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Posted: 16 years ago


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Posted: 16 years ago

Vishvaas 2 Part 12

As dusk drew closer the 6 friends stopped when they saw a pack of people. Sanchi was quick to figure that the crowd was infact pilgrims who were going from one end of india to the other, tehy were crossing Aryanagar and moving onto Janakpur
Dharam: veer humme lagta hai ke humme aaj raat in logo ke saath tehar na chahiye...isse khatra bhi nahin hoga aur aram bhi ho jaye ga
Vishva: veer humme lagta hai Dharam teekh keh rahe hai
Veer: teekh hai...Parth hum uss taraf apne tamboo laga dete hai
Sia: tab tak hum teen kane ka bandho bas karte hai
the three boys go to set out the tents while the girls leave to get some food
Half an hour later the 6 of them were cooking food...veer and vishva were making aloo ki sabzi and dharam n sia were making roti very lovingly... and parth made bhindi ki sabzi while giving sanchi quick glances while Sanchi prepared the plates and everything.
Veer and Vishva were preparing the sabzi...vishva was instructing veer to put the the spices and salt in while she busyed herself with the something else...Veer looked at her...she was dressed in lilac today and wore minimum jewellery yet looked breathtakingly beautiful...veer picked up the bowl of salt as he stared at vishva who was moving her hair out of her face...veer was so absorbed in vishva's beauty he nearly tipped the whole bowl of salt into the sabzi but
Vishva: veer!..ye ap kya kar rahe hai...pura ka pura namak dal denge
veer realises what he was about to do and replies
Veer: woh ap itni khoobsurat hai ke jab mein apko dekh ta hoon mujhe kuch aur nazar he nahin ata...sirf tum hi tum...
they walk really close to each other...
Veer: vishva inn sade kapde mein bhi itni khoobsurat lagti ho ke woh asmaan ka chand bhi mere is chand se jalta hai kyunki mere chand ki chandni ziyada roshni deti hai
Vishva looks into veer's eyes full of love and affection...they take a step closer...vishva looks down while veer puts his hand on her cheek...he bends a little closer and is about to kiss her when
Dharam n Parth: Ahem ahem
Vishva and Veer move apart n blush
Dharam: agar Rajgardh ke maharaj aur maharani kripa karke kahna kayenge humare saath...chalo
All laugh and add the finishing touches to there food and sit to eat
Once dinner is over DV sit and plot a plan of what to do next while Sia and Vishva are in the tent
Parth sees Sanchi alone and looks at vishva who gives him a node to go ahead and talk to her...parth looks at veer who winks at him which says go talk to her
Parth approaches sanchi and clears his throat...Sanchi looks around to see him...before she looked she knew its him...she had grown familar to his smell...
Parth: ek baat poochu apse
Sanchi: teekh hai poochiye
Parth: apne itna khatra kyun mol liye
Sanchi: ye prashna mein apse bhi kar sakti hoon
Parth: acha ye toh bataye apne jab apne maa baap ko bataya ke ap ah rahi hai oh unhone apko roka nahin
Sanchi: hmm woh samaj te hai mein nana nani se milne ja rahi hoon
Parth: yane apne jhooth bola
Sanchi: pura nahin...kyun waq mile ga toh mein apne nana nani se zaroor milon gi..waise apko meri zindagi mein itni dilchaspi kyun hai
Parth: toh kya apko meri zindagi mein koi dilchaspi nahin
Sanchi thinks for a while...the true answer was yes but she thought honesty wasnt the best policy here
Sanchi: waise apko lagta nahin ke bohat der hogayi hai...subha jaldi jaag na hai isliye soh jana chahiye
Parth: ap baat ko taal rahi hai
Sanchi: kaunsi baat
Parth: woh he...apko kya mujhe mein dilchaspi nahin hai kya?
Sanchi: haan hai toh...par ap mein kisko dilchaspi nahin hogi...ap kitni baar takra te rehte hai ....sab ko is baat mein dilchaspi hogi ke akhir ap sabke saath takrate rehte hai
Parth: sab ke saath nahin sirf apke saath
Sanchi: woh bhala kyun
Parth: waise jabse humari dosti hui hai humne teekh se baatein bhi nhain ki
Sanchi: ah...parth humme lagta hai ke der hogayi hai..humme chalna chahiye
She turns to leave but Parth grabs her hand....she looks back into his face which shows no sign of giving up teh conversation
Precap:
VV, DS n SP are all seperated in the jungle...Parth has a deep cut on his upper hand and Sanchi is nursing him...he canot take his eyes of her
Sanchi: apne kyun apni jaan daw pe laga di
Parth: kyunki hum apse pyar karte hai
Sanchi looks shocked to hear this from him...thrown so casually into the conversation...she hadnt expected that
enjoy,
Shona
Edited by **Shona** - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow such an romantic part shona loved each n every word and loved what veer said to vishva about chaand yes she is the real chand for veer i loved it, it was mind blowing plz do cont as the precap looks really romantic... and yes plz put some ds scenes also😉
esha
Edited by hiri - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

awwwwwwwwww soooooooooo cute! n unbelievely ronmatic once again! ur dia's r jst amazin...Veer hiaaaaaaaaaaaaa...lets nt got der lol...PS love story is veri cute too...1st friendship den love...da best recipe for lvoe i fink lool...im eagerly waitin for ur nxt update! DS,VV,PS r seprated...dis cud onli mean 1 fink...ROMANCE hehe.... fnxx Shona..awsome!

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: hiri

wow such an romantic part shona loved each n every word and loved what veer said to vishva about chaand yes she is the real chand for veer i loved it, it was mind blowing plz do cont as the precap looks really romantic... and yes plz put some ds scenes also😉

esha

im realli happy u liked this part esha
yup vishva is veer's chand
will try to add Ds scenes😳
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: CutieA

awwwwwwwwww soooooooooo cute! n unbelievely ronmatic once again! ur dia's r jst amazin...Veer hiaaaaaaaaaaaaa...lets nt got der lol...PS love story is veri cute too...1st friendship den love...da best recipe for lvoe i fink lool...im eagerly waitin for ur nxt update! DS,VV,PS r seprated...dis cud onli mean 1 fink...ROMANCE hehe.... fnxx Shona..awsome!

thx im glad u like my dias
yup trying to make ps story different from VV n DS...n cute too
ur rite it can onli mean romance but action as well😳😆
thx hun for commenting
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Posted: 16 years ago
Reserved😊
Edited by jigs_b - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
u r an awesome writer...iv read whole vishvaas 1 &2 till today.....i really enjoyed it...and felt every emotion of it....i'm waiting for ur next update...dear...jaldi dena...😊😊😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
Lovely update as usual shona...really liked the part where veer aweing Vishwa's beauty puts all the salt in the food...so sweet.....Seems like next part will be full of adventure, love & care...pls. post the next part soon will be waiting
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Posted: 16 years ago
great update like the precap

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