Part 19 on Pg 43 ..FF : I still love him..and always will - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: KAJU10

AWESOME!!! BEAUTIFUL!!!
It ws really nice update full of emotions. Antara is really hurt a lot btw still somewhere deep inside she knows dat he is innocent.

Wht!!!!!! Antara is gonna attempt suicide. OMG! Koi toh bachao iss ladki ko...

Eagerly waiting fr nxt update


Thank you.. I will update very soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: KAJU10

AWESOME!!! BEAUTIFUL!!!
It ws really nice update full of emotions. Antara is really hurt a lot btw still somewhere deep inside she knows dat he is innocent.

Wht!!!!!! Antara is gonna attempt suicide. OMG! Koi toh bachao iss ladki ko...

Eagerly waiting fr nxt update


Thanks... Don't worry her saviour will come ..!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
Tum logon ne kaha ki update karoon aur maine kiya :D
Now that we wont get Rantara in DDEJ anymore I have decided that I will TRY TO update everyday !
Its like a daily dose of Rantara. The previous update was quite short so this time I am here with a long update.


PART 2:

Raghu's Point of View :

Miss Kaul mandap chod kar chale gayi .. She did correct. A person like me doesn't deserve a gem like Antara. I have taken her dad away from her so she snatched my life away from me. She breaking the marriage with me is absolutely correct. For gods sake I killed her DAD !!! Par woh kaha chali gayi. I gotta check where she is . She must have completely broken down.
I entered her house to see Rukhsana and Geetaji banging Antara's door and telling her to open it. "Antara beta , Darwaaza khol" said Geeta Ji. "Raghu, are tu abhi aa raha hain ?dekh na yeh darwaaza nahi khol rahi hai aur kuch bol bhi nahi rahi hai" said Rukhsana.
I went near the door and started banging it "Miss Kaul, darwaaza khol. Mujhe aise sazaa mat de."
Seeing that she wasn't opening the door I broke the door only to get a devastating sight in front of me. My Miss Kaul had slit her wrist. There was a pool of her precious blood on the floor and she lay unconscious. "AAANNNTTTAARRRAAA" I shouted letting the entire universe feel my pain. I was dead from inside seeing her in that condition. Geetaji collapsed on the spot seeing her daughter in that condition. "RRR-RUKHSANA , AMBULANCE KO PHONE KAR" I said stammering. I looked at my hand which was dipped in her blood stains. I couldn't digest that my Miss Kaul could go away from me. SHE CAN'T ."Raghu woh log keh rahe hain ki thoda time
lagega. Tu isse Jeep mein jaldi le jaa"Rukhsana said. I quickly carried her in my arms . I always wanted her to be in my arms but I didn't wan't her to be in my arms in this way.I put her in the jeep and drove like a race driver. I was rushing to save Antara's life or rather my own life. I broke and violated many traffic rules as I could do anything to save her. The hospital arrived and I ran inside carrying her. "Koi Doctor ko Bulao. Iska Bahut Khoon beh chuka hai."I shouted. Antara was put on the stretcher with her hand in a very miserable condition. I was crying my heart out. My Miss Kaul was in that condition only and only because of me.They took her to the place where they have to operate her. I went to the Mandir in the hospital to order Bappa to cure her. "BAPPA !! Aap aise kaise kar sakte ho. Agar use kuch bhi hua na toh mujhse bura koi nahi hoga" I said. I demanded for her recovery to God.

NEXT MORNING:
"Bhai, aap yaha par mandir ke saamne soh gaye! Aap lagta hai poori raat rote rahe ho. Are Bhai , Meri Yedi Behna theek ho gayi hain. Usse Hosh Aa gaya hai ,abhi doctor ne bataya"said Machmach.


There was an instant smile on my face. Mujhe aise laga ki duniya ki saari khushiyan mujhe mil chuki thi. I immediately gave a hug to him.
"Main Jaa Raha hoon usse milne "I said to Machmach while running to meet her. "Arre Bhai ek second rukh."Machmach said. I ignored him . All I knew was that I had to meet my Miss Kaul.
I went towards her room and was about to enter it when the Nurse stopped me.
"Rukiye,aap inse mat miliye. Yeh bahut stress me thi aur aap ke jaane se unki condition aur kharaab ho sakti hai"said the Sister.

"Are Sister. Mere Jaane se uski haalat kabhi bigad nahi sakti hai. Mein uska saaya hoon aur saaya kabhi dhoka nahi deta hai" I said.

The sister smiled. "Theek hai par aap please dhyaan rakhna" she said.

I entered the room to see a princess lying down. She was a sign of immense beauty. Her eyes were still filled with tears and she was looking towards the ceiling.

"Miss Kaul" I said with a smile.She looked at me and I guess she was pleased with my arrival.

"Raghu tum aa gaye" Miss Kaul said.

Antara's point of view.

Aa gaya tha woh. After I saw him I had an urge to hug him but then I realised that yeh kya bol rahi thi main. How could I even talk to him. I can't believe I unknowingly spoke to him . I wasn't suppost to speak to him nor was I suppost to be ALIVE.

"Mar kyun nahi gayi main" I said. The moment I said that Raghu came and placed his finger on my lips. "Aisi baatein kabhi nahi bolna chahiye"he said. I was again lost in his eyes. No matter how much I try to convince myself that I am suppost to go away from him I always return back to getting lost in his eyes.
"Chale jao yaha se. Mujhe tumse abhi baat nahi karni"I said.
"Miss Kaul , yeh wakt abhi jhagadne ka nahi hai. Tune meri jaan ko mujhse cheene ki koshish kaise ki. Antara Kaul pe sirf Raghu ka Haq he. Tu aise decision nahi le sakti." He told me. "Mujhe kabhi bhi aisi sazaa manzoor nahi hai" He said.

This was the reason I was not ready to accept that he was a murderer. The way he cares for me and treats me... it just doesn't match with the quality of a murderer.

But as of now , I don't know anything. If Raghu has killed my dad then why? Mere papa se kya dushmani thi ? I think the bomb blast must have involved many people. Who were involved ?I realised that I had to think practically and sensibly as I cannot blame anyone at the moment. I am left with two options : either commit suicide or understand the entire situation. I tried comitting suicide but I survived due to Raghu. Now I have to find out on what actually has happened. In order to elope with Raghu , I have to find the proof for his innocence.

Precap for tomorrow : Satya comes in Antara's room in the hospital and tries to convince her for their marriage. Will Antara fall into his trap or Not?




Edited by abhiyaswaron - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
I thank you all for the appreciation .!😊😊 Lets keep Rantara alive in this FF
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update dear! 😊raghu saved his life his love at a very right moment!😛i am satisfied with antara's decision atleast she will use her brain and try to sort out whole incident and she will succeed in that..i think she will nt fell in satya's trap🤔...as u are writing this story so u will do in favour of rantara only😆.
thanks fr pm and nice update.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: Tsuchi

nice update dear! 😊raghu saved his life his love at a very right moment!😛i am satisfied with antara's decision atleast she will use her brain and try to sort out whole incident and she will succeed in that..i think she will nt fell in satya's trap🤔...as u are writing this story so u will do in favour of rantara only😆.

thanks fr pm and nice update.😊


Thank you so much. Antara in this FF is very brainy..so.. lets see.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
read two parts in one go... plss cont soon and pm me😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: ifians

read two parts in one go... plss cont soon and pm me😊


The next part will be out tomorrow :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: abhiyaswaron


The next part will be out tomorrow :D

okies... sending you buddy req... pls accept😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Read both parts very well written do continue soon and pm me 😊

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