Rantara ss:raghubhai UPDATED PART 7 PAGE 34

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey guys i am back with my new ss on rantara i hope u will like it pls leave ur comments and lykes for ur support 😳
INDEX:
PART 1 BELOW
PART 2 PAGE 5
PART 3 PAGE 11
PART 4 PAGE 20
PART 5 PAGE 26
PART 6 PAGE 29
PART 7 PAGE 34
PART 1
It was late at night when a man of age 25 yrs was coming back home he was in an autorickshaw suddenly the auto drives stops the auto with a jerk
man:kya bat hai bhaiya auto kyu rok dia?
Driver:sahab aage kuch log khade hai vaha rasta rokkar
the man comes
out of auto and moves towards them
man:kaun hai aaplog aur ye kya tarika hai is tarah rasta rok kar khada hone ka?

A man of around same age comes out of d jeep
"aey shane zada jaldi hai tereko?chal be apni pocket khali kar be"
man:matlab?
"matlab jitne paise haina tere pass usse mere hatho me de dena ka vo kya hai na apun log teri jaan jo bachaya"
man(confused):tumne meri jaan kb bachayi?
"vo kya hai na(he takes out a knife from his jeans)agar tune apni jeb(pocket)khali nae ki to apun tere ko mar dega lekin agar ache bacho ki tarah tune laxmi mere hath me di to main tjhe chod dunga to bacha li na teri jaan"
man:main tumse darne wala nae main abi police ko phone karta hu
before he could do anything the man snatch away his phone
"arey tu janta nae tu kisse panga le raha hai apun ka naam machmach hai arey apun RAGHUBHAI ka bole to ek dum khas aadmi hai"

the first man gets scared on hearing this name and gives all the money to machmach and runs away

machmach:sala
he sits back in d jeep and hands over d money to a person
machmach:ye le BHAI teri guru dakshina




Raghu:bahut ache machmach aaj ki daru ka to intezam ho gaya
machmach drives d jeep and they reached a bar
raghu machmach and raghu's men starts drinking and after a while completely lose their senses machmach and other man continues drinking while raghu st
arts dancing with the bar girls he holds one of the bar girl by waist and pulls her towards him he gets close to her and starts moving his arms on her back he was dancing for more than an hour so he was feeling hot so he removes his jacket

the bar girl takes opportunity of this and starts unbuttoning his shirt she then removes it now she could see his bare chest she starts touching her chest with her fingers while raghu brings her more close to him he starts throwing all his money on her he kept on dancing with her bt nw he starts falling dizzy as he was completely drunk so he leaves the bar with machmach and his men

KAUL HOUSE


Dr kaul:antara beti kaha hai?
Antara:ji aayi papa...papa aapne bulaya
dr kaul:beta tum sach much is rishte se khush to ho na
antara:ji papa main bahut khush hu aap pareshan mat hoiye or phir ADITYA or main to bachpan ke dost hai vo mjhse bahut pyar karta
hai
dr kaul:or tum?
Antara:main bhi papa
dr kaul:thik hai beta ab tum so jao bhut raat ho gae hai
antara:ji papa


Machmach and raghu comes back home
machmach:bhai tu to aaj bhut khush ho ga na?
Raghu:han sae kaha re tune machmach vo bar me vo ladki kya item thi na vo arre ye sala daru ka asar nae hota na to aaj to main uske bistar par b pahuch jata
Machmach:sae kaha bhai ek dum pataka thi
acha chal bhai ab tu so ja kal dhandhe par b to jana hai
raghu:arey aaj kaha nind aaegi apun ko aaj to apun ki nind vo item jo uda le gae
machmach smirks both of them finally goes to sleep

all night raghu was dreaming of d bar girl thinking abt her beauty her smell her bare back and finally he dozed off to sleep


KAUL HOUSE

Antara was thinking of the time when aditya proposed her for marriage

FLASHBACK

antara was in her college and it was rose day she was waiting for ruksana who was her best friend and her neighbour when suddenly pushed her in room and closed d door
antara:ADI
aditaya:haan angel(he used to call him angel)main tumse kuch kahna chahta hu
antara:haan bolo adi
aditya:I LOVE YOU ANGEL WILL YOU MARRY ME
antara:adi ye sab...
Aditya:KYA TUM MERI LIFE KI PERMANENT ANGEL BANOGI?
antara was shocked but she agreed bcoz she was his frnd so she could nt say no and hurt him bt soon she started falling for him and confessed her love too

FLASHBACK ENDS


she thinks of all this and was blushing she finally goes to sleep


dats it for now pls dont forget to leave ur comments

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey twinks...its pretty interesting!it is based only on raghu..thatsy u named this raghubhai.well update soon next part...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Twinks.. i must say something different..
Raghu thinking of item and Antu in love with Aditya..
pls write next part soon and pm me..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow twinkle it's really highly interesting..😊
loved raghu and antara's intro...
waiting for next😊
Edited by ifians - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice start dear. pls update soon ans thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice start continue it dear
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nice start😊 will wait for the next update.. and give long comment... now really out of time.. 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nyc update...
Raghu bhai... Nyc name...
Update soon dear and do pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey pretty good..
Nice start twinks..
Update soon..
Will be waiting..
Thanks fr pm:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow i loved it
i had a feeling that the girl might be antu but she is already in love
pls cont asap

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