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Posted: 16 years ago

Vishvaas 2 Part 7

Parth is in his room thinking about Sanchi and he smiles to himself
on the otherhand Sanchi is now in the kitchen helping with the breakfast when Sia comes in asking whether breakfast was ready
Sia: arre nashta tayar hua ke nahin
Sanchi: bas thodi der mein ho jaye ga
Sia: Sanchi tum zara mehel ke dwar tak jake dekoo toh rasoi ka saman aya ke nahin...hum rasoi sambhal lenge
Sanchi didnt want to go outside the kitchen with the fear of another encounter with Parth...she didnt know why his presence made her feel self concious and nerveous when he got to close yet she loved talking to him
Sanchi: maharani par ap kaise sambhalen gi
Sia:Sanchi ye humara adesh hai
Sanchi obeys without arguing as Sia takes her position infront of the stove
Outside Dharam seems troubled for he cannot see Sia anywhere but he is then informed by one of the maids that Sia is in the kitchens so Dharam goes to the kitchens
In the kitchens Sia is a lost in thoughts that she doesnt realise that her dupatta is just centimetres from the fire
Dharam: maharani...mahrani sia!!
Sia turns to face him...he is on the otherside of the kitchen, when her dupatta catches fire, for a few moments they just smile at each other then
Dharam: SIA!!
he runs over to her and puts the fire out but its too late Sia has burnt herself on her hand
Sia: Ahhh!
Sia is immediately taken to her room and the doctor is called who applies ointment on her hand saying its not a severe burn
Dharam: Sia ap aise laparvah kaise ho sakti hai? ap apna bilkul khyal nahin rakti...apka dhyan kahan tha...aur rasoi ghar mein aur koi nahin tha kya...waise ap wahan kar kya rahi thi...kya Aryanagar mein nakaron ki kami hai jo ap maharani ho kar bhi rasoi kar rahi thi
At being told off Sia crys...Dharam sits besides her and cups her face in his hands
Dharam:Apko agar kuch ho jata toh humara kya hota...Sia ab apke bina zindagi ki kalpana bhi nahin hoti....humme maaf kar dijiye hum gusse mein kuch ziyaada he bol gaye...ab chaliye...ek bar muskura dijiye
Sia smiles....she realises that most of her dupatta is burnt and so she gets a new one...she is trying to adjust it properly but is having trouble with just one hand.
Dharam moves closer and takes dupatta from her hand
Sia: ye ap kya kar rahe hai...hum kar lenge
Dharam: nahin hum kar dete hai
Dharam takes it from her...she looks down momentarily...dharam slides it across on her shoulder and then moved round the back and slowly tucks it into the lehenga as a slow breeze comes threw the window
Precap: Parth practises with Vishva how he will propose to sanchi when veer comes in and vishva n parth involve him in their plan to get Parth and Sanchi together
Enjoy
Shona
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Posted: 16 years ago
Yupii..thnk u ....lol it was verii verii qucik..hehe.....awww..that was sooo shweet.....dahram n sia are shooo cute...bless them...i liked it that dharam was helping sia with her duppatta..

hey a small request: is is possible to make the part a bit longr please....😛
Edited by heaven princess - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Comments on part-6:
ohh shona..culdnt got the time to read the story...sooooo...i m not saying anything😆
ok soooo ohhhhhhhh wow....soooooooooo romantic...me soo hapy after such a long time u wrote something abt VV romance...gud gud...liked it sooo much...wohi baarish....moonliht...woh last time ki night yad aa gayi..jab veshva veer se milne balcony chadhkar uske kamre me aayi thi..n sono aise hi balcony me khade the n bheege the...their first kiss😳😳😳,....awww..sooo romantic...still their romance is the same like before with so many responsbilities!!!😳
ok so aise romantic part likhti raho...will talk abt it on chat😉
ohhhhhh so now parth n sanchi...cute couple...
dono takraye n maafi bhi nahi maangi..actually pata hi nahi chala galati kiski thi!!!😆
sanchi knows parth right??...
ohhh parth is so romantic..veer ka dost jo hai!!!😉😳.usne to bechaari ki heart beat hi tez kar di!!!....wud love to see their love story too....but unki love story lambi chalana...jaldi marriage mat kar dena!!!😉
n now vishva..she is so smart..wanted to know what sabchi is thinking abt parth😆...
n she gave her red jwellary to sanchii....so sweet of her as she knew parth like red color so much😳...n she hugs her..
veer sees that..he must be proud to see that..as he hs such a lovely n nice wife 😳😳😊
so overall this part is soooooooo lovely...liked VV an PS moments...keep writing such scenes!!well done dear🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
Comments on Part-7: Oooohhhh now DS moments...wow shona,...kya baat hai..hume bahot sari treat mil rahi hai..hmmmm???😆
so parth has stated to think abt sanchi..hmm!!!!😳..he is so in love with her...arre propose kar dona..darta kyu hai!!!😉
and sanchi is in the kitchen...ok so sia came to the kitchen and ask sanchi to go and look for rasoi saaman..arre ye kya??sanchi didnt want to go..aaawww..she feels awkward in front of parth..hmm means aag dono taraf lagi hai barabar ki!!! shayad sanchi ko abhi itna ehsaas nahi hua jitna parth ko!!!😳
chalo but use jaan to pada..
so now sia is making breakfast...dharam is looking for him...use chain nahi padta kya??😆...but he came on time n save her from burning..ohh god..it ws so close!!😕
n hailaa..he scold at her...hmm..it ws his love n concern towards her..bechaara darr gaya tha na!!!
but when sia cried then he realised ki woh bahot bol aya..n maafi maang li..he shud...some romantic moments!!!😳
wow..i liked this dupataa scene..dharam ne usko dupataa pehnaya..sooooo sweet yaar...hubby ho to aisa!!😳😳
wow..this part also rocked..gud gud..bahot sweet khila rahai ho abb aage jakar kuchh spicy mat khilaana!!!😆
awesome work dear...keep it up...will wait for the next part...\
precap: hmmm vishva n parth practising for how parth will propose sanchi!!!hehehhehe..n they will involve veer into it too😆..wud rock👏
this is for u...🤗🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: heaven princess

Yupii..thnk u ....lol it was verii verii qucik..hehe.....awww..that was sooo shweet.....dahram n sia are shooo cute...bless them...i liked it that dharam was helping sia with her duppatta.. yup dharam n sia r a cute couple n dharam's good at adjusting the dupatta too😆

hey a small request: is is possible to make the part a bit longr please....😛 well normally all the parts are longer but this was a quick n small part

thank u for reading n commenting!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: jigs_b

Comments on part-6:

ohh shona..culdnt got the time to read the story...sooooo...i m not saying anything😆 good😆
ok soooo ohhhhhhhh wow....soooooooooo romantic...me soo hapy after such a long time u wrote something abt VV romance...gud gud...liked it sooo much...wohi baarish....moonliht...woh last time ki night yad aa gayi..jab veshva veer se milne balcony chadhkar uske kamre me aayi thi..n sono aise hi balcony me khade the n bheege the...their first kiss😳😳😳,....awww..sooo romantic...still their romance is the same like before with so many responsbilities!!!😳 yup its been ages since their was a romantic VV scen, im glad u liked it...yup their romance is still like it was before n thats the best bit abt them
ok so aise romantic part likhti raho...will talk abt it on chat😉okay
ohhhhhh so now parth n sanchi...cute couple...yup they make a cute couple
dono takraye n maafi bhi nahi maangi..actually pata hi nahi chala galati kiski thi!!!😆
sanchi knows parth right??... yh they know each other but know realli well...
ohhh parth is so romantic..veer ka dost jo hai!!!😉😳.usne to bechaari ki heart beat hi tez kar di!!!....Parth is romantic but he isnt like veer when it cums to proposing and all wud love to see their love story too....but unki love story lambi chalana...jaldi marriage mat kar dena!!!😉 yup will make it longer...actually i onli got DS n VV married coz first i wasnt sure abt writing Visvaas 2 so i wanted to give a proper ending
n now vishva..she is so smart..wanted to know what sabchi is thinking abt parth😆...yup vishva is enjoying this
n she gave her red jwellary to sanchii....so sweet of her as she knew parth like red color so much😳...n she hugs her..she's kind hearted
veer sees that..he must be proud to see that..as he hs such a lovely n nice wife 😳😳😊 yup he feels so happy to hav vishva as his wife
so overall this part is soooooooo lovely...liked VV an PS moments...keep writing such scenes!!well done dear🤗im really happy u liked this part...yup im gonna write some romantic parts before getting back on the mission!
thanks nima for reading n commenting🤗🤗🤗

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Posted: 16 years ago
Hello Shona!! wat a sweet parts!!! 👏
it has passed so many time since i havent readed Vishvaas 2... but just started to read on part 16.!
loved it! as always👏
veer-vishva moment😍 finally they got their missing kiss😍. btw, u have portrayed their wife-husband relation very well👏, vishva has so much confidence on veer than before, and she is a very caring wife. aw!👏👏
how cute!!! cudnt stop smiling when i readed about parth-sanchi...😍 they are so cute!!!😳👏
part 7:
dharam and sia scene. wow!! but...😆 sia still isnt careful..it was very cute, dharam scolding her, and then apologizing..😳
and after that, he helps her wid the dupatto, aw!!😳 it remind me of the last part of Vishvaas 1, when sia was removing her ornaments, and dharam stops her saying that only he has the right of doing it..😍
well, this is not a long comment as i used to post sometimes before, and im commenting after a lot of time, im very sorry Shona😕.
btw, i pmed you.., did u readed it??
Edited by Girl_2007 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
wooow....wah cute moments(part7)...awww...Dharam is sooo carin...lol...told her off ...im xcitd abt ur precap! hehe...cheers xxx
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanks for the lovely update..haaaaaaaaa veer getting involved in Parth & Vishwa's plan of proposing to sachi...great........👏
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: jigs_b

Comments on Part-7: Oooohhhh now DS moments...wow shona,...kya baat hai..hume bahot sari treat mil rahi hai..hmmmm???😆

lol mil ni chahiye...after all the readers deserve it naa?
so parth has stated to think abt sanchi..hmm!!!!😳..he is so in love with her...arre propose kar dona..darta kyu hai!!!😉 he doesnt exactly love her yet but he seems to hav a crush on her that will slowly develop into unconditional love😳
and sanchi is in the kitchen...ok so sia came to the kitchen and ask sanchi to go and look for rasoi saaman..arre ye kya??sanchi didnt want to go..aaawww..she feels awkward in front of parth..hmm means aag dono taraf lagi hai barabar ki!!! shayad sanchi ko abhi itna ehsaas nahi hua jitna parth ko!!!😳
chalo but use jaan to pada..sanchi doesnt love Parth but defo has a crush on him...they dont know each other that well...they just seen one another a few times n had small convos a few times...
so now sia is making breakfast...dharam is looking for him...use chain nahi padta kya??😆nope he has to see her every few mins to make sure she is safe...but he came on time n save her from burning..ohh god..it ws so close!!😕yup very close
n hailaa..he scold at her...hmm..it ws his love n concern towards her..bechaara darr gaya tha na!!!
but when sia cried then he realised ki woh bahot bol aya..n maafi maang li..he shud...some romantic moments!!!😳he loves her very much n cant see her in pain or danger so got very angry but then apologised😳
wow..i liked this dupataa scene..dharam ne usko dupataa pehnaya..sooooo sweet yaar...hubby ho to aisa!!😳😳 lol xactly...was inspired by BMTD sagar n vidya scene here😳
wow..this part also rocked..gud gud..bahot sweet khila rahai ho abb aage jakar kuchh spicy mat khilaana!!!😆nahin thode din sweet khalo phir achanak mirchi mile gi😆😆😆
awesome work dear...keep it up...will wait for the next part...\thank you
precap: hmmm vishva n parth practising for how parth will propose sanchi!!!hehehhehe..n they will involve veer into it too😆..wud rock👏yup hopefully😳
this is for u...🤗🤗
thank u so much nima for reading n commenting🤗

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