Vishvaas2-The End-Page 46 Part 16 - Page 24

Originally posted by: meghaparti

Very sweet update shona...really liked it when Vishwa stopped veer from kissing her & yah your shayari was also very sweet like your fanfic...Pls. continue & post the next part soon.😃

Originally posted by: sugarpie_26

tis is my vry 1st reply 2 u shona,read all the prts jus luv ur fanfic,its so different!all of thm married!the romance is so mature,dialogues n situations r so beautifully writtn,every dialogue is so much wid feel,damn xpressive,i hve enjoyd it especially veer n vishwa,the couple in deep luv n respect 4 eac othr,well dne!

Originally posted by: xoxcuddlesxox

great update and your shairy is really good

Originally posted by: ektay11

shona dear

love u

just mindblowing fantastic

plz cont soon

Originally posted by: crazy_kiran

lovely update shona, ur dia were so romantic and even ur shayari. it was a splendid update nothing to criticise abt it👏

Originally posted by: hiri

it was amzing update plz cont...

esha

Originally posted by: CutieA

wooooooah dt was quick lol...im not complain dou lol...wah can i say...loved dis part too...Vishwa n Parth interaction is fab, loved DS moments too...wah can i say abt VV...except dt dey r jst fab...perfect for each other! veri romantic...n so on lool...loved it once again! u fail to disappointment me lol fnx xxx

Originally posted by: kiran_baidya

brilliant update.

i luved the way parth convinced veer about taking dharam sia with them.

pls keep on writing

Originally posted by: meghaparti

Thanks for the update...shona...so veer finally got a kiss on his cheek.....I must say both VV are very sweet & cute ...Looks like this adventure of VV DS & SP will be very interesting......Pls. post the next part soon.....