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Posted: 16 years ago

Vishvaas 2 Part 13

Sorry for the length of this part, i know its realli long but i tried to fill in for teh space of a week that i hadnt updated in...also i just couldnt end the Parth-Sanchi convos they just went on and on...
Parth grabs Sanchi's hand...she turns back and looks at his fingers holding a firm grip on her upper arm and then looks into his determined face
Sanchi: mera haath chodiye
Parth: pehle mere prashna ka sawal dijiye
Sanchi: jaldi kijiye...humme deer ho rahi hai

Parth: deer ho rahi hai ya phir darr lag raha hai

Sanchi: kis baat ka
Parth: humse pyar karne ka (in an undertone)
Sanchi: ji?
Parth: ye sab choodiye...sawal ka jawab dijiye
Sanchi: pehle sawal poochiye toh
Parth: ap..ap humse dur,dur kyun bhagti hai...hum sirf dost hai
Sanchi: par paata nahin kyun humme aisa lagta hai...ap shyada
Sia: Sanchi...humme zara madat kardo...yahan ayo
Sanchi: ji maharani!! ...Parth hatiye...humme jana hia...
Parth: ye maharaniyan galat waqt pe bulati hai aur dasiyan ghalat waqt pe ati hai...hum sab ki zindagiyon mein
Sanchi leaves giving a faint smile as she turned
Parth went back into his tent
the following morning Vishva walked into her tent with a glass of milk
Vishva: Veer othiye...subha hogayi hai
Veer pulled the covers over his face to block out the blinding sunlight
Veer: ummm...itni jaldi
Vishva: haan....ab othiye...ap bhool gaye kya hum rajmehal mein nahin...hum ek maksadh se ja rahe hai
Veer moves the covers and slowly gets up
Veer: agar ap nahin hoti toh humara kya hota
Vishva: hmm...ap bohat duble patle jo jate...kyunki ab shyaad humesha dhoodh pi na bhool jate....
both laugh at this
Veer: shayaad ye hi hota
he takes the glass and drinks from it
Parth is standing outside the tent...just about to walk in...when he remembers what happen last night and how him and Sanchi were disturbed...he decides not to disturb VV and walks off but Veer sees his shadow and calls him in
Parth: maharaj agar ap tayar ho toh chale
Veer: hum toh tayar hai par maharani vishva nahin tayar
Vishva: maharaj ap jhooth mat boliye...hum bilkul tayar...ap nahin hue
Veer: nahin jhooth ap bol rahe hai
VV both start accusing the other of not being ready when
Parth: ahem ahem...maharaj...maharani...humme deer ho rahi hai....maharaj dharam bhara humari rah dekh rahe hai
Veer: haan hum ate hai
a while later all 6 of had packed and were ready to move on...closer to Pratap Singh
Veer: hum ab is disha mein ja rahe hai...in pahadiyon ke us par...is jungle se guzar na hai...phir hum Ujjain ki seema mein poonch jayenge...is seema ki is tookde mein na koi sipahi hai nahi koi aur isliye hum yahan se jayenge
Veer pointed things out on the map he had drawn. He continued:
Veer: agar kuch hota hai aur humme alag hona padh ta hai toh Dharam tum Sia bhabhi ko leh kar jana aur mein Vishva ko leh kar jaounga...aur Parth tum Sanchi ke saath jana...agar hum alag hue toh hum sab yahin jungle mein milegen...teekh hai
the other 5 nodded.
Veer had known that getting into Ujjain was going to be difficult because Pratap Singh was an anti social type of person....he didnt import or export goods...everything was from Ujjain itself...very rarely did people go in and out of ujjain and that too under high security checks...and veer was sure Pratap singh's men knew exactly what he, veer looked like...Veer had also told the rest that him and Vishva were to be addressed as Vansh and Vinisha(their codenames) because from what he knew about Pratap singh he was sure that Pratap singhj didnt even like his name: Veer.
the six of them had gotten through he rocky slopes and up the hills and back down and were heading for the jungles when a unpleasent voice from behind sneared:
The voice: Rajgardh ke maharaj...veer ka is sunsan jungle mein swagat hai
All 6 of them froze on the spot
Veer: kaun ho tum?
The voice: ap ko kya laga...ap ujjain mein ayenge aur maharaj pratap singh apka swagat nahin karenge
Veer: Pratap singh?
The voice: haan....par in be fazool baaton ke liye mere pas waqt nahin hai...maharaj ka adesh hai ke tumhe mar diyajaye
Before veer could think much the voice shouted: AKRAMAN!!
and from all direction soldiers came and Veer,vishva, parth,sanchi, dharam and sia barely had time to pull out their swords
Veer had to admit to himself that Pratap singh's men were very strong and highly skilled and the six of them could fight here all day and still not be able to win or they could get moving
Veer looked at dharam...him and Dharam knew each other too well and Dharam nodded and began to move away...Sia by far had done the most damage to the opposition by killing one of the soldieers...the others however simply couldnt do much other than cause cuts.
Vishva seemed really furious when the man who had spoken to them wouded Veer's upper arm and in a fit of rage she jumped onto him and punch every bit of him she could reach...veer wanted to pause and admire her fighting skills but he understood the deriousness of the situation and continued to fight.
Dharam and Sia had moved to the east and about twenty men were following them....Veer and Vishva had attracted most of the men towards them and were doing really well fighting people of...together they had finished off about 10
Parth saw Sanchi was struggling and he knew that sword fighting is not something she specialises in yet she was doing well...he went to her aid but it was too late 3 of the men had picked her up and were carring her off...Parth saw this and looked at Veer
Veer indicated to him to follow on and Parth understood the rest and ran after the people who had taken his Sanchi away
Parth threw a dagger at one of the men and killed him and punched the other from behind. Sanchi managed to hit a hard stone on the last one's head and knock him out
He rushed to Sanchi and grabbed her hand and both ran but one of the dying men threw a dagger in their direction which unfortunately hit Parth's upper arm and pierced in
Parth: ahh
He pulled it out and looked back to see his attcker breathing his last
He took sanchi's hand and both ran threw the jungle....Parth knew they would meet Veer sooner or later at the end of the jungle...but saw to his right that Sanchi was struggling to breath now and so they came to an halt
Both sat down ...Parth tried to stop the blood that was gushing out his wound...Sanchi saw this and ripped a bit of her dupatta and wipes his blood off and then slowly moves to tie it around the wound...all this while Parth is staring at her...unable to take his eyes of her
Sanchi: kyun aye mere peeche...
Parth is silent
Sanchi: bolo Parth kyun...tumhe wahi maharaj ke saath rehne tha
Parth still doesnt say anything
Sanchi: meri waje se aaj tumhari jaan bhi ja sakti thi...tum jante ho...Parth mein tumse baat kar rahi hoon...mere liye kyun apni jaan khatre mein dali...kyun?
Parth: kyunki hum apse pyar karte hai
the words had slipped out of his mouth before he could stop them
Sanchi was shocked to this from him...thrown casually into the conversation...she stared at him
Seeing her shocked expression Parth realises she isnt ready to beleive in love just yet...he trys to mend the damage his confession had done and begins to laugh
Parth: haha...tumhe kya laga...mein tumse sach mein pyar karta hoon...nahin...woh..maharaj veer ke adesh teh ke hum apke saath rahe agar hum sabko alag hona padeh toh...aur waise bhi agar apko kuch ho jata toh humari vishva didi ka dhyan kaun rakta...
Sanchi looks slightly hurt...she had been so used to the attention Parth had been giving her recently it felt really bad to be neglected by him like this....she looks into his face...it had a few cuts on it....she move closer and then wiped them with her dupatta...Parth looked taken aback but that didnt show on his face...he just looked back into the eyes he loved so much....
Precap: ( a VV treat-specially for Nima di)
Veer: ap chaliye...oothiye vishva
Vishva: nahin ap humme otha lijiye
Veer: nahin ap jahan hai kheechad mein wahin achi lagti hai
Vishva looks angry and begins to cry but Veer takes her in his arms
Enjoy,
Shona
Edited by **Shona** - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow shona
awesum and the precap
i cant wait
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Posted: 16 years ago
very nice update.....
i really really really enjoyed it.......waiting for ur next update
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Posted: 16 years ago
plz cont as the precapa seems so romantic plz cont soon it was mindblowing...
esha
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ektay11

wow shona

awesum and the precap
i cant wait

thanks ekta
im glad u liked this part n are looking forward to the next!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: hiri

plz cont as the precapa seems so romantic plz cont soon it was mindblowing...

esha

thx esha
yup hopefully the next part will be realli gd😳
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: junglli billi

COOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOLLLLL update loved it

im glad u liked it!

Originally posted by: kiran_baidya

very nice update.....

i really really really enjoyed it.......waiting for ur next update thx kiran...yup hopefully next part will be gd

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sugarpie_26

hi shona,luvd the last 2 chapters,im enjoyg it, pls do continue!

hi hun,
im glad u liked the last two parts and i hope u will like the following parts too!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: jigs_b

sorryyyyyyy dear shona.....for not being able to comment on the previous part😕 its ok di...read n comment in ur own time😊

ok back to this part....
so finally all of them on their way for the mission.... 👏 yup they have began their journey
ohhh so they all decided to stay with those people...hmm yup
n here comes my fav part...VV moments..😳😳...wow..so veer cooking aloo ki sabji..hehheh..achha hai vishva hai waha pe..warna...pata nahi kya banata woh!!!😆lol the VV dose was just for u!...agar vishva na hoti toh sme wud happen as what happen in VV 1...when they were at teh gurukul
but ye kya vishva ke hote hue bhi woh garbad karne wala tha...😆....abb kya kahe hum?? vishva ho to bhi mushkil na ho to bhi mushkil...confusion yaar😆....but achha hua vishva ne time par dekh liya..varna veer ne to uska kam vadhane ka bandobast kar hi liya tha...😆..bach gayi...sabji!!!..hehe...veer is veer...he is not very talented in the kitchen...vishva just saved the sabhji in time so yeh bach gayi sabhji!!
but veer ka bhi koi kusur nahi hai...woh to vishva ki beauty he still finds her as atttractive as she was before marriage hai jo use ye sab karne pe majbur karti hai...i mean garbad!!😆....he said ye sade😆 hue kapdo me bhi tum jyada sundar lag rahi ho....lolz...sade hue kapde!!! ..veer bhi na🤣hehe veer doesnt like the plain clothes that his queen is having to wear but still manages to find advantages in that such as vishva's beauty
arre ye kya?? kitchen me khana pakate time pe romance😳😳..ye dono koi mauka ya place dekhte hi nahi....kya pyaar hai!!!😉😳😳thats the best thing abt them...waqt,jaga ya situation nahin dehte..sirf pyar karte hai
hmmm....dharam n parth😡...issi galat waqt pe aana tha tum dono ko??thodi der baad nahi aa sakte the??😡thodi der badh ate toh kabab mein haddi kaise ban te?
pura scene bigaad diya...abb veer tum bhi inn dono ke liye kabaab me haddi zarur banna.....🤣o that will happen for sure...onli later on!
i like the way vishva n veer tell parth to go to sanchi...hhehe both r sooo smart...parth ko mauke ka fayada uthane ke liye bol rahe hai....😆
wow...sanchi ko parth ko dekhe bina hi pata chal gaya ki woh parth hai...hmm...saanchiii...sahi direction me ja rahi ho...😉yup bilkul...
hmm...parth ne suruat achhi ki baat ki..tum ne apni jaan ka khatra kyu uthaya??n i liked saanchis answer as well....👏im realli glad u liked it...was trying to make the convo realli gd n make it seem as though sanchi is hard to get...she diesnt give expected answers
heheh....sanchi ne apne ghar pe jhooth bola hai...but partially...heheheh bohat intelligent hai...parth ki honewali girlfriend jo hai
woh bhi kam nahi hai..puchh hi liya ki tumhe meri life me kyu interest hai!!!lolz....n parth woh to usse bhi chalak hai..usne ulta usse sawal kar diya😆...so smart afteralll veer ke saath rahega toh thodi smartness toh ah he jayegi
n saanchi confused!!! kya jawab du??sach bhi nahi bol sakti...heheheh...ki use uski life me dilchaspi nahi hai..😆
fir bhi bol diya..ha hai..kyuki tum sabse takrate rehte ho....wah kya answer hai..god!!ye ladki bhi na!!😆
but parth...hheheh...me to sirf aap se hi takrata hu😳i liked this part of the convo too
but ye kya saanchi ja rahi hai n parth ne to uska haath hi pakad liya..daring man..heheheh..
but precap...woh sanchi ko propose kar deta hai..n saanchi is shocked!!kya .....woh na to keh degi???pls saanchi hamare parth ka dil mat todnahe is so nice guy!!!nope she wont refuse him
so shona...as usual fantastic n awesome update thank u, thank u n thank u for ur kind compliments di im glad u liekd it n most of all VV moments...special sweet dish onli for u...but confused ho gayi...saanchi kya kahegi???😕.parth will handle the situation and she wont refuse him.but anyways...liked the VV moments the most🤗
ok waiting for the next update dear...

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Posted: 16 years ago
lovely update shona and ur precap has made be impatient for the next part pls post asap
awesome job

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