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Posted: 17 years ago
#51
hey tht was nice sana
m gonna cont.2morrow
till then sm1 plzz cont
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Posted: 17 years ago
#52
awwwwww chooooo chweet!!!!!!!!
all of u r gr8 writers. its very cute ff
do continue soon!!!!!!!!1 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#53
Wow Nice FF loved it.You all are great writers 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#54
Dr.Kirti checking patients in the chidrens ward, she looks at armaans sly grin

Dr.Kirti-"Dr.Armaan,aapne reports tayyar kar deye?" Armaan still dosent listen "DR.ARMAAN!"

Armaan-D..Dr.Kirti..woh uh..mein tho..uh ,kuch..kuch keh rahin thi aap?

Dr.Kirti-"Dr.Armaan ,please apni personal life ko sanjeevni mein--" before she can complete her sentence armaan interrupts her

Armaan-jee Dr.kirti mein jaantha hun (look at his nerve! 😛 ) Im sorry, ainda se, aisa nahin hoga

Dr.kirti-hopefully, waise Dr. Armaan congratulations, harsh aur minnie..bohot pyare naam chune hain aap dono ne .She smiles

Armaan-Thank you dr.kirti.He smiles (with his cute dimples showing..aww 😳 )
Dr.Kirti nods and walks off..

Armaan shakes his head, saying "phew" he moves to the cafetaria..

Next Scene-- (locker room)
Atul-(murmuring to himself)"angali..I love you,..nahin aise nahin..um..ANJALI! I LOVE YOU!..are nai yaar, woh tho dar ke bhag jayegi, kaise..kaise--"
he sees muskaan near her locker

"are muskaan..thu batha na, anjali ko kaise propose karun!"

Muskaan-are wah! tu anjali ko propose karega aaj?
Atul blushes .(muskaan laughs in her "original" way..=))
tho theek hai, practice session shuru karthe hain..
tum apne ghutno pe baitho aur samjho ke mein anjali hoon, abh mujhe kaho.."

Atul-uh..kya kehna hai?
Muskaan-are I love you bol na! aise sharmaye ga tho anjali tujhe aade sentence par hi chod kar chali jayegi!

Atul-oh haan acha, um Anjali, mein tumse, nahin mera matlab I love you..tumse pyaar kartha hoon! Atul gets flustered.

Muskaan-atul! tu na..! pehle sochle kaunsi language mein propose karna hai,English mein ya urdu mein!
(punjabi music plays.. 😆 )
Atul-mein uh, Urdu mein hi karunga yaar..theek hai, is bar tho 100% acha karunga..(here goes). Anjali,patha hai, jabhi mein tumhein dekhtha hoon na, tho mujhe tumpe apne reena,sonam..aur timmu se bhi zyada pyaar aatha hai..

Muskaan-oye! yeh reena,sonam,timmu hain kaun? tu anjali ko propose karraha hai..ya phir apne purane girlfriends ke baremein batha raha hai!

Atul-chee chee,mere koi purane girlfiends nahin hai..yeh log sab tho mere poude (plants) hain..
Muskaan slaps her forehead..

Muskaan-hye rabba, is ladke ka ke hoga!

Anjali enters the locker room "hey guys.."

Atul-atul straightens himself immediatly "hi anjali, aaj tum bohot khush lag rahi ho."
Anjali-haan atul, harsh aur minnie ki wajah se! Im very HAPPY!
involuntarily she hugs atul..poor guy is left in his dream world of atul+anjali=their kids 😆

thats that guys..someone else continue..Im done with typing and typing 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#55
wow tht was nice sana
here u go with the nxt
now atul,angie,muskaan,rahul n armaan r in locker room n riddhima enters the locker room
Ra:arey riddhima ji aap gayi nai abhi tak
A:haan i think abhi tumhe ghar jaana chahiye
ang:ya ridz u need a rest
AT:waise tum DR keerthi se mili kya woh tumhare baare mein pocch rahi thi
muskaan:arey yaar koi use bhi bolne dega ya nai,waise minnie aur harsh hai kahan
R:ab mein bolon
ALL:haan
r:mein abhi ghar hi jaarahi thi magar sis lovely kahin dikhayi nai derahi hai minnie aur harsh bhi unhi k saath hain aur mein DR keerthi se mili thi atul .toh ab koi mujhe batayega k sis loovely kahan hai
ALL 2geather:haan woh..yahan left nai nai yaar right nai path lab nai nai childrens ward nai yaar OPD mein gayi hongi
R:STOP!!!!!!tumlog kya bolrahe ho mujhe kuch samajh nai aaraha
AT:sis lovely ka toh pata nai par tumhare bachon ka pata chal gaya
R:kahan hai?
AT:woh dekho
ridz turns back n c tht DR.keerthi n shubhankar r playin wid their kids standin out side the lockr room
evry 1 smile thinkin how sweet bth shub n keer looks 2gether n moves 2wards them
R:DR.shubhankar......mein lelun isse
shu:ya sure......sach mein bohot pyaare bache hain
K:haan such mein u bth r very lucky parents.......woh sis lovely lekar aayi thi bachon ko aur kab inke saath khelte hue waqt guzar gaya pata hi nai chala
AT:ya.......wais acha hi hai na aap dono ko thoda experience bhi hogaya ,future mein aayega haina DR keerthi
keerthi blushes
K:ab......uh...um woh mein mujhe rounds par jaana hai
muskaan takes the other kid frm keerthi
K:have a nice day n she leaves
shub:mujhebhi jaana chaiye n walks off
ATU,ARMAAN n RAHOOOOOOOOL:ISHQ HAI!!!!!!!!!!!!
shub blushes n walks off
naani comes
N:ridhima kabse tumhe dhoond rahi hoon ......ghar nai chalna kya
R:haan naani chaliye
muskaan hands over the kid 2 naani n naani move n all interns walks back in locker room but armaan n ridhima r still their
A:take care jaan
R:she smiles waise kal mom dad kab tk aayenge
A:kal subah mein unhe airport recieve karne jaaunga
R:oh.....ok ab mein chalti hun naani wait karrahi hongi
A:kissen her on her cheek n on forehead of his kid in ridz arm
A:mein shaam ko pickup karne ghar aaunga
R:ok bye
A:bye
ridz leaves
do comment plzzzzzzzzzz
n sm1 continue

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Posted: 17 years ago
#56
OMG sana nd sheena u both r wonderful yaar nd awesom prts yaar nd now rahul bhi kuch kuch hota hai good r armaan ab ayega maza.......now plz sum1 cont.......

yachna 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#57
hi...i am new to IF....just read ur fanfic it was awesome.......A big thank u 2 Sweet Mermaid for starting such a good ff......it was something diff from...others....
de parts were chooo chweet ........ 😊

u guys doing gr8.....
pls some1 continue......



sweet mermaid 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#58
hey awesome update sheena its just so shweeeeeeet
armaan and ridz 2gether wid the kids i just hope real dmg mein yeh sab jaldi ho jaye 😆


someone please cont soon
😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: shalika

hey awesome update sheena its just so shweeeeeeet
armaan and ridz 2gether wid the kids i just hope real dmg mein yeh sab jaldi ho jaye 😆


someone please cont soon
😳

why dont you continue?, Im sure you can come up with something great..😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: ktejasvi

hi...i am new to IF....just read ur fanfic it was awesome.......A big thank u 2 Sweet Mermaid for starting such a good ff......it was something diff from...others....
de parts were chooo chweet ........ 😊

u guys doing gr8.....
pls some1 continue......



sweet mermaid 👏

yeah sweet mermaid, thanks for starting such a sweet ff..!

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