DoDilMilRaheHain-Part 46 pg 145..IOTM - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: *Armaan*

hey thanks and ill might have some more bball parts but if you think about it, it similar to the actual drama mine might be but with less gaussa and more fun

*Armaan* 😳

Hey I was wondering is your name actually Armaan?

Sorry juss wanted to ask cuz I love that name after watching Dill Mill Gayye😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasnoor_sahota

Hey I was wondering is your name actually Armaan?

Sorry juss wanted to ask cuz I love that name after watching Dill Mill Gayye😳

um my real name cant be Armaan cause i am a girl..not a guy. Lol. i posted it in this topic before...i just made that username cause i was a DMG addict and huge fan Amraan....and wanted this name so got it lol...but im thinking it was mistake...but i relli like the name thats it

*Armaan* 😳

Edited by *Armaan* - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: *Armaan*

um my real name cant be Armaan cause i am a girl..not a guy. Lol. i posted it in this topic before...i just made that username cause i was a DMG addict and huge fan Amraan....and wanted this name so got it lol...but im thinking it was mistake...but i relli like the name thats it

*Armaan* 😳

Ohh Im so Sorryyy Sweetieee😕

I thought you were a guy the whole time,SO SORRY!😕

&& I didnt read your topis so yeah..

Im kinda late,but IM SO SORRY!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasnoor_sahota

Ohh Im so Sorryyy Sweetieee😕

I thought you were a guy the whole time,SO SORRY!😕

&& I didnt read your topis so yeah..

Im kinda late,but IM SO SORRY!!

its okay ...my fault for not mentioning it before

*Armaan* 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey nice intro n also the part1
waitin fr the nxt
cont.soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 2- Red...Sauce Waala

Recap: Ridhima had yelled 'TUM' making Armaan turn. He realizes it is the basket...the basketball match is remembered.

'Tum...mera matlab aap aunty!?! App kaisi ho!' Ridhima asked her favorite aunty.
'Mein toh teek hoon par apni awaz neeche rako! Tum ab bachi nayi re {I am fine but keep you voice down. You are no longer a child}'replied Padma. [This is nurse Padma. She is the head nurse at Sanjeevani and has been working here for about 15 years now.She has known Riddhima since her childhood.]
So, thought Armaan, this Basket is Doctor basket. I'll have some fun now. He quickly hid behind the wall and watched Ridhima bid farewell to the nurse and walk away. Armaan notices a peon walking by with a trolley that had a bottle of red sauce. He took some and put a little by his lip and a bit on his forehead for a better effect.

He lay down on a bench, one leg straight on the bench and the other on the floor. He moaned as he saw Ridhima coming.

Ridhima saw him and rushed to his aid. At first she just looked at him and then:
'Tum? tum yahan kya kar rahe ho aur tumhe kya hua? [You? What are you doing here and what happened to you?] questioned Ridhima.
'Woh mein, mujhe chot laghi hai. Mein seedhon se neeche ja rahe tha, jab mein ghir gaye. {Me, I have gotten hurt, I was walking down the stairs when I fell!} moaned Armaan in agony.
Without another word, Ridhima ran and went frantic in hopes of finding a senoir doctor who could look after him.
Dr.Gupta saw her and asked her what happened.
'Woh, sir, actually wahan ek patient hai jisko bahot chot lagi hai aur bahot dard mein hai. Please aap usse dekh li jiya. {Sir, actually there is a patient who has gotten badly hurt and is in lots of pain. Please, go and see him!} replied Ridhima, out of breath.
'Teek hain, chali Doctor. {Okay doctor, let's go.} he replied.
Riddhima led the way and noticed no one was there. Angry and embarrassed she looked at Dr.Gupta. She opened her mouth to speak but he interrupted.
'Please, just go to your senoir doctor. She hates latecomers like I had mentioned to you earlier.' And he left without another word.
Ridhima walked to her senior's doctor and noticed that four people were already there. She stood next to two of them. A girl who was wearing a jeans with a beaatiful kurta and another who was wearing jeans and a t-shirt of blue and green. She stood across two of them. Dr. Anjali and Dr.Armaan?

Hey guys thanks for all the comments.
*Armaan* 😳

and comment again.

Part 3- pg 3

Edited by *Armaan* - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Nice job! I really like it. Yaar agar tumhaara naam Armaan nahi hai toh kya hai???
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Posted: 17 years ago
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no offence bt it is prittie much like da way dmg started bt nce prt update soon 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: pwincess kanzi

no offence bt it is prittie much like da way dmg started bt nce prt update soon 😛

i noe i just love the beginning a lot and didnt want to change it but i had o start from this because i am changing the character of a person and bringing in two other people...it may be confusinf right now but you might like it later...

lol

and there is only gonna be little bit like this and then the story is gonna be all my ideas...

*Armaan* 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: AshiYuvi4life

Nice job! I really like it. Yaar agar tumhaara naam Armaan nahi hai toh kya hai???

thanks and my name is kajal...😃

*Armaan* 😳

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