Vishvaas2-The End-Page 46 Part 16

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seema

@heaven princess

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Posted: 16 years ago

#261

aww dah was so dam romantic........i loved Parth sanchi part...lol...Veer wanntd to kiss Vishva but dahra, n parth became khabab mein haddi for a second...lol..m joking🤣

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Archana

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Posted: 16 years ago

#262

wow Shona! loved it 👏👏

this was really romantic! 😳

ok, from the begginning;

so cute! all cooking wid their loves 😳

yes! vv moment, love them! veer is mesmerized once again wid vishva, thats really lovely. but.. again they are stopped at half way to a kiss, oops.. poor veer 😆😆

aw! parth looks at vishva and veer b4 taking any step, so cute! he goes to talk, but seems like sanchi keeps her attitude.. umm.. but really liked their conversation.

wow, ur precap, he finally tells her! omg! update soon 😃

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Shona

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Posted: 16 years ago

#263

Originally posted by: nint.des
u r an awesome writer...iv read whole vishvaas 1 &2 till today.....i really enjoyed it...and felt every emotion of it....i'm waiting for ur next update...dear...jaldi dena...😊😊😛

Hi dear n welcome to I-F hope u have a gr8 time here

im realli happy that u read Vishvaas 1 n 2 n u enjoyed it

will try to update next part soon!

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Shona

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Posted: 16 years ago

#264

Originally posted by: meghaparti
Lovely update as usual shona...really liked the part where veer aweing Vishwa's beauty puts all the salt in the food...so sweet.....Seems like next part will be full of adventure, love & care...pls. post the next part soon will be waiting

yup the Veer is still smitten by her beauty n nearly puts all the salt in😆

the next part will be the beginning of the adventure n full of SP scenes/convos

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Shona

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Posted: 16 years ago

#265

Originally posted by: xoxcuddlesxox
great update like the precap

thx😊

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Shona

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Posted: 16 years ago

#266

Originally posted by: heaven princess
aww dah was so dam romantic........i loved Parth sanchi part...lol...Veer wanntd to kiss Vishva but dahra, n parth became khabab mein haddi for a second...lol..m joking🤣

yup VV were disturbed by 2 kabab mein haddis😆😆

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Shona

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Posted: 16 years ago

#267

Originally posted by: Girl_2007
wow Shona! loved it 👏👏 Glad u know that😛

this was really romantic! 😳

ok, from the begginning;

so cute! all cooking wid their loves 😳 yup coincedently they ended up wid their loves..hehe

yes! vv moment, love them! veer is mesmerized once again wid vishva, thats really lovely. but.. again they are stopped at half way to a kiss, oops.. poor veer 😆😆 yup VV disturbed agen...this time dharam n parth...veer wud have been annoyed for a while but then was alrite with it

aw! parth looks at vishva and veer b4 taking any step, so cute! he goes to talk, but seems like sanchi keeps her attitude.. umm.. but really liked their conversation.

sanchi's attitude will melt away soon

wow, ur precap, he finally tells her! omg! update soon 😃yh he tells her even though he didnt mean too...he just kinda blabs it out

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Nima

@nims23

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Posted: 16 years ago

#268

sorryyyyyyy dear shona.....for not being able to comment on the previous part😕

ok back to this part....

so finally all of them on their way for the mission.... 👏

ohhh so they all decided to stay with those people...

n here comes my fav part...VV moments..😳😳...wow..so veer cooking aloo ki sabji..hehheh..achha hai vishva hai waha pe..warna...pata nahi kya banata woh!!!😆

but ye kya vishva ke hote hue bhi woh garbad karne wala tha...😆....abb kya kahe hum?? vishva ho to bhi mushkil na ho to bhi mushkil...confusion yaar😆....but achha hua vishva ne time par dekh liya..varna veer ne to uska kam vadhane ka bandobast kar hi liya tha...😆..bach gayi...sabji!!!..

but veer ka bhi koi kusur nahi hai...woh to vishva ki beauty hai jo use ye sab karne pe majbur karti hai...i mean garbad!!😆....he said ye sade😆 hue kapdo me bhi tum jyada sundar lag rahi ho....lolz...sade hue kapde!!! ..veer bhi na🤣

arre ye kya?? kitchen me khana pakate time pe romance😳😳..ye dono koi mauka ya place dekhte hi nahi....kya pyaar hai!!!😉😳😳

hmmm....dharam n parth😡...issi galat waqt pe aana tha tum dono ko??thodi der baad nahi aa sakte the??😡

pura scene bigaad diya...abb veer tum bhi inn dono ke liye kabaab me haddi zarur banna.....🤣

i like the way vishva n veer tell parth to go to sanchi...hhehe both r sooo smart...parth ko mauke ka fayada uthane ke liye bol rahe hai....😆

wow...sanchi ko parth ko dekhe bina hi pata chal gaya ki woh parth hai...hmm...saanchiii...sahi direction me ja rahi ho...😉

hmm...parth ne suruat achhi ki baat ki..tum ne apni jaan ka khatra kyu uthaya??n i liked saanchis answer as well....👏

heheh....sanchi ne apne ghar pe jhooth bola hai...but partially...heheheh

woh bhi kam nahi hai..puchh hi liya ki tumhe meri life me kyu interest hai!!!lolz....n parth woh to usse bhi chalak hai..usne ulta usse sawal kar diya😆...so smart

n saanchi confused!!! kya jawab du??sach bhi nahi bol sakti...heheheh...ki use uski life me dilchaspi nahi hai..😆

fir bhi bol diya..ha hai..kyuki tum sabse takrate rehte ho....wah kya answer hai..god!!ye ladki bhi na!!😆

but parth...hheheh...me to sirf aap se hi takrata hu😳

but ye kya saanchi ja rahi hai n parth ne to uska haath hi pakad liya..daring man..heheheh..

but precap...woh sanchi ko propose kar deta hai..n saanchi is shocked!!kya .....woh na to keh degi???pls saanchi hamare parth ka dil mat todnahe is so nice guy!!!

so shona...as usual fantastic n awesome update...but confused ho gayi...saanchi kya kahegi???😕..but anyways...liked the VV moments the most🤗

ok waiting for the next update dear...

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Shona

@shona.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#269

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hey to all my readers...sorry for not updating for the last few days...actually i havent had much time due to skool...i want to write the next part properly with lots of time so i will update soon n in my own time

Shona