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Posted: 11 years ago
#51

so sorry for the late reply

loved the update it was lovley but scary as well
loved it
pls cont asap
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: honeybees22

so sorry for the late reply

loved the update it was lovley but scary as well
loved it
pls cont asap


It's ok!
Glad you liked it!

Updating today!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 37B


I wake up with a heavy head. I open my eyes and find myself in a cabin. That was weird. I was just at the reception, wasn't I? Then how had I gotten here? I try to get up but fall back down and hit my head against the wall again. My hands and feet were tied. No wonder I was feeling so uncomfortable. "The more you try to loosen it, the tighter it will get," I heard someone say. I look to the side and saw Satya but he was blurry.

Had he kidnapped me? Oh no... I had to tell Raghu where I was... But how?

He came up to me an touched my face and I move over, starting to feel dizzy now. I didn't want his touch anywhere on my body. "Arre don't worry. Main tume koi nuksaan nahi paunchaoga, par tumare uss Raghu ka koi vaada nahi kar sakta," he says. "Tum Raghu ke saath kuch nahi karoge," I say. He gets up and walks out. I look around for a way to get out but the dizziness over takes me and I fall back down on the ground.

I drive as fast as I can. The GPS had stopped moving meaning that Antara was in one place. I jumped out of the Jeep and headed towards the jungle. The tracker was telling me that Antara was somewhere in this jungle, but where? I kept walking until I saw a cabin in sight. I was pretty sure Antara was in there because there were 3 guys standing out there. And Satya as well. I had to get to her.

I walk up to the guys, ready to fight them just in case. "Toh finally tu mujh tak paunch hi gaya," Satya says. "Antara ko chod," I say. "Nahi karonga to tu kya karlega? Maar dale ga mujhe?" he asks. "Zaarorat aane par woh bhi kar sakta hoon. Chup chap Antara ko chod nahi toh," I reply. "Nahi toh kya?" he asks. You asked for it, I think and punch him in the face. He lands face first on the ground. The other three guys attack me but I was expecting it.

I throw some punches and kicks at them rendering them all unconscious. Now, there was only Satya left. "Tujhe maar dalne ka bahut maan kar raha hain par woh kya hain na, main apne haath tere iss ghatiya khoon se gaande nahi karna chaata," I say. "Raghunath," he says and attempts to punch me. I dodge him and say, "Actually, its Raghuveer." I land an unexpected punch on him and he falls to the ground again. "Meri Antara ke saath paanga lene ka yehi nateeja hota hai," I say, pinning him to the ground. I didn't want to be a murderer, not in this lifetime at least. I pull out my phone and call the police who had been trailing after me, letting them know where I was. I wanted to go to Antara so badly, I had no idea what condition she would be in, but I couldn't leave him alone until the police came. He was half unconscious and the second the police arrived, I ran inside the cabin and saw Antara lying on the floor.

I ran to her and put her head in my lap. "Miss. Kaul," I say softly. She opens her eyes slowly and says, "Raghu." Tears start to roll out of her eyes and I softly wipe them away. I help her sit up and untie her hands from behind her and then move on to untie the rope from her feet. I help her stand up and we begin to walk out when Antara hisses in pain. "Kya hua?" I ask. "I think ki moch aa gayi hai," she says. "Tu chal paegi?" I ask. She shakes her head no. Obviously she couldn't and she looked very weak as well. I lift her in my arms and carry her out. She rests her head on my shoulder and says, "Ab toh vo humari zindagi se hamesha hamesha ke liye chala gaya hain na?" "Hamesha ke liye," I say. She smiles and looks at me. I carry her out of the jungle and help her to sit in the jeep. Tonight had been an eventful night but he was finally gone from our lives. Nothing could come between us now.

2 months later... Kashmir

"Bhai waha dekhna band karo, bhabhi abhi tak neeche nahi aayi hai aur woh itni jaldi aane bhi nahi waali," Riya says. I look away from the stairs for what must have been the 10th time. It was our engagement today and we were back in Kashmir, where our story had started. I was waiting eagerly for Antara. I hadn't seen her since last night when we had met to play basketball. Riya wouldn't let me go near her.

I was really excited as I looked at myself in the mirror. It was my engagement with Raghu tonight. I couldn't believe that it was finally happening. I fix my hair and dupatta once more and turn to face Payal Di. "Kaisi lag rahi hoon main?" I ask. "Ek dum perfect," she says. I smile and think about the past two months.

After Satya had been arrested, Riya had been heartbroken. I guess there was something going on between them but she wouldn't say anything to anyone other then Arjun. I don't know why. The two of them had grown close though and it was nice to see that she was at least opening up to someone. As for Raghu and I, we were just really happy that Satya was gone from our lives.

"Antara, chal," Piya says and takes my hand. We walk down the stairs, my eyes scanning the room for Raghu. He was standing at the bottom of the stairs, looking handsome as ever in that silver and blue sherwani. His eyes met mine and we smiled at each other.

I look up once again and this time I actually see Antara coming down. She was looking beautiful in that peach and blue dress and I couldn't take my eyes off of her. She was just so beautiful. She walked down and came to stand in front of me. I took her hand and led her to where our parents were standing and the ceremony began.

I took Antara's small, soft hand in mine and slipped the ring onto her finger. It was the same ring that I had proposed to her with. She smiled and everyone clapped.

I took his hand and slowly slipped the ring onto his ring finger and looked up to see him. He smiled at me and I smiled back. He pulled me in for a hug. I rested my head against his chest, glad that I was soon going to be Raghu's, only Raghu's. We were going to become do dil ek jaan in the true senses.


A/N: Hope you guys liked this update! I'm not that good with fight scenes so that was a bit crappy but I hope you liked it nonetheless! This story is nearing it's end, only a couple more updates!

Edited by Wahian4lyf - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
Chalo gud dat satya ka kaam tamam😉
Kamina ge deserves to be begind bars😡
Lovely our rantara r engaged..😳
We r heading towards hapoy endings
With rantara together forever👏👏👏
Waiting fr nxt update dear
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Thanks
Edited by ankusanu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
Hey!! Its superb!!!..raghu found her...
Satya's game is over n he is out from rantara's life forever...fantastic
Woww! Engagement in kashmir...wedding should be done DHOOMDHADHKA!..pls...
This is really a sweet n cute story of rantara's reincarnation. I loved it a lot ...update soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: Tsuchi

Hey!! Its superb!!!..raghu found her...
Satya's game is over n he is out from rantara's life forever...fantastic
Woww! Engagement in kashmir...wedding should be done DHOOMDHADHKA!..pls...
This is really a sweet n cute story of rantara's reincarnation. I loved it a lot ...update soon :)


Thank you! And yes... Satya's game over!

The wedding will definitely be dhoomdhadhka!

Will update soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
Aww to cute Kire
Im so happy that Raghu hade beaten him 😆
I wish I got one chance to punch him 🤣
Anyways Raghu ne mere hisse ka bhi mar liya
Rantara Engagament 😳😳
Finally they got engaged
Now all is well 😃😃
Thankx for pm
Continue soon
I hope this upsate wasn't the last one is it??
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
I am so glad that phattu is finally out of their lives...!! I so wanted this.. Thank u Kiret..!
Uff ... Raghu-Antara r together forever... I love and adore this two so much...!!!!!!!!
Edited by nbw16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
Hiii...😃.

i entered into ur FF thread now... I surely would like to say that ua updates are really really good... i luved them alot...👍🏼 The way u have expressed it is really awesummm... N haan... add me to the PM list yaar... i surely would love receive PM's frm yu... 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
satya khalaas and rantara DO DIL EK JAAN

lovely update 👏

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