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Posted: 11 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: sweetdesire

Hey twinkle dear

Really love the second part

OMG Raghu kidnapped Antara

Poor girl

Waiting to read more

So do continue soon

And plz PM me next tym

Take care

Geet




thanku geet😳
i will update it tommorrow😃
will surely pm u😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: pampz

yaar tere aisehi likhenese hi yeh kamaal ho gaya ...waise likha to pata nahi kya hoga ...but i am in love with ur aise waise har types of writing ...n thank u for promising to giv us a long update ...muyaaah ...luv u



thanku so much pampzz😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: maryambibi

when is the next update


i will update it today😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey guys i am back with my next update😃...i m sooo sry for the late update😭 i was busy first and then i fell ill😭...neways thanku so much to all my lovely friends who liked and commented for the updates😊... i have tried to make it longer(specially for u PAMPZ honestly u became an inspiration for me for writing this long update thanku so much )...hope u all lyk it...pls leave ur likes and commentsšŸ˜›
PART 3

antara was still crying when raghu again enters the room and had an evil smile on his lips he removes the hanky from her mouth and says:ab tujhe vo karna hoga jo main kahunga...

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antara:(scared):kya..kya chahte ho ?
raghu(smirking and coming closer to her):chahta to bahut kuch hu janeman par...(moves back)filhal to bas tjhe tere baap se bat karke ye batana hai ki tu apun k pass hai aur mereko 50 lakh ka sham tak bhejva de nae to main tere sath kya karunga iska unhe andaza b nae hai

antara was hell scared so she agrees to him

antara:hell..hello papa
dr kaul:antara beta mera bacha tu thik to hai na
antara:main thik hu papa aap pareshan mat hona papa ye log...(and she tells dr kaul eveything which raghu had asked her to say)
papa:tum darna mat beta main tumhe kuch nae hone dunga main(before he cud say further raghu snatch the phone from antara)

raghu:sun li apni beti ki awaz chup chap kal sham tak paise bhejva dena nae to...

raghu cuts the call dr kaul gets hell worried for antara and asks his accountans and managers to start arrange for the amount quickly

AT RAGHU;S PLACE:
raghu:(smirking)kya kahti hai jaan jab tak tera baap paise ka intezam kaata hai kyu na hum b kuch masti kra le...
antara(crying):door raho mjhse...
raghu was about to come near her when suddenly machmach called him

raghu:haan machmach...abi aa raha hu main
he cuts the phone
raghu:sry jaan tjhe chod kar ja raha hu lekin humari baat abhi puri nae hui hai...
raghu leaves from there after thrusting his hanky in her mouth

antara starts sobbing and tries to free her hand but she failed suddenly she notices a pocket knife lying on the floor she crawls and reach the knife she bends her both hands a little and tries to pick it up after a numerous efforts she picks it and starts cutting the rope on her hands..she was able to release them nd then she removes the hanky on her mouth and the rope on her leg

she was crying bitterly and was trying to find a way to escape bt she cud fine none
suddenly she hears a sound nd realises that someone was coming there so she picked the knife again nd hided behind the door as soon as the door opens pakiya enters the room he had brought food for her bt he cud not see her antara uses the chance and hits him badly with the knife on his back and then she attacks his leg so that he would nt b able to run

she finally leaves the room she again heards a noice and hides herself she saw raghu talking with machamch

raghu:ae machmach kya cheez hai ye ladki... bole to ek dum rapchik item...apun ko na iske sath ek rat manane ka hai vo b aaj hi(an evil smile appears on his face)

machmach:lekin bhai iskea baap...
raghu:arre uska kya hai vaise b aaj iske sath rat bitaunga aur kal sham ko iske baap ke pass bhej dunga
machmach:ek dum sae hai bhai...teri to aish hai paise b mil jaenge aur rat b rangeen ho jaegi
par bhai terese ek request hai
raghu:han bolna
machmach:bhai jab tera ho jae to mere pass...
raghu(shouts):MACHMACH!!!!!!!!
machmach :sry bhai tu rakhna us ladki ko main koi aur dhundh lunga

RAghu:uski taraf aakh uthakar b mat dekh VO SIRF MERI HAI
machmach:thik hai bhai

antara was listening all this and was terrified horrified scared and crying at the same time she could not believe that hw can somone be so cheap(sry for this guys even i didnt wanted to use dis bt i had to justify antara;s feelings)
she had to run now otherwise she will fall in great trouble suddenly she notices a door and slowly she moves towards it without neone knowing about it she finall opens the door and escapes

raghu:machmach ja dekh kar aa us yedi ne khana khaya ya nae
machmach:ji bhai
machmach leaves after minute or two raghu heards him shouting
machmach:BHAI

raghu quickly runs towards the room where antara was tied and was shocked to see that she was not there his hands turns into a fist he was hell angry he was like he will kill antara any time
raghu:(shouting and in angry tone):machmach pakiya jaldi jeep nikil chahe jo b ho jae mjhe vo ladki chahiye abi JAO!!!!!

both machmach and pakiya leaves from there to search her
raghu(his eyes burning):ek bar mjhe mil ja fir dekh main tere sath kya karta hu

antara was running like hell she did;nt know where to go but she continued to run she was panting heavily but she did;nt stopped suddenly she saw car and decided to take a lift but dropped the idea as she has already suffered so much in just few hours and she had no stamina left to suffer more

she knew she was far away from the place where she was kept so she now started walking as now she would die if shew ran further
on the other hand machmach and pakiya were continuously searching for her but could not find her but they continued it was then they finally saw her... antara hears a voice of a jeep and turned to see who it was and she got scared to see raghu;s men there she started running again but they were in jeep so they easily caught her

antara:pls jane do mjhe
machmach hold her wrist and forcefully make her sit in the jeep and pakiya drives
machmach calls raghu

machmach:bhai ladki mil gae hai humare sath hai aa rahe hai isse lekar
raghu:machmach ek kam kar usse behosh karde taki usse humare adde ke bare me pata na chale
machmach:thik hai bhai
machmach cuts the call and takes out a liquid from his pocket he sprinkles it on his hanky and he puts the hanky on antara;s nose she tries to free herself but fails and finally faints...

AT RAGHU;S PLACE:

raghu:aman idhar aa
aman:haan bhai bol
raghu:upar wale kamre ko saja de bole to aise sajana jaise kisi ki suhag raat par sajta hai mjhe pure kamre me vo candles chahiye bistar khali ek laga bole to single bed aur usse b phulo se saja de

aman:(smirks):samajh gaya bhai(he leaves)

raghu:ab dekhta hu kaise bhagti hai ab to tjhe apna bana kar hi rahunga

finally machmach and pakiya arrives at the place along with antara machmach was carrying her in his arms as she was still unconscious

machmach:ye le bhai le aaya teri jaan ko
raghu:bahut ache machmach
raghu takes antara in his arms and carries her to a room he opens the door of the room and was happy as aman had did his job perfectly
the room aws beautifully decorated it was lighted with candles had only a single bed which was covered with rose petals on the side of the bed was a table where there were two bottles of alcohol raghu was very happy as he will spend a night with antara and teach her a lesson for trying to escape from his den
he litterally throws her on the bed and locks the door from inside and orders his three men to not to disturb them

he comes near her and tries to touch her but suddenly stops

raghu:nahi abi nahi maza to tab aayega jab main tjhe chu aur tu apni izzat bachane ke liye cheekhe!!!!! chillaye!!!!

raghu opens one of the alcohol and starts drinking it he had almost completed one of them but still she did;nt wake up he was getting restless as he wanted to touch her madly and feel her her beautiful eyes her soft pink lips her long hair everything was seducing him he wanted to touch them feel them he wanted to hug her feel her kiss her lick her he wanted to make her completely his

finally antara wakes up and the first thing he could see was raghu she gets scared and quickly wakes up she notices the room was decorated and that raghu was completely drunk she could now clearly understand his intentions and she gets more and more scared

raghu has an evil smile on his face on seeing her like that till now he had completed one complete bottle of alcohol now he wanted her badly his eyes were full of lust

he starts moving towards her and she starts moving back on the bed

raghu:ye thik nae kia tune jaan ...mjhe chodkar bhag gae..lekin kya fayda hua ...aana to mere pass hi pada na meri baho me...par koi bat nae tu dar mat main tujhe zada dard nae dunga jo bhi karunga bahut pyar se karunga...tu dekhna tu bhi bahut enjoy karegi ye sab...bahut maza aanae wala hai tjhe

antara(crying):pls...pls mjhe jane do...main tumhare hath jodti hu pls...
raghu:aaj tujhe mjhse koi nae bacha sakta jaan...khud main bhi nae...par tu chinta mat kar pahle tu zarur roegi tadpegi chillayegi cheekhegi par baad me tu bhi mjhe chuna chahegi...

antara was now terrified to death she knw it was her end nd now there is no escape

raghu came near her and leaned on her completely he picks some of the rose petals from the bed and throw them on her body


TO BE CONTINUED...


guys i think it was not long enough but i had to think now what will happen further and also isse jada main nae likh paešŸ˜† so i need to stop here sry if i hurted anyone by raghu;s character hope u enjoyed it pls leave ur comments

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Posted: 11 years ago
#75

Hey Twinkle

Love the update dear

Omg,Poor Antara

I am feeling so bad for her

How could Raghu do that to her

Really waiting to read more

Plz continue soon

Thanks for the PM

Take care

Lots of Love

Geet

Edited by sweetdesire - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
Update was really good... Surprising.. Waiting for next

But honestly i m not used to visualize Raghu as evil.. so kind of "not digested" by the very fact...!!
You really want him to be like a evil gunda Twinks..??
and yeah.. I m not complaining buddy.. just asking..
Edited by nbw16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
Ohh . Great job . What will Raghu do then next ? Thank you ! Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
Loved d update dear... :)
But i agree im not able to imagine raghu like dat...
After all in our imaginations he is a limit ka gunda...
But still it was a very nice update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG Raghu trying to ... Antara. Hope in next part Raghu don't do anything to her.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Twinkle im hell shocked with Raghu's intention šŸ˜•

Pata nahi aage kya hoga cant wait to read next part , do continue soon

Anyways lovely update šŸ˜‰

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