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suji

@suji01

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

That was a nice way to end😊

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Geeta singh

@sweetdesire

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Hey dear

Love the last part

Perfect ending

Finally Rantara Confessed

Do write more stories

Take care

Geet

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larina

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

"Toh main zindagi bhar nahi bolungi"

Aha! I see what she did there! 😉

Yeh Antara bhi smart nikli! Raghu se AUR kisses lene se nahi hat-ti 😆

That was a nice end! 😃

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@sonu-monu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

i can't take this any-more LOL

awesome update :)

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pampz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

i loved it ...i loved it ...i loved it ...beautifully written ... plzzz do write moreee...yeh dill mange more from uuu dear ...so don stop writing dear ...love u😃

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Onlyrantra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

O woww...superb..love it..and perfect ending...

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Haya Khan

@hayakhan5

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Nyc update but why final!!! Plx write more!!

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mjhtgeetfan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: hayakhan5
Nyc update but why final!!! Plx write more!!

Lol itni hi story thi :)

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suhaiba

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Posted: 11 years ago

#59

awww...dat was sooo cute...raghu tho raghu,antara bhi kuch kam nahi...lol...enjoyed readng it...do write more...u can write on raghu's jealousy also...;-)