Baby ( fan fic).. Do read Plz - Page 5

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Posted: 17 years ago
#41
hey
nice ff yaar jaldi cont karna
luv ya n tak care
mahru
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Posted: 17 years ago
#42
hey all grls sab kaha gaye plz sum1 cont.....
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Posted: 17 years ago
#43
oh wow..ithni der mein ithna sara..lol
aww..adorable! you guys are amazing..

@sonia...so sweeeet of armaan to dream away in the locker room!! *sigh*
and hes gonna help atul!..lol..aww,lets see if Angali dosent roll her eyes when atul proposes to her.. 😉

@sheena_12..I love the way you wrote how ridz walks into the hosp with the twins!..and sister lovely ki dialogue delivery is superb! lol
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hi sana so ur bck now plz u carry on wth ur prt i'll be waitng .......plz cont

yachna
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Posted: 17 years ago
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haha..aight I'll continue

Armaan is grinning while walking along sanjeevni corridor..he just left ridz talking to Dr.Kirti who was congratulating her.

Armaan bumps into Raool (I mean "rahul"..sorry guys,armaan ke munh se sunthe sunthe aadat hogayi hai 😛 ).
Armaan- Tum!..tum..dekhe nahin chal sakthe kya?
Raool- "mein tho dekh kar hi chal raha tha..tum eh..I think khoye hue the." Raool grins.."by the way, congrats, sunke acha laga ke woh dono bhi rid-hee-ma (thats how he takes her name 😃 ) ke tarah dekhthe hain..warna tumhari shakal tho.." he shrugs (the raool see see music plays 😉 )

Armaan- getting mad "tum se tho lakh achi hai meri shakal..abh hato, mujhe childrens ward ke rounds pe jaana hai!" he shoves away raool and walks forward

Raool-haha jao jao...waise tho Dr.cum Papa armaan ho gaye ho tum abhi..tho experience kafi hoga nai?

Armaan stops.Getting pissed..he folds his hands,makes a face..and turns around to face raool (the bike and guitar music that always comes up..whenever raaol and armaan fight)

Armaan -dekh mujhse panga math le haan, pashthayga!
aaj mein tujhe chod raha hoon..kyunke aaj mujhe tujh se ladne ka man nahin karaha..!
glaring at raool armaan walks off..

Raool standing with his hands folded..(music still going on..)

Next scene--
Atul is in the general ward examing a patient
Raool comes up to him "Uh..yaar atul, tum ne muskaan ko kahin dekha hya?"
Atul- extremely surprised "tu muskaan ko kyun dhund raha hai yaar?..teri tabyath tho theek hai na?"
Raool- stutters "Haan woh..aise hi..bas thoda kaam tha, kuch case ke bare mein puchna tha"

Atul sighs in relief.."oh..case discuss karna tha, aur mujhe laga.." he laughs
Raool-kyun tumhein kya laga?

Atul-are kuch nahin yaar..dekh woh rahi muskaan,jaldi jaake bath kar,bohot busy hai woh,ridz ke patients bhi wohi sambhal rahi hai na..isleye

Raool-thanks..he walks towards muskaan

*phew*..anyone else to continue? 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#46
nice update sana.......
aur yeh armaan aur rahul abhi bhi laste hai ..... 😆 😆
its really nice 😛 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow sana nce update yaar
rahoooool usko muski se kya kaam now armaan nd rahol being mad on eachothr........
sum1 cont.......

yachna
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Posted: 17 years ago
#48
nice update sana.......
aur yeh armaan aur rahul abhi bhi laste hai ..... 😆 😆
its really nice 😛 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#49
lol..
yachna why dont you continue?
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Posted: 17 years ago
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lol..might as well continue 😛
Raool-Er..muskaan woh mujhe ..erm..

Muskaan has got her back turned to Raool,Apparently these two arent fighting so much since armaan and ridhima got married *hint hint* (I hope you guys know why.. 😉 )
Muskaan-bol rahul(the punjabi music that plays always whenever muskaan speaks)kya chaheye tujhe? shes smiling ,because she just met the twins

Raool-he opens and shuts his mouth,this side of muskaan is new to him since all he's been seeing his childhood is the patiala wali punjab di kudi 😉 "Woh unh..tum.."

Muskaan-"kya bath hai ,bolna!" shes still grinning (remember the look she gives when armaan is in the locker room,shes looking down and smiling.. 😉 )

Raool-Unh..woh..kuch nahin, bas puchna tha ke,tum ridheemaa (lol) ka case sambhal rahi ho na? kaisa hai?

Muskaan-haan acha hai,abh tho woh sanjeevni aa nahin sakthi,bechari harsh aur minnie ke saath busy hai, isseye meine Dr.kirti se baat karke case leliya! she smiles

Raool-oh,tho tune khud case leya? um..acha kiya.

Muskaan-are haan baba, maine khud leya! abh hatto! mujhe kaam hai..she starts walking away, but her chudi gets caught between the sheets of the hosp.bed 😛 (kind of AR-ish..isnt it?)

Raool-erm..may I?

Muskaan-are!..mere paas haath nahin hai kya nikal ne? she starts tugging at her chudi..and the bed sheet starts to get rigged (the thread starts coming with the chudi)

Raool-are tu!...tu bedsheet kyun kharab kar rahi hai! ek chudi ke peche! idhar lao..!
He removes it slowly,entangling it from the sheet.
"ye lo!..nikalgaya,thodi akal hogi na..tho isthmal karliya kar.."

Muskaan-oye! tu mujhe akal ke bare math batha..theek hai! hmph!
she turns around ,and her scarf(which she uses to tie her hair..flips on raools face)

Raool blinks and gazes at muskaan as she walks off..(the piano plays, the one which playes for the first time when armaan had picked up ridz in the jungle..while she had been sleeping)

All this had been watched by Armaan who was standing at the corner..
Armaan-yeh kya ho raha hai Dr.Raool? heh heh
abh tho maza ayega! he grins wickedly..!

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