DoDilMilRaheHain-Part 46 pg 145..IOTM - Page 4

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Posted: 17 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: dudley

hey kajal plzzzzzzz don't discontinue your fanfic 😭 😭 , i'm really enjoying it!!
i think there is some problem cause the next part has not yet come up so that's why you haven't got comments!!
sorry if this is only something weird in my comp.
once again plzzzzzzz don't discontinue
thankx alot 😉

hey i checked and found no problem maybe try refreshing it or if that dioesnt' work just go back to the dil mil gaye forum and try the link again it usually happens to me but i refresh or backtrack....and thanks i continued it...next part up tommorow at noon....thanks for your support

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Posted: 17 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Bollywood_chic

HEY LOVE THIS NEW FF CONTINUE SOON...VERY INTERESTING....

~SONIA~

hey thanks i relli needed a name for it but i dont htink ill need it now cause many people arent commenting.... 😭

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Please comment guys..i need them to continue this fanfic otherwise i dont wanna waste ur time...😔

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Gr8 going...i liked it, i read all the 4 parts 2gether soo i enjoyed more hehe
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: manju_lrl

Gr8 going...i liked it, i read all the 4 parts 2gether soo i enjoyed more hehe

hey thanks and i guess ill continue in a couple hours for the few people who do read... 😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 5- Lovely and Atul meet...

Anjali and Atul were in the locker room. Atul was sitting down and taking a rest. As he closed his eyes Sapna walked, looking dreamy.

'Tumhe kya hua? [What happened to you?] question Anjali.
'Hmmm..' replied Sapna.
'I said, whats with you?' Anjali said annoyed.
'Nothing, nothing!' said Sapna finally coming out of her dreamland.

She had met a doctor who was a friend of DR.Shubankar. He had spoken to her kindly and had come there to meet DR.Shubhankar. She didn't exactly get a chance to find out his name because one of the patients had had an emergency. All she knew was how the doc had looked. He was tall, pretty good looking and he was smart. He had helped her with the patient while DR.Shubhankar had been out a while. Oh, if only she knew his name....

Ridhima walked in looking depressed. She ran to her Di and put her arms around her.

'Ridzi, Ridzi kya hua? [Ridzi Ridz, what happened?] asked Anjali sounding worried.

'Woh Di, yahan par Dhoni hai aur aur..{ Dhoni is here and and...] she couldn't continue because the tears had come.

Anjali glanced at Armaan who had followed Riddhima in.

'Voh, um Dhoni ko blood cancer hai[ Um Dhoni has blood cancer.] said Armaan.

'kya..[what?] gasped Anjali, and she tightened her grip on Riddhima. After a while Riddhima got a pager from Dr. Shashank Gupta and left to meet him. He was in his office.As soon as she left, Atul bolt upright, he had opened his eyes when he heard Ridhima cried but now he wanted to know why there were tears in her eyes.

Anjali explained that there was a nursing home in Lonalva. This summer Ridhima had visited there with their father. Dhoni was her fav. kid there and he had looked pretty pale last time they were there. He could barely move or walk. He had called out his girlfriend's name..Ridhima's out loud a lot of times during the night. When she came he looked worse than ever. Our dad, he's a doctor had done some reports and admitted him in the hospital. Done some reports and before the results could come out Ridhima had to start her internship. She tried to contact him but it was no hope. And now she finds out like this that Dhoni, poor soul, has cancer.

Atul got up and went to Dr.Shashank's office right away.
'Poor Ridz,'he muutered. 'First, that stupid Armaan is bothering her and on the first day of work she has to cure her little boyfriend from blood cancer.' As he walked he wasn't paying attention where he was walking. He bumped into someone big. He was about to fall when strong arms caught him. He opened one eye and say a someone very big. A nurse who was smiling down at him, her eyes unfocused and dreamy. He coughed and she realized him and let go. He fell down but got up quickly before she could touch him.

'OH, sorry hai ji.' replied the nurse.

'It's okay,' Atul muttered as he made to walk away.

'Oh, aap ka naam kya hai. Mera naam Lovely hai, ji.' said Nurse Lovely.

'Mera naam Atul hai aur mujhe jaana hai.' said Atul and he hurried away.

Here's the next part. Thanks for commenting and please read. Also comment. I know this is a bit boring but I wanted to make Lovely and Atul meet.

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Part 6- pg 6

Edited by *Armaan* - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#37
hehehe 😆 😆
atul-lovely finally met, now it'll be fun!!
thankx and yeah keep up the good work. 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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very nce goi! contd soon...... 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey guys thanks for all the comments and ill try and continue the part tonite after im done all my hw

gotta run
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Posted: 17 years ago
#40

Promo: Crushes arise! Lovely has one on Atul who has one on Anjali who has one on?? (Any Guesses)

Armaan has one on Ridhima but does he really know? Who does Ridhima have a crush on??

Think think think and you'll find out soon...

*Armaan* 😳

PS.Guys please comment i am a bit discouraged to see no one commenting. Only a few people have done so and comments are a must.

Edited by *Armaan* - 17 years ago

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