RaNtara FF:- Meri Aashiqui (Updated Chapter 20-page 46) - Page 32

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi Haya...
and welcome back..😊

Finally got read next part of this story...😳
haya! it was an outstanding update...I loved it.👏

Precap is a bit surprising ..."raghu eagerly waiting for Antara"...a bit shocking too.😃

please do update soon.😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi haya welcome back! You were reading and commenting on my story "tumsey pyaar huwa" then all of a sudden you disappeared. I was thinking about you girl. Anyway welcome back and stick around. Lovely story please continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Welcome back haya...m andy...was a silent mmbr n read dis story...now waiting for d next parts...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hello grls...
Thank u such for reading , liking and commenting on the update...
Ummm i dont know how to say this but before i used to write this story just for RaNtara but now i will be adding a new member,

My Husband... Who is no more with me... So i will be dedicating the story from now on to him also...

Cahpter 19
As the days passed, the girls along with raghu and MachMach help arranged the shop. This was one of the beautiful shop of the

basti. Antara and rasika worked very hard for the designing of the shop. Antara decorated the flower baskets while rasika had full

control on the money matter..
It was just 5 days more for the shop inaguration when satya heard about the basti new partnership.
Satya:- "aray daal mein wakayai kuch kala hai.., pehlay raghu ne meri janeman ko bachaya ab us rasika kay sath partnership

hmmm... Wakayai raghu kuch toh hai..."

Back in Basti everybody was excited for the new shop. Kids were attracted to the colors of the shop. Raghu was sitting in his

room resting his hand on the bed and thinking about antara.
Her smile, her fragnance, the way she talked, her movements when Mrs.Naik stepped in.
Mrs. Naik:- "aray raghu tu so raha hai??"
Hearing her voice raghu lifted his head up...
Raghu:- "nai ayi bs aise hi sir mein dard horaha hai"
Mrs. Naik:- "q kia hua meray betay ko."
With that she sat on his bed and raghu kept his head on her lap.
Mrs. Naik:- "raghu woh aik baat karni thi tujhse.."
Raghu:- "haan ayi bolo."
His head was still in her lap.
Mrs. Naik:- "aj woh teray papa woh aj arahay hain..."
With that raghu lifted his head up.
Raghu:- "aur ap chahti ho keh main unhe airport lainey jaon?"
Mrs. Naik:- "haan.."
Raghu:- " nahin ayi sorry.. Main us shaks ka chehra nhn dekhna chahta aur tu mujhay... Nhn... Aur main q laine jaon... Hain kon

meray woh??"
Mrs. Naik:- "beta aisa mat bol... Papa hain woh teray..."
Raghu:- "huh papa... Aise hotay hain papa... Jinkay pas apnay bachon kay liye aik second nhn... Aj tak school college kabhi kisi

ko nhn pata keh mera baap dekhta kaisa hai... Ayi main nhn jaunga... Main MachMach ko bol deta ap ja kar lay ao uskay sath..."
This was all heard by antara who came rasika ko ask something.
Mrs. Naik was sad. Raghu left the room. Antara rushed towards rasika rooms.
As she entered she was confused thinking. She saw that rasika was happy and was busy getting ready. She was wearing an

anarkali and choridar.. Seeing antara she hugged her.
Rasika:- "antara aj main bohat khush hoon.. Meray papa arahay hain puray 8 months baad..."
Antara:- "haan suna main ne... Raghu auncle say itni nafrat q karta hai ??"
Rasika:- "jab bhai chotay thay na... Papa ne un par kabhi dhiyan nhn dia tha bs har waqt dant gusa... Ya business tours. Bhai un

se naraz hai... Us ka kehna hai keh usay woh pyar nhn mila papa se jo aik beta deserve karta hai..."
Antara:- "hmmm acha woh choro yeh batao keh ghulab kay phool nhn ayai ab tak??"
Rasika:- "ohhh haan ruko".
With that she shouted loudly.
Rasika:- "raghu bhai idhar ao please".
Raghu hearing her came to her room folding his sleeves. His head was down and he was busy in that.
Raghu:- "han bol.."
Rasika:- "bhai woh ghulab kay phool ki delivery nhn ai.. Antara batao na..."
Hearing her name raghu heart started to dance. He lifted her head up and saw her there. Her simple and elegant beauty. He was

lost again. His heart was pacing fast.
Rasika jerked him.
Rasika:- "bhai kuch pocha hai batao bhi..."
Raghu:- "haan woh main phone karta hoon."
Antara heard this and felt relieved...
Antara:- "acha rasika ab main chalti hoon."
Rasika: - "ok..."
With that she left.. As she was leaving raghu was looking was the figure going out...
Rasika:- "bhai aj papa arahay hain main bohat khush hoon.. Kitne time keh baad hum sab sath baithay gain..."
Raghu:- "nhn main woh kam se bahir ja raha hoon."
Rasika:- "bhai aj sara kam chor do... Papa ko aik mauka toh do..."
Raghu came out and called MachMach. As he was doing it, a black audi entered the basti. Raghu recognised as the car

belonged to his father. He saw Mrs. Naik and rasika rushing downwards. A man dressed in black three piece. He was wearing a

silver rolex watch. He had grey hair. His personality was as stunning as raghu. He was Mr. Rainak Naik... Antara was looking at

him from her balcony. Mrs. Naik opened the gate and came out. Looking at her Mr. Naik gave a smile as he loved her dearly. She

did his welcome aarti.. Rasika also hugged his father. He loved his children dearly now. Raghu was looking at all of it. Antara was

looking at him. He was hating the moment.
Mr. Naik:- "woh raghu!!!???"
Mrs. Naik gestured him as Mr.Naik back was towards him. As he turned he saw him standing there. Raghu approached him as he

knew what will be the next order of his mother. He touched his feet and without saying or listening to any blessing sat in his jeep

and left.
Mr.Naik was hurt. He went inside and took of his coat.
Mr. Naik:- "main ne aisa kia bura kiya hai iskay sath??? Jo aj woh yeh sab?"
Rasika:- "papa choryai na..."
With that Antara entered in the house. Rasika got up and took her hand.
Rasika:- "papa yeh meri new aur sab say achi friend aur meri business partner.. Antara.."
Antara touched his feet and took blessings. He blessed her. And gave a smile. Antara stayed for an hour and read raghu's dad.

She found him very supportive, a soft hearted human and a loving dad.
Antara left and came home. She was in deep thoughts. She saw her papa and asked him.
Antara:- "papa aik baat pocho..???"
Mr. Kaul:- " haan beta pocho".
Antara:- "Papa aik shaks sari zindagi apna aur apni family ka future bananay kay pechay laga rehta hai... is beech woh apni

family ko time nhn day pata hai aur ab ja kar usay realise hota hai keh usne apnay bachon kay sath bura kia woh mafi mangta hai

aur uski biwi aur beti maf kar deti hai magar beta un sab chezon ko bhool nhn pata.. toh kia usko bhi aik chance daina chahyai?"
Mr.Kaul was listening to all this.
Mr.Kaul:- "usay lazim aik chance daina chahyai. q keh agar insan ghalti ko realize kar lay toh usay acha kia hoga".
Antara heard and with that she went up. Antara changed to his night dress and went into the balcony. On the other hand, Raghu

was doing his daily exercise on the terrace. There was anger and frustration on his face. He was busy in himself when antara

stepped out in the balcony. Antara was in deep thoughts when raghu stood up. Neither Raghu nor antara saw each other.

suddenly raghu felt a change in his surroundings. he turned and saw the beauty standing. Raghu was again lost in her. She was

so lost that she didnt saw raghu. Suddenly Mrs.Kaul came the phone.
Mrs.Kaul:- "antara beta rasika ka phone aya hai".
Antara took the phone.
Antara:- "hello haan rasika kaise ho?"
Rasika:- "madam main theek hoon ap yeh batayai kal ap janti hain kitna important day hai and ap still jag rahi hain. come on

antara so jao... warna subah u will be sleepy... aur agar ap yeh soch rahi hain keh mujhay kaisa pata toh yahan dekhayai."
With that she waved her from her balcony. Antara smiled and waved her back. As she lifted her head up sshe saw raghu staring

at her. His black orbs were fixed on her. A smile was playing on his face. Antara saw him and stood still. Rasika who was still on

line suddenly saw antara and looked up. She understood. She called raghu from her number and confrenced the call.
Rasika:- "toh ab kia ap dono bata saktay hain keh ap log sonay jayain gain ya yehen mujhay tension day gain?"
Hearing this antara came back. Raghu never noticed the confrence. Suddenly he heard the most sweet voice.
Antara:- "Good Night Rasika. kal miltay hain. bye."
With that she hung up.
Rasika:- "Bhai ab toh bata do kia chal raha hai?"
Raghu:- "Kuch nhn chal rha.. so ja ja kar."
With that he hung up. That night raghu slept with a sleep of satisfication.While Antara was unable to sleep for two reasons.
the first was the big day tommorrow, the inaguration and rasghu's behaviour towards his father."
Thinking this she dozed off.
The next day came, the sun came up. The basti was awaiting as the preparations started. Rasika took all her things and went to

antara's place to get ready. The day went by, the basti was decorated with lights. Raghu was dressed in a black kurta with blue

jeans. he was looking very handsome. MachMach who was here just for her rasika was weaing a blue kurta with blue jeans.
The auspicious time was about to start in half hour. Both the families stepped out. Mrs.Naik worw a beautiful red sari while

Mrs.Kaul was weaing a beautiful purple shalwar kameez. Mr.Kaul was standing next to raghu when Mr.Naik came.
Mr.Naik:- "Raghu beta woh..."
Raghu looked at her as if he abused him. Mr.Kaul heard him and introduced him.
Mr.Kaul:- "Toh ap hain raghu kay papa. Main Anirudh kaul. Antara ka father."
Mr.Naik felt happy and shook hands with him. suddenly rasika came rushing.
Rasika:- "papa main ready hogai."
Both the fathers looked at her.
Mr.Naik smiled and blessed her. Raghu saw rasika and hoped that antara came with her. Rasika came to his brother.
Rasika:- "bhai batao na main kaise lag rahi hoon."
She was wearing a blue lehnga with silver embrodiary. Raghu smiled.
Raghu:- "tu meri behan hai obvious tu achi lag rahi hogi!!"
It was an hour when rasika joined all.. Raghu was eagerly waiting for her arrival. He was restless as all had arrive but there was

no sign of her.. Mrs.kaul sent ishu to check on her.
This was enough wait as raghu was going he saw her stepping out. She wearing a black lehnga with red and white work. Her hair

were done perfectly. Raghu saw her. He was lost again. It was like he was standing alone and looking at her. With her each step raghu's heart skipped a beat.

Precap
The night continues and RaNtara come closer.

Here's the update.
Do read and comment.
Regards,
Haya.
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved the whole update dear!!😳
u have written so beautifully!!!👏
raghu is falling for her day by day😳
he hates his father...but he is nice person he will accept him whole heartedly!😊
thanks fr updating dear!
precap is lovely...can't wait fr it
love u..
🤗
P.S. read my pm dear😊
Edited by Tsuchi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
welcome back haya missed u soo much where were you for soo long?
m sorry abt ur husband
loved the update soo much
pls cont asap
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Posted: 11 years ago
welcome back haya
loved to see u back
sorry about your husband
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update Haya 😊
Loved it very much
sorry about ur husband
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update haya 😊...
missed u n ur updates 😛...
anyways welcum back..
hope antara vl bring raghu close to
his father n bridge dere gaps 😃...
raghu again lost in antara n so is antara..
orecap seems interesting one..
grt work..
ps really sry fr ur husband dear..
we r here ur frnds.soo plz stay happy n keep smiling dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very nice update .
Loved it .
Thank you

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