RiKara TS- Yeh tune kya kiya || Last part -Pg 6 || *COMPLETED*|| - Page 2

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

Something I wanted to read...nd it was much better than my expectations..loved it...continue plz...

Originally posted by: NatluS

"In the hospital, he hadn't said a word, and neither had she." - Rikara feels 😭

"Aaj mere zindagi ke andhere ko tumhari roshni ki sabse zyada zaroorat hai, Gauri."

Loved these lines.

Beautifully written. Felt emotional while reading it. Good job. 👏

I'll be waiting for the next part.

Originally posted by: Shraddhadikshit

Simply awesome... really waiting for next... please do pm...

Originally posted by: ehmmbhluvr

Beautifully written...outburst of emotions..but Now I am scared how will om react...wanna read more..pls do update soon

Originally posted by: vrindagupta

Superb update

U depicted the emotions so well

Bua ma truth was revealed

But now how will Gauri handle Omkara

It took her 3 months to confess

Wonder how will omkara react

Waiting eagerly to read more

Update soon

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

Awesome...loved it

Now she confessed the truth to om

i am too scared of his reaction...

He loved that imaginary child so much

Originally posted by: Naina280599

This was too good. Loved it so much. The way you portrayed their thoughts, feelings, their inner turmoil was really amazing. Can't wait for the next part, post soonish!!

😊 😊 😊

Dear Savina,
Its a good start and the idea is different. Waiting for further updates. Update asap.
With love,
Divya :-)

first part was very beautifull and emotional
after long time kuch different story padh rahi
thanks a lot for pm sweety
eagerly waiting for 2nd shot
pls update soon...