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harshita gangwani

@harshita1996

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Twinks it was amazing..the way u described the situation..

Poor Antara how can Raghu do dat yaar..

Thanks fr pm

Update aoon keep writing will be writing..:)

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BabyHimavari

@BabyHimavari

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#82

twinkle, awsome update.

loved antara's courge and presence of mind which she used to run away from them

raghu is totally different here. his charecter is totally dark. u are wright,.. he is totally a cheap here. but thats the thing which are hooking me to the story. a very diff shades of raghu...

now how could antara have any feelings for raghu rather than hate... is there a possibility of love story between these two..

and kya yaar cliffhangers...

next part jaldi jaldi chahiye..

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.Suchi.

@.Suchi.

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#83

yr twinkle what u have written😲 amazing!!!!👏

i mean raghu as a real goon😒 saare galat kaam karne wala...😡😆

bt really feel bad fr antu...do write more😊 really excited to know😉 ki raghu kis had tak use pareshaan kar sakta hai

thanks😛

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priyanka

@ankusanu

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#84

waiting fr nxt update..raghu itna evil..hope both fall fr eachother truly

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pampz

@pampz

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#85

Yepppiii ...update mil gayiii... thank uuu

and i wanna tell u one thing yeh tera long update bilkul nahi hai ...Short hai ...itna chota ki kya batayun ...pllzzz yaaar next time longer update i want ...😃

coming to ur story ...u hv totally made me engrossed into ur story ...Raghu is completely in dark shade here ...n he can do any bloody thing with Antara ...Antara is scared to death...any girl wd be lik that in such a situation ...(may God never ever make any girl face such situation as in such situation Raghu wd be not be the guy who wll try to come close😉 ...BUT a hell nasty man wd come and that is so deadly horrible i cant even imagine🤢 )...n am eager to see Raghu's next action😳...he has got already sooo soo possessive for her ...MM faced his wrath whn he expressed his wrong intentions for her ... Raghu has started calling her his JAAN 😃.may be he is himself unaware about the depth of the word he has started using for Antara

here in ur story Raghu is a bad guy with no morality n all n here the depth n real beauty lies in ur story that how a completely wrong person with wrong intentions in a wrong place falls in love with a beautiful innocent girl like Antara ...n how he reacts n handles his love for her...

waiting for more for ur "waise" writing madly ...u better update soon . i completely loved ur story . its tremendously fascinating... the way u hv written the whole scenes i can litterally see Raghu n Antara in front of me ...hattts off to you ...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏