RANTARA SS-Ehsaas -the Feeling Part 29 & 30-page 54 - Page 36

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Posted: 11 years ago
wonderful update ...but i really feel bad for Antara ...akhir kabtak Raghu usse wo savera ka naam leke jealous karega ...??? Raghu itna mat sata yaar Antu ko ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
it's lovely,beautiful,adorable update👍🏼
romantic moments betwwen rantara is wowww😉
loved it soo much😊😊
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hey amfi u said u r updating but still no response
we are waiting eagarely
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amfiii update kar na yaaar plzzz
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Amfi where are you yaar?? you said you will update ages ago so where are you??
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Part 31:


It was 10 pm of nite nd Antara was still feeling uncomfortable wid d Thought of Raghu spending his tym wid Savera moreover Shilpa's Words were echoing in her ears. Somewhere she felt wat Shilpa has said was rite but den she shrugged of all her thoughts

Antara: Antara Tu bhi na! Shilpa ki baat pe dhyan de rahi hai. wo to kuch bhi bolti hai. ye sach nahi ho sakta. But agar sach hua to. Main ek baar Vindhya di se baat kar leti hoon. Haan

She said while Grabbing her cell phone nd started dialing Vindhya's No. She knews it very well dat d Problem of her Soln. is only wid Vindhya

Vindhya: Hey Sweety! Wats up? Hw did u called me today?

Antara: Wo Di, I wanted to talk to u something important actually I need an advice from u

Vindhya: Antara wats wrong? U seems to be tensed. Is everything ok between u nd Raghu?

Antara: I don't know Di. I wanted to talk to u regarding dis only

Vindhya: Go on I m Listening

Antara told her d whole thing right from their fight till d entry of Saver and after dat hw Raghu spends tym wid her nd today also he left as Soon as Savy called him

Antara: Di! I don't know wat to do?

Vindhya: First tell me Antara, wats bothering u more? Raghu not having coffee wid u or Raghu going out wid Savera leaving u

Antara: aren't dey both r d same things?

Vindhya: not at all Sweety. U r jealous of Savy don't u?

Antara: No Di u r taking it wrong its not.

Vindhya: antara I know u since childhood. U r jealous of Savy because she was spending tym wid Raghu nd Raghu too giving attention to her rather den u

Antara: But Di.

Vindhya: Antara, cant u notice that from last few months it was only Raghu who was in ur talks, in ur thoughts. Today Raghu has said dis, today Raghu has said dat, today u both had fight, Today Raghu has take u out for Dinner. Raghu, Raghu nd only Raghu nothing else nd nw u says that it doesn't effect u wen u see him wid Savy. Sweety u love him don't u

Antara: yes Di I love Him but

Vindhya: See Antara its good that u think about ur Family before u but u had ur own life too nd u have to live for urself

Antara: no Di m not denying my love because of my family

Vindhya: Den wats d reason? U know very well dat he loves u nd u love him too den wats d problem

Antara: Di if he really loves me den y did he done all dat? Hw can he lose me to someone else?

Vindhya: Antara u had seen only side of d coin. U were only seeing wat he did but not y he did. I agree that Raghu has done mistake. He must ask u before doing any such thing but u cant deny that he has done it for ur Happiness only. He wanted to see u happy forever, not from nw but from d day since he met u.

Antara: But Di..

Vindhya: Antara, dnt let ur stupid Ego come between ur happiness. It will ruin ur relationship wid Raghu. U were not like dis Antara. Since wen u have started Putting ur Ego in front of ur Relationship. Just forget about everything nd start a new beginning wid Raghu. Go nd tell him wat u feels for him

Antara: r u sure everything will be ok after I do dis

Vindhya: u trust me na Sweety

Antara: more den myself Di

Vindhya: den do wat I say to u

Antara: ok Di bye!

Vindhya: Bye nd take care always

Antara hang up d Phone nd Started thinking over d conversation she had with Vindhya

Antara(To herself): Di is rite. I was never like dis. hw can I let my Ego ruin my relationship. i only remember of d tym wen Raghu hurt me but hw can I forget d tym wen he was with me always. I m punishing him more den needed nd besides him I m punishing myself from not telling him abt my feelings. But nw I wont stop myself anymore. I wont Punish me nd Raghu anymore. (A smile formed on her face) I m Sorry Raghu for hurting u till nw, but nw I wont hurt u anymore. U r mine nd only mine nd I wont let u go away from me. Tomorrow I'll tell u everything.

She said nd went to sleep wid d Satisfaction dat tomorrow Raghu will be with her again.

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A whole week has been passed by nd Antara couldn't able to tell Raghu about her feelings. Both Raghu nd Savy were noticing change in Antara's behaviour nd seeing hw desperate she was to tell about her feelings but dey were still testing her patience wid their plans. Raghu as usual continues to spend her tym wid Savy only difference is dat nw Antara also use to accompany him most of d tymes wen he goes to meet her. On d Other hand Savera has Given Arman one week tym to tell Shilpa about his feelings or else she will told her Arman tried a lot but couldn't able to tell Shilpa so Savera decided to do something for both of d couples nd she thought of a plan. Though Arman didn't like it nd both Savy nd Arman r nw Arguing with each other

Arman: Wats all dat? Y r we going to our Farm House at Alibagh?

Savy: because u have to Propose Shilpa over dere (she said while packing her clothes) ah! By d way I had packed ur bag. Check it once if I left something den tell me

Arman: wait wait wait! U had packed my bag? with whose permission?

Savy: Do u think Savera Malik needs anyones permission for doing anything?

Arman: listen Savy.

Savy: Look Bro I gave u one week Tym to propose Shilpa otherwise I have to handle dis matter on my own but u thought dat I was joking so nw just see wat I do

Arman shooks his head in disbelief nd sits on d bed. Savy comes nd sits beside his bro. She keeps her hand on his shoulder

Savy: Bro I know m Getting Pushy in dis matter of urs but I cant see u like dis. Already I had seen u going through tough tymes a lot nd nw I want u to be happy wid Shilpa once again. Nd trust me She loves u so much bro nd waiting for u to confess. Dnt u think that u r being unfair to her?

Arman looked at her sis. He never thought that Savera could think so sensible. He always thought that his Sis is still a kid but today the way she talked that made him realize that she has grown up nw

Savy: nw y r u looking at me like dis?

Arman: nothing just seeing dat my Sis is grown up nw

Savy: o Hello! Who spread dis rumour (she said looking around) pls I hate to be grown up

Arman: ya ya I know. But Savy is it necessary

Savy: yes Bro. moreover Raghu nd Antara too need our help. U know hw their relationship is going on? Even shilpa is helping me

She said nd den closes her eyes as she has done a blunder

Arman: Wat? Wat did u just said

Savy: no nothing

Arman: Savy tell me

Savy: Wo Bro me nd Shilpa has became good friends in dis past 1 week nd we talked a lot about u Antara nd Raghu. Nd even she knows abt my plan

Arman: wat she knows dat I m going to propose her in alibagh?

Savy: ofcourse not m I that Stupid? I had only discussed her about d plan for Antara nd Raghu.

Arman: ok

Savy (looking at her watch): omg! See hw much tym is wasted nd I have to do my packing also. Bro u talk a lot nw stop talking nd let me do my packing

Arman: o ya! I m talking too much. It was u who was continuously talking

Savy: o Really! Bro u'll never change. Always blaming me

Arman: because u always do blunders

Savy: Enough!

She said nd picked up d pillow nd throws it towards Arman to which Arman also throws a pillow back to her nd Soon both Bro nd Sis starts having pillow fight wid each other just like small kids

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Next day all five of dem were set to go to Alibagh. Antara thought that dis moment is right to tell Raghu about her feelings though she didn't like d idea of cuming Savy wid her as it would be difficult for her to spend tym wid Raghu alone but she cant help it As Everyone wants her to cum but she has made sure that Raghu would spend most of his tym wid her (antara) only.

At afternoon all of dem Reached at farm House. Arman nd Raghu were sharing d same room while Shilpa, Antara nd Savera were sharing another Room. before lunch Antara tried to catch up wid Raghu but suddenly Savy came nd excuses Raghu from Antara as she wanted to discuss her plan with Raghu. Antara's blood was boiling wid anger but she couldn't say much as she felt that it is not d right tym to react moreover she thought that may be Savy needs to talk something important regarding her Fashion Show. So she left from dere though she was still feeling restless but she know that she has to control till d right tym come. Savy nd Raghu were discussing over plan

Savy: See Raghu till nw everything has gone acc to our plan nd we have seen d result of it. Antara's attitude is changing towards u nd u know wat I think she's dyeing to confess her feelings towards u

Raghu: yes u r rite. I too noticed it. I think I should go to her nd tell her everything. (he said nd about to leave wen Savy stopped him by holding his hand)

Savy: bas yahi problem hoti hai tum ladko ki. Ladki ne zara sa signal diya nahi k bas excited ho jate ho

Raghu: wat Do u mean?

Savy: Raghu I said that she's dyeing to tell her feelings towards u but that doesn't mean that u go to her nd tell her everything

Raghu: Savy, m really not getting wat u r trying to say.

Savy: See Raghu we r going to stay over here for 2 days nd Antara will confess in these 2 days only but not like u wanted.

Raghu: So?

Savy: So today in d evening I m going to play a game over here which would help my Bro also nd in dat game m going to ask u few questions regarding Antara

Raghu: nd I have to answer dem Correct. I know

Savy: no u r going to answer all d questions Wrong

Raghu(shocked): wat? U r kidding rite?

Savy: m I seem like Laughing? No na. u heard me rite. U r going to give to give wrong answers

Raghu: Savy, u seriously wanted to unite me nd Antara na

Savy: Do u have any doubt in dat?

Raghu: yes Because d way u r telling me it seems that I m going to have Break up with Antara Completely in dese two days

Savy: uurggh Raghu y u always over react?

Raghu: because u r speaking nonsense Savy. Already we have irritated her a lot in this 1 week nd nw I cant do it anymore

Savy: but Raghu we r getting result of it nd dat too positive. See I want Antara to be frustrated so much that no one can stop her from telling her feelings towards u.

Raghu: but Savy.

Savy: Raghu, we r on d last stage of our plan. Pls don't ruin it nw. (den she placed

Her hand on his) Trust me Raghu nothing will go wrong

Raghu: I trust u Savy.

He said nd places his hand on hers nd smiled just den Antara came over dere searching Raghu nd seeing both of dem like dat she felt restless. She quickly goes away from dere to her Room nd closes d door behind her nd rushes towards her bed. She was badly in tears

Antara(sobs): I lost u Raghu. I lost u. Di was rite I had ruined our relationship with my own hands because of my stupid Ego nd after dat I couldn't able to convey my feelings in dis 1 week nd nw u r wid Savy. May be dis is wat I deserve. Wen u confess ur feelings towards me I ran away nd after dat also I didn't listened to u nd now wen I wanted to tell u about my feelings u r far away from me. But I wont come between ur happiness. U deserve to be happy Raghu.

She was sobbing wen she heard her cell phone ringing she looked at d number nd found Vindhya's no. flashing over dere. She quickly wiped away her tears nd tries to calm herself so that Vindhya wont able to know that she's crying

Antara: hey Di! Wats up?

Vindhya: Antara, I m fine hws u sweety?

Antara: I m fine too Di.

Vindhya: Really is it?

Antara: ya Di y should I lie?

Vindhya: Because Vridant is calling u from last half an hour nd u r not picking his call moreover ur Voice doesn't seem that u r fine

Antara: oh Di! My cell was on silent thatsy I didn't noticed it nd about my voice I had catch cold datsy

Vindhya: Antara, u know u cant say a lie not in front of me atleast. Nw tell me wats wrong?

Nw antara couldn't able to hide her emotions for long. She started crying nd told everything to Vindhya

Vindhya: Antara wat r u saying?

Antara: this is true Di. I lost Raghu

Vindhya: Antara calm down. I think there is some misconception. This cant be true. I'll talk to Raghu

Antara: No Di u'll not

Vindhya: But Antara..

Antara: Di Pls. tumhe meri kasam

Vindhya: Antara!!!!

Antara: Di, Raghu is happy wid Savy nd I dnt want to ruin his happiness already I had punished him a lot nd nw its tym for me to get d punishment. Di in dese 2 days I'll have d best memories of mine wid mine which is going to be wid me for rest of my life

Vindhya: Antara do u have any idea wat u r saying?

Antara: yes Di

Vindhya: Antara nw if u have decided then I wont interfere but still I'll say that talk to Raghu once before u do any such thing

Antara: hhmmm kk Di. Acha Di I need to go nw talk to u later. Bye

Vindhya: ok Bye dear.

Dey both hang up nd both were worried. One side it was Vindhya who was worried over Antara's Decision because she knew that Raghu can never do that Antara is surely in misconception but she couldn't talk to Raghu either Because of Antara so the thing only left is dat she can only pray for both of dem. On d other hand it was Antara who was both worried nd sad. Sad because she has lost Raghu because of her insensitiveness nd worried that hw will she tell everyone about dis. But for nw she has decided dat she wont tell anyone nd will gather as much memories as she can wid Raghu.

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At evening Everyone is gathered at d Garden near Bonfire. Savy has many plans to follow bt d Thing which is disturbing her is Antara's Behaviour since Noon. She is Behaving differently nd Savy has noticed it but she didn't said anything regarding it to Raghu because she knows that once their Plan will complete then Antara will definitely Forgive her. so she gave up all her thoughts nd started concentrating on her plan

Savy: Ok Guys! Lets Play a Very Common but an interesting game "Truth nd Dare".

Arman: No Savy its very boring game.

Savy: Bro! I havent asked ur opinion I m telling u that we r going to play dis game.

Everyone laughs nd Arman looks at Savy irritately

Savy: ok lets Spin d Bottle.

Savy spins d Bottle nd it stopped between Raghu nd Shilpa with d open end pointing towards Shilpa.

Raghu: So Shilpa, Truth or Dare, waise I Guess I guess u must take truth, Dare lena tumhare bas ki baat nahi hai

Shilpa: Jiju, Shilpa Kaul is not scared of anything, I'll take Dare only.

Raghu: R u sure?

Shilpa: yep!

Raghu: k So Kya karaya jaye tumse?

Savy: Raghu, can I Suggest

Raghu: ya Savy sure

Savy: Shilpa, I have heard kit um Mimickry kaafi achi karti ho, so Y Don't u act Like Raghu nd even better act like Raghu wen he manofies Antara. Wat say?

Shilpa looks at Raghu nd den Antara she don't know wat to do

Shilpa: Ummm Savy..

Savy: No Shilpa nw u cant back out. C'mon be a Sport yaar. Chalo For ur Help I'll act like Antara ok.

Shilpa: ok

Dey both started Acting like Raghu nd Antara to which both Raghu nd Antara couldn't stop themselves Smiling wen dey saw dis especially Shilpa acting like Raghu. Soon their Drama come to an end nd Shilpa cutely says Sorry to Raghu for acting like him.

Once Again Shilpa Spins d Bottle nd dis tym it stops between Antara nd Arman with d open end facing Antara

Arman: So Antara Truth or Dare?

Antara: Dare

Arman: ok, So Antara I heard that u write Beautiful Poems nd if dis is trueden dis should also be true dat u must have written something for Raghu also I mean some kind of a Poem So u have to Share dis Poem wid all of us

Antara was numb after hearing dis. nw wat kind of a Dare is dis. Raghu Senses her uncomfortableness so he intervenes

Raghu: Hey Arman! Stop it yaar, hw can u ask Antara to share something Personal

Arman: o C'mon dude it's a Dare nd Antara have to complete dis. haan if she's scared of doing so den its ok

Antara: No Arman m not at all scared

Raghu: But Antara..

Antara: its ok Raghu. I can share it. (nd She started narrating her poem which she has written for Raghu)

My Life was an open Book,

with Empty pages

No Avenues to discover,

Only desolate images.

Now those days are vanished & transformed,

Success is all around,

The Credit goes to a bonafied Person

Who is my Hidden Possession.

He exist in my heart & Soul

& ofcourse my ultimate Goal.

My Strength & weakness all he is

The one & only whom I Miss..

I Feel his fragnance in my breath

I'll love him until my death.

Without him,

My Life is like a Rose Lacking Smell

Like a Candle without Flame.

At Every Dawn nd Dust,

His glimpse is Must.

His memeories are treasure

That no one can steal

His separation ia a Wound

That nothing can Heal.

Now I pray to God,

Every Day and night

That he stays in my Life forever,

To make it beautiful nd Bright

I Don't know what will I Do without Him

All I Know that I Don't want to be without him

As d Poem comes to an end Antara notices everyone looking at her. she was so lost while saying her Poem that she didn't realize that everyone is sitting around her. She felt only Raghu nd she is together nd she's telling her feelings to him. She didn't even notice a drop of tear came from her eyes while narrating Poem. She looks at Raghu who is looking at her lovingly. There was a unique Silence between dem like dey wanted to share some unspoken words forgetting the World around dem. Finally Arman breaks d Silence

Arman: Amazing Antara!!! (He said while clapping which brought both Antara nd Raghu to their senses) I mean it was so beautifully written.

Antara: Thanx Arman

Arman: Raghu, I must say yaar u r very lucky Dude that u had Antara wid u, I mean hw beautifully she has expressed wat u mean to her

Raghu: I know Raghu. I m really very lucky (He said while looking at Antara)

Shilpa: Acha nw enough of dis emotional talks nw lets see who's next

Arman: Sure, let me spin it dis tym

Arman spins d Bottle nd dis tym it Stops Between Raghu nd Savy with an open end towards Raghu

Savy: So Raghu, Truth or Dare

Raghu: I can do both Savy, u know m not scared of anything

Savy: ya ya I know, ok I'll give the task which covers both Truth nd Dare

Raghu: nd Wats Dat?

Savy: m going to ask some questions to u regarding Antara. Lets see hw well u know her, nd if u give any answer Wrong den Antara will decide wat punishment should be given to u. Agree?

Raghu understands dat its tym to follow d plan

Raghu: ok Agreed

Savy: ok Den Raghu, my first Question: Who is Antara's Fav. Romantic Couple a) Sharukh-Kajol b) Raj kapoor Nargis c) Saif-Kareena or d) Abhi-Aish

Raghu: None of Dem because Antara don't believe in Filmy Romantic Couples she believes in reality So her Fav. Romantic Couple is Her Di nd Jiju. i.e Vindhya Di nd her Husband

Savy (to Antara): is he rite Antara?

Antara nods in yes

Savy: ok Raghu, nw next question. Which of dem Antara likes a Lot, Beaches or Mountains

Raghu: Beaches, because in its calmness Antara buries all her Sorrows nd Loneliness

Antara again nods in yes with a surprise dat Raghu understands her so much

Savy: ok Raghu nw next question, wen Antara is upset den wat r those things dat cheers up her mood

Raghu: Rains nd Kishore Kumar's Songs (he said while remembering d moments wen antara has a bad mood)

Savy (To herself): ye to sab gadbad kar raha hai. isi tarah karta raha to plan to gaya tel lene. (Den to Raghu): ok Raghu next question,Which Fast Food does Antara likes d most

Raghu (smiles): Paanipuri nd dat too of roadside stall not from any reputed Restaurent

Savy: ok! Nd which Season is fav of Antara?

Raghu: Rainy nd Winter nd to addition of it if she gets her fav. Butterscotch Ice cream in d coldest day of season

Savy: Ok nw My Last nd Final Question, I m sure dis will be gonna tough for u: we all know that Antara is Stubborn but sometimes she leaves her stubbornness also so who r those people who makes her leave her stubbornness

Raghu: there r 3 peoples nd those are: Her Vindhya Di, Her Vansh Bhai nd third is Antara Herself.

It was obvious from Antara's Expression dat Raghu's every answer was correct. Savy, slaps her forehead with her hand nd Gives an Angry look to Raghu who has messed up all her Plan. Antara gets surprised to see dat that Raghu notices every small things about her dis shows hw much he love her on the Other hand Raghu too is shocked to give right answers it was his nd Savy's Plan to give all d answers wrong den wat happens he don't know. All he knows dat everything was happened automatically. He was giving answers while Looking at Antara nd was not able to give wrong answers.

Shilpa: Guys! I am Hungry. Lets get some snacks

Savy: ya Sure Shilpa. Bro Pls get some snacks from Kitchen nd Remember game is not over yet. U nd me r still left

Arman: ya I know

Antara: Arman, I Too come wid u for ur help

Arman: Sure Antara, Shilpa u also want to cum

Shilpa: ya Sure

All three of dem headed inside d house so Savy got d chance to talk wid Raghu. She pulls him aside

Savy: Wat the Hell u think u have done? R u Mad? I told u na u don't have to give d right answers den y did u done dat? Itni mushkil se plan banaya tha but thanx to u everything has been messed up. Nw wat we'll do?

Raghu: Relax Savy, I havent done anything wrong

Savy: O really! How so?

Raghu: Savy, havent u seen d expressions on Antara's Face wen she was sharing her poem with us, the intensity of her love was clearly seen in her eyes. nd d Happiness which was dere on her face wen I have given right answers I cant forget dat. Savy, I know that u want me nd Antara to Re-unite nd I too want it but nt like dis. Antara has already suffered a lot due to dis plan but nw I dnt want her to suffer. So dis Plan is over here only. I want Antara to confess her love for me but not by giving her pain nd actually she has already told me about her feelings through that Poem. Nd as far as saying by herself is concerned I'll wait. I'll wait for whole of my life but from now on will not do anything which will hurt her.

By saying dis he goes from dere Leaving Savy alone.

Savy(To herself): O God! Both love each other so much den y these problems. (Den looking upwards) Antara k Babaji ab Aap hi kuch kar sakte ho. Pls inki Love story track pe le Aao Wo bhi inhi 2 dino mein.

Precap:

Antara's Confession

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Posted: 11 years ago
kk me frst..
lovely update...
loved d poem..beautiful..n
full of love n antaras emotions..
raghu gave all answes correct..
n yes waiting fr antara to confesss..
thanks fr updation...;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing AMFI,i really love u and the update u have given to us that too on our yeda raghu's b'day,i just loved it,,,,,,,muahhh
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update Amfi...loved it !! 😳
continue asap dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
Finally amazing update
Hayee antu maha jealous lol loving this side of her
I love this story
Savy perfect plan
Poem made me cry aww
Raghu ruined her plan
Omh what is anti going to do leave raghuuu nahiiiuiii
I can't wait for more
Pls cont asap

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