New FF ISHQBAAZ/DBO( chapter-10(a) on page 10 on 11/06/2017)

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krutik12345

@krutik12345

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Please continue writing the story...I love reading ur story👍🏼

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Pallavi

@haramimat

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

here is the next chapte. i hope u all enjoy it.

CHAPTER-4(d)

Anika takes Gauri with her.Rudra also goes down in hall.so now just only Shivaay and Om is present in the room.

Om:Shivaay yeh sab kya hai?yeh ladki mere kamre main kya kar rahi thi?aur meri to Svetlana se shadi ho rahi thi to mai yaha kase?mujhe kuch yaad kyun nahi aa raha hai?

Shivaay explain him all the incident except Tej's and he also didn't tell him that Chulbul and Gauri is same person.

Om:shivaay sorry maine tum donose itni badi baat chupayi.

Shivaay:mujhe tumpe bharosa hai om juror iske piche koi vajah hogi jo tune aisa kiya.Main tujhse naaraj nahi hu mere bhai.

Both hugs eachother

Same time rudra comes there

Rudra in dramatic way...

Rudra:What the hell r u two doing?

Om and Shivaay:what we are Doing?

Rudra:I didn't expect this from both of u.u hurt a lot me today.

He says all this making a very hurtful face.Both Shivaay and Om didn't get it what they did which hurts rudra this much.Rudra said again making cry baby face.

Rudra: u r doing Obro moment without me u both are too bad and started to shedding his invisible tears.

Om: shut up rudra.

Rudra:lambe baal vale prani kuch to naya bola karo aur mujhe shut up kyun bol rahe ho ek to u both hurt me and I am saying the truth u are saying me to shut my mouth.but O saach sach hota hai vo kisi ke bhi chupanese nahi chupta vo samne aa jata hai? Aap dono paraya dhaan ho gaye ho.hey bhagwan ab mera kya hoga mere bhai mujhe bhul gaye...

Shivaay:just stop this rudra.apna drama band kar. aura ab aja apne bhayon ko hug nahi karega?

Rudra:no u both hurt me. So I am not going to hug u.

Shivaay looking towards Om smiling michiveously

Shivaay:om humne rudra ko hurt kiya hai aur vo hame hug nahi karna chahata.

Om:haan shivaay...

Both started to to move towards rudra with a naughty smile on there face.

Rudra:yeh app mujhe aise kyun dekh rahe ho?

Before rudra could understand anything both brother take him in bone crushing hug.

Shivaay:so hum ne tumhe hurt kya hain ...

Om:aur vo kyat ha hum paraya dhaan hogaye hai...

Shivaay:sach chupaye nahi chupta.

Both say all this tightening the hold around rudra.

Rudra:ab bas bhi karo Bachee ki jaan loge kya.

Both loose there hold and all three share a O bro moment.

Shivaay:vaise Rudra tu yaha kyun aya tha?

Rudra:are haan vo main yeh kehne aya tha ki dadi aap dono ko bula rahi hai neeche.

Om:aur tu hame yeh saab ab barta raha hai?

Rudra make his most famous puppy face.

Shivaay and om both gives him a unbelievable looks .all three goes from there towards the hall.

All r present there

Dadi:To Om tumne apni shadi ki baat sabse kyun chupayi?

Om:vo dadi main is shadi ko nahi manta maine vo shadi bas Gauri ko bachane ke liye ki thi.

Dadi:puttar shadi ek pavitra rishta hai use rab ke bina kisi se bhi nahi jod sakte agar tum dono ki shadi hui hai to isme uski marji hai.aur mai chahati hunk i rab ke jode hue us rishtey ka tum dono samman karo.

Om:par dadi aap iss ladki ko nahi janti yeh Oberoi khandan ki bahu bane ke layak nahi hai.

By listening to Om words gauri feels gets very hurt but she just hide her pain

Gauri:Dadiji hum apka bada samman karte hai lekin majboori mai jode rishta sirf bojh hota hai aur hum kisi pe bojh nahi bana chahte.

Omkara looks towards Gauri disgustingly thinking she is just doing a drama.

Om:mai iske saath khada bhi nahi hona chatha dadi aur app mujhe iske saath apni life bitane ko bol rahi?

Gauri gets hurt listening omkara's word also she get angered listening how Omkara is judging her without knowing her.so in anger she said...

Gauri:hume bhi tumhare saath rehne ka koi shauk nahi hai jata dhari hippi.

Rudra:wow bhabi nice name jata dhari hippi.

Om:shut up rudra aur use bhabi mat bulao vo tumhri bhabhi bane ke layak nahi hai vo.

Anika:Om...

Om just stop his rude comment on gauri listening anika.

Dadi:mujhe kuch nahi suna tum dono ki shaddi hui hai to tumhe saath rehna padega.

Om:dadi agar aap is shadi ki vahse mujhe iske saath jod rahi ho to mai yeh shadi tod deta hu.mujhe divorce chahiye.shivaay tu abhi khanna ko bolke mere aur iske divorce paper banva.

Anika:Om tum gauri ke saath aisa nahi kar sakte.

Shivaay:Om aisa kar sakta hai use yeh rishta mana hai nahi yeh vo decide karega.

Anika just nodded her head said in mind(typical shivaay singh oberoi)

Janvi:Om tum yeh galat kar rahe ho sorry to say per iss decision mai mai tumhre saath nahi hu.

Rudra:o main yahi kahunga aap wrong kar rahe ho.

Pinky:Oh my mata...om tu bilkul sahi kar raha hai ek fatichar dusri fatichar ka hi saath degi(pinky said this line looking towards anika and gauri) Tu unki taraf dhyan mat de tu tension na le mai isme tere saath hu.

Shakti as usual didn't say anything.

Priyanka:O bhaya maine gauri ko apni bhabi mana hai to vo hi hamesha meri bhabi rahegi.

Tej:pehli baar main tumse sahmat hu Om.

Dadi:bas karo tum sab log. Om agar tum yeh rishta nahi chate to thik hai lekin tum gauri ko talakh tabhi doge jab vo khud uske liye manege.to gauri batao kya tumhe talakh chahiye.

Gauri:haaa(ham apki khusi ke liye kuch bhi kar sakte hai chahe iske liye hame apse hamesha ke liye duoor hona bhi manjoor hai)

Dadi:thik hai lekin tum dono ko talakh nahi ho jata tabtak tum dono ek dusre ke saath rahoge aur is rishte ka samman karoge.

Om:par dadi..

Dadi:yeh mera hokum hai om.

Om:thik hai dadi.

At the same time anika's phone ring so she goes from there to attain the call.all retired to there room one by one.Gauri also goes from there.while coming inside anika meet gauri.

Anika:kaha ja rahi ho gauri?

Gauri:main apna saman lane ja rahi hu jaldi vapis aa jaungi.

Anika:thik hai.

Anika goes towards dadi's room happily.

Anika:Dadi vo kal a rahi hai.

Dadi:thik hai.

By saying this anika goes from there.

Dadi:rabji mere poto ko akal dijiye ki unhe pata chal sake unke pass khara sona hai hai jo vo apni bewakoofiyon ki vajhse se khone ja rahe hai.

Here in prinkus room...

Prinku on phone:kya vo agaya hai?

Person:ha.

Prinku:thik hai to mai arahi hu.

plz comment guys so that i can understand ur liking it or not.as always ssuggestions are welcome

so friends here is the last chapter of this week.next whole week i can't give u any updates because of some personal reosons till then enjoy this.plz miss me.and guess the future track of story till then bye bye...

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Sammy

@sammy4u

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+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#33

wow, good that finally om and gauri will stay together

but i am also happy that gauri divorce ke liye ready hogayi, warna om ko wapas lagta ki woh drama kar rahi hai

waise aa kaun raha hai???

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Pallavi

@haramimat

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: sammy4u
wow, good that finally om and gauri will stay together
but i am also happy that gauri divorce ke liye ready hogayi, warna om ko wapas lagta ki woh drama kar rahi hai
waise aa kaun raha hai???

Thanks for lovely comment about new entry keep guessing.

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smrithy14

@smrithy14

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

interesting
so om and gauri under one roof awesome
will wait dear take u r time

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Pallavi

@haramimat

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Thanks for ur lovely comment friends.sorry because I can't reply individually on each comment.

Sneak Peak:

Priyanka:mai tumse shadi karne ke liye tayyar hu.

Person:dekha tumhe mere samne akhir jukhna pad hi gaya na agar paehle man jati to tumhe itni pareshani jhelni nahi padti.

Person started to laugh evily looking prinku's helpness.

Prinku in mind "jitna hasna hai has lo shadi ke baad tumhe pata chalega ki Priyanka Singh Oberoi kya cheez hai.yeh khel tune shuru kiya tha ise ab mai khatam karungi."

Rudra:mai ek kamre mai tumhare saath nahi reh sakta.

Person:then just get lost from here.mujhe neend arahi hai.

By saying this person throw rudra out of the room and closed the door on his face.

Rudra first get shocked and then in anger started to banging on door but he didn't get any response so he just leave from there angrily.

Here is sneak peak of upcoming part so tell ur viewes on this by commenting guys.hope u enjoy it.

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Sammy

@sammy4u

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+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#37

wow, this is nice sneak pea, do update soon

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Pallavi

@haramimat

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Here is the next part

Chapter-5(a)

Prinku came out of her car and started to walk in the direction of police station.

Hawaldar:madam apko kisse milna hai?

Prinku:ACP Ranveer Singh Randhawa.

Hawaldar:sahab biji hai vo apse nahi mil sakte.

Prinku:app unhe kahiye ki Priyanka Singh Oberoi aye hai unka sara schedule free hojayega.

Prinku said all this to hawaldar with a smile.after seeing prinku's confidence hawaldar goes to Ranveer's cabin.

Hawaldaar:may i come in sir.

Ranveer:(without looking towards him)bolo kya kaam hai?

Hawaldar:sir vo bahar ek ladki apse Milne ayi hai.

Ranveer:Maine kaha na tumse ki mai busy hu to kisi ko mujhse Milne ki permission mat dena.

Hawaldar:sir maine bhi unse yahi kaha ki app biji hai par vo man hi nahi rahi thi.

Ranveer:shindey apse ek ladki sabhali nahi jati agar koi ake mujhse milne ki jid karega to tum sabko yaha bhej doge kabhi to apna dimmag use kiya karo jao us ladki ko bol do ki mai abhi busy hu agar use koi kaam hai vo tumhe kehde.ha agar uski koi shikayat hai to jake uski problem solve karo am I clear.

Shinday:yes sir.

After saying this he started to go from there.but same time ranveer stops him saying "waise us ladki me apna naam kya bataya?"

Shindey:Priyanka Singh Oberoi.

Ranveer: r u mad pehle nahi bata sakte the

He goes out from his cabin hurriedly like he is going to miss something important.when ranveer came out he see prinku standing at one corner nervously looking downward.he also see that some criminals are looking at her with lustful eyes and some male male inspector looking at her like a lovesick puppy waiting for her just one glance on them.he just boils with anger thinks in mind "How dare they looks towards prinku like this? abhi unki ankhe nikaal ke gotiya khelne ka man kar raha hai.control ranveer tu a is a much nahi kar sakta vaise tujhe kabse prinku ki itni fikar hone lagi aur vo Priyanka she Prinku kabse ban gayi tumhare liye." At the same time prinku looks at ranveer he gets out of his mind battle he see towards his surrounding and after seeing all people his bloods boil (as u know already how all are looking towards prinku)he goes towards her catch her hands started to drag her with him towards his cabin with murderous look to all males in station.looking ranveers's murderous look all male gets scared take off their gaze from prinku.

Shindey:sir par aap to biji the mam ki problem mai solve karat hu.

Ranveer:(angrily) just don't disturb me till I am with miss.Oberoi. understood.

Shindey: with scared voice ji sir.

Ranveer drags Prinku with him.before going inside prinku gave shindey I told u already wala looks.

In ranveer's cabin

Ranveer:why u came here?

Prinku:(making serious face)mujhe tumse important baat karni thi.aur tumhe koi problem hai mere yaha ane se?

Ranveer:(hiding his emotion)tumhe yaha pehle hi ana chahiye tha kyunki ek gunhegaar ki asli jaga jail mai hoti hai.Lenin thik hai agar tum jail nahi gayi to kya hua mai tumhari life jail se bhi battar bana dunga.(after saying this he smile evily looking towards prinku)vaise tumhe mujhse kya important baat karni thi?

Prinku:(prinku just felt hurt listening ranveer's hurtful words but she compose herself and moivate herself prinku tu Priyanka Singh oberoi tu kamzor nahi pad sakti jis Priyanka ko tumne apne andar do saal se chupaya hai uska bahar ane ka waqt agaya hai. Tujhe yeh karna hai apni family ke liye apne bhayon ke liye sana ke liye Jo Teri vajhse do saal she coma mai hai aur...looking towards ranveer apne pyar ke liye.)

Ranveer: hello Priyanka Jo bhi bolna hai jaldi bolo mujhe kaam hai aur ha ayenda tumhe kabhi mujhse baat karni hai to mujhe call kiya karo u muau uthake ane ki jarrurat nahi hai yeh mera police station koi park nahi Jo tum yaha jab tumhara man kiya to tehalne ajayogi.

Prinku in mind (looking towards ranveer hi tumhre isi gussene to mera dil chura liya hai my jealous singh randhawa started to give ranveer lovesick puppy look.)

Ranveer:ab bologi bhi ya nahi.

Prinku:ha vo mai (making a i am so innocent and nervous face)tumse ye kehne ayi thi ki mai tumse shadi karne ke liye tayyar hu.

Ranveer first get shocked and then compose himself and said.

Ranveer:dekha tumhe mere samne akhir jukhna pad hi gaya na agar paehle man jati to tumhe itni pareshani jhelni nahi padti.

Ranveer started to laugh evily looking prinku's helpness.

Prinku in mind (jitna hasna hai has lo shadi ke baad tumhe pata chalega ki Priyanka Singh Oberoi kya cheez hai.yeh khel tune shuru kiya tha ise ab mai khatam karungi.she also smiles evily in her mind)

Friends r u liking prinku and ranveer's character the way I am writing and r u all liking the plot between prinku and ranveer?

Plz tell me friends so that I can write this story in more better way eagerly waiting for ur reply.