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Posted: 11 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: hayakhan5

Congo harsh...
I loved the concept...
Loved it..
Amazing...
But it was short...
Mr. Akdu...
But he loves to tease her..
Thanx for the pm...
Update soon and long and pm me...

Thanks haya..
I m glad u like it..!!
Yes it was start so bit short..
Ur welcomr..
I will update soon..n hopefully long...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: ankusanu

me too liked it yar..
raghu omg he loves to tease antu..
waiting
plz update soonn
waiting fr nxt part

Thanks..😊
I m glad u like it..😃
I will..ur welcome..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: abhiyaswaron

Lovely concept !! Continue karo..

Thanks..Ji jarur..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: gargi21

Another ff ...wow harshita wonderful...

Amazing yaar continue soon...
1st part was too good... 😊

Thanks gargi..
I m glad u like it..😃
I will..:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
oww harshu such a sweet story..
raghu liked teasing antu..
atu called him akdu and he heard that..lol
cont soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
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very good start...
interesting ff
please update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
Hey guys i m back wid an update so here it goes i hope its long enough n u guys will hopefully..Sorry fr typos.!😊
Nd guys as i told u i will only update on weekends..Sorry again..😊
ENJOY!


Part - 2-> AKDU PADOSI..!!

Antara was done wid d day.. All her work was done now n she was ready to leave..
Antara - So finally i m done for d day chalo ghar pe jaldi chali jati hu Aaji ka medicines aur khana ka time bhi hona wala hai bfre dis Akdu does anything more i should make a leave..

MANSION -
Aaji was sitting in d hall watching a Reality show on TV when Antara entered.Aaji saw Antara n Antara made her way to hug Aaji..
Antara - Aaji kaise ho aap..
Aaji - bilkul theek meri bachi..
Antara - good Aaji mai jaldi se aapka liye khana banati hu n fir hum baithe ka baatein karenga..
Aaji - aare aare saans toh le pehla Antara Kaam se aati hai aur woh Akdu boss tera kaam bhi toh itna deta hai na tujhe pareshan bhi karta hoga na..
Antara - Aaji aap bhi na...!! Karta hai par aap Akdu mat bolo pata hai na kya hoga..
Aaji - kya hoga hai.. Mai darti thodi hu Chintu se mai uski Aaji hu Aaji mujhe kya bolega woh..
Antara giggles - Aaji lagta hi nae ka aap Sir ki boss ho essa lagta hai aap meri Aaji ho..
Aaji - toh kya Antara mai teri bhi toh Aaji hu na.. Aur fir Sir Antara kitni baar kaha hai tujhe Ghar mai Chintu ko Sir mat bula..
Antara bits her tongue - Sorry Aaji Raghu Raghu bs aagaye se Dhyan rakhugi..
Aaji makes Antara sits besides her n Antara puts her head on Aaji's lap..
Antara - Aaji agar aap ne mujhe aapne ghar pe jagah nae de hoti toh pata nae usse din mera sath kya hota mai kaha hoti n her voice gets chocked

*Flashback*

Antara used to stay in a PG were the onwer was really bad in nature n Nasty his intentions were not good.. That day he crossed his limits..
Mr.Kharmadkar was trying to manhandle Antara. Antara was a brave girl she some how managed to escape n rush to near Temple where Aaji used to come for her pooja..
Antara was crying her heart out to her.Antara didnt knew she was Raghu's Aaji n Aaji thought that it would be better if she takes her wid her..
Aaji - chal beta utho essa rota nae hai.. Aap mera sath chalo Antara aao mera ghar chalo..
Antara who was still crying was not in a condition to argue when they reach the Mansion, Raghu was shocked to see Antara's State n he didnt say Anything bt Silently got her belongings back n made sure dat Mr.Kharmadkar was jailed he was damn Angry dat how can dat person do anything to Antara..

(NOTE - Guys the surname used here is just taken bcoz i didnt have any other no offense. Sorry if it hurt anyone.. Sorry! Nd Antara was working wid Raghu frm starting n so Raghu did that to the person i hope there is no confusion made by me.😊)
*Flashback ends*

PRESENT -

Aaji - aae Antara bola na ke yeh sab baatein ab kabhi nae hogae yeh ghar mai..
(Someone was listening at all d conversations standing at d door. It was Raghu he knew the fact she never did forget the incident bt still she is always smiling n he had dat behaviour so she keeps on fighting wid him)

Antara - Aaji chale ab bahut hogaya aapka Akdu Chintu aagaya na toh meri khar nae.. Toh mai jaldi se Khana ready karti hu aur fir hum gossip karta hai n winks..😉
Aaji laughs - pagal kahi ki..
Antara goes to Kitchen,Somewhere she was happy wid Aaji she always took care of her N Aaji was also d same they were best of friends fr eachother.Raghu was somewhere happy even bcoz of Antara Aaji used to laugh smile n her health was improving day by day..)

Aaji - baapa bs apna Ashirwad banae rakhna Antara par n smiles..
Raghu enters d house n gives a smile to Aaji
Raghu - Aaji aap yaha par kyu baithe ho..?!
Aaji - ab mera yaha baithne se tujhe kya problem hai re Chintu..
Raghu made an irritating face - Aaji Raghu Raghu chintu mad bulao mujhe ab mai chota nae raha..
Aaji - Kitna bhi bada hojae mera liye toh chota hi rehega n smiles..
Waise aaj kya baat hai Aaji ka sath baitha hai tabiyat theek hai na Akdu ki..
Raghu shots his head up - Aaji Akdu kisna sikhaya yeh aap ko..Oh yes the one n only Antara kaul.. Nd his face hardens
Aaji - aae Chintu woh Office mai teri P.A. hai yaha nae aur Akdu ko Akdu nae bolegi toh kya bolegi..
Raghu - Aaji aap meri Aaji ho uski nae.. Aap hamesha uski side leti ho pata nae usme essa kya hai..jab dekho tab smile karti rehti hai pjs sunna ti hai aur hasti rehti hai aur aap bhi..
Aaji - yeh toh Chintu yehi toh Antara Zindagi se khush hai khul ka jeeti hai hasti hai aur hasse ti bhi hai..Chintu zindagi bahut choti hoti hai toh usse khul ka jeena chahiye Antara wohi kar rahi hai.. Aur tune socha hai ka tu kya kar raha hai..
Raghu looked at Aaji he was always said this was he not living..?!
Was he not happy?! Was he a really Akdu..

Raghu - Aaji yeh sab chodo ab aaram karo mai abhi aata hu..
Aaji - haa haa Jaa yeda..
Raghu made his way towards Kitchen.. Where Antara was busy preparing Food n Huming a song..

Raghu made his entry.While Antara realise she turns suddenly n they share a eye-lock
(bg - mahi tu instrument)
Raghu started moving towards Antara n Antara was moving back n finally she hits d platform wall.. N stops Raghu came closer n closer Antara shut her eyes n They could feel each other breathe being so close..
Raghu could hear her Heart -beat. Raghu smiled looking her reactions.Antara opened her eyes to find Raghu drinking water den she realised dat glass was behind her n her eyes widen Raghu was smirking and had a quick Laugh n goes away winking at her..😆😉

Antara was shocked as well as surprised at wat happened few moments N wat he just did... Did dat Akdu just smile no wait he winked at me.. Wat d..?!

Antara - yeh ghar aa ka essa nd office mai Kadoos,Akdu..argh..
I hate you Akdu!Hard to understand you Akdu at some points..
Aaji - Antara taiyaari hogae asking her frm Hall
Antara - aah.. Ji Aaji abhi aayi..n smiles thinking abt him again..

Raghu was smiling seeing her Reactions.. Oh god she is damn cute n innocent..
Hey wait..!! wat d hell Raghu kya soch raha hai tu..pagal toh nae hogaya..?!
Nd he goes to his Room to freshen up..
Aaji - Antara beta Chintu ko bula de jaa..
Antara - Aaji mai Ramu kaka ko bhej do na Raghu ko pasand nae aaya toh mai kaise...?!
Aaji - Antara jaa beta kuch nae bolega Chintu bol ka toh dekhaiye jaa tu mai sambhal lugi..
Antara - ji Aaji..!
Antara climbs up d stairs She was hell scared Wat will Akdu say finding Her in his Room..
Mai bolugi kya..! Bhagwanji pls no saipa.. Pls n she was standing outside his Room frm past 5 mins..
Antara - Antara chill breathe in breathe out.. N she knocks d door..
There was no response she again knocks d door again no response.She finally made some move n saw d most cutest sight next moment..

There he was in his tracks n a vest sleeping peacefully on his bed.Antara smiled n went near his bed nd made his postion proper n covered him wid a blanket. Aaji who was waiting down came up to jst view the most adorable moment She saw Antara covering him wid a blanket n smiled..Aaji went down has Antara was abt to turn..

Antara made her way bt before leaving she smiled n said - Mr.Akdu sota hua kitna cute lagta ho.. Ekdum innocent aur aankhe jab khul jaegi tab Kadus wapis back to square one..😊 She slowly moves out widout making sound n close back d door.

Precap - Raghu - in anger Ms.Antara kaul tumhe kya pata hai tumhari khud ki family tumhe time nae deti aur tum mujhe keh rahi ho ka mujhe Aaji ko time dena chahiye..
Antara was hurt she never expected him toh raise dis issue atleast not him..yes they were not friends bt they werent even strangers..!!
This was going to be really big dis time Raghu went to far this time..!!!
To know wat happens next - STAY TUNED!😉

Okh guys i m done uff i hope u guys will like it..Iknow its utter crap!Bt still Pls do tell me..Nd chappal n tamatar r welcomed😆
Thank u all..
Love u all..:)
Keep smiling😊
- Harshita..<3

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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
Harshu
wow Just loved it got the core
Mazza aa gaya
Love Raghu's character
full of attitude haan😉
Antara is a sweetheart
And aaji toh aaji hai
Love her too
can't wait to read more
so do continue soon
Take care

Lots of Love
Geet
Edited by sweetdesire - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
fantastic update dear
keep up the good work 😊

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