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zzinia2411

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

OHMYYY!!! CUTIE, THIS WAS AWESOME! IT REMINDED ME OF GEET! I REALLY REALLY WISH HE GETS MORE POSSESSIVE N JELOUS N ACTUALLY ADMITS TO HER THAT SHE LOOKS LIKE AN ANGEL! ☺️ LOL BUT PLEASE PLEASE I REALLY DONT WANT THAT SANA TO HURT NEITHER RAGHU NOR MY CUTIEEE ANTARA! PLEASE I REALLY WANT MY CUTIE ANTARA WOULD TAKE CONTROL OF HER MARRIED LIFE N DO SOMETHING LIKE TEACH A LESSON TO THAT STUPID SANA! HONESTLY I THINK EVERYONE WOULD LOVE THAT IN UR SUPERB STORY! 😃 DO UPDATE ASAP! WILL BE WAITING!

Edited by zzinia2411 - 12 years ago

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alishamerchant_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

that was really good..do update soon!

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Taahir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

Awesome , waiting for more

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Amira.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#104

I'm sorry guys I'm very busy with studies, Please pray for me and my exams. Thats why I will uptade rarely. Thanks for giving a good response. Your comment means a lot to me. Thanks a lot for giving such beautifull compliments <33. I will pm later. And please don't get worried if you received a pm from -Shareen-. She is my best friend so she helped me. You can pm her back for your uptades and you can also pm me for your uptades, We both would love to visit your too. The 1st banner was bit boring so made a new one, please tell me how is it? texture credit goes to Naureen Jaani <3 & RaCreation. Here it's a little chapter. I hope you will enjoy.

Chapter 4 " I want a Baby! "

It was night. Raghu was so tired after such a huge and successfull party so he was laying on the bed and was relaxing. His wife was admired from everyone, from all his relatives, workers, friends and colleagues in the party. Since he became a famous businessman, his parties are one of the most enjoyed in this city. He was so happy because everything was done as he planned but still he was little disturbed because of the cheap man who was flirting with his wife, He hated when someone tried to say or do anything bad to his family member, He never accepted Antara as his family member or his wife but she was known as Antara Naik so he wanted her to have all respect from people that his wife and a Naik family member should have.

Antara came out from the bathroom, She was wearing a white long night robe but sleevless. She was looking so innocent like and angel in white color. She was looking very simple yet beautifull. Raghu was ignoring her like always by reading sms on his mobile.

" You are looking very tired! Today you can sleep on the bed, I will sleep on the sofa! " Antara said carring for her husband.
" Antara you don't need to tell me what I have to do or not, Mind your own business! Let me handle mine! " He replied with attitude. Antara was hurted but still pretending as she was ok and ignoring his rudeness.

All of sudden Ajji knocked at door. Antara opened her the door. Antara and Raghu were wondering why she is her in the night, they were worried.

" Ajji! Aap thik ho na? " Raghu asked, sitting on the bed.
" Haan! I'm fine. "
" Ajji! Please have a seat! " Antara said. Ajji sat on the sofa.
" If you needed something, why you don't call Antara? Yahan ane ki taklif kyon ki? " Raghu said.
" Oh ho! Raghu! Please let me talk! " Ajji said.
" Ok Ajji! " Both were quiet and listening to her.
" Well there is RASM which is still uncomplete. "
" Which rasm Ajji? " Antara asked curiously.
" You have a golden opportunity to ask whatever you want from Raghu, and he will have to give you. "
" Ajji but I have given everything to her, house, cars, jewerly, sarees, dresses, everything! " Raghu said.
" Lekin phir bhi, may be there is something that she doesn't have, or may be she have but she would love to have it as a gift from her husband "
" Ajji but Raghu and you all have given me everything "
" I don't want to argue! You are going to tell him what do you want and he will give you " Ajji said as she was ordering.
" Raghu Do ge na use woh jo bhi mange gi? (Will you give it to her what she will ask to you?) " Ajji asked.
" Yes Ajji! " He doesn't wanted to hurt her so he agreed.
" Antara Lo gi na jo bhi Raghu gift de ga? (Will you accept the gift that he will give you?) " She asked. Antara nodded her head into yes.
" You can take your time beta! But mangna zaroor " Ajji said. Antara smiled to her. Ajji kissed on Antara's forhead and went. Antara closed the door.

" What do you want? " It was the great opportunity for her to ask what she wanted, she always wanted his love, she wanted him to care for her but she didn't know how to ask this. Raghu was waiting for an answer, she was in a deep thought.

Raghu received a message, it was Sana's message. He read " Tommorow I have an appointment with doctor, for my pregnancy. " He replied her " Ok! Keep informing me. "

Antara was still standing, she said " I want a baby " He was shocked to hear that. He stood up furiously, and stepped toward her. Antara was so scared, she knew very well that now she will have to face his outburst. She was moving back slowly as he was coming close to her. At the end, she was pasted to the wall, Raghu moved toward her. He was so closed to her and was pressing her body parts. Her bosoms were touching his strong chest. Antara was very nervous, She loved him but right now she wanted to run away from him, she was so scared of him and of his anger. He blocked her in the middle by putting his hands on the wall.

For the first time he was behaving like that to her, Antara was expecting a drama, but he was still silent. Her heartbeart was so fast. She was speachless. He slowly kissed on her neck and all of sudden his calm kiss changed into a passionate kiss. His one hand was placed behind her head and the other one was placed at her waist. Antara closed her eyes and let him do whatever he wanted. She was feeling his fragnance and all his touches. She has never felt like this before. It was the most beautifull moment for her. She just wanted to stay in this position, in his arms, close to him, for her whole life.

Few minute later, he moved back and said " You really think that you and me can be one? I can do sex with you? You really think? Then you are so wrong! " He said with attitude. She was so hurted and brokenhearted. How he can be so rude to her? How? He could refused politely, why he does this? Why he played with her feelings? Why he has given her a hope?

She has tears in her eyes. " Today my mood was very good but you have spoilt everything! Miss Antara Thank you very much! " He went out from the house without disturbing anyone. She sat on the floor thinking about her destiny, her fate. " May be I'm not made for love, I deserv only hateness! And I will have to compromise with my destiny "

She saw her self in the mirror and fond a love bite on her neck, given from Raghu when he kissed her passionately.

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Here the uptade end. Please give your valuable comments. I'm waiting early to read your opinions. You will be pmed from me or from -Shareen-

Thank you -Shareen- for helping me a lot. Guys she is the girl who's my buddy and she's helping me for pms.

Edited by ..Amira.. - 12 years ago

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Princy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#105

It was amazing...par itni short update..Yaar nxt update long wali kardena..long bole tho ek dum lambhi...will be waitin 4 ur nxt update

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Kaay

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Posted: 12 years ago

#106

short and sweet update 😊

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zzinia2411

@zzinia2411

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Posted: 12 years ago

#107

fabulous Cutie! but honestly i cant take this raghu anymore!😡😲 antara should stand up for rights as she deserves happiness! so i feel she should just leave him n make him realize how much he misses her n needs her!😭 please please dont torture us anymore! update asap! will be waiting

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alishamerchant_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#108

That's really upsetting i think there should be a twist now!! i feel bad for Antara...anyways that was a nice update! 😊

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sonal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#109

Nice update dear but bohot short tha thoda long update kar dena yaar next time plz

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suhaiba

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Posted: 12 years ago

#110

i thnk der shud b a attitude change in antara...she shud avoid him..akdu raghu ko sabak sikhana padega...nice update by d way...bt nxt tym make it long k...:-)

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