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Posted: 11 years ago
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Mumbai ka bhai Raghunath naik apne dost machmach ke saath bahar kisi kaam se ja raha tha, raat das baj rahethe...achanak se tez hawa chalne lagi, asman me kaali badal apne baahein faylaaye chand sitaron ko chupa raha tha, aesa lag raha tha ki badi toofaan anewali hai...machmach bola:bai lagta hai baarish anewali hai chalo laut chalte hai...Raghu bola:are nahi hum naik sadan se bahut door aagay hai aur is toofan me lautna mushkil hai, ek to s...a jeep ko abhi kharab hona tha, raat kaatne ke liye kuch to dhondna padega, badal garajne laga..baarish hone lagi..dono dost sar se paao tak bilkul bheeg chuke the..kuch door chalne ke baad kuch dikha..machmach bola:bai ye to bhoot bangla lagta hai..mereko andar nahi jana..an...andar churail ho to? Raghu:machmach..machmach band kar aur chal andar! Raghu ne darwaje ko halka sa dhakka diya aur darwaaza khulgaya...koi hai?raghu ne awaaz lagaee..koi jawab nahi to raghu andar chala gaya..k..k..kaun hai andar se ladki ki awaz aaee, mm ghabra kar raghu ko pakad liya..bhai apun bola tha yaha churail hai..aaj apun log ka khayr nahi..Raghu:sshhh..awaaz nahi aur usne apne ph ka light on kiya aur saamne ka nazaara dekh kar dang rah gaya! MM:ruksana..tum? Tum yaha kayse tapki..mera matlab yaha kiya kar rahi ho? Aur woh kaun hai tumaare piche? Ruksana:rab ka shukar ki tum dono aagay..warna hum dono to...Raghu: tum yaha kayse pahunchi? Ruksana:hum dono shaadi se wapas laut rahe the ki achanak se taxi band pad gayee..hume taxi se utarna para..aur phn ke lighter se hum yaha pahunch paaye..andar aya to phn ka battery dead aur hum yahi fas gay..
Raghu:tumare saath woh kaun hai? Ruksana:woh antara hai..meri dost
Ruksana aur antara bilkul bheeg chuke the..ruksana ke peeche chupke khadi thi antara..dari huwi..bheegi huwi..kaamp rahi thi..chahera chupa huwa tha..u ye sab dekh raha tha ki MM bola:bhai aag jalate hai warna ph ki battery kharch ho jaayegi.Raghu:chal kuch karte hai

Antara was holding ruksanas hand very tightly..bahut daree huwi thi Ruksana:kuch nahi hoga tu dar mat..raghu machmach hai na humare saath pls calm down.

MM:bhai ye dekho bole to candles! Raghu wasnt listening to MM he was worried abt the girl behind ruksana..dari huwi..ghabrayee huwi..kapkapati huwi..agar ruksana ka dost hai aur basti me rahti hai to apun ko kayse dikha nahi

MM came with burning candles n found raghu in deep thought, raghu saw him n bola:ye MM tu us ladki ko jaanta hai kiya..kiya naam hai uska...ha antara. MM:ha bhai wo apna govind uncle hai na uska bhaanji hai..kaskmir se aaee hai..ma baap aur bhai sab kashmir me hai par ye yaha parne ke liye aaee hai..college jati hai ruksana ke saath..bahut kam bolti hai..bole to goongi hai! Raghu:kiya? Tum bhi MM kuch bhi..ab chalo yaha se..raghu n MM came to where the girls were..raghu saw they were really wet..he put the candles on the table near by n started looking for woods..they found some logs n started a bon fire..raghu ruksana ko baithne ko kaha..MM aur raghu dono aag ke kinare baith gay..MM:are tum dono abhi tak wahich kadi hai..kisi shub ghadi ka intezaar hai kya?Ruksana:chal antara..antaras teeth were rattling..she was shaking really bad..as ruksana pulled her from behind, her bangles n payal ke dhun se sara kamra goonjutha! Jab woh saamne aaee Raghu use dekhta rah gaya..white saree with maroon border..maroon bangles..gale me haar..maathe pe bindi..khule baal par bheegi huwi..saree was sticking to her skin..she was huging her self. .she knew uska badan deekh raa hai..she was so embarrassed! Nazre juka ke baith gayee..Raghu ye sab bade ache se dekh raha tha..man hi man me soch raha tha..kitni soondar hai ye! Jannat ki pari apun ki basti me! Apun ko in se baat karna hai..magar kayse..kayse bhi lekin baat to hokar hi rahegi..

Storm was getting worse outside. .rain, wind, lightening! Andar MM zameen me pare pare so gaya tha..ruksana bhi bas flat hone wali thi..magar raghu aur antara ek aag ke iss paar aur doosra aag ke uss paar..raghu was staring at antara but antara was looking at the fire. ..

Plz like n comment, will continue asap! Love u all!


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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow new ss👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i liked ur ss..continue soon...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wonderful start
Please do continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yes dear its really nice ss plzz
Continue n update soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yes dear continue asap...
Its amazing...
Raghu doesnt knows about antara hmmm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow amazing start👏👏
pls update the next part asap😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Love the concept. Feels like old days again,please continue😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yes plzzz do continue...
I liked d it... :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow amazing
can u try to write in english
pls cont asap

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