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Posted: 8 years ago
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This FS is entirely different from the serial apart from Sevtlana - Tej and OM story. Gauri have not met OM and OM had not married Gauri. I hope you guys enjoy it...

DEVIL'S SiN

Prologue

OM hated his forced wife like anything... Sevtlana... his bane of his and his mother's existence. Four years passed but still his hate escalated and thrives for revenge. His father lost everything to him and he in turn had to share his property with that Vamp... But looking at his mother's face... he knows that his sacrifice is worth. Sevtlana tried many times to get intimate with him but he insulted her calling her "old hag" . In prenup agreement, it was stated that if Sevtlana had any affair with anyone, then the property will go back to OM. Sevtlana never thought that this clause will be a problem but now she felt little lonely. Omkara never look at her or touch her and also she can't meet other men. He was a devil... He knew she is pining for some company but he enjoys her plight.

OMkara Singh Oberoi know to play game... While Sevtlana only looked at monetary part in the agreement, Om looked at other elements. One such clause was that Sevtlana can't have affairs. But Sevtlana forgot to add such clause regarding him and he is free to have affairs but his mother's morals imbibed in him stopped him from taking random girls to bed. Now turning 31 and being celibate made him frustrated. But even he is not a saint... he also got needs... he looked out from his cabin and saw GAURI SARMA... the girl employed in pantry... So beautiful and innocent... just his type... he knows that she only sees him as boss and will never thing of having anything more than that with him... but he knows to play game...

Gauri, an orphan from Bareily... She was given job by Anika Oberoi... wife of Sivaay Singh Oberoi. Anika saw her at orphanage and offered her the job in pantry. She only studied till 10th. But she was happy with her work. Her 18 years life taught her much... All she needed was a peaceful life. Many looked at her lustfully but scared due to Anika Singh Oberoi... Anika protected her. She was also sad when Anika left with Sivaay to London for business but was also happy when Anika left her in the guidance of Omkara Singh Oberoi. She knows oberoi will never harm her...

Omkara called Gauri and ordered her to bring coffee. She came inside and was about to place coffee on his table but he turned around and made the hot coffee fall on him.

"Sorry saab... Galti hogayi.. maaf kijiye... Please don't fire me" .. She took tissue from the table and started to wipe his chest. Om held Gauri's hand and stopped her. She looked scared at him. He asked her to lock the door.

Gauri : Jii? Par kyun?

Om : I want you to clean my shirt. Don't want any disturbance.

Gauri innocently closed the door and came to him. He knowingly didn't cover the glass windows and his employees can see him though they can't hear him.

Om : Open my shirt.

Gauri : Kya? (Shouted)

Om : Can't you hear it? I said open my shirt... My chest got burns and it pains. Now open the damn shirt you coffee girl...

Gauri : OK sir..

She opened his shirt while looking down but he made her look up. She saw the redness on his shirt and cringed. He asked her to go to washroom to clean the shirt. She nodded. But before she left to washroom he closed the glass window with his remote. He made sure all his employees saw it... especially male ones. SHE IS HIS... ONLY HIS...

with a devilish smirk he followed her inside...



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IlaTanwar thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I don whether to give hate remark.or not as it is completely different omkara the omkara Singh oberoi who believes in asool, principals and respects the women will be like his anyway I am still curious to read consider me a good critic... I won't bash your story...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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m curious to read This completely different story of rikara .. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very different concept,please pm when you update the next
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is some really good stuff
Completely different from what we see

Superb concept
A devil omkara
Though different...I would love to see him bad

Poor n innocent Gauri
Anika took care of her
But now what

I seriously want to know what's gonna happen further
Dying to read more
Plzz update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I hope to see an update soon
Just read the prologue yesterday only
And see here I am eagerly waiting
For Part 1

Wish u get time from your busy schedule and update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Ahhh...What wouldn't I give to see omie this way in the show...I loved it..pls update soon
~Maha~
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Plz update soon
Even during exams I am eagerly waiting for update
vrindagupta thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
#9
Where are you??
Plz update soon

I think show has taken inspiration from u
And they have started showing Omkara as devil
Only for Gauri

I would love to read your version of devil
As we r seeing in the show too

Waiting eagerly
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#10
All together a diff story liking it continue om is like shrewd Singh omkara😆

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