Part 19 on Pg 43 ..FF : I still love him..and always will - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
Prerna this was a very nice update!

I am really liking how you are staying true to Antara's character and how she is thinking instead of taking any step!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: abhiyaswaron


Ok , let me give you a hint . This FF is not only about Satya- Antara-Raghy Jealousy track, It has MUCH more.

okay...waise bhi ye dil mange more😆😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: Tsuchi

okay...waise bhi ye dil mange more😆😆😆


LOL !!! Dil toh hamesha maange more.. Especially when it comes to Rantara 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: Roy.nikki143

Nice dear, but i hope you are not planning for satya-antara marriage.


Anyways, lovely update i am so happy that antara had came to know truth about DM.

Continue soon 😊


Hey thx... Jo Do Dil Ek Jaan Hai woh hamesha ek saath hi rahenge... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rantaraolic

Prerna this was a very nice update!


I am really liking how you are staying true to Antara's character and how she is thinking instead of taking any step!


Hey ,thank you !! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
SORRY I DIDNT UPDATE YESTERDAY !!!
I will do it tonight and will TRY to bring a smile on your faces through my post.. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I am still writing the update. I will Surely update it by today. I have been busy with a New Year program. I will pakka do it today ! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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5th Post on its way..
Edited by abhiyaswaron - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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So I have mixed feeling abt DDEJ going off air . Im happy coz they got what they deserved for removing Rantara and im sad coz this was the show which I fell in love with. It's Rantara's story..SO BACK TO MY POST :D .. Thank you for your support . You all keep encouraging me and its Amazing...I joined the DDEJ forum in like December but it feels like I've been here for ages..
PART 5 :

Antara's Point of View :

I ought to be dreaming ! Is this the Dayamai which Raghu has been serving since he was a child ? Cruelty is at its height !! I made sure to quickly escape from there as I didn't want anyone to know that I knew her reality. I started going upstairs to Satya's room. I knocked on the door. "Come in"he said. I took a deep breath in as I was going into the passage into HELL. "Welcome Jaan ! "He said. "Saheb, abhi humaara plan kya hai ? Main Chahti Hoon ki Raghu Andar hi andar jalta rahe. Main usse badla loongi."I said combining all lies together. A cruel smile appeared on his face. "Jaan, tum bahut jaldi samajh gayi. Mujhe laga tha ki tumhe Raghu ke influence se bahar nikalna bahut mushkil hoga. But you, you got out of it so soon .. Mera Tumhare liye pyaar bahut badh gaya hai. I love you so much Jaan"Satya said. RGGHHH !! I dont want that buggers "I LOVE YOU" . I had to tolerate his rubbish to reach my goal. "Accha phir , Raghu aata hi hoga. Hum Chalte Hain" I said trying to divert the topic. "Jaan, mein jabhi bhi tumhe I love you kehta hoon , tum topic change kar deti ho. Mujhe bhi kaho na ki tum mujhse pyaar karti ho" Satya said. I gave him an irritated loo. "Kaho na , Jaan"Satya said. "Saheb, tum apne limits mein raho. Just because main Raghu se abh pyaar nahi karti , iska matlab nahi hai ki main tumse pyaar karti hoon. Hum dono ka goal ek hi hai aur woh hai Raghu ki barbaadi. Isliye main tumhaare saath mili huyi hoon" I said. Satya frowned "Tumse mein I love you bulvake hi rahoonga . At least tum abhi naatak mein toh mere saath ho"he said. Me and Satya is not possible. Mein sirf Raghu ki hai aur kisi ki nahi . Mera aur Satya ka koi future nahi ho sakta hai.. ITS JUST NOT POSSIBLE ! "Chalein?"he asked. He held my hand and we walked down the stairs only to find Raghu staring at us. "Miss Kaul ? Yeh Kya Hain"Raghu asked. "Sacchai . Its truth. Mein Aur Satya ek doosre se pyaar karte hain"I said. "Bakwaas band kar Antara"Raghu said with anger. "RAGHU ! Don't even dare to talk to my JAAN like that. Antara se koi aise baat nahi kar sakta hai"Saheb said.
"Tu Mujhe batayega ki Main Apni Miss Kaul se kaise baat karu?Hota kaun hai tu ?"Raghu said."Uska Pyaar. Uska saathiya hoon main"Satya said.
I couldn't tolerate it any more I ran to a room and started instantly weeping. I could not afford to speak to Raghu like that. I love him and I can't be with Satya. Raghu came running to the room and locked it. He saw me and a tear fell from his eyes. "Kyun Kar rahi hai yeh?"asked Raghu. "Tum Jao yaha se".I said. He came to me and cupped my face. "Kya tu mujhse pyar nahi karti"he asked.
"Nahi karti"I said trying to avoid eye contact. "Meri Aankhon mein dekhkar yeh bol"Raghu said. "Nahi nahi. Tum jao!"I said. "Miss Kaul,I love you"Raghu said.I couldn't help it anymore. I barely started the naatak with Satya and I was not able to be rude to Raghu. I loved him so much that I could not hurt him.
"I am Sorry Raghu..."I said and I started crying . I was uncontrollable. I broke down and Raghu said"Miss Kaul Sambhaal apne aap ko. Main Tujhe Aise Nahi Dekh Sakta"He said "I Love you Raghu. Mein Naatak mein bhi tumse nafrat nahi kar pati hoon"I said. "Hmmm. Mujhe Pata tha ki kuch toh chal raha hai tere dimaag mein. "Raghu main tumhe sab kuch bataongi . Bas abhi rukh jao. Saheb ke saamne tum aise baat karna jaise tum mujhse nafrat karte ho"I said. He nodded his head and kissed my forehead. Then he opened the door. In a friction of a second Saheb came and said "Raghu, meri Jaan se tum kya baat kar rahe the?" Satya asked. "Saheb, Antara abh teri hain. Woh Mere layak nahi rahi. Tu jeet gaya Saheb. Tu Jeet Gaya. Woh Badal gayi hain aur kabhi pehle jaise nahi ho sakti. Nafrat karta hoon main usse"Raghu said. I understood he was acting.

My story has always been full of tragedy. Papa ki maut aur abh yeh Saheb ka paas hona. Abh Mein Dekhti Hoon ki kismat mujhe aur Raghu ko kaise nahi milati hain. If Fate doesn't want me and Raghu to be together , I will snatch Raghu from my fate and be with him.

Precap : 1 year leap with Raghu and Antara in Delhi with completely new identities. Lets see what led them to Delhi and how have they changed..
Update kaisi thi ? This FF is gonna see so much of twists. Hope you liked it. I told you na that this FF is not limited to a simple story.. :😃








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Posted: 11 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: abhiyaswaron


I am still writing the update. I will Surely update it by today. I have been busy with a New Year program. I will pakka do it today ! :D

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