RaNtara SS: Mausam Ki Pahli Baarish Thi..last part#pg20 (10/4) - Page 8

Created

Last reply

Replies

150

Views

12.4k

Users

38

Likes

329

Frequent Posters

DamRyeong thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 11 years ago
#71
thx guys..
kinda busy on this weekend..
will updt next week..
nbw16 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#72
Affable... 😳
Both of the updates were speechless.. 👏
The way u portrayed the emotions of Raghu and Antara were awesome... 👏
Waiting for the next part... curious.. 😊
liana2304 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#73
Aww Loved it . Very nice . Continue
..Twinks.. thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#74
haaaye such a hot and romantic update☺️
i was blushing like hell while reading it😳
great job👏
pls continue soon
alishamerchant_ thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#75
that was one romantic update! uff i was shocked...i was like what happened all of a sudden..sorry if i sound stupid 😆

=> I loved it a lott! 😳
DamRyeong thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 11 years ago
#76

heyy guys.. here is third part of the SS..
please read. and leave ur comments..
i hope u'll like it.. Happy Reading.:)

Part 3


It was late in evening.. almost all students left..antara was in library.. she din't notice the time..
when she did it was very dark..she came out of the building.. there was no one in institute..
except raghu and his friends sitting in the canteen..they were still in the college because it was raining hard...
Antara was walking through the college canteen and reached out from the sight of raghu
..when suddenly some goons stopped her way..
she looked at them and got scared.. it was satya n his gang..
namastey bhabhi ji.. do u recognise me?? how are you..??... Satya folded his hands and greeted her...
I'm not ur bhabhi..antara replied and tried to walk away.. but they din't let her move forward...
arey bhabhi ji..where are you going...won't u talk to me..?
antara looked in his eyes.. tell your men to let me go..
sure they will let you go.. come and have a coffee with me in canteen..
i said.. let me go..
sorry.. but i can't do that..
u tell me where u want to go.. i'll take your there..
n u are right..u're not my bhabhi.. because you are my would be wife..
antara looked at him in anger..
how dare you to say that..
how dare i?? you have no idea.. and he held her hand and pulled her to him.. she bumped into him..and all his goons laughed..


- - - -
Raghu.. Raghu.. hurry up..
what happened??
wo wo... antara...wo...
antara what??
i saw her going outside...alone.
so??
raghu...
WHAT???
satya.. he is there...raghu heard that and ran towards the direction his friend told him...
his friends followed him..

Raghu reached at the place..he saw satya holding antaras' hand and pulling her from her head..
SATYAAA!!! he shouted.. antara and satya looked at him..
satya smirked..
he din't leave antara.. but he stood behind her and clutched her from her waist and shoulders...
antara was shivering with fear...tears were rolling on her cheeks...
satya wiped her tears..and put his chin on her shoulder...
Ssshh!! don't cry.. i won't hurt you..
antara felt disgusted and looked away.. he snuggled in her hairs..
Satyaaa.. leave her..raghu shouted..
oh!! raghu..!! m so scared.. satya said and laughed..
raghu came forward.. pulled antara out of satya's grip.. he looked at her.. and she lowered her gaze..
raghu's friends pulled her behind them...
this is between me and you.. how dare you to touch her..
why??? if you can touch her then why can't me..?? hmm??
shut the f* up..
satya laughed.. and raghu held his collar...
stay away from her..n don't drag her in our fight..
why?? doesn't she belong u..?
i don't need to answer u...
now you leave..
n if u want to fight.. then fight like a man..

satya pushed raghu away in anger..he was about to fall..
raghu's friends came forward and pointed guns at satya n his friends..
antara got scared..
she was standing there like a statue.. tears were rolling on her cheeks.. and she was shivering badly..
raghu made his balance.. he turned and punched satya hard.. blood started oozing from his mouth...
his goons shouted but raghu's friends took care of them..
raghu punched satya once again..
he hit her again n again..
satya fell down..
raghu pressed his neck with his foot.. and said..i told you to not to cross my path..
he removed his foot.. and asked him to leave..
satya got up.. sat in his jeep and left with his goons...

- - - -
Raghu came to antara.. his friends left from there and went to get their jeep...
are you okay.. raghu asked..
she nodded in yes..
come.. i'll drop you home..
i can go by myself.
its not safe.. satya could be outside.. i'll drop you..
she looked at him... he is gone.. and even if he is there.. nothing can't be worse...
she picked her bag and left..
raghu's friends came to him and saw her leaving..
they came to raghu.. let's go..they said..
hmmm... and they all left..
raghu looked at antara when their jeep passed through her..
and checked if satya or his goons were on the way..
in a drifted moment their paths changed.. and they both saw each other till their views got blurred...

i know this was a short update..but after this part.. now only two parts are remaining.. will finish this story in 5 parts..and those parts will be quite long.. wanted to start new chapter from a fresh scene.. :))
please leave ur comments/suggestions/questions about the story...
please hit the LIKE button..
Please Buddy "DeadDevil-FF" to receive PMs...Visit my Writing Index for my previous stories... Direct Link
luv u all...

-akki
honeybees22 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#77
after soo long
loved it soo much
Raghu seems weird hmm
satya urghh
pls cont asap
WaliKiDulhan thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#78
Awesome update..it was short but Chalo its okay..next time you've to give us a looongg one as you promised to do so 😛
Grr that satya..hate him 😡 😡
I hope Raghu kills him soon 😡
Aww..poor antu.. 😭 that satya creep hurt her!!
Thankyou for the pm and continue soon 😊
nazi786 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#79
Lovely update
Thanks for updating
Thank you for the pm
alishamerchant_ thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#80
i wonder whats between Raghu and Satya...he might create a problem for rantara but lets see what happens!

It was great update..but plz make it a little longer next time! 😳

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".