Part 19 on Pg 43 ..FF : I still love him..and always will - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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So here I am with Part 3 : Hope you will like it.

Scene Venue: Antara's room in the Hospital with Raghu still there.

Antara's point of view :
Raghu was still there making me restless. His presence makes me uncontrollable but I dont want to make the wrong decision now. I dont know the exact situation and now I will have to find out then make a decision. Raghu was intensely looking into my eyes making me look down. I couldn't stand his stare. It was very difficult for me to control myself. All I knew is that there my Raghu was accused of Murder and I had to prove him innocent. I trust Raghu. If at all Raghu has actually killed papa then I will not spare him but according to me Raghu can't do such a thing. I have still not slapped Raghu because of my belief.
"Mujhe aise dekhna band karo aur yaha se jao"I said.
"Miss Kaul meri baat sun, meine tere papa ko nahi maara hai. Woh ek haatsa tha .Mera istamal kiya gaya tha. Mujhe kaha gaya tha ki mein ek parcel Dr.Kaul ke yaha deliver kar doon aur mujhe nahi pata tha ki us parcel me bomb hai" said Raghu .
I instantly believed him. He didn't have to give me any more explanations .All I needed was proof to prove him innocent. I still couldn't go to him as I didn't have proof but I will find proof. Raghu's innocence was shown in his eyes. I was confident that a guy like him could never kill somebody.
"Accha abhi tum jao, tumhaara yaha rehna theek nahi hai"I said. I wanted him to go away so I can start my thing.
"Miss Kaul, maine terese kya vaada kiya tha . Na kabhi tujhe chodunga na tera saath. Tujhe andaaza nahi hai ki main tujhse kitna pyaar karta hoon"Raghu said.
There I fell for him again. Falling in love with the same person over and over again has been experienced by me.
He looked at my wrist and said " Vaada kar Miss Kaul, ki tu kabhi aisa nahi karegi" . I admired his concern. No one has ever shown so much of love and concern for me. "Raghu,main tumse baad me baat karoongi tum abhi yaha se jao" I said. I saw Satya outside the door peeping into my room through the glass window. I knew that there was something very fishy and I couldn't trust anyone at the moment . "Raghu , tumhaari himat kaise hoti hain mujhse baat karni ki . Tum ek kaatil ho kaatil. Jao yaha se" I said. I needed to act like I didn't realise anything. I knew that Satya always wanted me and Raghu to separate and I knew that even he can put Raghu into danger if he knows that I eloped with Raghu.
Raghu's Point of View:
I didn't know what she was up to. Till now , she was talking to me in a decent manner but suddenly she started screaming at me. I knew she was up to something but what ? I decided to let her do what she wanted and left the room only to see that Satya. "Kya hai Saheb?Tu Idhar kya kar raha hai ?" I asked. "Naukaron ko jawaab dena main zaroori nahi samajhta !"Satya said. "Bhai ,meri yedi behna kaise hi?" Machmach said interrupting the conversation. I took Machmach aside and said "Agar mein isse aur baat karoonga to yeh mujhse boori tarah pit jayega isliye mein jaa raha hoon. Dhyaan rakhna ki yeh Antara ke paas na jae" I said. "Theek Hai Bhai" Machmach said . "Aur haan , Geetaji kaisi hain? Woh Antara ko dekhkar behosh ho gayi thi" I asked. "Woh abhi theek hai. Rukshana ne ghar pe doctor bulvaaya tha .Antara ke theek hone ki khabhar se woh abh khush hain"Machmach said. I took a breath of relief. I quickly gave Machmach a hug and left.. It was just my way of showing my gratitude. Ever since I was a child, that guy had been by my side.

Antara's point of View:
Satya entered my room making me feel highly uncomfortable. "Saheb ,tum?" I asked. "Antara ,Antara ,Antara ! Umeed hai ki tumhein pata chal gaya hoga ki Raghu ke saath rehne ka anjaam kya hai" Satya said. I was expecting him to come and try to brainwash me. He had got an opportunity to try to get me. I didn't know how to react. I couldn't trust anyone as there was something suspicious going on. I decided to act like I didn't trust Raghu as Saheb would expect me to be against Raghu . I'll act according to his expectations. "Chup kyun ho Antara?" Saheb asked.
"Tum Kehna Kya Chahte Ho" I asked. "Woh tumhaare layak nahi hai. You are the sky and he is the ground. Aur Sabse badi baat , usne tumhaare papa ko maara hai . Woh papa jisse tum bahut pyaar karti ho. Tumhein nahi lagta ki tumhe usse poora badla lena chahiye ? Infact , instead of taking revenge you are trying to commit suicide"he said. "Badla kaise loon main?"I asked trying to go according to him. "Mujhse Shaadi karke"he said. "KYAA?" I said. I was shocked. Satya had fallen to a very low level to get me. I felt like slapping him immediately but I had to continue acting. "Usse kya Hoga?" I asked while drinking my anger. "Woh toot jayega. He will completely break down. He will burn with jealousy when he will see us together. Along with you taking your revenge from Raghu I will also take my revenge. That guy has ruined my life since I was a child. He snatched my mother- Daya Mai from me. Ab Meri Baari Hain. Mein Uski Jaan usse cheen loonga" he said. I was disgusted by Saheb but had to hide my inner hatred for him. "Tumhaara plan toh accha hai. Par shaadi itni jaldi hume nahi karni chahiye. The entire Basti knows about my relationship with Raghu.Agar tumse Achanak shaadi kar li toh meri family ko bahut humiliation sehna padega. We will act like we are in a relationship and slowly shift the phase to marriage"I said. I felt like slapping myself for saying all of this but I had to do this. "I fell for you because of this itself. Your immense concern drives me crazy. You are concerned for your family and I love that. The way you saved me from the pole falling on me that day. Mein bike chala raha tha aur tumme kho gaya"Satya said.
I couldn't tolerate his rubbish . "Saheb tum zara bahar jaoge . Mujhe abhi thodi der akele rehna hain. Hum dono ko abhi iske baad saath hi to rehna hai"I said trying to convince him to go away.
"Theek hai Antara, aur aaj se mein tumhein jaan bulaoonga" Satya said. "Accha theek hai, ab tum jao" I said. He went and I took a sigh. How can he call me Jaan ? He has no right to !! All I knew is that I had to bear this torture for a while in order to get to the truth.

Precap : Antara overhears Dayamai speaking to Rasika about Dr.Kauls murder and her involvement.




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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
wow yr. very nice..😃 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
wonderful update dear
may i know your name please ?
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
lovely update..
superb 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rima4ever

wonderful update dear

may i know your name please ?


Thank you. My name is Prerna.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Very nice update dear..nw i am happy to see that antara is using her brain and without getting evidences she is nt coming to conclusion that raghu is innocent!
Satya ki to band bajni chahiye ab!hahaha...
Very nice update!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
I realy liked it

Antara is not dupe and will prove Raghu innocent by fooling Purpura great


Thanks for the PM

Continue and update ASAP
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
loved this part a lot...
sattu tried to brainwash antara but he doesn't kno antara is also playing with him..😆
good going girl
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow loved it soo much
pls cont asap and PM me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
very nice update...thanks for the pm

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