New FF ISHQBAAZ/DBO( chapter-10(a) on page 10 on 11/06/2017) - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
#11
Wow...Suprb update...what a twist...waiting for next part...cant stay calm...now suggest some way to kill time till u update the next...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Author note:
OK guys before next update here is a task for u all can anyone guess who has taken the place of OM as groom in mandap?
Keep commenting eagerly waiting for u r reply.
Thanks for u r comments.they are giving me so much motivation to write.so thank u for this and if u have any sugesstion plz tell me.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13
omg what happened?...om kahan gaya?
and uske jagah kaun aake baitha hai phir?
don't tell me khanna?!!!!..uske alawa toh koi aur banda available nahi hosakta oberoi mansion mein😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14
It was hilariours

Person from behind can be om ?

Loving it update soon

U are superb dear
Edited by pt311288 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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hi guys thanks for ur lovely comments
here is next chapter

CHAPTER-3

Suddenly someone said from behind kyunki om waha nahi hai

All turn towards the voice all at same time kyaaa?

Shivaay:Anika tum kaab ai? aur tumhe kaise keh sakti ho ki yeh Om nahi hai?

Anika:Billu ji apki ankhen na kharab ho gayi hai aap plz jake check karvaye.apko dikh nahi raha maine abhi enter kiya to mai abhi ayi hun.rahi baat Om key aha na hone ki to vo mujhe isliye pata hai kyunki maine hi uska kidnap karvaya tha.agar nahi karvati to aj to OM ke shahid hone ke chance jyada the so I can't take risk.vaise bhi Om apke jitna chalakh nahi hai jo iss shaadi se bachne ke liye khud kuch kar sake aur apne khair chaliye chodiyen... Rudy jaon aur Om ko apne saath lao.

Rudy before going from there he just gives all his smart vala look and goes from there.

Shivaay then turn towards anika

Shivaay:mere ankhen thik hai and vo kya keh rahi thi tum mere bare mai bolo jara mai bhi bhi to sunu.

Ani:dekhiye billuji mera muh maat khulvayein ye.

Shivaay:nahi mujhe sunna hai tum kya keh rahi thi aur tumne rudra ko bataya is plan ke bare mai aur mujhe kyun nahi bataya?

Anika:thik hai aap suna chahte hai na to suniye .apna ek no. ke billu hai...aise to harbar tadi jhadte rehte hai ki I am shivaay singh oberoi main ye karunga vo karunga lekin jaab akal lagane ki baat ati hai to vo apse hota nahi hai.mai yeh soch rahi hunk i aap itni badi deal kaise crack karte ho apne iss billu dimag ke saath udar jaan se bhi jyada pyara bhai sucide karne jar aha tha apke najron ke samne aur aap yaha khade hoke senti shakal banake khade ho gaye.apka na kuch nahi ho sakta.

Shivaay tried to say something but no words came to in his mouth he is some what agree to anika agar aj anika nahi hoti to om ki shaadi Svetlana se ho jati.

Anika :aur rahi baat apko na batane ki to saab ho jane ke baa aap sab kaam ki footage khaa jate ho isliye nahi bataya.

Rudra:Bhabhi...

All looks towards rurda

He is standing there with om.om is literally leaning on rudy and smiling to himself.

Anika:rudy yeh om aise kyun behave kar raha hai?

Rudy giving a sheepish smile and making a innocent puppy face" vo om na jabardasti bahar ane ki koshish kar rahe the to maine unhe rudys special punch pilaya tha jiska effect abhi utra nahi"

All at same time rudraaa...

All this while Svetlana is standing alone in mandap and getting red with each passing second turns her face towards groom and said"agar om vaha hai to tum kon ho?"

All looks towards the mysterious person curiously thinking in in mind who is he?

The person remove sehra from his face all just gasp and said "KHANNAAA"

Khanna stood there looking downwards

Anika:ha khanna maine hi inhe bola tha.

Svetlana:how dare u khanna tumhari himmat kaise hui mere saath shaadi mai bhetne ki u downmarket cheap security.low class people tum jante nahi main tumhare saath kya kar sakti hun?

Anika: lekin tumhne to dekh liya na ki mai kya kar sakti hun tumhare saath u drakula.

Svetlana:how dare u said me drakula??

Anika:meri apni jubaanse and by the way get lost.

Svetlana:tej mai tumse shaadi karne ke liye tayaar hu.

Tej very excitedly started to go towards Svetlana

Janvi:tej tum aisa kaise kar sakte ho?

Tej:oh common janvi u know that I can do this aur vaise bhi maine divorce paper pe sign kiya hai tumbhi kar do

After this he stared to to go towars Svetlana all just look at them .svetlana smile wickedly thinks in mind "agar Om nahi to Tej hi sahi"

Tabhi ek awaj ati hai

Gauri:ek jhaap mai saat jaibe deewar pai apko sharam nahi ati sasurji ap sasuma ke saath aisa kaise kar sakte ho?

Tej just get scared by looking at gauri she just looking like chandi agar he thinks in mind "agar main eek aur kadam badhaya to yeh mujhe kaacha chaba dalegi" tej just stand rooted to his place thinking what to reply gauri

All other oberoi are shocked never in his entire life know one see tej this much scared

All thinks in mind

Rudy:O ne kya kamal ki bhabhi layi hai amrish puri ko dara diya

Daadi:kitni takkarvali bahu laya hai om jisne tej ko dara diya mai ise yaha se kahi nahi jane dugi.

Anika:oh bete ki kya khidki tod ladki dundhi hai om ne tej uncle ki ek jhatke mai kya band bajayi hai waa.

Shivaay:she is great man.

Prinku:same to same anika bhabhi.anika bhabhi bhaya ki band bajati hai aur isne papqa ki i like her.

Pinky:isne to ek hi jhatke mai jethji ki oh my mata kar di.

Shakti:waah kya bahu mili hai bhaisab ko.

All trance broke again by one voice.

Om who is under the effect of alcohol

Om:she is my wife smiles very proudly looking towards gauri .

Gauri:hey Shankar ji akhir nase mai hi sahi inhone pehli baar hame apni patni mana.

After composing himself

Tej:how dare u talk to me like that?

Gauri:dare to mujhme bahot hai mujhme haan hum panchvipass hai aur enternet mata ke pakkewale bhakt hai hum jante hai agar aap sasuma ko talakh doge to hum sasumaki tarafse apki adhi property pai dava thok denge?

All are shocked to see gauri is not so educated but she is intelligent.

Rudra to himself " beauty with brains."

Shivaay who is first time in life see that other than om someone is standing for his badima

Shivaay:aur bade papa apke baki kai business mai jyada tar shares mamaji ke pass hai agar apne badi ma ko divorce diya to main mamaji se kehlvake unke sari investment apke business vapiss lene ko bol dunga.

Tej:oh u all just shutup mai janta hu janvi aisa nahi karegi.

Janvi:mai yeh saab jarur karungi tej.mai apna haq pake rahungi by hook aur by crook.

Tej didn't listen to anyone and goes to mandap to marry svet.

Svet:ruk jao tej mai tumse shaadi nahi kar sakti agar tumhare pass paise nahi honge to mera kya fayda.

She just go from there.Giving murderious look to all oberoi.

Rudra:partyyy...

All give him unbelievable look .

Gauri started to go from there

Daadi:ruko gauri tum kaha ja rahi ho?

Gauri:hum vapas ja rahe hai hamara kaam ho gaya.

Daadi:nahi tum yaha se tabtak nahi ja sakti jabtak om hosh mai nahi ajata.

Before gauri say something dadi goes from there.

Tej just feel ashamed of himself so he also goes from there.

Janvi,Shakti and pinky also goes from there only youngster are present there

Shivaay:khanna ab vapas kaam pai jana hai yah shadi karni hai tumhe?

Khanna:no sir.

Shivaay:what ok tumhe yaha kaam nahi karna thik hai waise bhi tumne mera kaam karna chod diya hai mujhe tumhari koi jarurat nahi .

He said all this looking towards anika

Khanna:sir plz agar rudra sir ne mujhe dhamki di nahi hoti to mai yeh sab nahi karta he said all these making puppy face.

Rudra:Khanna just stop making puppy face it's only my right to make this face and melt bhaya.aur wase bhi rudra singh oberoi se jyada accha puppy face koi nahi bana sakta

Shivaay: shut up rudra...

Anika:billu ji ab jane bhi dijiye khanna ji ne hamari kitni badi madad ki hai.khannaji ap jaye apkokuch nahi hoga.

Khanna:thanku mam.

He goes from there

Om goes towards gauri said mujhe tumse phirse shadi karni hai. U r so cute and tumhne mr. oberoi ko daraya I like that.

Gauri:yeh chirota to gaya kaam se Shankar ji humhe bachye abhi bol raha hai humse phirse shadi karni hai aur jab hosh mai ayega to bandook leke durega hamare piche yeh kehe ki hamari himmat kaise hui yaha ane ki.

Shivaay:rudra ommko andar leke ja.

Rudra :chalo O

Om:nahi mujhe shaadi karni hai abhi vo bhi isse.

Rudra:nahi o teri to already shadi ho chuki hai ise so abhi vapis shadi nahi kar sakte chalo kamre mai jake so jaao abhi.

Om: (gauri ka haath pakad kae)yeh bhi mere saath jayegi varna mai nahi sounga.

Anika and shivaay " plz gauri jaao uske saath".

gauri take hmi towards his room. Prinku also goes from there.

Shivaay:waise rudra tune khanna ko kya dhamki di ki usne teri baat man li?

Anika:haan mujhe bhi jana hai?

Rudra just smile naughtily

some of u guess it right who is in the place of om.enjoy the update and keep commenting.all suggestion always welcome.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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that was fuuny chapter.
aww..om was drunk, and so cute
gauri sssarma hulking up on tej was fab
chalo acha hai svetlana gayi...husssh
but i cant guess, what dhamki rudy gave to khanna
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
SUPERB
LOVED RUDY AND ANIKA PLAN
TEJ SCARED OF GAURI
CONTINUE SOON
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18

hi freinds here is next part i hope u like it

CHAPTER-4(a)

Shivaay:waise rudra tune khanna ko kya dhamki di ki usne teri baat man li?

Anika:haan mujhe bhi jana hai?

Rudra just smile naughtily

Rudra goes towards Shivaay and anika in style like a hero he goes so close to them and "vo kya haina bhaya and bhabhi Rudra singh oberoi apna hathiyar kisiko nahi deta"by saying this he run from there.

Anika and shivaay looked towards each other say at same time" iska kuch nahi ho sakta" and goes from there.

Here in Shivaay room he is lost in thinking how he can't try to save om from in mandap.he is in guilt.same time anika comes there and notice this understand what he is thinking to divert his mind she start her drama.

She goes infront of him start to dance on song kajrare (as u all already seen her dancing on this song u just imagine all this but sahil is not present in this song and shivaay is also not doing dance he is looking towards her like she is a mad person)

Shivaay just get irritate because of her act he goes near her catch her wrist tightly and pull her towards himself they just get lost in each others eyes.the air start to blow suddenly due to which anika's face get hid behind her hair.shivaay just get irrited of hair because of them he didn't get to see her angelic face Shivaay started to go near her face to tuck the hair behind her ear due to shivaay"s this move anika's heart start to beat faster she just get lost in his kanji eyes. but suddenly anika's phone started to ring due to this they broke the eyelock realize their position anika see shivaay very close to her she gets panick and push him away from her.

Anika:yeh aap kya kar rahe the?

Shivaay after composing himself "yeh muje tumse puchna chahiye ki tum kya kar rahi thi yeh sab?"

Anika: maine bola na billuji apki ankhen kharab ho gayi hai apko dikh nahi raha tha main aishwarya ki tarah dinchak dance kar rahi thi.

Shivaay: to mere samne kyun naach rahi thi kahi aur jake nachti.

Anika:Kyun mai kahi aur kyon jaau yeh karma mera hai aur aap bhi to kahi aur ja sakte the?

Shivaay:yeh mera bhi karma hai so mai kyun jaao.

Anika:to bethe rahiye lekin mai bhi yahi dance karungi.

Shivaay understand that anika is doing all this only to divert his mind so he smile to himself thinking anika uski care karti hai.

Anika:billuji apko sirf ankhon ke doctor ki nahi bulki dimmag ke doctor ki bhi jarrurat hai?

Shivaay: fhat the whack?

Shivaay:tum mujhe pagal kehna chahti ho

Anika:aisa maine nahi kaha aap kuhud hi apne apko bol rahe hai aur vaise bhi jo aise bina kisi vajha se smile karte hai unhe paggal hi bolte hai.

Shivaay:mera dimmag aur ankhen dono thik hai ok.

Before anika start to say something further he stop her by showing his hand.

Shivaay:ok anika stop all this nonsense mujhe yeh bataon ki tumhe kaise pata chala ki chulbul hi gauri hai? Kya yeh saach hai ki om aur gauri ki shaadi hui hai?

But before anika answer to shivaay they hear a loud voice broking something and then some voices of known person

"ek jhap mai sat jai be deewar pai."

"how dare u?"

Both look towards each other shockingly

Anika:phail gaya rayta

started to run towards the source of voice.

i know this chap is small but first time in my life i tried to write little romantic so i want ur comment on that so plz comment after reading and give ur suggestion also.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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nice part, but ab gauri kiskko jhaanp maarne nikli hai😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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loveddd it!!❤️
plzzz continue soon!!

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