raghu also instantly wakes up hearing Antara scream. "Kya hua Miss Kaul? Chalti huyi bus mein kyun chila rahi hain"asked Raghu in a sleepy voice. "Woh sorry Raghu. Mujhe laga chor aa gaya ."said Antara. "Tu toh soh rahi thi aaram se ? Tu kya sapne mein bhi police-chor ka khel dekhti rehti hain.?"said Raghu laughing. Antara giggled . She loved it when Raghu teased her. She never minded it..! She was never offended . She herself giggled at her childishness.. If her childishness could make Raghu laugh ,she was ready to become a child. "Aur tum bhi soh gaye the? Sapne mein kya dekha?"asked Antara. "Apun ne sapne mein... Ufff !! Kya Bataoon. Ek ladki dekhi"said Raghu."Ladki ? Kaunsi Ladki? Kaisi Ladki ? "asked Antara sternly. "Ek thi. Bahut khoobsurat. Bole toh ekdum pari ki tarah thi woh. Jhakaas thi !! Ufff"said Raghu. Antara somewhere knew that he didn't mean any other girl. She trusted him. But she still hated it when he tried flirting with someone else. Even though she knew that he wouldn't look at anyone else other than her, she hated it when he would say things like this. "Raghu theekse batao !! Warna.."said Antara. "Warna kya? Mujhe Maaregi?"said Raghu. "Tumhe toh nahi par uss chudail ko zaroor maroongi"said Antara. "Khabardar meri Antara ko kuch bhi kaha toh. Mere sapne mein main aur woh ek kamre mein.."said Raghu. "Chee Raghu !! Besharam"she said blushing. She was happy that her trust was not broken once again. She was happy that her confidence in Raghu wasn't wrong.. "Tumhe bhook lagi hogi na..?"asked Antara. "Uff Antara !! Tum mujhe har ek ghante mein poonchti ho ki agar mujhe bhook lagi hain ki nahi. Antara , tumhe bhi patah hai na ki apun ek haathi ki tarah nahi kha sakta na..."said Raghu smiling. "Hathee ki tarah khane ko tumhe main nahi keh rahi. Ek normal insaan ki tarah khaane ko keh rahi ho. Agar aise hi chalta raha toh due to starvation and lack of glucose which is leads to the provision of energy, you may enter into a state of unconsciousness and you may collapse any moment.With the help of the hormone insluin , the cells of your body pour the glucose into your bloodstream as fuel , but in your case the hormone won't function properly"said Antara in a single breath. "Kya ??Mujhe kuch samajh mein nahi aaya. Tu angrezi mein pata nahi kya anaap-shnaap bake jaa rahi thi !"exclaimed raghu. "Sorry Raghu, biology student hone ke naate , main apne character mein bahut zyaada ghus gayi thi"said Antara. "Hmmm.. Ek baat bolu Antara. Sorry !! Main tumhaare laayak nahi hoon. Na toh mujhme ek padhe likhe ladke ke acche aadate hain aur na mujhe angrezi aati hain. Tu itni padhi likhi hain , aur main toh dhank se school bhi nahi jaa paya"said Raghu . Antara quickly slammed her lips on his silencing him. She broke off quickly too. "Miss Kaul, yeh tujhe kya ho gaya?"asked Raghu shocked. "Pehle bhagwaan ka lakh lakh shukar hain ki kisi ne nahi dekha. Ek second mein hi mera kaam ho gaya ..Tumhe chup karana zaroori tha. Tum pata nahi kya bakwaas bole ja rahe the. Raghu, tumhaare ilaava is duniya mein mere liye koi laayak nahi hain"said Antara smiling. Raghu smiled at her words. First of all he was shocked by the sudden guts which she got to kiss him in the public bus. But then he realized to what extent she could go to be with him.

After a few hours:
Raghu and Antara got down there bus for dinner break. All the passengers had got down and had settled in a Dhaba. "Antara , tumhe bhook lagi hogi na ?"asked Raghu. "Raghu, tumhe kya main ek haathi lagti hoon jo tum mujhe har ek ghante mein khaane ke liye poochte rehte ho?"said Antara teasingly. "Bahut kuch seekh liya hain tune mujhse"said Raghu. "Main tujhse pooch bhi kyun raha hoon? Waitor , do butter naan aur paneer butter masala laana"said Raghu. "Hmm.. Tum mujhe bahut acchi tareeke se jaante ho!"said Antara smiling. "Koi shaq?"said Raghu . "Accha Raghu jab tak khaana nahi aata , tab tak hum ek game khelte hain. Main ek word bolungi aur tumhaare dimaag mein woh word sunne ke baad jo bhi word aata hain . Tumhe woh bolna hain"said Antara. "Miss Kaul, yeh kaunse film ka khel hain?"asked Raghu. "Arre woh chodo. Bolo mere saath kheloge?"asked Antara. "Haan , chal theek hain"said Raghu.
(Italics = Antara, BOLD = Raghu)
Zindagi - Antara
khoobsurati - Antara
bhagwaan - Antara
Antara - Sab Kuch


Antara was deeply mesmerized and touched by his answers..She didn't care about the passengers who were at the other tables of the Dhaba and got up and gave Raghu a tight hug


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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
Preru im back 😆
Update was mindblowing yar
Simply awesome I loved it so so so much
Awww Antara biology student 😆 kya kya bol diya yede ko kuch samaj hi nahi aaya 😆
Hailaaa kiss in public bus 😲 😲
Manna pareyga Antu to bohat smart nikli or fast bhi 😛 😆
Awww Love the game in the end
Continuee soon
Thankxxx for pm
🤗
Edited by Roy.nikki143 - 11 years ago

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