RaNtara SS: Mausam Ki Pahli Baarish Thi..last part#pg20 (10/4)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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heyy guys.. hope u all r doing well...
thank u so much for all ur luv n appreciation...thanks for liking all my previous stories...
n now m here with a new OS..which i might convert in a SS...
i hope that you guys will like this story... writing character sketch for now..
will post the first part very soon...happy reading..

"MAUSAM KI PAHLI BAARISH THI..."
(first rain of the season)

INDEX
part 1# page 5
part 2# page 10
part 3# page 13
part 4# page 15
part 5# page 20

Raghunath Naik
he is a college student and has a gang of 5-6 boys...all students and staff are very scared of him..though he never had an encounter with them...he is a complete bully...he doesn't like college but he comes there because of his mother only...

Antara Kaul...
she is in same college.. 1 year junior to Raghu... she has heard a lot about raghu.. but never believed.. as he never had a fight or encountered with anyone in college... she is truly in love with him...

Satya Naik...
Step brother of Raghu... raghu doesn't give a damn about him.. but he hates raghu a lot...
he has his own gang and they had fights many times...

these are three main characters of story.. their gang and friends name i'll mention in the story only...

Raghu and Satya don't live in same house as Satya and his father used to taunt him for his father.. so he left his home.. his mother stays in Naik Sadan only.. and visits Raghu's place sometimes...


please leave ur comments/suggestions/questions about the story...
please hit the LIKE button...thanks for reading the CS..
Please Buddy "DeadDevil-FF" to receive PMs...Visit my Writing Index for my previous stories... Direct Link
luv u all...

-akki

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DamRyeong thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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character sketch posted.. :) :)
do leave ur comments guys..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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sounds interesting
do continue
thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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sounds good...😃 pls start soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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first of all i loved the tittle most😳 sounds too romantic☺️
and nw it seems very interesting.😊
raghu-antu-satya means it will have some more drama😛
thanks fr pm😊
Edited by Tsuchi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wonderful start
please continue
please make it a ss
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thx gals..
@suchita.. luv u... =]
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Posted: 11 years ago
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So antara is already in love with Raghu.
Nice concept. It was just amazing
Thanx for the PM :)
Do contiue soon.
Edited by FatemaMazahir17 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: DeadDevil-FF

thx gals..

@suchita.. luv u... =]

aww..thanks nd luv u too 😊🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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yes dear its really sounding grt...n i love romantic os n ss .
do update soon

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