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Posted: 8 years ago
#51
it was superb as usual l can t stop laughing gauri dialogue ke baare mein kya batao she is out of the world type chiryya rudy ka expectation from his gauri bhabhi is very high lambe baalwala nephew sapna hi rahe ga poor guy
in the case if om understand that gauri is innocent then i definitly want something like this in dbo
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Posted: 8 years ago
#52
awesome yar
rudy and gauri both are unique pieces
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Posted: 8 years ago
#53
Your ff is simply awesome.. They're hilarious. I just love the way you write. Keep writing and do update soon
Last part was too good! Rudy n Gauri got me cracked up!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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rudy-sumo part was cute, bechare ke kamar ki lag gayi
prinku itni imli khaayegi daant harab hojenyge😉😆
gauri is sooo naive and prinku is so chaluu apne bhaiyon se kum nahi hia
bechara rudra, chote chote , lambe baallon wale nephews toh sapna banke reh gaye🥺🤣
so ab prniku aur ranveer ki shaadi karadenge
special mention , that shvaay did realise that, forcing someone to get married is sooo wrong
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Posted: 8 years ago
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superb
sumo and rudy are cutes
om scared of gauri
continue soon

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Here is the next part friends thanks for ur lovely comment I hope u all like this part and really very sorry for late update.

Chapter-7 (c)

Shivomru tells Priyanka rest in Rudra's because her bed is already occupied by pinky and janvi by saying all this they depart from her room.

Priyanka just give them assured smile before they depart from there.

So only Aniriya and prinku is present in room.

Anika:Priyanka mai tumhare liye bahot kush hu par mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hai ki tum sabse kuch chupa rahi ho?

Gauri:(at the same time)haan hamne bhi mehsus kiya aap kuch chuparahi hai?

Saumya:Maine bhi yeh notice kiya.

Priyanka first get shocked then she suddenly hide her emotion behind her smile and said"meri pyari pyari bhabiyaon aap bekar mai hi chinta kar rahi ho mai aap Sabse kuch bhi nahi chupa rahi aur aap kush nahi hai ki mai jise pyar karti hu usise meri shadi ho rahi hai?"(she said last line making sad face)

Anika:nahi aisi koi baat nahi hai him sab kush hai.

By saying this all three hugs prinku and congratulate her and left the room.

After some time in shivaay's room...

Shivomru are spending time with each other at poolside.

Rudra is thinking something both shivom notice this and ask him what is he thinking.

Om:hey dumbell oberoi kya soch raha hai vo bhi itni gehrai se?

Rudra:Bhaya ,O prinku pregnant thi is vajhse vo imli kha rahi thi par anika bhabi and Gauri bhabi bhi imli bade maje se kha rahi thi kahi vo dono bhi Prinku ki tarah pregnant to nahi hai?

Shivom:fhat the wuck...

Rudra just give them confusing look

Shivaay: Rudra r u out of ur mind how can u say that anika is pregnant?

Om:and Gauri also?

Rudra:Bhaya and O Maine kaha na aap log jara Bollywood movies dekha karo usme nahi dikhate jab heroine pregnant hoti hai to vo imli kaise chatkare leke khati hai.

By saying all this he does his logic vala sign.

After listening Rudra's explanation shivom just look towards each other and started to marching towards Rudra.they give a slap in Rudra's head.

om:dumbbell Oberoi ab apna dimag daudana band kar aur tujhe kitni baar bola hai Bollywood movies dekhna band kar.

Rudra:O aap na mujhse jalte ho kyunki mai apse jyada intelligent hu.aap itne bade ho gaye ho par apko yeh tak nahi pata ki dimag kai pair kaha hote hai Jo vo daud sake.

By saying this he does his logic vala sign.

Shivom just looks towards each other gives Rudra iska much nahi ho sakta look.

Shivaay:chalo mujhe meeting hai mai abhi niklta hu.

Om:haan mujhe bhi ek order pura karna hai mai bhi nikalta hu.

Rudra:par Bhaya humne yeh baat Sochi hi nahi ki hum apne ek lote hone vale jiju ka swagat kaise karenge?

Shivaay: don't worry rudra hum apne ek lote jija ji ka swagat bade jamke karenge kyun om?

He said all this with giving a naughty smile to Om.

Om also gives a naughty smile to shivaay.

Om:of course shivaay.

Rudra also understand their plan he also gives both of them a naughty smile.

Rudra: to isi baat pai ho jaye hamara obros moment.

Shivom:ho jaye.

Shivomru:Dil bole oberoi...

And they did their obro moment and bid each other bye goes to do their work.

But someone listen their
conversation.and it's none other then Prinku.

Prinku in her mind"in teeno ke dimaag mai jarur kuch khichadi pak rahi hai agar Ranveer ko inse nahi bachaya to vo khud shadi se inkar kar dega."

By saying all this she left the place in thinking how can she saves Ranveer tomorrow from her brother cluthches.

After some time pinky and janvi get conscious shakti and tej tell them they are going to fix prinku's marriage with Ranveer.Both ladies also agrees with them.

Tej also inform dadi that he is going to fix Prinku's marriage with Ranveer dadi also agreed with him.

At night in shivika's room

Nowadays anika gets to hear ringing bells continuously when ever shivaay is near her and but after listening shivaay's response on prinku's marriage with Ranveer she just want to stay away from shivaay because she know that no matter what at the end they can't be together she is just a responsibility to shivaay,the relation they both sharing is not going to have any future.after thinking all this she just feels the pain in her heart to avoid getting more hurt she needs to stay away from shivaay so she start to move towards sofa to sleep on it with blanket.

Shivaay sees her and ask

Shivaay:Anika kaha ja rahi ho?

Anika:sofe pai sone.

Shivaay:par kyun...I mean ur sleeping on the bed so why r u going to sleep on sofa?

Anika:Billuji shayad aap bhul rahe hai mai bed pai is liye soti thi kyunki vo humare plan ka hissa tha ab jab tia ki sacchai samne agayi hai to hume yeh sab naatak karne ki koi jarurat nahi.

Shivaay who don't want anika to sleep on sofa start to make excuses to stop her.

Shivaay:anika tum bed pai so sakti ho mujhe koi problem nahi hai.

Anika:par mujhe hai.

By saying all this she started to move towards sofa.

By hearing her response and knowing she don't want to share a bed with him shivaay gets angered and he feels rejected so he grabs his phone and calls" khanna abhi mere kamre mai aao."

Khanna:par sir itni raat ko mai apke room mai..

Shivaay:khanna Maine kaha abhi Matlab abhi aur han tumhare saath aur ek Jan ko le aao.

Khaana:OK sir.

Meanwhile anika is thinking in her mind why shivaay called khanna at this time in their room.

In few minutes khanna comes in
shivaay's room with one other person.

Khanna:may I come in sir.

Shivaay: yes come in (looking towards anika smilingly he said to khanna)just remove all the sofas and chairs from my room to store room.

Khanna:par sir...

Shivaay:now khanna and I don't like to repeat my words so move fast and get the work done.

Anika just looked at shivaay shockingly.

Anika:par shivaay mai kaha soungi?

Meanwhile khanna moved out all sofas and chair out of the room.

Shivaay lock the door and answer her.

Shivaay:bed pai anika ur always welcome.(by saying all this he just sit on the bed smiling proudly on his victory thinking anika not have any option rather to sleep on the bed with him)

Anika gets angered after hearing his reply.

Anika:tadibaaz bagad billa mai bed pai nahi soungi.

She started to move towards the door to move out of the room.

Shivaay sees this and he ran towards her to stop her.he hold her wrist and pulls her towards him.due to sudden pull anika just bangs her head on shivaay's chest.she started to go away from him but shivaay puts his other hand on her waist and pulls her towards him due to this close proximity bells started to ring in anika's ears she started to struggle in his hold seeing her struggle shivaay tight his hold on her waist and said.

Shivaay: anika tum mujhse dur nahi ja sakti.

Anika by listening his words started to look at shivaay with questioning look on her face what all he is saying.

After realising what he said he change his words.

Shivaay: I mean tum is kamre se bahar nahi ja sakti agar dadi ne tumhe bahar aise sote hue dekha to wo kya schengi unhe kitna bura lagega.

After listening his change words anika again gets hurt she started to struggle in his hold just to get away from him.

After seeing her struggling in his hold just to get away from him. shivaay gets angered.

Shivaay:tumhe ek baat ek baar main samajh nahi ata ki tum iss room se bahar nahi ja rahi ho and that's final.

By saying this he pick up her in his arms and started to march towards his bed anika first get shocked and again started to struggle in his arm due to which shivaay get disbalanced and both fall on bed.

Now anika is below shivaay.both just get lost in each others eyes but soon anika remember his all words and some time ago he is supporting Tej.Because he thinks Ranveer is not rich like them.

Anika in mind"kyun shivaay kyun aap aisa kar rahe hai?ek pal mai aap mere itne kareeb hote ho to lagta hai ki ab hume koi alag nahi kar sakta aur dusre hi pal aap mere se itna door chale jate ho ki aise lagta hai jaise ab hum kabhi saath the hi nahi."

she is fed up with this marriage, her condition,her efforts to stay away from shivaay,don't fall in love with him but each passing second she is falling for him more and more she can't do anything. Tears started to rolled down from her eyes due to her helplessness.Shivaay started to look at her with concern he fills pain is his hurt by seeing tears in her eyes.he thought due to fall she get hurt somewhere.

Shivaay:anika tum thik to ho? tumhe kahi chot lagi hay kya? batao mujhe tumhe kaha dard ho raha hai? mai tumhe aise rote hue nahi dekh sakta.

She just push him and gets up...

Anika:mai thik hoon mujhe neend aa rahi hai mai sona chathi hu.

By saying this she just goes other side of bed and slept their.

Shivaay in mind"ise kya ho gaya? use aise rota dekh mujhe kyun itna bura lag raha hai.shivaay ur going mad plz so ja"

He also goes on other side of bed and sleep.

Here in Gaurikara's room...

Om is thinking about Gauri's word which said in Prinku's room about baby."kya vo saach mai itni innocent hai?kahi Maine use samaj ne mai galati to nahi ki?"

But at the same time Gauri came in room while talking on the phone.

Gauri"are aap aise kaise keh sakte hai ki hum apko bhul gaye? are aap ko pata haina hum aap se kitna pyaar karte hai aap humare liye bahot khass hai.hum jaldi aap se milne ayenge."

Om is listening Gauri's words again missunderstand her"Maine ise samajne mai koi galti nahi ki balki mai ab galti kar beth tha isspe vishwas karke."

He is thinking all this while looking towards Gauri angrily. Gauri sees him cut the call.but before Gauri can ask him something he just get on the bed and sleep.

Gauri to herself "pata nahi inhe kya ho gaya pehle gussese dekh rahe the aur kuch puchne se pehle hi pasar ke so gaye.chalo ab mai bhi so jati hu."

By saying this she also sleeps on the floor.

I know part is somewhat boring but this is need of my story so I have to write this I hope u all like it plz comment and suggestion are always welcome.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Read it in one go. Awesome, waiting for next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Here is the next part...

Chapter-8


Next day in Oberoi mansion...

All running here and there for making the preparation.because Ranveer is coming with his mom to fix his marriage with Priyanka.

Ranveer came with his mom all family greeted them but obros do special welcome of Ranveer like.

Shivomru come to welcome him.

Shivaay first hug him tightly says "welcome Ranveer." With a bright fake smile.

Omru also hugs Ranveer in same way as shivaay and say "welcome jijaji."

Ranveer find all this weired but he didn't said anything he just go and sit with all the family members. All the time all three brother gives death glare to him because of there death glare he started to sweat.prinku notice this she ask him what happened?

Prinku: Ranveer tum thik to ho na tumhe passina kyun chut raha hai?

Ranveer: vo bas garmi ho rahi hay aur kuch nahi...

Prinku:tumhe AC mai bhi garmi lag rahi hai tumhari tabiyat to thik hai na?

Ranveer:haan mai thik hu.

At that time only Oberoi's are present there.all three bahu's are not present there so Ranveer and his mother didn't get introduce to them.

They fix marriage.All r happy.
They started to do sweet feeding ceremony to Priveer.

When brother's get a chance they feed special sweets to Ranveer only made by shivomru.for their favourite and one and only honewala jija.

First shivaay goes to feed Ranveer...

Shivaay: yeh lo Ranveer badam ka halwa this is specially for u made by me and Omru.

By saying this he just put a spoon full of halwa in his mouth when he taste it dhuwa started to come from his ears because shivaay puts lots of mirchi in halwa.after shivaay om comes and he feed him two spoons back to back in his mouth.Ranveer started to get up from his sit to throw the halwa but before that Rudra come.

Rudra:this is not fare jiju abhi mera no. baki hai.

Ranveer: nahi abhi bas ho gaya mai aur meetha bardash nahi kar sakta.

Rudra:dekha aap logone jiju mujhe apna mante hi nahi unhone sab ke hatose khaya par mere nahi.

By saying this he started his fake cry drama.by seeing this Ranveer's mom get melt so she said Ranveer to eat whole halwa.

Ran's mom:Ranveer khalo beta dekho to uska kitna maan hai apne honewale jija ko apne hathonse khilane ka apne honewale sale ko aise naaraz nahi karte.Rudra beta ab tum Ranveer ko pura halwa khilaonge aur Ranveer bina nakhre kiye tumhe ise khatam karna hai.

Ranveer didn't find any opinion so he noded and said yes to eating.Rudra gives a naughty wink to his brother.goes towards Ranveer.

Ranveer: (in his mind)"kyun mom apne bete ki dushman ban gayi ho mai khelta kudta accha nahi lag raha tha apko jo aap mujhe yeh halwa khane ko bol rahi vo bhi pura use khane ke baad mai do din tak bistar se hil bhi nahi paunga hai bhagwan kaha fasa diya mujhe na ugalte ban raha hai na nigalte."

By saying this he eats all halwa with giving faking smiles to others and death glare to shivomru.

After eating whole halwa he goes to washroom to emptied his stomach because of spicy halwa his stomach is hurting.when he came out he saw all three brother's waiting for him outside the washroom.

Rudra: to jijaji kaisa laga halwa?(with a evil smile shivom also gives Ranveer a evil smile)

Ranveer: u guys out of ur mind? Tumne halwa mai mirch kyun milai?

Rudra:to welcome u jijaji.

Ranveer: dekho tumhari iss harkhat ke baad mai yeh rishta tod bhi sakta hu.

Shivaay: don't u dare Ranveer (by saying this he held his neck)

Rudra:Bhayya plz chod do varna priveer anath ho jayega.

Shivaay left ranveer's neck and ask rudra "who is priveer ? and Ranveer ke Marne se vo kaise anath ho jayega?"

Ranveer and Om also gives Rudra questioning look.Rudra does his mai batata hu wala sign and said.

Rudra:are Bhaya yeh prinku aur Ranveer ke bacche ka naam hai ladka hua to priveer and ladki hui to?(and hi started to think what should be girls name?)

Ranveer: Priya...(loudly)

All three started to look towards Ranveer curiously Ranveer feels embarrassed so he started to look here and there.

Rudra:Naughty boy haa naam bhi soch liya waise accha hai jaldi hi tumhe iski jarrurat padegi.

Ranveer: what do u mean by jaldi hi mujhe iski jarurat padegi?

Om:ek to tumse shadi karne ke liye prinku ne kitna drama kiya aur ab tum aise dikha rahe ho jaise tumhe kuch pata hi nahi?

Ranveer: kaise drama?

Shivaay: tumhe nahi pata ki prinku tumhare bacche ki maa bane wali hai?

Ranveer: whattt...Prinku pregnant hai tabhi vo mujhse shaddi karne ke liye tayyar hogayi thi kyunki vo kisi aur ka paap mujhpe thopna chahati thi.

By listening his words shivomru's blood boiled.Rudra give a hard punch to Ranveer because of this Ranveer fall on the ground rudra started to punch him again and said.

Rudra:ek to pehle kishan kanhayya banke hamari bholi bhali Prinku ke saath raslila manayi aur ab khud ko sant bata raha hai halkat ,chepada kahika.

Shivaay: watch ur language Rudra ye sab tune kaha se sikha?

Rudra:anika bhabi.

Shivaay: yeh anika bhi na pata nahi kahase yeh words lati hai jiski vajahse mera pyara baccha bigad raha hai mujhe anika se iss bare mai baat karni padegi.

Ranveer: tum log kuch bhi kaho lekin mai yeh kabhi nahi manunga ki yeh baccha mera hai.

By listening his words all three started to hit him but before that prinku comes in between them.

Prinku:what the hell is happening here?

By listening this all of them turns towards Prinku.

Rudra:vo Prinku yeh ACP keh raha tha ki tujhe honewala baccha uska nahi hai to bas hum log uski akal thikane laga rahe the.

Prinku: Bhayya mujhe Ranveer se akele mai kuch baat karni hai

Shivaay: par Prinku...

Prinku: Bhayya plz...

Shivaay: OK thik hai...Omru chalo.

By saying this three goes from there and Prinku takes Ranveer with her to her room.

Prinku:Ranveer bahar jo bhi mere bhayyon ne tumhare saath behaviour kiya uske liye mai tumse maafi mangti hu.

Ranveer: ek to tum khud aisi ghatiya harkat karti ho aur ab mujhse maafi magne ka natak kar rahi ho?mana padega Priyanka badi achi acting karti ho tum aur yeh kiska baccha tum mujhpe thopna chahati ho? Maine kabhi nahi socha tha ki tum itni giri hui niklogi are aisi harkat karne se pehle ek baar apni family ka to khayal karti.Mai tum jaisi giri hui ladki se kabhi shaadi nahi kar sakta mai abhi jake yeh shadi todta hu rahi tumse badla lene ki baat to vo mai tumse leke rahunga.

After listening his hurtful words prinku feels like nail is pierced in to her heart she want to cry but she compose herself and said.

Prinku: Ruk jao Ranveer tumhe itna kyun bura lag raha hai ki mai pregnant hu tumhe to kaise bhi karke mujhse sirf shadi karni thi na are tumhe to khush hona chahiye because of this pregnancy meri family tumhare saath shaadi ke liye man gayi.yah phir tumhe is baat ka afsos hai ki yeh baccha tumhara nahi balki kisi aur ka hai(by saying this she smirk looking towards him)

Ranveer: How dare u (by saying this he tried to slap Prinku)

Prinku catch his hand and said

Prinku:Don't u dare Ranveer aur mujh par ungli uthane se pehle jara khud mai bhi jhank ke dekho tumhe kya laga Ranveer mujhe kuch pata nahi chalega jo video tumne shivaay bhayya ka mujhe dhamkane ke liye banaya tha vo fake tha us din kisi ki bhi Jaan nahi gayi thi balki us din vaha pe shooting chalu thi gadi ke niche log nahi balki putle aye the so ab mujhe dhamkana band karo aur chup chap is shadi ke liye haa karo.aur agar tumne mare saath shadi nahi ki to mai tumhare aur mere affair ki baat press mai leak kar dungi aur pregnancy report aur DNA test report jo yeh baat sabit kar dega ki yeh baccha tumhara hai phir tum soch lo tumhari kya izzat reh jayegi mai ek Oberoi hu Ranveer agar do saal pehle ke accident ke bare mai maine kisi ko pata nahi chalne diya to yeh baccha tumhara hai yeh sabbit karne maiujhe koi bhi problem nahi hogi yeh tum bhi ach tarahse jante ho so ab niche jao jo ho raha hai use vaise hi chalne do.

Ranveer is just shocked after listening her words.

Prinku: vaise tumhe ek advice deti hu free mai kisi ko itna bhi mat darao ki uska dar hi khatam ho jaye.

Ranveer: Tum mujhse shadi badla lene ke liye kar rahi ho na thik hai shadi ke baad mai tumhari life hell se bhi battar na bana di to mera naam ACP Ranveer Singh Randhawa nahi.I just hate u Priyanka.

By saying this he left her room with furry and anger..

Prinku to herself "I love u Ranveer aur mai bhi apne aap se wada karti hu ki mai tumhari life swarg se bhi khubsurrat banaungi." She said all this with a smile on her face and left the room.

At hall all are present...

Ranveer's mom:to thik hai phir anewale ek haafte mai sagai aur uske ek hafte baad shadi.kyun Ranveer tumhe to koi aitraaz nahi hai na?

Ranveer: No mom.

Dadi:aur Prinku tumhe?

Prinku:mujhe bhi koi problem nahi hai.

After this Ranveer and his mom left Oberoi mansion and all oberoi go to their rooms.





Thanks for voting and commenting on previous chapter I hope u all like this chapter also plz comment guys so that i can understand ur liking it or not.

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Here is the next part...


Chapter-9


At evening in Oberoi mansion...

All r sitting in living room except our three ladies...

At the same time Anika enters in mansion and dadi see her...

Dadi:are anika puttar kitni der kardi ane mai tujhe pata hai Prinku ki shadi tay ho gayi.

Anika:sorry dadi lekin meeting bahot der tak khich gayi sorry aur prinku congratulation.

She goes towards prinku and hugs her.

Prinku:Thanku anika.waise tu konsi meeting ke liye gayi thi?

Shivaay who was listening their conversation raise his ears to know where the hell she spent her day and she also didn't inform him about her whereabouts whole day her phone is also not reachable and even khanna also couldn't track her so he is so much curious to know with whom she is having meeting.but before she can speak saumya and Gauri enters.

Prinku:Are Gauri bhabi,Saumya aap dono din bhar kaha thi?

Saumya: vo sorry Prinku mera ek bahot important kaam tha to jana pada par tum batao tumhari tumhare in laws ke saath meeting kaisi thi?

Gauri: hame bhi maaf kardo hum bhi aap ke saath nahi the vaise hame bhi Jana hai kese lage aapko apke sasural vale?

Both saumya and Gauri ask prinku in teasing way prinku started to blush.
Rudra sees this and said

Rudra:Prinku itna kyun sharma rahi hai jaise tujhe kisi ne honeymoon ke details puch liye ho.

After listing his words all feels awakwards all started to look here and there both shivom hit him lightly in his head and said.

Shivom:shut up rudra.

Rudra:aap dono aise kyun behave kar rahe ho jaise Maine aap dono ke honeymoon ke details puch liye.

After listening Rudra's words both shivom blushes but they compose themselves and takes Rudra's class.

Shivom:stop it rudra aur ek labs apni jubaan se mat nikalna nahi agar tune apna muh band nahi kiya to tujhe ek mahine ke liye protein shake nahi milega.

Rudra:(he gets scared after listening there reply so he goes on opposing) no way u can't do this?

Shivom:yes we can.(both said this with attitude and they can really do this look).

So Rudra just shuts up his mouth.

To runaway from this awkward situation all started to depart their room giving lame excuses but before Aniriya goes prinku stop them.

Prinku:Anika,Gauri bhabi and saumya plz mere kamre mai jaldi se fresh ho ke aao mujhe apse bahot bate karni hai to plz jaldi aao.

Aniriya:Thik hai.

All goes to their room...

In shivika's room

Anika came in her bedroom Shivaay saw her and ask.

Shivaay: Anika kaha thi tum din bhar?

Anika:mai yeh batana apko jaruri nahi samajhti.

By saying this she started yo leave but shivaay hold her wrist.he is getting angered because of her behaviour but he don't want to fight with her so he calm himself and said

Shivaay: Tumhe pata hai na ki aaj prinku ka rishta te hona tha to tumhe yaha hona chahiye tha.

Anika:kis haq se mujhe yaha hona chahiye tha shivaay?

Shivaay:tum meri...I mean prinku ki tum itni acchi dost ho to isi dosti ke rishte se tumhe yaha uske saath hona chahiye tha.

Anika gives him a scrastic smile and said "rishte kaise nibhaye jate hai yeh mujhe acchi tarahse ata hai mujhe yeh aapse sikhne ki koi jarurat nahi" by saying this she freed her hand from his grip and goes to washroom for freshan up from there.

Shivaay:(he talk to himself) ise ho kya gaya hai yeh mujhse aise kyun baat kar rahi hai? yeh ladki na saach mai mujhe pagal kar degi.

By saying so he also left from there.

In rumya' room...

Rudra is doing some exercise at the same time saumya enters in the room while talking on the phone.

Saumya: Ji sir... kal se show mai start kar dungi sir... pakka sir...No sir believe me mai iss bar chodke nahi jaungi kisi bhi halat mai nahi.mai aapko nirash nahi karungi promise sir.Thanku sir for giving me my show back and trusting me again.bye Gn sir.

She smile herself and goes to bathroom without noticing Rudra who is also listening her one sided conversation.

Rudra to himself "wow saumya ne phirse apna show join kiya I missed her so much. (After realising what he said he hit his head lightly and said) Pagal ho gaya hai kya Rudra tu sumo ko kaise miss kar sakta hai? Nahi nahi mai sumo ko nahi Love angel ko miss kar raha tha haan mai love angel ko hi miss kar raha tha par Sumo aur Love angel ek hi hai it means mai sumo ko hi miss kar raha tha (because of his debate between love angel and Sumo he gets frustrated so he shout pulling his hairs) ahhh. Rudra tu na sochna band kar de aur tu protein shake pile".

By saying this he also goes out of the room...

In Gaurikara's room...

Gauri enters in room with a sad face and directly goes towards her sankarji and started to talking with them..

Gauri: Kya sankarji ajkal hame lag raha hai aap apni iss pyari Gauri chirraya ko na bhul gaye hai aap ko to bilkul bhi hamara khayal nahi hai? are aaj hum pura din bhatakte rahi naukri ke chakkar mai aur aapko hum pe bilkul bhi daya nahi ayi are aap jante ho na aama kitni bimmar hai hame unka ilaaj jald se jald karana hai to aap hame naukri dilwa dijiye na itni meharbani kar dijiye apni chirraya pe.

By saying all this she also goes towards washroom without noticing Om who listen all her conversation with her sankarji.

Om to himself " akhir yeh ladki hai kya asliyaat mai Jo vo Maine barille mai kaali thakur ki havali mai dekhi thi ya yeh jo aab dekh raha hu?" He also left his room while thinking about Gauri.

In Prinku's room...

Prinku to herself "aab mai in teeno ke and tak kya karu mai bahot bore ho rahi hu (at the same time something click in her mind and she said) Idea mere pass to timepass karne ke liye mera personal entertainer hai use irrited karne mai Jo maja aata hai na vo to shivaay Bhaya aur anika ka jhagda dekhne mai bhi nahi ata."

By saying this she call someone...

Person:Hello ACP Ranveer is speaking from Mumbai branch...

Prinku:Hi swami.

Ranveer recognise her voice and gets irritated...so he speak in angry tone

Ranveer: Priyanka tumne police station mai phone kyun kiya aur yeh swami kaun hai?

Prinku:are swami to aap ho ab hamari shadi hone ja rahi hai aur to mai apko apne naam se kaise bula sakti hu.police station mai isliye phone kiya kyunki mai janti thi ki mai apko mobile pe call karungi to aap mera phone nahi uthayenge.

Ranveer: (in mind yeh to sahi kaha inse agar yeh mobile paid call karti to mai hargiz iska phone nahi uthata Maine kitna socha tha use bhi yeh teez hai)

Prinku:Hello swami aap sun rahe hai na aap mere bare mai kyun soch rahe hai are mai to abhi apse phone pai baat kijiye na aap mere bare me raat ko sochlijiyega.

Ranveer: (in his mind "isko kaise pata mai uske bare mai soch raha tha?") What tumhe kisne kaha mai tumhare bare mai soch raha tha and stop calling me swami just call me Ranveer OK. aur kya kaam hai tumhara Jo tumne mujhe phone kiya?

Prinku:vo kya hai na mai bore ho rahi thi to socha apse baat kar lu.

Ranveer: what the hell tumne mujhe Dr. Mashur gulati samjha hai Jo tum bore ho rahi ho to tumhe entertain karne ke liye tumhe joke sunao.tum pagal ho gayi ho kya?

Prinku:(giggles after listening his reply and said)haan mai pagal ho gayi hu pyaar mai(by saying this she again giggles)

Ranveer:Hasna band karo aur yeh kaisi behki behki baat kar rahi ho u know na I hate u.

Prinku:But I love u veer.

Ranveer: ab yeh veer kaun hai? haan ab samajh mai aya jarur tumne pee rakhi hai tum apne ashiq yani tumhare bacche ke baap ko call kar rahi thi lekin galtise mera no. Lag gaya hai na sahi kaha na maine (but in his heart he want his assumption gets fail and she actually called him and not her lover)

Prinku:(just get hurt after listening to his words so she said) haan mujhe apne pyar se apne bacchon ke honewale baap se hi baat karni thi isiliye Maine call...

But before she spoke further she sees Aniriya coming so she cuts call hurriedly without completing conversation.

Prinku:OK bye .

Ranveer in his mind I know ki hamare beech kabhi koi rishta nahi ban sakta nafrat ke alawa to phir bhi mai kyun umeed kar raha tha...he lost in his thinking.



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CHAPTER-10(a)


Here is next update...

Priyanka's room...

Gauri came to prinku's room and knocks the door prinku seeing anika..

Prinku:Gauri Bhabi app plz andar aeiye.aur haan age se mere room mai ane ke liye apko knock karne ki jaruraat nahi hai aap bina meri permission ke bhi mere room mai aasakti hai.(she said all this with a smile)

Gauri:(with a smile while entering the room) vo hame laga ki aap kisi sai jaruri baat kar rahi ho so humne darwaja kaht khatana hi sahi samjha.

Prinku:vaise yeh anika aur saumya kaha hai?

Gauri:vo dono ati hi hongi. Kya hum aapse kuch pooch sakte hai?

Prinku:pehli baat aap mujhe aap kehna chod dijiye aur mujhe tum kehke bulaye.aur rahi baat apke sawal ke bare mai to aap mujhse kuch bhi pooch sakti hai aapka haq hai mujhe pe.

Gauri:thik hai mai abse tumhe tum kehke hi bulaungi.aur shukriya ap... mera matlab hai tumne hame aapna kaha ajse pehle hamse kabhi kisine apna pan nahi jataya.

Prinku:are ab yeh senti baate band kijiye...

Before she can speak further someone speak from behind "aur kya hum tumhare apne nahi hai Gauri?"

Both Gauri and Priyanka looks towards door and saw anika and saumya standing their with a sad face.Gauri felt bad after looking both of them's sad faces.

Gauri:Are didi aap hame galat samajh rahi hai aap hamari apni hai hum apke liye kuch bhi kar sakte hai.

Saumya:(with sad face)kya mai apki kuch nahi lagti?

Gauri:Are nahi saumya aisi baat nahi bhale hi hum ek dusre ko itne acchi tarikese nahi jante par tumhare saath bhi hamara utna hi gehra rishta hai jitna ki prinku aur didi ke saath kyunki aap sabse hamara dil ka rishta hai aur hamari maa kehti hai ki jinse hum dilse jude hote hai vo khoon ke rishte se bhi jyada karib aur ajij hote hai.

After listening her talk both anika and saumya gets emotional.They goes towards her and give a tight hug to Gauri.All three are having tears in their eyes out of happiness.Prinku is also looking towards them with a smile on her face and tears of joy in her eyes.Anika saw her and also calls her to join the hug.so all four hugs each others so tightly like they will be going to share a fevicoal ka jode no one can break it.

Anika:vaise moment chala gaya hai aur ab yeh awkward lag raha hai.

All four brake the hug and then looks towards each other then started to laugh on their stupidness.

Anika:Vaise tumhare life mai hum jitne apne hai usi tarahse tum bhi humrae liye apni ho aur tumne sahi kaha dil se jude rishte kitne bhi koshish karle vo nahi tut te kyun prinku aur saumya?

Prinku:haan anika ne sahi kaha.

Saumya:di ne sahi kaha hai aur aaj mai bahot khush ho jo bahgwanji ne mujhe Gauri di ke roop mai ek aur behen mujhe de di.

Prinku:ab yeh senti baate band karo aur Gauri bhabi aap mujhse kya puchna chahti thi?

Gauri:are vo hum yeah puchna chahte the ki Anika didi tumse badi hai phir tum unhe naam se kyun pukarti ho?

After hearing this anika and prinku looks towards each other and smile..

Anika:mai batati hu tumhe.Are yeh jo tumhari khidki tod jethani yani ki mai pehle prinku ki dost hai aur baad mai bhabi.

Gauri:Matlab?

Prinku:actually anika shaadi se pehle mere college mai canteen chalaya karti thi so hum pehle best friend bane aur phir bhayya se shaadi ke baad yeh meri bhabi bani.lekin yeh meri bhabi se pehle meri dost hai so isiliye mai ise anika hi kehke bulati hu.

Gauri:ohhh...

Prinku:vaise aap teeno subhse kaha gayi thi?

Saumya:I get my job back as RJ.

Prinku and anika:congratulation.

Gauri:vaise ehhh RJ ka hota hai?

Saumya:are Gauri didi vo jo radio pe nahi ate kya?

Gauri:are haan ab samajh mai aya vo hi na jo radio pe gane bajate hai aur bahot kuch achi cheeze bhi batate hai vaise hame radio sunana bahot hi pasand hai. Haan apko uu ka kehte hai... haan cangratulation.

Saumya:vo congratulation hota hai didi.

Gauri:vahi to kaha cangratulation...

Saumya:chodiye. Thank u.

Anika:vaise mujhe bhi bahot bada shaadi ka order mila hai.

Prinku and saumya:Congratulation.

Gauri:cangratulation.

Anika:Thank u. Vaise Gauri tu bhi to bahar gayi thi na?

Gauri:haan didi hum bhi kaam dhoondne hi gaye the lekin hame nahi mila.

Prinku:koi baat nahi bhabi aap ko jaldi hi kaam miljayega.

Saumya:haan didi prinku sahi keh rahi hai aaj nahi to kal apko jarur kaam mil jayega.

Anika:vaise Gauri tujhe konse kaam ate hai?

Gauri:hame Saab much ata hai koi bhi kaam bol dijiye. jaise ki silayi,kadai,khaana banana,bartan majna,ghar ki saffai aur bahot kuch.
Aur ha...nachna hame bahot pasand hai are hame to barelliye ki Madhuri Dixit bhi kehte hai.aap Kahe to him abhi apko dikhate hai nachke.

All three gets excited and said " kyun nahi " prinku goes and start music player. She plays nachle nachle songs

(All plz imagine Gauri doing dance on nachle and at the end other three also joins her.)

After ending songs all three claps hand and started to praise Gauri.

Anika:are Gauri kya khidki tod nachi hai tu.

Saumya: sahi mai di aap bahot hi accha dance karti hai.

Prinku:bhabi aap to mindblowing hai.

Gauri:Thanku.

Prinku:vaise hamare college mai ek annual function hai to usme hame ek group dance perform karna hai to kya aap hamko dance sekhayengi?

Gauri:kyun nahi ham jarrur aapko dance sikha denge.

Prinku:per problem yeh hai ki annual function able paanch din mai hai yani ki aap me pass surf chaar din honge sikhane ke liye to aap chaar din mai hame dance Sikha sakti hai?

Gauri:are ham harharai me tum logon ko itna accha nachna sikhayenge vaha pe surf tumhari hi va vahi ho.

Prinku:Thank u bhabi(she goes and hug Gauri)

Gauri:is me thanku ki kya baat hai him tumhari madad kar sake isi mai hamari kushi hai.









So here is next update I know it is boring but I just want to show the bond between these four and track of anika and Gauri family will take time to come in the story.so plz vote and comment.

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