my first os: aur pyar ho hi gaya part2 update

okey now its part 2. im trying to make it more filmy . this is a basic plot now.

antara is still standing still. she is just feeling that everything has stopped. although there was so many people and so much noise in the basti. she feels a sheer silence within and deep emptiness, as raghu was not around. suddenly mami called: "antara wahan kyon khadi ho?? chalo abhi noor ko tayar karna hai, tumhe bhi tayar hona hai. kitni tayari baaki hai abhi"

Antara:" aayi maami"

she went to her house and made her self busy in the wedding so she can divert her attention from raghu.

@ railway station:

muchmuch: "bhai aap fikar mat karo. main hoon na. nikah main sab dekh loonga. aap aaji ko chhod aao."

raghu didnt speak anything as he was not feeling good. and suddenly a passing by coolie collide with him. he got so angry. raghu: dekh ke nahi chal sakta??? abhi tumhari aankho ke jagah pe button lagr hai. itna bada aadmi tere ko dikhai nahi deta"

coolie: maaf karna saab

aaji: "raghu itni si baat ke liye us bichare pe itna gussa kyon kar rahe ho. kab se dekh rahi hoon tumhare mood ka fuse uda hua hai. kya baat hai??"

raghu: kuchh nahi aaji. chalo train aa gayi.

muchmuch: achcha bhai main chalta hoon.

raghu: sum machmach. miss kaul ka khyal rakhana. nikah main uske saath rehna. Mr.india ban ke gayab mat ho jaana.

machmach: fikar not bhai. main hai naa. sab dekh lega. us yedi ki bhi chinta mat karotum. achcha aaji main chalta hoon.

machmach took blessings of aaji and gone.

raghu and aaji set in the train. during whole journey, raghu was remembering the time he had spent with antara. how beautiful she was looking in that blue dress she wearing in the nikah where they gate crashed.

raghu thinking: yedi abhi to nikah ke liye taiyaar ho rahi hogi. sunder dikh rahi hogi par main usko dekh nahi paoonga.

aaji: chintu tu kahan khoya hua hai? main kab se dekh rahi hoon ki tera man kahin aur hai. waise antara bahut achchi ladki hai na!!!

raghu: haan aaji woh to hai.

raghu then lost in his thoughts.

after 4 hours journey they reached to the village, bhaoo personally came to receive aaji and raghu as they were the special guest because of DM. they went to the Dm's village home where raghu told aaji : achacha aaji main chalta hoon"

aaji : haan jaa woh yedi teri rah dekh rahi hogi. tere bina woh akeli pad jayegi.use mere taraf se pyari si jhappi dena aur noor ko ye gift meri taraf se de dena.

aaji gave golden earings for noor.

aaji: ruk raghu ek aur chhez deni hai tujhko.

she opened her bag and take out 2 beautiful bangles and give it to raghu.

aaji:"raghu ye meri payari yedi antara ko dena. bolana ye aaji ka ashirwad hai...chintu ho sake to tu hi use pehna dena"

raghu shocked : main???

aaji: "haan main usko daya ki wajah se wahan nahi de saki. to tu mere taraf se use pehna dena"

raghu: abhi aaji tera gift gallary khatam ho gaya to main chaloo???

aaji: jaa chintu

raghu hugged aaji and took her blessings start walking

while his phone rang, in the expectation that it might be antara, a big smile appeared on his lips, but it was just for second. as soon as he saw DM s name flashing on mobile, somewhere inside he started worrying.

Raghu: ha mai

DM: raghu, tum gaon se wapis aane ke liye nikal gaye??

raghu: ha mai just station jaa raha hoon.

DM: suno raghunath tumhe virar utar jaana hai aur wahan hamari zameen pe koi reh raha hai to dekhna hai ki woh kaun hai aur use wahan se bahar nikal naa hai.

raghu annoyed but didnt show.: lekin mai

DM: fir se tumhe koi taklif hai raghunath??

raghu: nahi mai ho jayega.

raghu was disappointed. he could sense that mai didnt want him to attend the wedding. now he has to find a way so he could reach to the wedding on time.

so he thought of something and smiled. and he thought miss kaul main aa raha hoon.

@antara 's house:

everyone is busy with the preparations . antara is running here and there. muchmuch mami everyone is busy in preparations. suddenly antara thought of something. she took her phone and called raghu : hello hello raghu tumhari awaz nahi aa rahi hai?? tum kidhar pahoonche?? hello?

raghu: haan miss kaul ek locha ho gaya hai train late hai 2 ghante. main try karta hoonkisi bhi tarah pahoonchne ki.

antara: kya? late hai?? she shouted on phone.

during that call got cut and raghu's mobile battery drained. so he could not contact her.

he thought of something and started running out of station. he took a rickshaw and went to bhaoo's house which was near to station.

bhaoo: are raghubhai aap?? kya baat hai??

raghu: bhaoo mujhe aapki jeep chahiye abhi. mera mumbai pahunchana bahut zaroori hai. meri train bahut late hai aur doosri koi train bhi nahi hai.

bhaoo: haan haan raghu bhai sab aapka hi to hai. le jaiye.

raghu was so happy he took the keys and started the engine and accelerate the jeep as someone is chasing him.

meanwhile, a man standing outside of the bhaoo's house called someone and said: shetty bhai , raghu yahan se nikal chuka hai. woh 2 ghante main purani sadak wale raste pe hoga

shetty: bahut achche. aaj raghunath ka aakri din hoga is duniya main.

and he gave frightening loud laugh.

Raghu was so happy that he ll reach at wedding on time. suddenly he remembered that he has to finish dm's work also. he took his mobile but he remembered that there is no battery remaining. suddenly he saw that there was a car charger in the jeep. he was delighted like he has found some treasure. he thought: manana padega bhaoo, aapki jeep to ekdum mast hai. he keep his phone for charging. after a while he started a phone , he was about to call but he remembered that antra doesnt like talking on phone while driving. so he pulled the jeep aside and called pakya

raghu: dekh pakya tu 4 ya 5 bande ko lekar jaa aur virar main jo mai ka jagah woh khali karva de abhi ke abhi aur fir mere ko report kar.

pakya: thik hai bhai

raghu: chalo kisi bhi tarah mujhe mai ka kaam hi to khatam karna hai.abhi miss kaul ko call karta hoon.

he called antra. she took her call in a second like she was waiting only.

antara: raghu, kahan ho tum? kab pahoochoge? train late hai? kitni late hai? aaji kaisi hai? safar main unki tabiyaat to thik rahi naa??

raghu: abhi tere ko mera exam lene ka hai kya?? ek ke baad ek question pooche hi jaa rahi hai? thodi saans to lele miss kaul. aaji thik hai.acchi hai . unki chinta mat kar.

suddenly he thought of naughty something and said: sun miss kaul main aaj nahi aa paoonga. kya hai ki train late hai aur koi train bhi nahi hai. agli train kal shaam ki hai. to main tabhi aa paoonga.

antara: kya? matlab tum nikah main nahi pahoonch paoge kya?

raghu felt that she was crying. so he said: are miss kaul tu ro kyon rahi hai main to mazak kar raha tha. main nikal chuka hoon nikah tak pahunch jaoonga.

antara: mujhe aise mazak bilkul pasand nahi hai. rakho phone abhi mkujhe bahut kaam hai.

raghu: achcha abhi yedi kamwali bai ban gayi hai? and he laughed. she got si irritated ; tumne mujhe kaamwali bai bola. how dare u. jao main tumse baat nahi karti.bye

and she cut the call. raghu thinking jab tak ladegi nahi sar patkegi nahi uska din achcha nahi jaata. but he smiled that atleast he could talk to her.

again she started a jeep in full speed towards mumbai.

@ antara's house:

chalo chalo sub ready ho jao nikah main abhi sirf 2 ghante hi baaki hai. mami was shouting.

antara was helping noor for dressing up. and then she dressed up with white lehnga choli. noor looked at antara and said bahut hi sundar lag rahi ho. antara lost on her thoughts and he was remembering what happened before sometime as raghu told her that his train is 2 hours late and he could not reach on time, her heart was like almost broken. she was thinking main raghu ko itna kyon miss kar rahi hoon? yahan sab to hai noor aapa mamma isu mami muchmuch... fir bhi uske bina sab khali khali kyon lag raha hai?

suddenly noor appa kahan kho gayi hai antara tu?? antra came in her senses and she unknowingly said: pata nahi use achchi lagungi ki nahi??

noor: kise?? antra kiski baat kar rahi hai tu???

antra suddenly thinking: ye main kya bol gayi? kuchh nahi aapa. main bol rahi thi ki aaj aap itni hoor pari lag rahi hai ki arshad miyaa to aapko dekh ke behosh hi ho jayenge. hay aallahh.

noor blushed: chup besharam .

antra: chalo chalo aapa akhri touch up kar lete hai.

Wow that was nice aur us Shetty ki to main 😡 I can't wait for the confession!

lovely update

after today's episode and precap i m very upset with DM and rasika , so in next part i ll make them upset. and give our rantara a super duper romantic scene as well as some privacy from this dm and rasika.

hope i can fulfill ur expectations.

Part # 3

@ naik sadan

DM's phone rang. she took it. kahiye sawant bhaoo. kaisa hai? bara to hai? is saal aapki sarkar aaygi to aap cm ban jaoge.

Sawant bhaoo is a well known politician of opposition and has connection with DM for his illigal work.

Sawant: Mayi meri chinta mat karo. tumhe ek bahut zaroori baat batana hai. police ne tumhara encounter kar ne ke hit list main naam daal diya hai!! aur hit list main pahela naam tumhara hai. jitni jaldi ho sake tum underground ho jaoo. ho sake to 15 din ke liye. apne logo se ghar walo se contact bandh kar do. aur haa under ground jaane ke liye koi bhi baharwala ko mat batana ya le jaana. koi bhi police ka khabri ho sakta hai. bus itna hi kahana tha. mere agle phone ka wait karna. jai hind.

DM became standstill. first time she was so frightned. her heart was beating so fast. she knew that the new police commissioner has set up the new encounter team which is very dangerous and can kill 100 dayamais. so she was totally wet with perspiration. her lips were trumbling. just then manohar came

manohar: kya hua vayani? kiska phone tha? aap itni ghabrai hooi kyon ho??

DM: manohar rasika ko bulao .

manohar: rasika rasika kidhar ho? mai bula rahi hai?

rasika: aayi !! kya baat ho gayi . itna shouting kyon kar rahe ho more or less

DM: rasika aur manohar tum dono abhi tumhara saman bandho. hume naik sadan chhodke abhi isi waqt jaana padega. shayad 15 din ke liye.underground hona hai, kisi ko ye baat batani bhi nahi hai..yahan se koi naukar saath nahi le jaana hai. wahan ghar ke saare kaam aur mera khayal tum dono rakhoge.

rasika and manohae were shocked to hear that. rasika started feeling dizzy that she has to do all household work like jhaddoo katka bartan herself. manohar was also disturbed.

suddenly rasika: mayi lekin raghu to abhi tak pahooncha nahi. use bhi le jaana padega na.

mayi: tumse bola jaye utna karo rasika beech main zuban mat chalao. hum raghunath ka intezar nahi kar sakte. main baad main uso msg bhijwa doongi. waise bhi tum dono use phone pe baat karne ki koshoish bhi nahi karoge. tum dono apna apna phone mujhe dedo. hamare saath sirf hamara wafaadar bodyguard mohan jayega aur koi nahi.

mayi prepared everything in 10 minutes and they left the house. before going mai explained everything to muchmuch

DM; kisi ko kano kan khabar nahi honi chahiye ke hum kahan hai? raghunath ko bolna ghar ka khayal rakhe. aur aaji ko kal wapis bulva lena. raghunath ko bolna muje mere koi bhi number pe call na kere. main samne se call karoongi. arshad ko bol dena ki mai nikah pe nahi aa payegi.

muchmuch: jee mai.

he took mai's blessing and mai rasika manohar went swiftly from there.

Meanwhile in the wedding mandap:

everyone is running here and there. antara was looking at the door now and then. muchmuch understood that she is waiting for raghu. so he came to antara:

muchmuch: yedi itni gardan ghooma ghooma ke dawaje pe dekhegi to gardan main moch aa jayegi. kya hai bhai ne bola hai na ki woh aa jayega to woh aayega. abhi uska call aaya tha woh 1 ghanta main pahunch jayega aur nikah bhi 1 hi ghante main chalu hone wala hai to fikar not. tu shanti rakh.

ayr idhar ka kaam dekh ne ke liye main hoona

antara: thik hai muchmuch.

by saying this she turned and she saw raghu was standing by the pillar where the curtains where flying in the air slowely. her whole face was lightened up. she saw that raghu is smiling at him.(that killer smile). she rush towards him. but as soon as reaches there raghu vanished in the air. and she was taken a back. she is thinking Kya main sapna dekh rahi thi?? ye ho kya gaya hai mujhe? pehle maine kabhi kisi ke liye aisa feel nahi kiya hai? aur pata nahi mujhe thoda dar bhi lag raha hai? raghu thik se pahunch to jayega na ?

again she turned and she saw that raghu is standing near the sofa and having sharbat. but this time his face was in the opposite direction. antara runs there and put her hand on his shoulders the man turned but he was not raghu. he was someone else that antara mistaken for raghu. in the sheer embrasement she says sorry and run from there. he bhagwaan ye main kya pagalo jaisi harkat kar rahi hoon. raghu sahi bolta hai yedi hoon main, shayad raghu ke liye. and she smiled... she tap her head. suddenly someone put his hand on antara's shoulder and she said to tum aa hi gaye raghu??

mamaji: raghu? antara beta tu thik to hai. main hoon. sab taiyaari thik to chal rahi hai naaa...

antara: ha mamji,sab thik hai. achcha hua aap surat se aa gaye. aap please noor apa ko le aaiye. nikah main bas ab adha ghanta hi baaki hai.

all the guest almost arrived. muchmuch told antara about mai. she understood. but she was only concerned about raghu she was looking at watch and looking at the gate constantly.

suddenly muchmuch took the mike and announces : bhailog aur aapki baheno , nikah main abhoi thoda time hai tab tak meri yedi ... mera matlab hai meri bahen antara apni awaz main ek achcha sa gana pesh karegi...

antara was looking @ muchmuch yeh kya hai...??

muchmuch knows that singing is antara's life and if she sings she ll be relaxed so he made the plan.

are sharmao mat chalo ye mike pakdo aur gao

antara came on stage. everyone was looking at her. she looked at the door once again and closed her eyes and sees raghu and held the mike...and started

yaraaa...ooo..yaraaa

manzile roosava hai

khoya hai rasta

aaye le jaaye

itni si hai iltaja

ye meri zamanat hai

tu meri amanat hai

mujhko irade de

kasme de vade de

meri duao ke isharo ko sahare de

dil ko thikane de

naye bahane de

khwabo ki barisho ko mausma ke payamne de

apne karam ki kar aadaye

karde idhar bhi tu nigahe

sun raha hai na tu

ro rahi hoon main

sun raha hai na tu

kyon ro rahi hoon main

sun raha hai na tu

ro rahi hoon main

sun raha hai na tu

kyon ro rahi hoon main

and a drope of tear fell from her beautiful eyes. everyone was lost in her sweet voice

waqt bhi thehara hai

kaise kyon ye hua

kash tu aise aaye

jaise koi dua

tu rooh ki rahat hai

tu meri ibadat hai

apne karam ki kar aadaye

kar de idhar bhi tu nigahe

sun raha hai na tu

ro rahi hoon main

sun raha hai na tu

kyon ro rahi hoon main

sun raha hai na tu

ro rahi hoon main

sun raha hai na tu

kyon ro rahi hoon main

everyone clapped for her and gave her standing ovation. she again looked at the gate and looked down in despair and got down from the stage.

raghu was feeling cool breez on his face like antara is singing somewhere. he felt that antara is sitting next to him in jeep with seat belt. and suddenly disapperared. he smiled and thought: saala miss kaul ki vajah se apun yeda ho gaya. bheja kharab ho gaya hai mere ko...kabhi dikhti hai kabhi mr.india ki tarah gayab ho jaati hai. bus miss kaul abhi aur adha ghanta aur main tumhare paas hunga.

he was driving throught he purani sadak as its in the ghat and lonely path. hardly any vehicle go from there as it was scary but because it was short cut raghu took. it was almost dark and he was driving the jeep. suddenly he saw that there are drums on the road and the road was blocked. he brake immediately with a loud noise. he noticed that there was no one around but the whole road was blocked with the drums. he felt something fishy but as he was in hurry, he jumped out of the jeep and walk towards the drum to keep them aside so he can make a way from there. suddenly flash lights turned on him. and raghu could not see anything in bright light so he put his hand on his face and tried to see who are they. he saw that shetty and his men were all around him. everyone has sticks hockey and chain in their hands.

shetty laugh a loud: raghunath bahut dhoondha tere ko. ek aadmi jo tere pichhe laga rakha tha. aaj tu haath aaya hai. aaj teri arthi uthegi idhar se. aur fir teri mayi ki. fir aakha mumbai pe apoon ka raaj hoga.apoon ka samjha kya tu.

raghu got so engry that he gave a deadly look @ shetty as he was so angry that he took his mai's name.

raghu: shetty tere jaise log meri arthi kya uthayenge. uthayenge to ye tere paltu kutte (sorry for bad language but script ki demand hai:) aur woh bhi teri arthi. abhi decision tera hi ki tujhe teri arthi aaj abhi uthwani hai ki thode din baad!! jaane de mujhe !!!!

shetty: darr gaya raghu bhhhaiii!!! itne aadmi dekh ke

raghu understood that he has to fight. suddenly a man came from behind and attacked on him with the stick. raghu gave him a punch and he flew in the air for next 30 minutes raghu fought like a real hero. he was the one guy and 10 was his opposite. he broke some one's arm and someones' ribbs and legs. almost 6 people were lying on the floor and could not get up. while others were still trying to conquer raaghu. but raghu was well trained and he very well know how to handle this goons. shetty was shouting: kya kar rahe ho tum log. mar dalo usko maro...

but his men were tired as raghu beat them up brutally, suddenly one man hit raghu with the stick on his shoulder. the stick was broken into 2 but raghu was stll standing that man was so frightned that he ran away from there. now shetty came face to face with raghu as he was the only left he punched raghu haed raghu fell down. blod was flowing from his lips but he wipe it out and stood up. he puched shetty in his stomoch. suddenly other man came from behind and hit raghu on his forehead with hockey , raghu's forehead started bleeding but still raghu was so strong like he was made of stone. he punched that man and he was flat on the floor. then he turned to shetty and punched him he fell on the floor.

raghu was feeling little dizzy as he was also wounded badly. suddenly someone else jeep coming from behind and stopped there. it was pakia and munna who took a same route from virar to return after completing dm's work that has been given to raghu.

munna and pakia cane running towards raghu and they saw raghu bleeding and men were on the floor. pakia: bhai aap thik to hai naa. main mai ko phone karta hoon.

raghu: rehne de pakia koi zaroorat nahi hai mai ko pareshan karneki. main thik hoon. chal tu meri jeep chala le aur mujhe pehle basti pahooncha de.

pakia: lekin bhai aap ko to bahut chot aayi hai...main pahele aapko hospital le chalta hoon.

raghu: bolana thik hoon main. abhi tere ko bola na basti le chal woh miss kaul... kuch nahi tu chal beth jeep main aur bhaga aur mere ko basti pahooncha de. then he asked /; mai wala kaam ho gaya.

pakia: ha ho gaya raghubhai . main aur munna udha ij se to aa rahe the.

raghu: chal achcha hai.

they all set in the jeep and went toward the basti

@ wedding

kazi was calling bride and groom for nikah as the time was running. so he says " janab jaldi kijiye. nikah ka waqt ho gaya hai dula dulhan ko boola lijiye.

antara called muchmuch: muchmuch raghu kahan hai? abhi tak kyon nahi pahooncha????

muchmuch: main kab se call kar raha hoon bhai call nahi le rahe.

antara: woh thik to hoga na..

again kazi called dulha dulhan ko jaldi bulaiyee..

antara ran to noor appa and took her to the parada. she made her seat on the other side of parda. but he was looking for muchmuch..

dulhe ko bulaiyeee...

arshadbhai came and set on the other side of the parda. kazi started the ceremony. antara was becoming hyper as raghu is not reached yet. muchmuch was also worrying that why bhai is not picking up the call...

nikah ceremoney was over. everyone says mubarak ho mubarak ho and now noor and arshad was happily married but still there is no raghu. antara was about to cry and was very angry. everyone was leaving now as dawat was about to finish.

noor and arshad: antara raghu nahi aa paya na!! tu chinta mat kar kahin fas gaya hoga!!!

antara angrily: nahi aapa uso apne wade ki koi kadra hi nahi hai. he is not concerned. main waise bhi usse koi baat nahi karne wali. usko aana ho aaye na aana ho to nahi aaye.

it was her bidai time still there was no sign of raghu...

in the jeep:

raghu: pakia ye kya bail gaadi ki tarah chala raha hai. jali udana. mere ko pahunchana bahot zaroori hai. ye miss kaul bhi call nahi le rahi, apna muh gunbbare ki mafik foola ke baithi hogi.

pakiya: ha bhai ha chala raha hoon.

but they stuck in the very bad traffic jam. arre yaar abhi isko abhi hi jaam hona tha

it took 20 min still they are on same place.

raghu: pakia maain yaha se chal ke taxi le leta hoon tu baad main pahoonch

pakia: bhai aap pagal ho gaye ho. apko kitni chot lagi hai...aap thik se chal bhi nahi pa rahe ho.. khoon beh raha hai... ruko abhi traffic clear ho jayega..

raghu: nahi mein ja raha hoon ..

he started walking but he was in so much pain.. but there is no pain more imporatant than antara...so he keep walking ...

@ wedding

the wedding was over . noor just left with arshadbhai after biddai. everyone was crying as noor left. suddenly mami says: chalo ab sab ghar. didi aapko bhi aaram ki zaroorat hai. she was worried about mental health of antra's mother. chalo ishu sab log ghar..

antra told her that he has to some pack up here so she will be late u go home and sleep. it was 11 30 @ night. as she finished instructing helpers and tell them to go and start walking suddenly she over heard the muchmuch talking on the phone: kya?? shetty ke aadmione?? kahan?? raghu bhai thik to hai naa? kahan hai woh??? tere ko akkal nahi use is halat main akela chhod diya tune...

antara was scared to hell. she understood that he was talking about raghu...

she came to muchmuch: kya hua raghu ko? kiska phone tha???

muchmuch didnt want to tell this to antara as she might get scared.

muchmuch: kuchh nahi yedi tu fikar mat kar bhai ko kuchh nahi hua..

antara: call him . main kaheti hoon use phone laga abhi . she took a mobile from muchmuch and start dialing number but he was not picking up.

by the time muchmuch went outside to take a jeep to find raghu...

suddenly somone took the call hello helo raghu

nahi main pakia bol raha hoon woh bhai hadbadi main phone idhar ij bhool gaya. bole tu uska halat bahut kharab tha. shetty ke admio ne bahut mara usko. khoon bhi bahut beh raha tha. par pata nahi usko basti pahunch ne ki kya ghai thi ki do min trafic khulne ka wait bhi nahi kiya aur chala gaya..

after hearing this antara set on floor with shcok. she could not cry. she was numb. she was broken pakia's sentense echoed in her ears that pata nahi kya jaldi thi usko basti pahunchaneki...

muchmuch went outside and as he was about to start a jeep sudddenly a taxi came in the basti and just stood behind his jeep. muchmuch turned his face to tell taxiwala to be side so he can reverse his jeep, but he saw raghu coming out of taxi. so he also jumped out of the jeep and run towards him. he huged raghu: bhai kya hua? kaisa hai tu? ye teri halat shetty ke aadmio ne ki na?? sala chhodega nahi apun usko? isbaar mar hi dalega?? kitna khoon beh raha hai??

raghu: bas kar muchmuch main thik hoon. abhi bol nikah khatam ho gaya ??? sab thik thak to raha.?? yedi to thik hai naa??

muchmuch: ha bhai woh yedi ne meri aadhi adhuri baat suni. tumahari bahut fikar kar rahi thi. bahut ro rahi thi. maine zyada nahi bataya. woh abhi mandap main hi hai. tu jaa mil le. main abhi doctor ko bula ke lata hoon. tu jaa.

raghu start walking towards the mandap. he saw that mandap was all empty and most of the lights were almost off. there was little light inside. as he entered he saw antara was sitting on floor as her face was opposite side she could not see raghu coming. she was still in a state of shock.

raghu says: miss kaul. she hears two words and she felt like jaan coming in the dead body. she took a deep breath and stand up and turn. she saw him he was bleeding from the forehead and lips. he was not walking properly. antara started crying and her crying become louder and louder. she took two three steps slowely and then like she could not control and run towards him. and she hugged him so passionately like she will never allow him to go anywhere. she was still crying. antara: kahan chale gaye the tum?? tumhe pata hai main kitni ghabra gayi thi.. raghu was shocked with her sudden hug. but after so may years he is feeling peaceful and so he hugged her back. raghu; sorry miss kaul main jaldi aa jata par kya karoon woh shetty ... before he complete his sentanse antara broke the hug and took raghu's face in her hands start kissing him like insane. kabhi mujhe chhod kar mat jaana. pahele papa chale gaye jine main bahut pyar karti thi. ab main tumhe khona nahi chahti kyun ki main kyunki main tumse bahut pyar karti hoon and by saying that she give a small kiss on his lips. raghu was shocked on hearing this but he took antara in her arms and hug her passionately again. main tujhe kabhi chhod kar naahi jaoonga. bhagwan kahega to bhi nahi aue mai kahegi to bhi nahi. they both hugged each other for long time. slowely they both came into their senses and now they realize that both have confessed their feelings and now they are in a relationship. antara was blushing red and raghu was smiling shyly they both were looking in the opposite direction to hide their feelings.

suddenly muchmuch enters: bhai doctor to nahi mila. sala kal uski dispensary tod ke uske haath main de doonga. bhai ko zaroorat hai thabhi nahi hai. he saw that raghu is smiling. so he got confused: bhai lagta hai aapke sar pe bahut chot lagi hai!!! aur aap ki satak gayi hai!! tabhi itni chot aayi hai aur aap has rahe ho!! ya fir aap is yedi ke saath rehke yede ho gaye ho.

raghu: sahi bola tune muchmuch.

muchmuch ignored his answer and siad:doctor to nahi mila par yeh first aid box laya hoon. aap ghar chalo main patti kar deta hoon.

raghu: sala tu doctor hai?? tere ko patti karna aata hai??? rehne de tu apni gaadi ki tarah meri bhi serviceing kar dega. yeh doctor saab ki beti hai naa.. kar degi... tu jaa aur mere liye khana leke aa bahut bhukh lagi hai..

muchmuch; ha bhai abhi bandobast karta hoon. aap ke saath meri ye yedi bahena ko bhi khila dena. tum gaye ho tab se usne bhi kuchh nahi khaya hai.. aur waise bhi tu ghar jaa tere ko hi ghar sambhalna hai mai ko 15 din bahar jaana pada hai rasika aur manohar ke saath.. bole to under ground . bola hai ki phone mat karna woh samne se call karegi. to ghar pe koi nahi hai.

raghu: kya?? mai ne mujhe nahi call kiya??? bhagwan kare sab thik ho. lekin main call bhi nahi kar sakta. unhone bola hai ko woh khud karegi.. thik hai tu jaa...

amd muchmuch went to take food. raghu looked at antara angrily: tune khana kyon nahi khaya??? abhi waise bhi girti padti rehti hai. khayegi nahi to chakkar kha ke gir jayegi to kaun sambhalega??

antra looked at him: tum ho naaa...

both share a eye lock. and raghu asks antara: to ghar chale.

antara: chalo

both started walking towards the naik sadan which was total empty. antara was hesitating as she has to meet raghu alone like this. but she has to go with him as he was badly injured and she has to do first aid...

the naik sadan was empty as both were walking inside antra shivers lil bit and raghu feels lil okward as he has never been in love before.

antara and raghu went to the room. he turned on the light and antara told him to turn so she could see the wound on his head. she went near to raghu and as raghu was taller she try to stand on her toes. and was looking at the wound while she put her hand on his head to take his hair aside. raghu felt that their lips were like inches apart. and he was loosing his control as antara was looking beautiful in her choli ghaghara. suddenly raghu came near and start kissing on her lips antara first shivered but she started enjoying it. as she was on her toes, she was about to go off balance and raghu supported her by grabbing her slim waist. and antara felt butterfly flying in her stomuch. raghu and antara were lost in each other kissing which become passionate after. after sometimes they broke to breath. suddenly then antara felt something in her fingers of the hand that she put her on raghu's forehead. it was blood. she got scared.

antara: raghu pahele tum betho aur apna first aid karwa lo. tumhare sar sr khoon beh raha hai...

raghu told him to wait he took off his shirt and ganji and went into the balconey, and starts the shower. antara was looking at him awww. how good looking and hot he is..he washed his woundes in running water and then came back in the room. antara was still standing there...he took towel and wipe his head. and sat on the bed.

raghu: abhi patti karna hai ki nahi doctor ki beti ji!!

antra: haan aati hoon.

she took a first aid box and went near raghu. she started applying creme on his woundes and strats dressing. suddenly raghus eyes stuck ont he neval of antara as it was visible to him. he was looking here andthere but it was become almost impossible for him to control.

to be continued...

now i have only one scene left which i want to make hotter as well as romantic also. so have to think about it... till then enjoy this part and tell me how was it...

Oh that was soo romantic and cute especially that confession! 😳

Ps. next update bhi aisa hi Extra Long banana! 😊

Ohohhhoo...maar dalne ka irada hai kya..??
Super romantic lookin forwrd 4 ur nxt prt plz update soon...asap...plzz

it was awesome ..beautifully written ...loved evry bit of it ...waiting for the 3rd part passionately 😳 mindblowing os superb duper hit..kaleje pe thandak pad gaya ...

Pert 3 was the best...👍🏼 great work...

Oo maar dalo yaar saree eseese scene likh kee yeh cb to kuch esa dekgte nai tum.