My first fanfic......

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ARMAAN & RIDDHIMA

Hi everyone....this is my first fanfic......i know it is not good as all of yours......but i have tried my best.....if there r any mistakes then do tell me.....here it goes :

PART-1

A girl was chatting with someone. Her name is Riddhima but she has given her name as 'angel'.
Angel : Do u believe in destiny ?
(She was chatting with a guy whose name was armaan but he has given his name as 'prem'.)
Prem : Yes. Do u too believe in destiny ?
A : Yes. Do u have a girlfriend ?
P : No. Waise mein kayi ladkiyon ke saath date kar chuka hoon lekin ab tak koi mili nahi hai.Hey do U have a BF ?
A : No not yet.
P : Where do u live ?
A : Mumbai n u ?
P : Wow what a coincidence i am also living in mumbai only.
A : Toh shayad hum kayi baar ek dusre se mile bhi honge.
P : Haan shayad hum ek dusre ko jante bhi ho lekin pehchan na paye ho.
A : Yes. What do u wanna be ?
P : I wanna be a doctor. And u ?
A : What coincidence i too wanna be a doctor. By the way in which medical college r u studying ?
P : I am studying in one of the top colleges of mumbai, A.R. College Of Medical Science.
A : Wow ! Me 2. Bye i've gotta go my di is coming in the room. C u tommorow.
P : Hey wait i wanna talk 2 u 4 some more time.
(But angel had quited.)

Now it's like this that Riddhima, Sapna,Muskan n anjali r living in a hostel n r roommates n very good friends of eachother. Anjali n Muskan are roommates & Riddhima n Sapna are roommates.

Then they all went outside for dinner. And after having the dinner they came back to hostel as the gates of the hostel closes at 10 o'clock, they came at 9:30 back.
(After entering their respective rooms and all of them having fresh n up, then all of them went to sleep. But Riddhima was not able to sleep cause she was continously thinking about the guy she had chatted with.
Meanwhile here in Armaan's room, cause he was also not able to sleep n was thinking about 'angel' only.

So they both opened their respective laptops n started chatting.
A : Can't sleep right ?
P : Ya n u too right ?
A : Yes. Do u know where am i chatting with u right now ?
P : Obviously sitting on your bed or on the table.
A : No. You will not believe me but right now i am under my bed chatting with u.
P : What r u saying ?
A : Yes i am.
P : Okay wait a sec. (And then he also goes under his bed n says ) Okay so now i am also accompning you. It's fun chatting with someone while laying under bed. But will u tell me that y r u lying under your bed ?
A : Woh humari hostel ke principal har roz check karne aate hai ki hum so rahe hai ya nahi.
P : Haan par tumhare bed par kaun so raha hai ?
A : Woh maine kuch pillows pe blanket rakh diya hai taki aaisa lage ki mein so rahi hoon. Samjhe ya nahi ?
P : Yes. Very intelligent of miss angel.
A : Oh thank you thank you.
(In the meantime someone called armaan so he has to go.)
Angel after sometime asked : Hey r u there yet ?
But, getting no reply, she felt sleepy and she slept under the bed only.

After sometime armaan came and went under his bed again n checked whether angel is still there or not so he asked : r u there ?
But he did not get any reply so he also slept under his bed only.

NEXT MORNING

Sapna, searching in the whole of the room n finding riddhima no where checked under the bed.
S : Oh ! hello madam utho subah ho gayi hai kya poori raat uss secret admirer ne sone nahi diya ? By the way tum bed ke niche kya kar rahi ho ?
R : Woh kal raat mujhe neend nahi aa rahi thi toh socha ki uske saath thodi der baat karlu.
(Then she comes out n sits on the bed.)
S : Toh kya kaha usne ?
R : Usse bhi neend nahi aa rahi thi. And u know woh hamhari hi college mein padhta hai.
S : Kya baat hai ab toh khub maza ayega ki koi ladka, humhari college ka hi hokar tum uase janti tak nahi. Aacha ab jaldi se jakar tyarr ho jao varna hum college ke liye late ho jayenge.
R : Okay mein bas 15 min main aati hoon.

Meanwhile in armaan's room he was also having a nice sleep. When his friend Atul came in his room n called out for him : Hey armaan kaha ho tum ?
A : Aare yaar sone de na. Tere bapp ka kya jata hai ?
Then atul says to himself that : aabe yeh kahan se bol raha hai. Kahi yeh bhoot toh nahi ban gaya.
Then suddenly armaan comes out and stands at the back side of atul. When atul turned back he starts screaming : Ahhhhhhhh..... bhoot, bhoot, koi bachao.
A : Aare yeh mein hoon armaan.
At : Oh yaar tu hai maine socha ki koi bhoot hai. By the way tu kahan se nikla ?
A : Bed ke niche se.
At : Bed ke niche se ? Par tu waha kar kya raha tha ? Aur aaise achanak mat nikla kar tujhe pata hai meri toh jaan hi nikal gayi thi.
A : Arre champ tuje mein koi bhoot lagta hoon kya ?
At : Haan (in a low voice )
A : Tu kuch bola kya ?
At : Nahi toh meine toh kuch nahi kaha. By the way yeh toh bata ki tu bed ke niche kar kya raha tha ?
A : So raha tha.
At : Kya bed ke niche so raha tha ? Maine toh suna hai ki bed ke upar soya jata hai.
A : Haan par woh kal raat...
At : Kal raat kya ?
A : Woh mein chatting kar raha tha aur woh ladki bed ke niche beth kar chat kar rahi toh maine bhi socha ki kyun na mein bhi try karoon.
At : Oh toh ladki ka mamla hai ? Aacha ab tu jaldi se tyarr ho ja college bhi toh jana hai.
A : Okay tum hall mein wait karo mein bas abhi gaya aur abhi aaya.

While here in riddhima's room she is applying her make up and straightning her hair. She was wearing a pink coloured dress. When she was finally ready sapna said : aaj to bahut khoobsurat lag rahi ho. Kya baat hai koi khaas baat hai kya ?
R : Nahi toh kuch bhi toh nahi.
S : Ohh I understand.
R : Sapna tum bhi na. Ab hum chale kya ?
S : Okay.
Then they sit in the car n riddhima is driving.

On the other side atul and armaan are ready n armaan drives the car.
And suddenly their was accident between both of them i.e. Armaan n riddhima. And in anger riddhima came out of the car and directly went near armaan's car and opened the door of his car and told him to come out and then starts shouting on him and people gathered aroud both of them and were staring on them.
R : Oh hello mister agar gadi chalani aati hi nahi toh chalate kyon ho?
A : Tumse kisne kaha ki mujhe gadi chalani nahi aati. By the way tum hoti koun ho mujhe ye sab kehnewali.
R : Excuse me tum ne meri gadi ki headlights tod dali hai.
A : Haan toh isme meri kya galati, tum dekh kar nahi chala rahi thi.
R : Oh hello mein nahi tum dekh ke nahi chala rahe the.
A : Haan toh tumne bhi toh meri car ki piche ki head lights todi hai. Hai na ? Toh hisab barabar hua right ?
R : Wrong. Tumne kya mujhe buddhu samajh rakha hai kya ?
A : Yeh sab dekhne par toh yahi lagta hai ki tum buddhu ho.
R : What !!!!!!! Tumne mujhe kya kaha ?
A : Buddhu
R : How dare u say that. And by the way buddhu mein nahi tum hoge.
A : Nahi tum ho.
R : No tum.
A : Tum
R : Nahi tum.
(On hearing armaan n riddhima's arguments atul n sapna stepped out of the car to control their fight.)
At : Aare yaar armaan ab bas bhi kar. Chal humhe late ho raha hai.
A : Aare yeh ladki ko dekh na kabse chipkali ki tarah ek hi baat par chipak kar beth gayi hai.
R : What !!!!!!!!!! Mein chipkali ?
A : Haan
R : Acha toh tum cockroach.
A : Haan toh tum.............Billi.(miyaun miyaun...)
R : Tum machar, idiot, stupid, gadhe..........
A : Mein ye sab toh tum machari, idioti, stupidi, gadhi....
R : Kya ? ...........aisa kuch nahi hota.
A : Kyunki inki jagah tum jo ho.
R : Kya kya kya...........
S : Ab chalo bhi.
R : Nahi ruko iski himmat toh dekho, apne aap ko samajta kya hai ?
A : Chief Minister, India ka President....Ab bolo kya kar logi tum ?

Then after convincing both of them i.e. armaan n riddhima, atul n sapna took both of them away from eachother. Armaan n riddhima were very much angry at eachother. Armaan drove off from there.
S : Rids give me the keys.
R : Par kyun ?
S : Kyunki ab mein car chalaongi.
R : Par...
S : Par var kuch nahi just give me the keys aur waise bhi hum already late ho chuke hai.
Then riddhima gives the keys to sapna n now sapna is driving n riddhima is sitting besides her.
R : Mera bas chale na toh mein kabhi uska chehra tak na dekhoon.
S : Par kiska ?
R : Usika yaar. Dekha na tune, usse ek ladki se kaise baat ki jati hai woh kuch pata hi nahi.
S : Haan woh toh hai par chod uss baat ko, mujhe tere uss prince charming ke bare main kuch pata.
R : Kaun ?
S : Aare wahi jisse tu baat kiye bina ek din bhi nahi reh sakti.
Riddhima blushes.
S : Mujhe pata hai ki tu maan hi maan usse pasand karti ho.
R : Sapna aisa kuch nahi hai.
S : Okay.

While here in armaan's car :
A : Mera chale na toh mein kabhi bhi uski surat tak na dekhoon.
At : Aare yaar uski baat chod na.
A : Ek baar sorry bolne par bhi bas ek hi baat par chipak gayi thi, chipkali.
At : Ab bas bhi karna. Acha maine suna hai ki teri dream girl ki baton se tu fresh ho jata hai. So come on now tell me about her.
A : Tu kiski baat kar raha hai ?
At : Aare wahi madam jiske tu raat raat bhar dreams dekhta hai.
A : Champ tu bhi na yaar.
At : Aare tu toh aise baat kar raha hai jaise ki tujhe woh acchi nahi lagti. Pasand hai, hai na ?
A : Pata nahi kyun par jab bhi ussese baat karta hoon tab mujhe kuch aur yaad hi nahi aata.
At : Aare isse hi toh pyarr kehte hai.
Armaan also blushes.

Now it happens like this that sapna parks her car n just in their left side armaan also parks his car. Riddhima stepped out of car and just as she was closing the door, armaan opened his side's door n bumped the door at the back of riddhima. Riddhima got very very angry at this n she totally turned over n was shocked seeing armaan standing just in front of her.
R : Tum..................
A : Tum..................
Just then atul n sapna also stepped out of the car.
Both together : Oh No ! Not Again.
At : Hey...
S : Sapna.
At : Oh toh sapna chalo hum chalte hai varna agar hum is baar inn dono ke bich main pade toh woh ho na ho lekin hum zaroor late ho jayenge.
S : Haan chalo.
At : Aur maine toh ye bhi suna he ki iss college ke sabhi prof. aur teachers bahut strict hai.
On the way to their classroom they introduced eachother n went in the class room. Sapna sat besides a very hot n handsome guy.
S : Hi i am sapna.
Guy : Hi i am raj.
S : Nice to meet u raj.
R : Nice to meet u 2.
And atul sat near anjali.
At : Hi i am atul.
An : Ummm....Anjali.
At :Hi anjali.
An : Hi.

And don't forget to comment......please..please....do....comment...

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Posted: 18 years ago
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heyyy

v.nyc part...was totally hooked 2 it!!!

do cont. soon!!


Marisha 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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yh even though its ur first fan fic its great luved it do pm me when u post the next part
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Posted: 18 years ago
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really nice fanfic,pls do continue...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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OMG i love dis ff.....its so funny armaan n ridhima like each other buh den again they hate eachothers guts lol.....buh u know wah...thnx 4 writting this ff as it remimded me of da chats i used 2 have with someone aswel...anywez...
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continu sooon n wen u do plzzzzzzzzzz pm me thnx...
lu ridz,
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Posted: 18 years ago
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lkin da idea of dis ff
really gd
update soon 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow sweety it ws sooooooooo good yaar i ws laughng while readng nd i lvd tht scene whre both wre chattng under d bed nd how wll she nd armaan react whn he nd she got 2 no their secret admire wow their fghts wre sooo fnny nd whn ridz said tum hote kaun ho nd he said pm ny pro so fnny plzzz cont soon..........its luvly ff........luv u

yachna
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey guys thank you for the good good comments..... and on your all's request i am continueing this ff.... her goes the 2nd part : enjoy...

PART-2

While here armaan n riddhima were still quarelling on the same matter when riddhima suddenly remembered,
R : Oh no ! I am late.
A : Oh shit ! Me 2. Come on let's go.
(They forgot that they were quarreling. Riddhima starts going but her dupatta was struck inside the car n the door was closed.)
A : Uff oh ab kya hua chalo bhi.
R : Haan woh mera dupatta...
A : Oh ho ye tum ladkiyaan bhi na hamesha mean time par hi kuch gadbad karti ho.
R : Kya ?
A : Kuch nahi. Give me the keys.
R : Par car toh sapna drive kar rahi thi isliye chabbi bhi usike pas hogi.
A : Oh ho ek yeh musibat kum thi ki ek aur aa gayi.
R : Tum kya keh rahe ho ?
A : Kuch nahi. Kya tumhare paas pin hai ?
R : Haan woh mere balon main hai.

Then armaan takes out a pin from riddhima's hair n so riddhima's hair r now fully open. Armaan opens the door with the help of the pin n realises riddhima's dupatta.
R : Ab chalo. (And holds armaan's hand and they both run through the way to the classroom hand in hand.)
When they reach the classroom they both r breathless.
R : Maam......may....
A : May....we....
R : Come.........in.
Maam : Yes you may but both of u be carefull from now onwards cause i hate late comers.
Both together : Y...Ye...Yes maam.
They were still holding eachother's hands but the teacher didn't saw that. There was only one seat left for both of them so they sat together.
S 2 R n At 2 A : Yeh sab ho kya raha hai ?
A n R : Kya ?
S n At : Aare tum dono ne ek dusre ke hath kyu pakad rakhe hai ?
A n R : What !!!!!!!!!!!
Then A n R looked at each other
R : Eeeeeeeeeeuuuuuuuuuu
A : Eeeeeeeeekkkkkkkkkkk
And they both leaved their hands.

Then after the bell rang everyone got out of the class. As soon as armaan n riddima got out of the class,
R : Yeh sab tumhari wajah se hua hai.
A : Aiga. By the way yeh sab meri wajah se nahi tumhari wajah se hua hai. Ek toh tumhari help ki aur upar se tum mujhe hi daat rahi ho. Bhalai ka toh koi zamana hi nahi raha.
At : Aare yaar ab bas bhi karo.
R : Arhhhhhhhh......
And she went away from there.
A : Arhhhhhhh.....
And he also left in the opposite direction to riddhima.

Then in the next lecture all of them were entering the class room, when riddhima was entering armaan also entered at the same time n they both crashed with each other n riddhima got angry but didn't say nything cause she just wanted to talk to armaan. Then again they both came to sit together only. Teacher entered the class and everyone wished her gud morning.Then everyone sat on their seats.

Maam : Hello students. I am Miss Kirti Sharma. And from today i will be taking your biology class. So for today i am giving all of you a project which you all have to prepare with your partners n i will choose all your partners. So miss sapna u will be preparing your project with raj.
S : Yes maam.
R : Yes maam.
K : Good. Now miss anjali you will be with atul.
Both of them together : Yes maam.
(Then she paired everyone except armaan n riddhima.)
K : So now miss riddhima n armaan r only left over. Hence u both will prepare your project together.
A n R : What !!!!!!!!!!!!!
Then they both looked at eachother.
A n R : No ways.................
K : Do u both have any problem ?
A n R : Umm...Yes.....No maam.
K : Okay now everyone of you got your partners n from now onwards whenever i give u a project you will be together just as you r now paired. So now every girl from the class will come n pick a chith from the bowl n which ever chith you pick, on it will be written the topic for your project.

Then sapna comes n picks a chith. Then she went to her seat.
Raj : Hey topic kya hai ?
Sapna opens the chith n on it was written 'brain'.
S : Umm....We have to collect information on our brain.
Raj : Okay.
N then anjali goes n picks the chith n gets to her seat.
A : Umm....Cardio muscles.
At : Okay.

Now it's turn for riddhima to go n pick a chith from the bowl. She goes n picks a chith n goes to her seat n sits next to armaan.
A : Ab batao humhe kya karna hai ?
R : Umm.......Heart.
A : Oh no.
R : Ya.....
K : So now as everyone has got your topic for the project i will check your project after 2 days.

Then the lecture is over. Every one comes out of the class n everyone was discussing about their project except armaan n riddhima, cause they were quarelling with eachother.
A : Yeh sab tumhari wajah se hi ho raha hai.
R : Maine kya kiya ?
A : Tum koi dusri chith nahi utah sakti thi.
R : Mujhe thodi na pata tha ki humhe aisa project milega.
Then sapna comes n says :
S : Hey guys now please stop all these. Ab toh tumhe milkar hi yeh project karna hoga.
R : Kya mein aur woh bhi uske saath.
A n R : NO WAYS..........
R : Aarrhh.....(And she left from there.)
A : Aarrhh....(And he also left in the dir. opp. to riddhima.)

Then sapna went to riddhima and talked to her for sometime n after sometime riddhima's mobile beeped. She opened her cell phone n saw that it was 'prem' n wanted to chat with her.
S : Ooops.... Prem right ?
R : Hmmm... Sorry gotta go.
S : Ya sure. Okay bye.
R : Bye.

And again....Do comment please.....Hey guys thank you for the good good comments..... and on your all's request i am continueing this ff.... her goes the 2nd part : enjoy...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow ria it ws to good yaar i lvd their sweet fghts lvd it now thy hv 2 do projct togethr wow it wll be fun.....i lvd ur prt soooo mch cont soon luv uuuuuuu
yachna 👏 =D>] 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey ria loved it di plz could u send a pm to me next time
loved it sooooo much

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