RaNtara FF:- Meri Aashiqui (Updated Chapter 20-page 46) - Page 33

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Posted: 11 years ago
welcome back😳
and wonderful update as always..
raghu admiring antu more and more every day... so sweet to read that was😳
so the tuning btwn raghu and his father is not good...
raghu waiting for antu and mesmerized to c her in that black lehenga..šŸ˜‰
loved it..ā¤ļø
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Posted: 11 years ago
Helloo grls...
Its time for update...
I have a small request...
"Please mention in ur comments, is this story good or is it missing something??"
Waiting for ur replies...

Chapter 20
As antara came, raghu forgot everything. This whole scene was seen by two sharp eyes. The eyes of rasika. MachMach who saw that his bulbul was busy looking at someone rather than him got angry.
MachMach:- "kia zarorat thi yaar naha dho kar aisa kapra pehan kar mast tayar ho kar anay ki... Sala jisko dekhana woh dekh hi nhn rahi toh.!!"
Rasika who was so lost in noticing raghu's expression didnt hear. Suddenly she hit MachMach with his elbow.
Rasika:- "woh dekho bhai ko...pata nhn kia hua?"
MachMach who could sacrifice his life for raghu, started searching him in a state of shock..
Rasika saw his expression and hit her palm on her forhead.
Rasika:- "eee bappa kia karun main iska??"
Rasika started moving his head and started making his head trail towards antara and raghu... He saw what rasika actually meant.
MachMach:- "acha woh garbar.!!"
Rasika:- "haan.."
They both started to notice the smile on raghu's face as antara came closer.
On the other side raghu was going breathless with each moment. Antara was looking breath taking. Her black lehnga and beautiful simple make up, raghu was going senseless. Pakya came and told raghu about something which he didnt heard. Rasika and MachMach also came and stood right behind him. Antara was looking for her father. Raghu swinged full as she passed. As antara vanished from his eyes raghu came back to reality and saw rasika and MachMach staring at her.
Raghu:- "kia hua? aisay q dekh rahay ho??"
Rasika:- "bhai pata q nhn detay... mujhay pata hai apko antara ko dekh kar kuch acha lagta hai!!"
Raghu:- "pagal hai... yedi kuch bhi bolti hai!!"
With that Raghu left. MachMach shruuged him and Turned to rasika.
MachMach:- "chor na kuch nhn hai.. tu yeh bata main kaisa lag raha hai??"
Rasika:- "hmmm.. aik dum hero.."
MachMach gave a shy look. while rasika was not able to understand her brother state.
On the other hand Mr.Kaul and Mr.Naik were talking when antara arrived.
Antara:- "papa excuse me?"
Mr.Kaul and Mr.Naik turned and smiled at her.
Antara:- "how am i..."
Mr.Naik:- "aray wah beta ap toh rasika se bhi achi lag rahai hain.."
antara smiled.
Mr.kaul:- "apko aik papa ne bata hi dia beta.. toh confirm ap achi lag rahi.."
Antara:- "thank u auncle g.."
Both the father gave a bright smile to her.
Antara theb moved towards the door where the ribbon had to be tied still... Antara took a big ribbon piece. It was too long and antara was also well dressed... Her lehnga was making it difficult it for her. She got tangled in the ribbon as it was a big piece of cloth. She was about to trip when two strong hands gripped her shoulders tightly.
It was raghu who came on time.
Raghu:- "dhyan se... Aik toh lehnga itna bhari upar yeh... Gir jati toh".
Antara blushed and didnt say anything.
Raghu started to help her and both started to make a big bow. In between several times raghu saw antara with full eyes. He never wanted this to end. Antara made a big bow. Raghu saw and said.
Raghu:- "aray wah... Mast hai.."
Antara:- "thank u... Main ne mama se sekhi thi banana".
Raghu gave her a smile.
Antara:- "umm suniye... Mujhay Apko thank u bolna tha.."
The word "suniye" sounded like heaven to him.
He turned and said.
Raghu:- "kis baat ka thank u??"
Antara:- "apnay meri bohat help ki... Admission say lay kar ab tak..."
Raghu just gave her a smile. Antara forwarded her hand.
Antara:- "friends???"
Raghu heard this and was about to faint. He couldn't believe that the girl he loved wants to be friends with him...
Raghu shook hands with her and said.
Raghu:- "friends..."
Antara gave him a bright smile. He was lost in the two beautiful eyes.. That smile was just like heaven to him.
This sweet talk was intrupted by a clearence of male throat.
MachMach came abd broke the trance.
MachMach:- "bhai pati katnay ka mahorat ho gaya.."
Raghu who left antara's hand was abusing machmach in heart replied in a hmmm...
The trio went and joined others. The ribbon was cut by all the four parents. They gave blessings to there two daughthers. The party for another two hours. As the party got over both rasika and antara were sitting at their shops step.
Antara:- "finally rasika tumhara sapna pura hogaya.."
Rasika:- "all thanks to u... Agar tum na kehti main bhai se baat na kar pati..."
Rasika hugged antara. This was all noticed by raghu who was looking at them fron his balcony.
Rasika:- "chalo antara ab kafi dair hogai hai... Shop bnd karkay chaltay hain".
Antara:- "han chalo".
As raghu saw them closing the shop he came down. Antara was bidding bye to rasika when raghu came out.
Rasika:- "aray bhai ap soyai nhn??"
Raghu:- "nahin main tjhay dekhnay araha tha..."
He said this while looking at antara.
Antara:- "chalo rasika main chalti hn... Bye raghu... Bye rasika.."
Rasika's expression changed as she heard "bye raghu..."
Raghu was on the seventh sky,. His heart was dancing with joy... He couldnt believe it...
Antara left and raghu came out of thoughts.
Rasika:- "bhAi ab toh bata toh kia chal raha hai!???"
Raghu:- "kuch nhn... ChAl soja ja kar.."
With that he went inside and rasika also came. He ordered her to go to room.
That night was sleepless for raghu. While antara slept with a perfect hope.
With Rasika was trying to detect whats going in...

Precap
Satya gets to know about antara's business with rasika...
He pays a visit to the basti...

Thank u all...
Update done...
Ready for chappals... Tamatar,.. Eggs...
Do give the review...
Regards,
Haya.
Edited by hayakhan5 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Mee first! It was lovely. I really wanna see raghu confessing his love to antara in a unique way. Story is interesting please continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
haya yr..its so lovely update😳
finally rantara are *friends*😃
raghu ke liye sabse bada din..😳.he was so lost in her...
pr haan...rasika ekdin bhanda zaroor fodegi...šŸ˜†
shop to khul gayi..ab waiting for next updatešŸ˜›
this story is going perfectly..its wonderful..i am loving it.😳...thanks for updating dear..love ušŸ¤—
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aww .
Amazing update .
Thank you .
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Posted: 11 years ago
thanks for the pm dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
astounding update
this story is going really well
it is not missing anything i feel
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Posted: 11 years ago
Raghu lost in antara as usual...
the opening ceremony of shop too good,.
rantara became friends..
so sweet update..
this story is so good and one of my fav here..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update Haya
Really good
pls cont asap
P.S. Happy Eid in adv
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Posted: 11 years ago
Story is going great...šŸ‘šŸ¼...Continue yaar...😃...n Eid Mubarak...😊...

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