Rantara TS||Mission Manaoo Antara||Part 2 pg. 7

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Hina Kamran

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

wow lovely update

he forgot her b-day aww

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: manpreet87
WAOOO..OUTSTANDING ..RANTARA MARRIED INTERSTING...WAITING FOR NEXT...👍🏼

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Originally posted by: liana2304
Lovely and interesting update .
Waiting what will happened for the next .
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Originally posted by: honeybees22
wow lovely update
he forgot her b-day aww

pls cont asap

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Capucine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Kiret,,

Raghu is too much how he could forget Antu's birthday

So how will he pacify her?

Will wait and see

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Capucine
Kiret,,
Raghu is too much how he could forget Antu's birthday
So how will he pacify her?
Will wait and see

😆 Yes he is!

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Mission Manaoo Antara
Part 2
I was in a really weird mood when I wrote this so I don't really know what I wrote! So go ahead and read at your own risk!
"Raghu, are you sure about this?" Rukhsana asks as I show her the saree I got Antara. "Why what's wrong with it?" I ask, confused. "Raghu, I don't think Antara will like this. Why don't you try that red saree with the silver jewelry?" she says. I pick up the other one and imagine Antara in it. It was perfect, I couldn't imagine her in any the other one at all. "It's perfect Rukhsana. Thank you so much!" I say, giving her a hug. "Any time. Now hurry up and go plan the rest of the stuff before Antara gets even more mad," she says. "Yeah I'm going. Thank you once again," I say, getting up to leave.
I walk out and my phone starts ringing. I look at the screen. It was Antara. Ready for her eruption, I pick up the phone and say, "Hi jaan."
"What is this?" she asks. "What are you talking about jaan?" I ask. "This stupid bouquet of flowers. If you think that's going to make everything okay, well then you are completely wrong," she says, hanging up.
"Aaj toh teri khair nahi Raghunath Naik," I say, bringing the phone down. Mach Mach had told me to send her a bouquet to try and get her anger in control but here it had clearly had the opposite effect. I sigh. The rest of this plan better work otherwise Antara will never forget that I forgot her birthday. I rush off to make sure that all of the decorations were proper. Tonight was going to be a night that Antara would remember forever.
I lay out the saree and jewelry on the bed, leaving a note for Antara. It said to get ready and come down by six and meet me at seven at a surprise location. Mach Mach was kind enough to help me with this part. He was going to bring Antara to the location. I run out of the room, bumping into Antara. She falls and I catch her, my arms around her waist, her eyes closed. She slowly opens her eyes and looks into mine. I smile and a slight smile appears on her face as well. I guess she remembered that she was still mad at me because her expression changed and she stood up, pushing me away.

"Antara, there's something for you in there. Would you mind going to look at it?" I ask. Her expression changes and she looks confused. She doesn't say anything though and walks into the room. I walk to the guest room and change and leave before she can say anything to me.

I light the candles that are on the ground. Hopefully Antara hadn't thrown any fit and would come here. I had told her to be here by 7, it was 6:50 now. I fix the roses in the vase on the table, waiting for her to come. I hear the sound of the brakes and look up to see a white car. That meant that Mach Mach had brought her here. Now everything just had to go well.

I walk up to the car and open the door, offering her my hand. She accepts and comes out. Before I close the door, I see Mach Mach giving me a thumbs up. I smile at him and close the door.

"Why did you call me here, and that too in this?" Antara asks. I look at her. She was looking even more beautiful than I had thought. "Red is totally your colour," I say. She blushes slightly and I can see that her anger was starting to fade away. I smile at her and she repeats her question, waiting for an answer. "Come," I say, leading her over.

She walks next to me, her small hand a perfect fit in mine. I stop and look at her just to find her looking at me. "Don't look at me. Look over there," I say, pointing to where the candles were.

She turns her head there and gasps at the sight in front of her. She walks towards the candles and bends down. I bend down next to her as well, pushing her hair back, cupping her face gently. She looks at me, her expression confusing me. "What happened Antara?" I ask.

A/N: So that was the second part! Not as good as I wanted it to be but at least it was something! Last part will be up soon! :)

Edited by Wahian4lyf - 11 years ago

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Nikkisha Roy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Awww very nice update Kiru
MM ka idea flop 😆
Antu in red saree 😃 Raghu total latto 😆
Continue soon

Edited by Roy.nikki143 - 11 years ago

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.Suchi.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

nice update kiri!😛

aww poor raghu trying hard for his mission😆..n everready friend mm for him..😆..its very nice update yr....excited for more surprise n what happened to her?

thanks fr updating😊

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priyanka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#50

awww poor raghu...cldnt help bt to plan sumthing
big fr antara...wow finally antu came to d venue n
dat to in saree dat raghu gave her...grt
waiting fr d nxt part to knw how exactly raghu vl
pacify her... thanks

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