New FF ISHQBAAZ/DBO( chapter-10(a) on page 10 on 11/06/2017) - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Lovely_Bajwa_

loveddd it!!❤️

plzzz continue soon!!

Thanks for lovely comment.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi guys most of u are missing Gauri and Om tomorrow's update is full on Om and Gauri till then just good night and have sweet dreams of u r special couple rikara.
Edited by haramimat - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi friends here is the next update of ur favourite couple so enjoy it.i hope u all like it.


CHAPTER-4(b)

SOME TIMES BEFORE IN OMKARA'S ROOM

Om and Gauri comes in the room.she try to make om sleep on bed at same time prinku also comes there with clothes for gauri.

Prinku:Bhabi ...

Gauri:ha...

Prinku:vo mai apke liye yeh kapde layi thi aap change kar lijiye.

Gauri:shukriya par aap hame bhabi maat bulaye apke bhayya ko accha nahi lagega.

Prinku:agar bhabi vala kaam karogi to bhabi bulaungi na aur vaise bhi bhaya kuch bhi kahe lekin maine to apko dil se apni bhabi mana hai.

Gauri:par tumhe to yeh bhi nahi pata ki hamari shadi sach mai tumhare bhaya se hui hai yah nahi phir tum itne viswas se hume apni bhabi kaise manti ho?

Prinku:mujhe anika pe pura bharosa hai vo kabhi aisa jhoot nahi bolegi.aur apki ankhon mai apki sachai najar ati hai.mujhe nahi pata bhaya ne apse shadi ki baat kun chupayi lekin aap jaan lijiye chahe vo mane yah na mane magar aj apne jo kiya hai uske baad mare liye aap hamesha mari bhabi rahogi.to jayein aur change kijiye aura ram kariye.

By saying all this she goes from there.

Gauri feels happy that someone accept her she goes from there to change.after coming from bathroom she saw om sitting on sofa and smiling to himself only.

Gauri:omkaraji ab aap so jaon .

Om like an obedient child goes towards his bed and laid on it.after this gauri start to go out from the room then om stop her.

Om:ruko kaha ja rahi ho?

Gauri:bahar.

Om:nahi tum kahi nahi jaogi tum yahi mere pass rahogi varna mai bhi sounga nahi.

After saying this he also started to get off from the bed.

Gauri:are rukiye aap yeh kya kar rahe hai ? aap so jaye hum kahi nahi jayenge hum yahi rahenge.

Om:pakka.

Gauri:ha baba pakka Shankar ji ki kasam.

She started to go towards sofa.

Om:are vaha kaha ja rahi ho yaha aao mere pass.

He said to her by patting on other side of bed

Gauri gets shock"hey Shankar ji kaha phasa diya hame."

Om:aao na itni der kyun laga rahi ho jaldi aao varna mai vaha ake sounga sofe pai tumhare saath.

Gauri gets shocked after listening him she looks toward sofa calculating the space on sofa thinking of result in mind when om going to come and sleep on sofa.

Om:aa rahi ho ya mai aau?

He started to get off from the bed

Gauri suddenly coming out of shock "nahi hum aa rahe hai...hum aa rahe hai."she goes towards bed nervously smiling towards omkara.she just sit at the end of the bed.

Gauri:dekhiye ab hum yahi hai ab aap so jayein.

Om looks toward her and suddenly pulls her towards him she lost the balance and land on him they share a cute eye lock.om just smile cutely looking towards her he is looking like a kid who got his favourite toy to play.suddenly gauri came out of the eyelock she push om away gently and compose herself and sit near him on the bed properly.

Gauri:yeh kya kar rahe the aap?

Om:aur mai kya karta tum kitni door baithi thi.ab dekho tum bhi so jaon aur ha mere sone ke baad mujhe chodke maat jana ok.

Gauri:ok.

After some time Gauri looks towards om and see him looking towards her very lovingly.she like this but she get confuse why he is looking towards her like this?

Gauri:aap hame aise kyun dekh rahe hai?hamare chehre pai kuch laga hai kya?

Started to clean her face.om looking towards her just smile.

Om:nahi kuch nahi laga tumhare face pai.

Gauri:to aap hame ghur ghur ke kyun dekh rahe hai?

Om:tumhe pata hai tum bahot beautiful ho aur cute bhi just like a Barbie doll.

Gauri after hearing this in her mind" beautiful matlab khoobsurat aur cute matlab pyari aur kya kaha ba..babi haan babi doll aur doll yane gudiyaan.hay dayya hum to sharam ke mare mar jayenge.jarur humne bahot hi jyada punya ki rahe hoge jo Shankar ji ne hame yeh din bhi dikhaya jaha omkara ji hamari itni sari tarrif kar rahe hai".she started to blush.

Om is looking towards her he see her blushing he find her so cute so in this he kiss her on her cheek and close his eyes and sleeps like a innocent child.

Gauri who is in her own thinking comes out of her trance after omkara's little stunt she open her mouth in shock and placing her hand on her cheek and start to register in her mind what happened is real or her dream.

Om who is doing drama of sleeping looks towards gauri from the corner of his eye.

Om:muh band karlo varna makhi chali jayegi.

Gauri looks towards him and find him sleeping. She came out of her shock register herself comfortably on bed and looking towards om thinking in mind "Omkaraji sote hue kitne pyare lagte hai ek dam chote bachhe jaise lekin jab yeh gussa hote hai to bhayankar lagte hai.ji karta hai ki bas inhe aise dekhti rahu pata nahi jab yeh hosh mai aye to kya karenge pata nahi phir kabhi aisa muka milega bhi ya nahi apne pati ke pass rehne ka?"after sometime she also sleeps near him.


so please comment guys ur comment motivate me to write it so plz comment u like it or not.

And thanks for ur comment on previous chapter.

Edited by haramimat - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#24
it awesome
om gauri ki beauty ko ettna tarif ke ki om toh ettne baat hi bataya tak nahi gauri ( not chulbul) se in dbo
thanks for rikara special part
Edited by smrithy14 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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so cute, omkara is being so cute and lovely.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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hi friends here is next part .i hope u all like it.

CHAPTER-4(c)

After some time in Om's room

Gauri and om sleeping facing eachother om started to open his eyes slowly he feels his head heavy he started to get up but while doing this his eyes landed on gauri who is sleeping next to him peacefully.he started to stare her .

In his mind"wow she is looking like angel.so much pure,innocent. no one can think that she is cheap girl if he don't know her reality".after realizing some thing he started to talking to himself"why I am thinking about her.Om tuto kaam se gaya ek taraf us chulbul ko chuo to current lag ta hai tujhe aur dusri taraf tu us ghatiya ladki ke bare mai soch raha hai."

He started to get off from the bed but he realize that something is pulling him back so he started to look here and there he find his hand in tangled with the other hand he looks towards the person he again get 440 volts jhatka

Om:what the helll?????yeh yaha kya kar rahi hai?

Om tried to wake her up.

Om:Gauri Gauri utho.

Loudly called her to wake up but gauri is gauri listening to the omkara's voice she didn't get disturbed.

Om"ladki hai yah kumbhkaran jo mere itne jor se chillane par bhi jara sib hi nahi hili?'

Om freed his hand get off from the bed goes towards bathroom and came with a bucket full of water and he throw all the water on gauri.

Gauri get shocked due to getting sudden splash of water on her whole body that also she is in her sleep .

Gauri:bacho bachao baad agayi hey shankarji hame baccha lijiye hame nahi marna itni jaldi dekhiye hum abhi itte chottese to hai abhi duniya dekhi hi kitni hai humne hame bacha lijiye.

Om looking gauri's nautanki started to laugh loudly.due to his laughing gauri open her eyes and realize she is not drawning.she see herself fully drenched.she understand who is culprit behind all this.so she get angered. and.

Gauri getting out off the bed march towards om

Gauri:yeh koi tarika hai kisi ko uthane ka?

Om didn't controlled his laughter so he just keep laughing .omkara's laughing add fuel in her anger. So she in her ful strength sarted to shout on Om.

Gauri:Ek jhaap mai sat jayein be deewar pe.

By saying this she tried to slap him but he caught her hand in time.

Om: How dare u?

Om also shout on her with eqaual strength due to this whole Oberoi mansion get suprise thinking what is happening so all the member started to march towards Om's room.

Gauri:app chilla kyun rahe hai?

Om still holding her hand.

Om: what are u doing here? vo bhi mere kamre mai?

Gauri:apko kuch yaad nahi?

Om:kya yaad nahi mujhe aur tum yaha kya kar rahi ho ?tumhari himmat kaise hui yaha ane ki? Maine bola tha na ki hamri shadi ka mere liye koi matlab nahi hai?

Gauri is just registering in mind what is happening infront of her.

In meanwhile all family members comes in their room.see the condition of room bed is drenched even gauri is dreanched.Om is holding gauri's hand like stopping her from hitting him.

Shivaay:Om...

Anika:Gauri...

Both looks towards door all family is standing there staring at them and registering in mind what is happening there.

Om leaves Gauri's hand.

Both Shivaay and Rudra comes towards Om.

Anika goes towards gauri.

All family members also comes in the room.

Dadi looking towards Gauri and Om tum dono jaldi tyyar hoke hall mai aao mujhe tumse baat karni hai?

All leveas from there except youngsters.

Shivaay:what are u doing Om?

Rudra:kya bhaya apbhi apko kamre ki halat dekh ke nahi lagta O holi ki practice kaar rahe hai.

Rudra said all this winking towards om and gauri.he also further say

Rudra:this is not fare O apne muje nahi buliya.he said making puppy face again making expression like he understand something"Ohhh ab samaj mai aya O ko gauri bhabi ke saath akele holi khelne ki practice karni thi hai na O?"

Om and gauri both feels embarresed.

Both om and shivaay at same time "shut up rudra."

Shivaay:vase Om tera bed gila kyun hai?

Om:yeh kumbhkaran ki neend so rahi thi to ise uthane ke liye maine uspe pani dala.

All gets shocked

Anika:how mean Om..

Shivaay:haan tumhe to bura lagega hi kyunki tum bhi usi ki tarah soti ho lady kumbhkaran.

Anika:apki himmat kaise hui mujhe Kumbhkaran bolne ki Mr.jealous singh Oberoi.apna jalte ho meri neend se kyunke mujhe achese gehri neend ati hai aur aap to bass neend mai bhi taddi marte hoge jiski vajhse neend bhi apse koso dur bahagti hai .

Shivaay:mai aur jaleous vo bhi tumse "come out of dream paanika."

All Rudra,Om and even Gaur at same time"Shut up u both."before shivaay and anika say something further at same time dadi"bacchoo jaldi aao".

"All ok dadi hum aa rahe hai."


I don't know guys but i am feeling that ur getting bored by reading this ff plz if this is happening plz tell me i will try to write it litttle bit more entertaing.

Edited by haramimat - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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nice part, what does dadi want to say?
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Authors Note:
Friends ur not liking my story plz tell ur response low is I don't understand I shall update this story or not in this forum.if ur having suggestion regarding this story plz tell me.suggestion are always welcome.😔
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Posted: 8 years ago
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it was awesome as always
update soon next part and make it long plz
dadi ke decision keliye wait kar rahi hu
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Posted: 8 years ago
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please continue the story!!! i am in love with gauri and omkara!! honestly cant wait to read more!!

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