||When I saw her|| - RaNtara Two-Shot!

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Hey Rantarians!
I was getting bored when suddenly this idea popped in my head.. I know I stopped at the main part but mere bheje mein raita phel gaya! Thinking about the ending. I will finish it tomorrow..
Till then please read it and leave your comments and like this post.


||When I saw her||


Raghunath Naik - The famous and one of the most successful industrialist in Mumbai. At a very young age he achieved a lot but he is a very down to earth person. Normally when people gain a lot of success at a young age they become very arrogant and thinks that everything can be bought by money. But, he is just the opposite. He is very kind and a loving person and that's what makes him different from all the others.

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It was yet another busy day for Raghu. After having 4 back to bck meetings he was tired. He felt like once his back touches the bed he'll fall asleep. He just wanted to reach home but it seemed liked he would never reach home. On his way home, his car broke down in a stranded area which had no network coverage. "Damn!" He cursed his luck under his breath. "Now what?!" He thought. "Well, probably I should just walk to home. Yeah! After all I have no other option." He said to himself. But! He was too tired to walk; yet he kinda dragged himself. While walking the only thing he prayed to God that, "Ab kuch aisa vaisa maat karna bhagwaan varna.." Before he could say anything it started raining.

That just pissed him off even more. Now, he was fully drenched. "I hate this day!" He cursed his luck again and looked here and there for shelter. After moving a bit front and found a small house. He went and just dropped himself on the nearby chair. He was exhausted. First meeting, then his car broke down, then the walking and now the rain. This all made him so angry that he felt like ripping his head off.

"Uff! So many problems in one day! Please God! Now do something good." He said while looking at the sky.


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Part - 2 : Coming soon!


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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice pls make it longer next time
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice...itz interesting dr..waiting 4 next update
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Originally posted by: honeybees22

nice pls make it longer next time


i will for sure!
actually my brain stopped working when i reached that part so i had to stop there.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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kya guys?
so less comments?
itna bora hai kya?
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Nice! Update soon! 😊
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Nyc please update soon and Pm me!!!
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nice & interesting looking forward to next update ..
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really really amazing start can't wait for more :)

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