RaNtara FF:- Meri Aashiqui (Updated Chapter 20-page 46)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello...
RaNtarians and NiYanians...
This my way to keep them alive...
I am writing my life's first FF only for Ayaz Ahmed and Nikita Sharma...
Only picture them while reading this FF...
Here goes the prologue...

Prologue:-
<div align="left">Pyar , Mohabbat , Aashiqui
Kuch nahin tha meray liyai
Par jab woh mili
Sab badal gaya
Pyar Mohabbat Aashiqui
Sab ka matlab samajh aya
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If u like it and want PM's please buddy me...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Character Sketch:-
Naik Family...
RaghuNath Naik:
Well what to say... he is the perfect guy... the mumbai wala jisko dekh kar har girl skips a beat... Magar he is searching for the best.. jisko dekh kar his heart says "SHE IS THE ONE"...
He is the son of Mr.Raunak Naik and Mrs.Sheela Naik (Aka Daya Mai).. Owner of Naik Wadi...

Mr.Raunak Naik:-
A businessman who is always away on business work to earn and make a huge fortune.

Mrs.Sheela Naik:-
With her husband busy with his work... she always helps his son and give all her attention that was never given to him by his father

Rasika Naik:-😛😉😆
Well what to say, she is the SISTER to Raghu but is very jolly unlike his brother.. Is in a hidden relationship to Machinder Singh(aka MachMach) Best Friend of Raghu.
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------------------------------------------------Machinder Singh:-
Best friend of raghu.. The only hope when everybody is busy with their life.. MachMach always stands beside raghu as his sheild.. loves his sister alot.

Satya Deshmukh:-
A perfect Villain.. First a best friend of raghu but as son of underworld don chose the wrong path... lost raghu's friendship and came into the bad books. His father Trying to take over Naik wadi since a long time. After his death satya has taken the reponsibilty and is always in fight with raghu.
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Antara Kaul:-
A Beautiful girl born and raised in the gallows of Kashmir. the eldest and the sweet princess to Mr.Anirudh Kaul and Mrs.Geeta Kaul...Beauty as pleasant as a pearl

Mr.Anirudh Kaul:-
A rich, famous businessman of kashmir who is facing a lot of financial problems but is not able to keep infront of family.. but then everything is finished and moves to Mumbai.

Mrs. Geeta Kaul:-
True love of Mr. Anirudh Kaul.. a perfect life partner and a mother... loves her family a lot..

Ishan kaul:-
Dreams to be a superstar batsman of Indian cricket team... worships virat kohli... loves his didu.
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Well here is my character sketch.. Hope you like them..

Index
Character sketch:- Page 1
Chapter 1:- Page 2
Chapter 2:- Page 6
Chapter 3:- Page 10
Chapter 4:- Page 12
Chapter 5:- Page 14
Chapter 6:- Page 15
Chapter 7:- Page 17
Chapter 8:- Page 19
Chapter 9:- Page 21
Chapter 10:- Page 23
Chapter 11- Page 26
Chapter 12:- Page 27
Chapter 13:- Page 29
Chapter 14:- Page 31
Chapter 15:- Page 33
Chapter 16:- Page 36
Chapter 17:- Page 39
Chapter 18- Page 44
Chapter 19:-Page 45
Chapter 20:-Page 46
Edited by hayakhan5 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice one yar continue soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely dear..congratulations for ur first FF and pls continue..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its just going to be NIYAZ aka RANTARA that we will picturise.. as no one come into our hearts and mind...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its nice yar continue..congrats on ur ff..
Continue soon.. it has to be only Rantara aka Niyaz fr dis..:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Don't worry buddy...whenever we hear Raghu..Antara... only Ayaz n Nikita flashes in front of our eyes...!!
No second thoughts... never ever...
and all the very best of luck for ur First FF... We r going to enjoy ur FF ... Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Can't wait to read more
Plz continue soon
And do PM me plz

Geet
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Posted: 11 years ago
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CONGRAAAttts Haya ...lovely ...start sooon 😃😃😃
we all love NIYAZ aka Rantara ...and so well said that we wll make them alive in our stories ...luv u ...
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Chapter 1
Raghu's Dialogue:- Blue
Antara's Dialogue:- Maroon
Others:- Green

A beautiful sunny day at the Naik wadi... Raghu present at the terrace of naik sadan as he is performing his daily exercise... and is watching the life going around the naik wadi...
Few children of basti knock at the naik sadan gate to remind raghu regarding the sunny "Gali Cricket Match". Raghu comes down and is joined by MachMach on his way to the playing area.
Raghu:- MachMach tu ne woh kashmir walon ko check kiya koi problem toh nahin unko??
MachMach:- haan bhai dekha...sab set hai..unko koi problem nahin..
The match begins...while playing, a boy hits a huge six which goes near the gates. Raghu goes to take the ball when he sees a taxi stopping at the gates of basti. A boy wearing spects come out of the taxi with a bath in his hand and tries to enter when he is stopped by a girl from the back.
Antara:- Ishan ruko!! Ishan ruk jao...
Ishan:- didu chalo na, mummy papa ko suprise karna hai..
talking to the taxi driver...
bhaiya apka kitna hua???
she hands over the money to the taxi man and follows ishan who is standing waiting for her.
Raghu was all mesmarizws looking at her. His heart skipped several beats while looking at her, It looked like time had stopped.
Ishan:- didu, what was the clue papa gave us about our new house???
Antara:- unho ne kaha tha keh humara ghar aik garage kay opposite hai..
Antara crossed Raghu who was standing in between without even noticing him while raghu was all lost in her beauty.
while going through the basti and looking here and there suddenly ishan shouted!!
Ishan:- there it is.. thats our house...
Antara made sure while matching all clues and rang the bell. Mr.Kaul answered the door while Antara and Ishan shouted:-
"SURPRISE"
He was all shocked to see them infront of him as there was still 3 weeks for them to come.
Mr.Kaul:- Aray tum dono itni jaldi aagayai?? tum dono ka program toh 3 weeks baad ka tha ?? humne toh ghar bhi arrange nahin kiya!!!
Antara:- yes papa, humne socha ap dono ko surprise kardain aur sath help bhi!!
Ishan:- Mama kahan hain?? mjhay unko milna hai!!
They went inside while raghu was still lost looking at her beauty. His trance was broken when MachMach patted her shoulder and said
MachMach:- kahan gum gaya bhai tu?? wahan viren ko out karnay ka moka tha aur kia dekh raha tha???
Raghu:- Woh... woh... kuch nahin chal match pura khatam kartay hain.

ok... done with frst update... ready for ur comments...
if u liked it do like and comment...
ur comments mean alot to me!!!

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